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Posted: 14 years ago
Thanks 4 awesome n mindblowing update...!!! 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
I will try 2 comment long...bt for now that it...!!!😃
sori...*holder ears*...!!!!😳
I luv it when he says LUV u Geet...!!!!😍
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Posted: 14 years ago
OMG He SAid it!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Plssssssssssss GEET Forgive him. just can't wait for next part
pls update soon
just loved the way maan keep sending those stuff! aww.....................
Such a sad and lovely, cute update!
thank u!
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Posted: 14 years ago
ohhhh he is sooooooooooooooooooo cute.......pls update sooon.... i want geet to forgive him, but not that easily...yea i know i m evil...lol
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Posted: 14 years ago
hi everyone A very Good Morning to all of u. Thanx a ton for ur Lovely lovely Comments on part 23. i m glad to know that u all like it. thanx for ur Support So far. nw here's d Part 24 of my FF. hope u all will like it too. pls Feel free to criticise if u all dnt like it.😊


Part 24:

Geet was still looking into his eyes not knowing wat to say. Today Maan has said wat he feels for her nd she too feels d same. She wanted to tell him that she loves him Too. She wanted to hug him tight wen he said dis. but couldn't able to do that as she was still not able to come out from d last nite incidence.

Geet: If u love me so much den hw can u let me go wid someone else so easily. Only dis much trust u had on ur Love Maan.

Maan was taken aback wen Geet said dis. he didn't expect to listen dis from Geet. He thought that geet too will confess her feelings to him today but he was stunned to hear dis from Geet.

Maan: Geet.........

Geet said nothing nd quickly rushes towards door leaving Maan behind Clueless.

Maan(to himself): U cant run away from me like dis Geet. U have to tell me today about ur feelings.

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It was 7:30 pm wen Maan reaches to outhouse. He cant let go geet away from him so easily.

Maan(yells): Geet, Geet where r u?

Shilpa was at living Room as soon as she saw Maan, she goes to him.

Shilpa: Jiju?

Maan: Shilpa, where is Geet? I want to talk to her.

Shilpa: Jiju, Di......

Maan: Shilpa tell me where is she?

Shilpa: Di chali gayi jiju. Amritsar.

Maan backs away wen he listens dis

Maan: Amritsar. Y didn't u stopped her?

Shilpa: I tried Jiju but usne mujhe apni kasam de di. She has given dis letter for u.

Maan quickly takes letter from her nd opens it to read.

Maan,

By the tym u'll get dis letter I'll be on my way to Amritsar. I knw u must be shocked at dis kind of behaviour of mine. But u only tell me Maan wat should I do. Yesterday u said dat everything was fake between us nd today u says that u love me. Nw tell me to which I should Believe? U had only said na that u can read my eyes then y u didn't read that I feel nothing for Vridant. Ek baar to mujhse poocha hota Maan I would tell u the whole truth but u didn't even ask me nd straight away gone to conclusion. Maan, I knw I have hurted u by going like dis nd more den u it hurts me, especially after knowing wat u feels for me but its necessary for both of us. We both need some time so that u can understand urs as well as my feelings so that there will be no other complications in our relationship in future.

Geet


Maan sat on d couch after reading d letter still not believing dat Geet has left. He closes his eyes in pain. Shilpa Tries to console him but he stopped her nd moved towards mansion slowly.

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On the other hand Geet is at bus with her eyes closed thinking about the moment that has been just passed. The moment for which she has been waited for so long. Maan confesses his feelings towards her. She touches her cheeks with her fingers where she can still feel the lips of Maan over dere but still she has to take dis harsh decision because it was good for both Maan nd Geet. She knows that Maan will not let her go so easily so inspite of going to mansion she has gone straight away to Bus Station nd asked Shilpa to bring her luggage over dere only nd wen Shilpa reaches over dere she handed her the Letter she has written for Maan. Shilpa tried to stop her but she didn't listened.

Geet(to herself): I m Sorry Maan. I don't want to hurt u especially after knowing that u love me. But its necessary. I m not giving u any Punishment infact I m punishing myself by keeping myself away from u but until nd unless I wont do that u'll never understand my feelings.

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Back to Khurana's Mansion, Maan in his Room thinking about Geet with the letter in his hand.

Kuch Kum Roshan hai roshani
Kuch kum gili hai barishien

Kuch Kum Lehrati hai hawa
Kuch Kum hai dil mein khawishein

Tham sa gaya hai yeh waqt aise
Tere liye hi thehra ho jaiisee

hmmmmm hmmmm hmmmmmmmmm hhmmmmmmm

hmmmmm hmmmm hmmmmmmmmm hhmmmmmmm

Maan could still feel Geet's presence in d room. He had never feel so lonely in his life. He looked outside nd saw that it was Raining nd remembers hw much Geet loves rains but today even d rain couldn't able to ease his pain as it makes him Miss Geet even more. Everything seems to be meaningless without her. he remembers everytime wen he was wid Geet nd hw she use to find Happines in small small things.

Kuch Kum Roshan hai roshani
Kuch kum gili hai barishien

Kuch Kum Lehrati hai hawa
Kuch Kum hai dil mein khawishein

Tham sa gaya hai yeh waqt aise
Tere liye hi thehra ho jaiisee

hmmmmm hmmmm hmmmmmmmmm hhmmmmmmm

hmmmmm hmmmm hmmmmmmmmm hhmmmmmmm

On the other hand Geet too missing Maan wen she saw raining outside she remembers d nite wen she was with Maan nd hw Maan has saved her from an Accident nd she hugs him tight. She has never thought that she has to leave Maan like dis. the world around her seems to be still without him. Then she Remembers every moment she spend with Maan.

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Geet remembers wat Maan has said to her last nite at the basket ball court nd wat he said today at office nd Maan remembers hw Geet has yelled at her last nite to tell him wat he means to her nd today she left him by leaving a Letter to him.

Kyun meri saaans bhi kuch feeki si hai
Duriyon se hui nazdiki si hai

Office has not been d same without her. Maan was in his cabin looking at Geet's cabin which was empty.

[music]

For a moment he feels Geet's presence over dere but soon he realizes that Geet is not there

Kyun meri saaans bhi kuch feeki si hai
Duriyon se hui nazdiki si hai

He looked around his cabin nd saw the glimpses of his nd Geet over dere fighting for the project or discussing on it. A faint smile has came on his lips.

Jaane kya Yeh baat hai
Har subah Abb raat hai

Geet was at her home but only physically mentally she was still with Maan. Maan sits back to his chair nd closes his eyes.

Kuch Kum Roshan hai roshani
Kuch kum gili hai barishien

Kuch Kum Lehrati hai hawa
Kuch Kum hai dil mein khawishein

Tham sa gaya hai yeh waqt aise
Tere liye hi thehra ho jaiisee

hmmmmm hmmmm hmmmmmmmmm hhmmmmmmm

hmmmmm hmmmm hmmmmmmmmm hhmmmmmmm

Geet was so lost in his thoughts that she didn't realize wen she cuts her finger with knife while cutting vegetables. She cried with pain nd Maan opens his Eyes with jerk as he had a feeling that Geet is in pain.

"Geet" this is d only word that has came from his mouth wen he opens his eyes. he looked around him but found no one but his heart is saying that geet is hurt somewhere.

Geet looked at her injured finger nd remembers wen she was injured while sewing bitton of Maan's shirt nd hw much Maan got restless wen he saw her finger bleeding.

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Both thinks about each other nd moments dey spend with each other so far. Their first Dance, their First hug everything

Phool meheke nahi kuch gumsum say hai
Jaise roothe hue kuch yeh tumse hai

Geet took out the flower from her novel which she thought that Maan has send to her nd looked at it nd closes her eyes.

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A drop of tear fell from her eyes

Phool meheke nahi kuch gumsum say hai
Jaise roothe hue kuch yeh tumse hai

Maan is at his room nd looks at the bouquet that Geet has brought for him but couldn't able to give him. He came out from his room nd goes to outhouse to geet's Room.

Khushbuyen Dhal gai

saath tum Abb jo nahi

He looks around her room nd every small things over dere reminds him of her. he caress everything over there, her Wardrobe, her table nd Finally he goes to her Book rack.

He was about to turn wen he notices Geet's Diary still over dere. He picked it up nd remembers hw dey both had fight for it like fourth graders. He opens it nd coincidently goes to the Page in which Geet has written something about him. He looked at the Heading

"My Feelings For The Special Person of my Life"

He smiles nd looked at the matter written under it.

"Dear Diary. U have been my best Friend after Di since Childhood. There r many things which only u know nd d thing which I m going to tell u today is in one of those things. Guess Wat? I m in love. Yes I m in love. U also couldn't believe it na. even me couldn't able to believe it first. Imagine me Geet Malhotra has actually fallen in Love. Well u wanted to know who it is rite? Well u know him. Yes he's d same person from whom I saved u that day. Yes u r rite he's none other den Maan.(Maan smiled wen he reads his name). U have also got shocked na after hearing dis even me too get Shocked wen I realize my feelings towards him. Imagine I m have fallen in love wid someone like Maan Singh Khurana. But its true. Maan, the person to whom I met six months before nd at dat tym I didn't know that someday he'll become my life, my everything. Wo thoda sa akdoo hai, nahin Dusht Daanav hai. Ego don't ask hamesha uske Naak pe rehta hai. Baat baat pe Maan Singh Khurana ye hai, Maan Singh Khurana wo hai, Maan Singh Khurana is baat se nahi darta, Maan Singh Khurana ye kar sakta hai, bas har baat me khud ki tareef. ("Geeetttttt" as usual came out from his mouth wen he reads this) But there is Another Maan beside dis egoestic Maan Singh Khurana to which only I knows Who was always there for me wenever I need him. Whether it was my stupid Laptop problem or at My Dad's Death anniversary. He always made me feel that hw special I m to him. His Care, his emotions has forced me to love him nd I don't regret it also. If I try den also I cant run away from dis Feeling. If 6 months back anyone would Ask me who is Maan, then I would say MD of Khurana's Construction. Then after meeting him if anyone would Ask me about him den I would say my best friend but nw if Anyone ask me Who is Maan? Then my Answer will be an Integral part of Geet's World. The Essence of Geet's Life. Yes, I love u Maan. I love u. But problem is that I don't know whether he loves me or not but I had seen in his eyes, the same feelings which I had for him but still I couldn't able to tell him. Its not easy for a girl to confess her feelings first. But ye baat us Stupid ko kaun samjhaye. But my heart says that soon he's going to confess his feelings for me nd I have to wait till den nd I'll wait. By the tym I say it over here only.

I love u Maan. I love u"

[music]

Kuch Kum Roshan hai roshani
Kuch kum gili hai barishien
Tham sa gaya hai yeh waqt aise
Tere liye hi thehra ho jaiisee

hmmmmm hmmmm hmmmmmmmmm hhmmmmmmm

hmmmmm hmmmm hmmmmmmmmm hhmmmmmmm

hmmm hmmmmmmm hmmmmm hmmmm
hmmmm hmmmmm hmmmm hmmmm

Maan smiled after reading d last line nd holds d diary close to his heart nd sits on the bed. "I love u too geet. Pls come back" He says nd closes his eyes but dis tym not in pain but in happiness dat finally he came to know about her feelings. Geet loves him though she didn't tell herself but nw wen he knows he cant stay away from her even a second. Geet on the other hand is having a strange Feeling like somewhere something has happened, like Maan is calling her. she goes to the Window nd looked at the Moon who has always been d evidence of their relationship.

Geet(To herself): Y m I feeling dat Maan is calling me, like he needs me. I had been here from 6 days but I never felt like dis before. Babaji! R u trying to say something which I m not able to understand? Is Maan missing me?

She too closes her eyes to find the Answers of the questions running in her mind.

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Its been 8:30 PM nd Maan is in his Room. He cant stay away from Geet especially after knowing her feelings. Shilpa nd Armaan were too present over dere. Everyone is thinking that hw to bring Geet back. But none of dem getting any idea. For the First tym Armaan too was clueless

Armaan: Koi Faayda nahi hai Dude! Geet tujhse naraaz hoke gayi hai. itni asaani se nahi manegi.

Maan: I knw Armaan but I cant sit like dis especially after knowing that she loves me too.

Armaan: that's wat I want to say Yaar. Geet loves u so much nd dis is wat hurted her so badly that she has been hurted by the person she loves.

Shilpa: Armaan is rite jiju. Waise to Di ka gussa zyada din nahi rehta but is Baar even I dnt know that wen her Anger will over.

Maan: I know Shilpa. But I have to do something. I cant let her go like dis.

Shilpa: Ye Di bhi na! kabhi kabhi kuch zyada hi gussa karti hai

Armaan who was thinking of a plan nw has to speak in between.

Armaan: acha! Shilpa geet is not wrong anywhere. Her Anger is rite at her place. Nd u being her sister not taking her side.

Shilpa: Armaan she's my sister nd I know her since childhood. Di ko kabhi kabhi Over react karne ki aadat hai.

Armaan: nd For ur Kind Information I also know Maan since Childhood aur use har baat pe over react karne ki aadat hai.

Shilpa: Armaan, I don't believe dis. inspite of taking Jiju's side u r taking Di's side.

Armaan: Yes Because she's Rite. Nd u also wat Maan has done.

Shilpa: Ya I agree ki jiju se galti hui hai. but Baad me unhone Sorry bhi to bola.

Armaan: o ya! Pehle Murder karo aur fir bolo Sorry.

Shilpa: Armaan, Galti Di ki bhi hai. if she tells Jiju Before only about her Feelings den these Complications would never occur.

Armaan: o Really! Maan bhi to pehle bol sakta tha na.

Shilpa: Jiju ne baad me bola na.

Armaan: Haan! Kab bola sab kuch gadbad kar dene ke baad. Nd u expect that Geet takes him to her Arms nd says "yes Maan I love u too"

Shilpa: So wat do u want to say, Its jiju's fault?

Armaan: nd wat u want to say, its Geet's Fault?

Shilpa: Armaan....

Armaan: Shilpa.....

Shilpa: u know wat? Just shut up

Armaan: u also Shut up

Maan who was listening to their cat-Dog Fight from so long has now got Irritated.

Maan(shouts): Both of u Shut up

Both Armaan nd Shilpa got scared wen dey Suddenly listens his voice nd become quiet.

Maan: Tum Dono yaha meri Problem ka Soln. Nikalne ke liye Aaye the ya Aapas me jhagadne. Here I m not able to understand hw to bring Geet back Home nd u both inspite of helping me r arguing among urselves.

Shilpa: But Jiju.....

Maan: Enough Shilpa. Nw no more Discussions nd Armaan u too.

Both Armaan nd Shilpa gives an Angry look to each other

Maan(taunts): Thanx to both of u for ur wonderful Help. But nw I'll find the way of bringing Geet Back by my own. Infact I had found it also.

By saying dis he opens his wardrobe nd started packing some clothes. Both Shilpa nd Armaan looked at him den to each other but both of dem were not getting any idea of wat Maan is upto. Maan packed his belongings nd started heading towards d Door.

Armaan: Dude! Where r u going?

Maan: Amritsar.

"Amritsar" Both Armaan nd Shilpa said together

Maan: ya to get Geet back. Geet I m coming (he said slowly)

By saying dis he started moving outwards leaving Armaan nd Shilpa behind puzzled.

Precap:

Geet Feels Maan's Presence around her

So guys hope u all will like dis Part. hit d like Button if u all will like it nd do leave ur Comment/criticism. its necessary😊😊
Luv Aakriti😊😊
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Edited by aakritisri1111 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
whyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy?????????????????????????????????
why such a sad paRT THOUGHT IT WOULD BE A GUD N ROMANTIC ONE I GUESS U HAV SUMTHING ELSE IN UR MIND PLZ GET MAANEET BACK AS SOON AS POISSIBLE
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Posted: 14 years ago
really gud.. i was waiting for ur update!!!!
plz continue!!!


Get well soon, Gurmeet!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
i felt so touched and could imagine maan's reaction when he was reading her diary...
Yay!!!!!!!
Maan is going to get his Geet back...I'm so excited for the next part...cool yaar...please update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
Ahhhh am alll in tears this was sad part but I think the next part it will bee happy right plzzz make the next part happy buz am daying her for them and thanks alot for pm
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Posted: 14 years ago

outstanding and brilliant part

nice both are missing each other terrible........
want to read the next part
will be waiting
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey great the update is full of felling plzzz continue soon as u know that the weekends are really boring and killing😡plzz plzzz continue soon waiting for next update😍

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