FF: EHSAAS-THE FEELING Thread 1 - Page 7

Nice update

loved it👏👏👏 waiting for geet engagement and some cute scenes

Hey...I just read ur FF its nice...👏👏👏👏

Ha ha scooty ride. so funny!! but loved it.. maan so falling over geet.. he is falling hard... more soon:)

Originally posted by: charmed ones

Hey...I just read ur FF its nice...👏

I was wondering if 4 part is Maneet engagement ....😕

bt u wrote that...

engagement is in two months tym then....

r u planning 2 take a leap of 2 months...😲

update soonn.....😊😊😊

hi dear u can say dat its kind of a leap but u'll get all d information about d things dat happen in dese two months. thanx for liking it

i really luv ur ff....plz do update soon..

heyyy...veryyy nice,,pls continue as soon as possible...

hi every1 Thanx a lot for ur overwhelming response so far. It really feels gr8. nw here's d Part 4 of my FF. hope u all will like it too because i m very nervous about dis part so u guys pls let me knw whether u all like it or not. pls feel free to criticise if u all dnt like it.😊

Part 4:

Geet is walking restlessly in her Room like she's waiting for something. She looks at d clock den again at her cell phone. Shilpa is getting irritated by it as she was not able to sleep.

Shilpa: o god Di! Pls. Stop Moving To nd Fro like a pendulum. Y dnt u Sleep?

Geet: Shilpa u sleep. Waise bhi I m nt moving from ur legs.

Shilpa: but u r moving on my head that too wid lights on. U knw na that I couldn't able to sleep wid lights on. Pls nw come nd Sleep.

Geet: No Shilpa, I m waiting for Di's Call. She said dat she'll call me at nite.

Shilpa: o gosh Di! its 11:45 of nite may be Di has got stuck up wid some of her patients. Talk to her Tomorrow.

Geet: no u knw dat my day doesn't end until I talk to her.

Shilpa(Looking upwards): O god Vindhya Di! Pls call her soon otherwise she'll spend her whole nite like dis only (den looking towards her) u know wat Di it seems like u r waiting for jiju's Call.

Geet: Shilpa, y u always drag Maan into ur Conversations.

Shilpa: y? u didn't like wen I talk about him? Ah! Nw I understand possessive huh.

Geet: Shut up Shilpa. U......

Suddenly geet heard her cell phone ringing. She quickly goes to her table.

Shilpa: thank god! Finally Di calls

But she notices dat Geet's smile has been faded away as she looks on d no. at screen.

Geet(amazed): Maan..

Shilpa: oho jiju! Must have called to say I love u. Carry on di (putting her hands on her ears) I won't hear anything.

Geet: Shut up shilpa. M going to balcony.

She headed towards d balcony.

Shilpa(calling her): Arey Di, suno to I said na I won't hear anything (den notices dat Geet is not listening) chalo never mind. I go nd sleep.

Geet comes to balcony nd answers d call.

Geet: Hello!

As soon as Maan hears her voice he got lost somewhere he dnt know wat to say to her nt even he dnt know dat y had he called her even knowing dat its too late nw.

Geet: Hello.. Maan u dere?

Maan(realizing that he's on call): ya Geet, hi!

Geet: hi! Wat happen u called so late? Is everything ok?

Maan: ya everything is Fine. Actually I want to ask u dat......

Geet: wat?

Maan( to himself): c'mon Maan think of some reason.

Geet: Maan u dere na?

Maan: ya actually I want to ask dat whether u reached home safely or not.

Geet(puzzled): Maan! I left from ur place almost 4 hrs. ago nd u r asking me nw at dis tym of nite.

Maan: ya its very late, actually I got stuck up wid some files therefore didn't get tym to ask.

Geet: Its ok Maan, yes I had reached home safely nothing to worry.

Maan: ok were u sleeping?

Geet: no actually I was waiting for Someone's call.

Maan(amuzed): who?

Geet: My Vindhya di

Maan(relieved): oh!

Geet: y? wat u have thought?

Maan: nothing Geet. Acha I think u should go nd sleep nw. m also going to sleep. Good nite.

Geet: k f9 Good nite. Bye!

Maan: bye!

He cuts d call.

Geet: Ajeeb insan hai. khud hi call karta hai aur khud hi rakh bhi deta hai.

On d other hand Maan is struggling wid himself.

Maan(to himself): Wats wrong wid u Maan? U have called her just to ask whether she reached home safely or not inspite of knowing dat its her city she can reach home safely. Y is she affecting so much. Oh god! Dis girl will definitely make me mad.

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Geet was about to go to her room wen her cell again rings She thought that it would again be Maan but dis tym its her Di.

Geet: hey Di! Hi! U took so long to call me.

Vindhya: Sorry sweety I was busy wid some patients. By d way y r ur cell was busy few mins. Before.

Geet: oh that! I was talking to Maan.

Vindhya: Maan? At dis tym?

Geet: ya actually he called me to ask whether I reached home safely or not.

Vindhya: Geet u r nw confusing me. U have gone to meet him today rite? Nd u have all plans in ur mind so that he can reject u nd nw u r saying that he had called u to ask whether u reached home safely or not. Wats all dis sweety?

Geet: oh di for dat only I wanted to talk to u yes I have gone to meet him today (den she narrates her d whole incident), so finally d outcome is dat Geet Malhotra is free from all boundations.

Vindhya: Geet nw I m getting worried for u. u knw wat u r doing?

Geet: yes Di I knw wat I m doing.

Vindhya: no u r not realizing it nw dat d path which u have chosen in dat u can be in a great trouble.

Geet: nothing will go wrong Di. Trust me. See Maan nd me both doesn't wanted to get married but we both r doing dis for our family so dis is d only way to get rid from all dis..

Vindhya: But Geet wat will happen if u fall in love wid him during dis drama?

Geet: oh pls Di! R u kidding? Geet malhotra nd Love? U knw na I dnt have tym for all dis.

Vindhya(getting Serious): nd wat if he falls in love wid u?

Geet(remained silent for a second): no di he'll not.

Vindhya: hw can u be so sure?

Geet: Because di he's also like me. He also dnt believe in love nd all dat nd Moreover Di he can never fall for me. He's a businessman rich, smart nd handsome nd I m a Simple girl. He can have more better girls den me den y would he fall for me?

Vindhya: u never know Geet Wen u can fall for someone.

Geet: like u had fallen for jiju.

Vindhya: geet dnt change d topic

Geet: Relax Di! Trust me nothing will go wrong.

Vindhya: ok geet. I hope everything will go according to wat u think. But think once again.

Geet: ya di.

Vindhya: chalo its very late nw. u go nd sleep. I'll talk to u tomorrow. Bye gud nite Luv u.

Geet: Bye Di Luv u too.

She cuts d call nd headed towards her room.

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Next day Maan , Armaan nd Savitri Devi has returned back to Mumbai. Maan has promised to himself dat he'll not think about Geet in dese two months he'll only concentrate on his Business. He has losted himself in loads of Work during these two months just to stay away from Geet's Thoughts. But it doesn't seems to be working especially wen he was alone he remembers her Voice, her smile but He is Maan singh Khurana afterall. How could he let any emotions to overcome him so in dis two months he had everything through which he can be away from her thoughts. In these two months he had Called Geet only 3 or 5 times that too wen it was completely impossible for him to not to think about her in which its only Geet who talks continuously nd Maan only says Yes, No, ya dats it. Sometimes even Geet Couldn't understand dat y Maan Calls her wen he dnt have to talk but den she thought may be he's like dat only poor girl didn't understand Maan's Cond. Maan was confused as to why this girl made him feel so out of place. Before Geet came into his life everything went the way he planned it. Now everything was upside down. On the other hand Geet didn't had any affect of Maan on her life. She is living her life as she lives till nw. She got busy in her examination Preparation nd has done well. She was sure dat she'll definitely get Placement in good Company as an intern. Shilpa nd Armaan has became good frnds. Nw they were always in touch through MSN. Armaan had still not told her that he's a senior Doctor in Sanjeevani where she dreams to be as an intern. He told her that he's also giving his Medical exams. He has even given Tips to Shilpa for her Medical Preparations. Shilpa's examination also gone well nd as expected she gets her internship at Sanjeevani but nt at Amritsar's it was at Mumbai. She got d letter before one week of geet's Engagement nd she has to join after two days of her engagement. She was both happy nd sad. Happy because her dream has come true nd Sad because she has never lived away from her mother nd Di. But Geet has always dere for her she gives her courage to fulfill her dreams. Due to Vindhya's Request Geet has agreed to invite Shreekant to her Engagement but on d Condition dat he won't try to show his Warmth towards her. Malini is Happy for her Daughters. Her one daughter is going to get engaged nd another one has Proved herself. Geet nd Her family has left for Mumbai 3 days before engagement. Geet has decided to do her internship in Mumbai only so that Shilpa won't feel lonely. The only thing dat bothering to her was her mom. She has never been alone in dese years but Malini has assured her dat she will Call her Nanimaa to live wid her. She wanted her daughters to be d best. She dnt wanted her Daughters to Sacrifice their Dreams because of her. Padma has done all arrangements for dem in Mumbai. From Geet's dress to her engagement Ring all has been arranged by her.

And now finally D day of Engagement has came. It was a day of great happiness for Savitri Devi as his Grandson is going to be engaged that too wid d girl like Geet. Maan as usual has no interest in arrangements for her own Engagement So Dadimaa has given dis Responsibility to Armaan. Armaan was always their during arrangements. He knews Maan's taste very Well nd because of Shilpa he also came to know much about Geet's taste also. He wanted to make dis Day Memorable nd Perfect for both of dem therefore he has made sure that their would be no blunders. Maan didn't wanted to include Media nd all dat in dis moreover it is not good for geet also as he has promised her dat their relationship will never lead to marriage. nd after d disclosure of d whole thing He dnt want to get Geet's name spoil in media. Savitri Devi has to give up to his request. She assured him dat only Geet's family nd few of their Close Friends would be invited. By evening Armaan has made all d arrangements Done. Whole hall was Decorated with metallic Decor. Inspite of roses Armaan has chosen Blue nd Purple Orchids because Shilpa has told him dat dey r Geet's Fav. The curtains matched well with Flowers. In short he has done all those things which makes his Best Friend's Day perfect.

It was 7:30 PM wen Geet nd her family has enterd d Hall. Maan nd others r waiting for Dem. Maan has wore White Shervani which is specially ordered by her Dadi. As soon as Maan notices Geet coming he forgots everything around him. All he could see is Geet who is slowly walking towards him. Afterall he's watching her after 2 months. She has wore Light Peach Lehanga wid d work of crystals on dem nd light weighted jewellery. She has not done much make-up dat usually d girls used to do during these functions. Her Simplicity adds charm to her beauty. He was so lost in her that he had even forget to breath. Armaan could notice d change of Expression on Maan's Face as soon as he saw geet.

Armaan: Wat happen Maan? U seems to be lost somewhere.

Maan: Huh..... no nothing like dat.

Armaan: dnt tell me Dude. U were lost in Geet.

Maan: not at all Armaan.

Armaan: y? is Geet is not looking Preety today?

Maan(Looks to Geet): She is always preety in her own way. Her simplicity is d best thing about her.

Armaan: ya I knw.. datsy Maan has got lost in dat.

Maan: armaan u....

Their Conversation interrupted wen Shilpa came to dem.

Shilpa: Hi jiju! Hi Armaan!

Armaan: hey Shilpa! Hi looking preety today.

Shilpa: thanx.

Armaan: Waise Maan who is looking more preety today? Shilpa or Geet?

Maan gives an angry look to Armaan as he knews y Armaan has said dis.

Maan: Both r looking nice.

Shilpa: No jiju u have to choose b/w both of us.

Maan: ummm.... Shilpa wo.....

Shilpa: Relax Jiju! I can understand d diallema of urs. I knw Di is looking much preetier den me today. Afterall she is going to engaged d most eligible bachelor of town.

Maan said nothing but smiled. Malini has introduced Maan nd Savitri Devi to her family.

Geet was standing aside waiting for her Vindhya Di nd Vansh bhaiya to come. Dey said dat dey will directly reach to d Venue. She was unhappy due to Shreekant's presence but tried to control her emotions. Armaan saw her standing alone so he came to her Dragging Maan wid him.

Armaan: Hey Geet!

Geet: hi armaan. Hws u?

Armaan: I m f9 as always (den whispering to maan) atleast say hi to her.

Maan: Hi geet.

Geet(smiles): Hi maan hws u?

Maan: good nd u?

Geet: m f9 too.

Armaan couldn't stop himself laughing.

Maan(amuzed): wat makes u to laugh Armaan?

Armaan: Sorry bt I can't help it. Dude u both were talking like u met for d first time. Geet I can't expect dis from u atleast. I have heard dat u used to talk a lot.

Geet: wat to do armaan? I guess Maan's Company is spoiling me

Armaan: I knw. Poor u! By d way did u liked d decorations?

Geet: ya it was awesome. Infact Orchids r my fav. Flowers.

Just den Shilpa informed dat Vindhya nd Vansh r here so geet excuses herself from dere. Maan saw her meeting wid their siblings. They were meeting like dey were not in touch from so many years. He could see d warmth b/w their relationships which was missing in his Life as his Relationship wid Dev was nt much Good Because of his wife Nayantara. Infact Dev has not came in his engagement also. He remembers d time wenever he calls geet she use to speak about her Di nd Bro. he was lost in dese thoughts wen Geet came to him wid her Di nd Bro.

Geet: Maan.. Dese r the two most important people of my life about whom I use to talk everytime. Dis is My Vindhya Di nd dats my Vansh Bro

Maan: hi Di! Geet use to talk a lot about u both.

Vindhya: I knw she's like dat only. She never lets anyone speak.

Geet: Di......

Vansh: dnt worry my Little angel. I'll always be on ur Side.

Geet: thanx bhai. Dekha Maan kabhi bhi mujhse panga mat lena. warna u knw my bro...

Maan: ofcourse not geet.

Just den Armaan announced to the guests to be settled down as d engagement Ceremony was about to begin nd as per his plan he called Geet nd Maan towards d stage. Maan has directed his hand towards Geet gesturing her to hold it while moving to stage Geet looked at him for a while den gaves her hand to him. Armaan gestures someone to put off d lights while dey were moving towards stage. All d lights were off nd dere was Spotlight on both of dem. As soon as dey came to stage dey were asked to wear ring to each other nd dey did dat. Maan couldn't able to take her eyes away from her face. In d spot light her face looks as beautiful as Taj Mahal in D moon light. He came into his senses wen d lights on d stages were on again. Everyone congratulate both of dem nd wishing luck for their bright future. Shilpa gives a warm hug to her sister while armaan hugs Maan. But suddenly Shilpa remembers something.

Shilpa: Armaan u did d arrangements for dis party na.

Armaan: yes u have any doubts in dat?

Shilpa: not really but I wonder hw can u forget about d music. Afterall its celebration time.

Armaan: can it be Possible that Armaan do something nd it would be mess. (Then he shouts) Music!!

Music began to starts nd everyone has joined d dance floor. Armaan Dragged Geet nd Maan also to d dance floor. Maan didn't dance as usual he stand over dere nd watched Geet dancing. It automatically made a smile on his face. During d dance geet's leg gets tripped which makes her lose her balance. She was about to fall wen she realizes d grip of strong hand around her waist. Geet looks upwards nd saw dat it was Maan who saved her from falling. Dere was an eyelock moment for few seconds. For d first time Maan found himself Drowning in her Deep shining eyes. For d moment he fells dat there was no one around dem. Just d two of dem. Den suddenly Maan came to his senses. He raises her nd asked dat if she's ok.

Maan: R u ok Geet?

Geet(smiles): ya! Thanx Maan.

Maan: c'mon Geet no need to be formal.

Geet said nothing but smiles. Just den Shilpa came to her nd dragged her again to d dance floor. Maan stood dere only watching Geet nd smiling.

Precap:

Savitri Devi asks Geet to stay wid dem

hey guys i have tried my best to create a whole ambiance of engagement but i m nt sure whether i was succeeded or not 🤔🤔 so pls let me knw whether i was able to succeed or not as i m really nervous for dis part. Hit d like button if u all like it. do leave ur Comment/criticism. i m still biting my nails.🤔

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Hi 😊

that was really a nice update 😊
Loved it 😊
Maan is already crazy about Geet 😆