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Posted: 14 years ago

😲😲😲 Zohal u finished this FF!!! why???😭😭

Anyways the ending is just perfect.... Sidshi convo was really cute and loved the way sid made shilpa understand And the rakhi part🤣 awesome....
Loved SR part in the end😳
i'm really gonna miss ur FFs if possible come back with another one😳 and thanks a lot for this FF😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
Closure scene

(Prithi I had plannd this fr ur request and I totally forgot! Sorry. Better late then never?! eh?!)

Sid and Riddhima pull away and she picks her bag up to leave Sid holds her hand and takes her upstairs. Riddhima confused looks at Sid. He take her upstairs and makes her stand infront of the mirror. He stands behind her and gently pulls her hair away. He then puts his hand in his pocket and Riddhima looks curiously as to wht he ws taking out of it. He takes out her earring. IT ws the same one he took frm her at the elevator. She smiles knowing he still carried it around.

Sid: I think u can hav this back.

Riddhima: dnt need it anymore?

(He hugs her frm behind)

Sid: Nah I dnt need it to remind me of hw close we are. I hav u fr tht.

(She smiles and she begins to leave bt he holds her in place.)

Sid: wait. One more thing.

(He takes her sindoor and puts it on her. He puts on her mangal sutr and she jst smiles with tears.)

Sid: Nw tht is to tell everyone tht this girl is taken.

(She looks away frm the mirror and to him. Sid still had his arms wraped around her.)

Sid: So tht no one dares to looks at Mrs. Riddhima Modi.

Riddhima: So u love me?

Sid: Sabseh zyada. Sabseh pehley.

(Riddhima smiles and hugs her husband)

Sid: hey Riddhima?

Riddhima: yh?

Sid: abh hospital ke liye late nahin horaha?

(She punches him gently on the chest and laughs.)

*Final: The End*

Harshita!
Oh kai first of all thankyou fr ur amazing comments on ll my parts!
and sorry abt Dheeraj. (I had planned it long ago!)
Thnku fr liking the convo!
Yes the female psycho understood! She finally gt the picture!
Thnk u fr liking Sidshi!
Yes!! YEAH!!! Harshita likes my psycho!!!
Thnk u fr liking the pent house scene!
Welcome fr the FF!!!
And I obviously mention ur name!! God! ur our official weapon supplier!!


144128!
Thnk u!!!
Glad u guys liked this Armaan!
And yes Sidmaan scenes! glad u guys liked those!! (btw Im still waiting fr the FF!)

Prithi!!!
And ur back witht he emoticons!!!!
Thnks alot!! I really appreciate all ur comments!
Yes Ridzii is pregnant!
Glad u liked Sidshi!
Ofcourse I will consider ur request!!!
Welcome fr the PM!


Veena_rocks!
Ello!
now why did I end the FF? I hadnt planned it bt everything fit in the picture thts why I thought I dshud end it!
Why u didnt like the ending? lol jk!
Yeay the rakhi scene even I ws really excited when writing it dwn, It ws fun!
And surely will Pm u for any other FF I write!

Zeenia!
Thnk u fr liking the FF!
If I do write another one I will surely PM!
Haha! u liked the raakhi bit? lol!
Welcome!

Mknageswari
Thnks alot fr all ur comeents on all the bits!

merdersidma1!
ey! thhnk u! glad u liked it!!

DJ..
Thnk u!!
awww! Thnk u! glad u liked it! The whole thing!! thnk u fr liking the whole thing! nw wht if I ask u to pinpoint a bad bit? lol bt glad u loved it!
I really appreciate it!! thnks!

Monty!!!
ello! hw hav u been?! And hwz ur frend nw? hope shez fine and healthy!
Welcome fr the FF! No wrorries! I told u I will putit in! and tht meant I will put it in! Glad u liked it!
And yes ofcourse they lived happily ever after! They had to!
It IS nice to meet u! And yes we will keep in touch in PMs (Im still waiting fr the PM though!)

Zarqa!
THnk u! Thnk u! Thnk u!
Happy tht u liked the past wala scene!
Now sorry abt Dheeraj! It ws kinda pre planned!
Glad u guys finally liked the *female psycho*!
happy u liked Sidshi!
Haha! this Armaan only exists in the FF! lol!
AR bhai behen Forever!
Happy u liked the SR morning scene!
Zarqa welcome fr the FF!!!
I had fun writing it!
Thnks fr reading it and Commenting!

Ovi_Tanni!
Hello!
Thnk fr liking the FF! and lkinda glad tht u guys will miss it! glad u liked all the scnes! yh and the bhai behen scene ws reallly fun to write dwn!
Welcome fr ur name!! And if I do write thn yes I shall PM u!
tc!

Pallavi!
EYYY!!
How are u?!! thnk u fr liking the ending! And yes obviously Sid will take revenge!
yeah TAM finally gt her mistake and a bit quickly! lol! happy u liked the morning scene!
Pallavi! obviously I will thnk u! U commented on all the parts! U dnt need to thnk me fr tht! U guyz deserved the thnks on my side!
And yes I will Pm u on the next FF!!
Thnk u Pallavi!
TC!

Vidyashree!
hi! thnk u fr liking it and the everything abt the FF! I will miss reading all u ppls comments!
Thnks!

lil_desi_goddes
hey! thnks fr liking it! thnks fr all ur comments! and yes if I do write more I wil inform u ppl!

Jocabharry!
Thnk u very much! glad u liked it! Thnks fr all ur comments iin alll the parts!

Kiran!!
Thnk u! (fr the congrats)
Aww thnkS! Glad u liked it!
Im so happy u liked it so much! I wud always wait fr ur analysis!! Glad u liked thm all
I will miss all u pplz comments!
And thnks again!
And Ofcourse I will PM!
btw the emoticon is real cute!

SR medha!
ello! nw wht can I do? the story ended so I had to end the FF also....
BT great tht u liked it!
thnk u!
And thnks fr liking the humourous bits!
and haha I will PM u abt the new FF whenever its ready!

nine2
first of all: THnku!! fr the comments!
yes Tam is out of the scene (I know u must've been grinnign when reading tht part). Glad u liked Sidmaan scenes (And i am happy u like Sidmaan mre thn SR scenes! cuz their scnes wud take a bit of effort to make it funny!) Glad u liked the rakhi scene! and she ws frustrated cuz he wss doing it infrnt of the whole hospital and didnt even tell her in advance. I gonna miss the comments! And whenever I do write another one! I will Pm u!

miss_cullen!!
hey! yeah I know SR FFs are finishing! guess its exam time fr everyone! Soorry!
Thnk u! And glad u looked forward to my FF! cuz I did the same! I loved ur FF! And thnks fr coming back to forum fr my FF! (which had late updates every time). Thnks fr liking the Dheeraj death convo! And glad u enjoyed it! When I come up with a new one I will defnitely PM u! Welcome fr the FF! And miss_cullen! its December?! New FF? remember?

Noori!!
Thnk u!! Glad u liked it!
u liked the morning scne? thnk u so much?!
Sidshi scene ws fun! I liked writing it!
Rakhi! haha! bt hey u write alot of good stuff! I hav read ur writing and trust me its seriously Amazing!
When I do come up with another one I will Pm u!
And Thnks againfr the VM! it fit in so amazingly with the scene!!
Thnks fr the comments Noorya!

ANNU!
hey!
Thnks alot! Glad u liked it! And sorry abt my usually late updates! And thnk u again fr commenting!!
LOL! I wud give anything to see AR tie rakhi in DMG! lol!

When I do write a new one I will PM u!! And thnk u fr readint the FF!

ssdtvgojan!
hey,
Thnku!! aww I know! U jst started reading it and I ended it! bt happy tht u liked it!
When I do come up with a new one I will PM u!

Moumi!
And she finally takes time out to read and comment! wht took u so long?! LOL jk!
Gld u liked it! And thnk u fr liking the Sidshi convo!
And rakhi part!! I think tht will be the trademark of the FF!
Thnks fr all ur comments!
And Im gonna miss ur comments too! And whn I come up with a new one I will PM u ofcourse!
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Posted: 14 years ago
AWww Zohal that closure was soooo sweet yaar
a last glimps of ur MINDBLOWIN FF that im badly gonna miss😭
hope to see u back with a bang with a new story😛
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: ...Noorya...

AWww Zohal that closure was soooo sweet yaar

a last glimps of ur MINDBLOWIN FF that im badly gonna miss😭
hope to see u back with a bang with a new story😛


Thnks Noori! And glad u liked it! And again when do write I will definitely PM u! thnks again!
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Posted: 14 years ago
Zohal 🤗🤗

Hw can u forget to put d sweetest part hmm grrr lolzzz
Just kidding loved d closure scene I always wanted to see Ridz Maiya wid sindoor & magalsutra

And ya d psycho in ur FF is better den d org one but still I hate him & dis hatred is increasing day by day grrrr

Ur a brilliant writer zohal
Plzzz do write another FF on our SR 😃
Edited by sidma_love - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Zohal 🤗

how can u forget such a sweet part😡😆
it was really a beautiful closure....loved it
Always wanted to see Ridzi with sindoor nd mangalsutra....finally got it😳
and ur right this kind or Armaan only exists in FFs.....still hate him so much😡😡😆

I just loved reading this FF ur an awesome writer
plzzzz do write more FFs on our Siddhima😊


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Posted: 14 years ago
Zohal .🤗 it's really sweet part.......thank u so much giving such nice part......😳

love u. marry chrismas sweetie........i'll PM u. sure
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Posted: 14 years ago
aww the last scene was cute:)...SO MRS. RIDDHIMA MODI forever :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
aww.. that was cute scene !!! Mrs. Riddhima Modi forever :)

Thanks for writing this scene after it was over :)

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Posted: 14 years ago
awww, the little scene was beautiful, it was simple yet beautiful!

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