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Hey Aakriti,
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hi guys Finally i m back with my Update Sorry to kept u all waiting for so long but i had a valid Reason for dis my net connection was out of order😭😭. but finally it resumes few mins back only so i couldnt wait to update. thanx a ton for ur Support nd love so far. nw here's Part 21 of my FF. hope u all will like it too. Pls feel free to criticise if u all dnt like it.

Part 21:

Wen it took too late for coming downstairs to both Geet nd Maan, Savitri Devi has decided to go to herself to Maan. She goes upstairs to his room nd was about to call him wen she saw both of dem lost in each others eyes like dey have forgot the rest of d world. It was only their eyes who was speaking. Savitri Devi didn't wanted to disturb their beautiful moment so she decided to left from dere.

Savitri Devi (to herself): Its ok Maan! Hum Aapse baad me baat kar lenge nd today u both make me believe that I was not wrong by choosing Geet as ur Life partner.

She smiled nd left from dere

Geet came back to her Senses after a while. She slowly drews her finger back to her self nd turned away to leave. Maan can easily notice dat she's blushing wen she turned away. She was about to leave wen Maan called her.

Maan: Suno'..

Geet stood over their rooted without turning back

Maan: Thank u! would be Mrs. Khurana

Calling maan would be Mrs. Khurana to her make her even more blush. She smiled nd quickly ran away from dere. Maan brushed his Hairs from his fingers nd smiled.

"Pagal" He said then he touched his Shirt's Button nd smiled.

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2 weeks has been passed by since Vridant came nd he didn't miss any chance to face Geet. That nite wen he saw Geet nd Maan together he couldn't able to bear it. He knows that he has done mistake but he also knows dat sooner or later Geet will forgive him like she did always but still he cant stand Geet with someone else. He has came here for Geet nd will go den only wen he gets her. He knows that he's Becoming insane but he's helpless nw. All he want is Geet. So everyday with a new Excuse he comes to Khurana's Construction. Sometimes he says he wants to clear some doubts nd sometimes he says that he too wanted to coordinate with bankers. Geet has sensed all his Intentions. She knews that Coming of Vridant to the office everyday is not more den a excuse but she tries her best to keep herself calm nd avoids to face him. Geet's Restlessness was not hidden from Maan. He knews that something is wrong wid Geet wen Vridant cames around her because every time wen she was with him she's normal like always but wenever Vridant cameshe use to get restless. Many tym she has avoided to attend the meeting wid Vridant. But he couldn't able to understand d reason behind dis.

He then remembers the anger in Geet's Eyes wen she saw Vridant at the shopping Mall, the way of talking to him at Restaurant nd many others things.

"So is there something related to him?" he thought nd decided to ask Vridant itself.

That evening he has gone to his place. Vridant was surprised to see him.

Vridant: Maan! U here?

Maan: Wont u tell me to come inside?

Vridant: oh ya! Ofcourse

Maan came inside nd looks around d room nd get seated at the couch.

Vridant: So Maan! Anything important?

Maan: ya something very important.

Vridant: About Project I guess?

Maan: No its about u nd Geet.

Vridant face wents blank wen he heards geet's name.

"Did Geet told him everything that has happened between him nd Geet. If that would be true then Maan will definitely kick him out of dis Project nd his dream of getting Geet would be over" He thought.

Vridant: Me nd Geet.

Maan: ya u heard me rite. Nd dnt tell me the same thing that I already knows i.e. u both were classmates because I know that somewhere something is wrong. I haven't asked Geet about it because I dnt want to bother her. So its better u tell urself.

Vridant sighed a breath of relief. So geet haven't told Maan yet anything. He thought. Nw he knows hw to handle d situation.

Vridant:u r rite Maan me nd Geet were nt just classmates infact we use to be best buddies in d college. We have shared so many good times together. No one can break our friendship. Nd soon we both have realized that we both have fallen in love wid each other but none of us have courage to confess to each other. Finally we decided that we'll cinfess each other at the last day of our Session.

Maan couldn't believe wat he was listening Geet nd Vridant was in love. But hws that possible. He thought to himself

Maan: Do u have any idea wat u r talking Vridant?

Vridant: I know it would be difficult for u to believe it Maan but that's the truth me nd Geet were in love.

Maan(still not believing) : But if u both were in love then y Geet says that u r just her classmate.

Vridant: Because she's angry with me. Actually there was a misunderstanding created between us by our classmate Ria. Ria had a huge crush on me nd she cant stand the relationship of mine with Geet so she created a huge rift between me nd Geet due to which Geet nd me were parted.

By saying dis Vridant Looked at Maan who was looking shattered which make Vridant Sure that his Arrow hits at the target.

Vridant: I knw Maan its not easy for u but that's only the truth. Geet loves me nd nt u.

The words of Vridant made maan felt like thousands knives piercing his heart. He still couldn't believe that the Girl to whom he loves so much was actually in love with someone else. Vridant continues saying.

Vridant: Maan, geet must have engaged to u but still in her heart its only me who lives. Otherwise u only tell y would she hides this fact from u. that made clear that she still loves me. I know thoda naaraz hai mujhse nd kyun na ho the way everything has been putted in front of her was enough to make her believe the fact. But I knw that she wont be angry with me for long. I just need a chance to clear all the misunderstandings between us.

Maan didn't concentrate on any words wat he says. Every moment he spend with Geet were running in his mind. He still couldn't believe d fact that Geet was in love wid someone else. He slowly moves out of his House. Vridant tried to stop him but he was lost in his own thoughts.

Vridant (to Himself): I know Maan, I have done wrong. I didn't told u wat actually happened, y geet hates me so much? I know I had not done right by hiding the truth but I m helpless. I cant let go Geet so easily from my life nd everything is fair in love nd war.

Maan has still didn't recovered from wat Vridant Said. He has came here to know the reason behind Geet's Restlessness nd the truth which is in front of him was unbearable. He quickly get into his Car nd started Driving. He had never drive so fast in his whole life. While Driving every flashes of Geet were coming in his mind. Her smile, her talks, her anger everything. Then he remembers hw Geet's face has got Frowned wen he asked about d guy in d Photograph. He stops his car at a halt nd closes his eyes nd leaned against his seat. He wished that it would not be more den a nightmare but it's the truth. His heart nd Mind were running in two Opposite Directions nd for the first tym in his life he dont know of Whom to listen. his heart says that Geet loves him but his mind is believing on wat Vridant has said

Maan: y Geet? Y? y did u hide dis From me? So it means wat I read in ur eyes were wrong? U don't love me? U have to answer all my questions Geet. U have to answer.

By saying dis he turns his car nd started driving towards Outhouse.

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On the other Hand Geet decided to tell everything about Vridant to Maan before Vridant plays any of his Game. But before that she wants to dispose every thing every memory of him. Though she already has thrown him out of her life nd no memories of him was left in her heart but she didn't wanted to keep any of those things with her which makes her think about him. She quickly opens her cupboard nd brings out her album from it. She tooks out the picture in which she was with Vridant nd other students. She looked at the photograph for a while just den Maan came to her room he was about to call her wen he saw Geet looking at the photograph. He misunderstands that Geet was remembering Vridant nd he left from there disheartened. Just wen Maan left Geet tore d picture into Pieces nd throws it in d Dustbin.

Geet (to herself): I don't want any kind of ur presence in my life Vridant whether it was a photograph or u urself. Nd nw I'll tell everything to Maan.

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Maan came back to mansion. He was in no mood to talk to anyone so he straight away goes to his Room nd locked d door from inside still couldn't able to recover from d shock. He was thinking that Geet loves him though she has never said anything but her eyes have told him everything. Everytime she use to get restless wen he was around her, depending on him, her nervousness from past few days has made him realize that Geet too loves him. But today everything seems to be false. Her eyes, her smile, her talks everything. The world around him has been totally shattered. He don't know what to do.

He closes his eyes nd sits on his rest chair but after closing his eyes also it was Geet's face that comes in front of him.

Maan: y? geet y? y didn't u tell me this before? Even I asked u also wen I first met u that u r in love with someone else then also u didn't told me. If u have told me den I would never feel this for u. nw tell me what should I do?

He opens his eyes nd move towards his Drawer nd took out the Geet's bracelet from it which has been fallen wen geet has gone to drop maan nd after dat he notices d teddy bear in his Room, the same teddy bear which he has brought for Geet because she loved it at the shop. He thought that he'll give this to her wen he'll propose her but nw its of no use. But suddenly he got his answer

Maan: I had brought dis Because Geet loves it, nd everything which Geet loves should be with her. if Geet loves Vridant then I have no right to come between them.

By saying dis He tooks out his phone nd started dialing Vridant No.

Maan: Hello Vridant! Maan here. U wanted to apologise Geet n and wanted to get her back to ur life. I'll help u. tomorrow Geet will be urs. U clear all her misunderstandings nd start a new Beginning.

Vridant: But Maan geet is ur fiance

Maan: that engagement was nt real Vridant. It was fake. I'll tell u everything wen we meet.

By saying dis he disconnects d call nd decided wat he has to do.

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Next morning Wen Geet reaches to office she found that Maan has still didn't reached over dere.

Geet (to herself): Wat a wonder! Mr. Timepiece is late today?

She decided to ask someone.

Geet: oye Pinki! Ye Maan....... I mean Maan sir abhi tak kyun nahi aaye? Mera matlab hai itna late to kabhi nahi hote na

Pinki: wo Geet, Sir ka phone aaya tha. He said that he'll not come today. He had some important work.

Geet: ok thanx.

She headed towards her cabin while thinking.

Geet (to herself): Wat kind of important work it is that he didn't even tell me? Kal raat ko bhi koi call nahi kiya.

Lost in her thoughts she didn't realize wen she reached to her cabin. As soon as she entered her cabin she saw a bunch of Orchids lying on her table. She smiled nd goes to her table nd found a note attached to it.

"These Flowers doesn't know how lucky they r as they r in ur hands nd today I too want to be as lucky as dem. I wanted to tell u wat I feel for u nd for dat I want to meet u alone. Hope u'll not break my heart. See u at 8".

There was no name mention over dere but Geet knows who could it be.

Geet (to herself): To ye hai Maan Singh Khurana ka important work. He's planning a date for me. So finally he decided to tell me about his feelings. Nw I cant wait till 8.

By saying this she smiles nd put the flowers wid her. She only knows hw difficult it would be for her to wait till 8.

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It was 6 in d evening nd Maan is helping Vridant to plan his date. Only he knows hw difficult it is for him to do that but he's still doing for Geet's happiness. On the other hand Geet is getting ready For Maan she has called Shilpa from her hospital early today for her help. Shilpa is so happy for her Di.

Preparations were going both sides. One person is preparing to give away his life to someone else nd another is preparing for her life.

Vridant: Maan, I think Red colour curtains would be best, u know it signifies love

Maan: No white. White colour is d best. Its Geet's Favourite

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"Black" Said Geet wen Shilpa asks her about d colour of her dress.

Geet: I'll wear Black dress today.

Shilpa: But Di! U like white.

Geet: ya But Maan likes Black.

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Vridant: ok, nd about the flowers, I think roses. Wat say?

Maan: No! not roses. Orchids that too the purple one. Geet loves it

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Shilpa: Di! y u have ordered Bouquet of white roses?

Geet: Because white roses r Maan's Favourite

Shilpa: nd hw u know that?

Geet: in my b'day party if u have noticed he has decorated white roses with Orchids. Remember.

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Vridant: okay but dnt u think that Decor is quite simple. I mean I m going to propose her today. So there would be something more needed. Like some more lights

Maan: No Vridant. Geet loves simple things. She didn't believe in artificiality. So candles will be best.

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Geet: Maan, loves my simplicity therefore I dnt need this Artificial things. (she said while keeping down d fake eye lashes)

Shilpa: ok Di! As u wish

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Vridant: ok nw wat else left. Ya Cake. I had ordered the Chocolate cake.

Maan: no! make it Butter scotch. Geet didn't like any other flavour (he smiles remembering their first ice cream together)

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Geet: Maan knows very well wat I like nd wat I dnt like nd I know about his likes nd dislikes so dis Date will not go wrong from any side.

Shilpa: ya I know! Afterall the Gr8 MSK is planning for it.

Geet: Shilpa! He's ur jiju. Dnt call him MSK.

Shilpa: ok baba Jiju!

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Vridant: u know wat Maan wen Geet will forgive me nd accepts me den i'll take her to a Long drive nd we'll talk whole nite to clear all our griefs.

Maan: No Dont Do that. I mean Geet cant stay awake whole nite otherwise next day she'll catch throat Infection.

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Shilpa: Di dnt forget, dnt stay awake late at nite otherwise u know wat will happen?

Geet: Shilpa u dont have to worry wen ur Jiju is with me. Do u think that he'll allow me to stay awake late at nite?

Shilpa: No! Finally After Vindhya Di there is someone whom u cant refuse.

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Vridant: Gr8 yaar! U know everything about her. I mean u both were together from just 6 months nd I was with her for 4 years but still I didn't know about her likes nd dislikes.

Maan: Kya fark padta hai Vridant. Nw she's going to be wid u forever so u'll come to know every small things about her. (he said wid pain)

Vridant: ya rite.

Vridant has sensed d pain in his voice nd he felt guilty also for doing dis to him but in d next moment he has again started thinking about himself.

Vridant (to himself): Sorry Maan, I know its tough for u as u love Geet so much but I too love her nd dis tym I cant let her go.

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It was 7:30 pm wen Geet has finally got ready nd nw she's waiting for Maan's call wen she gets d SMS from Maan's cell.

"I had send d Driver to pick u up nd he'll bring u at the venue"

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Maan: Vridant, I had texed to Geet. Nd she'll be here within half an hour.

By saying dis he started to move outside.

Vridant: Where r u going Maan?

Maan: My work is over Vridant. Nw from here u have to do everything alone.

He said nd left from dere

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Geet smiled after looking the msg. She hugged Shilpa nd said her Bye. Nd left for d venue.

Shilpa (to herself): I m so happy for u Di! Finally today u r getting the happiness of ur part.

Precap:

Geet Shattered seeing Vridant over dere nd her fight wid Maan

so guys hope u all will like it. hit d like Button if u all like it nd do leave ur Comment/criticism. its necessary😊😊
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Edited by aakritisri1111 - 14 years ago
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Im sooooooooooooooooooo Happy to see ur Update......πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ.....
Thats Beautifully Written Dear.....πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘.........
OMG OMG OMG Im totally Shattered now.......😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭🀒🀒🀒🀒🀒🀒🀒🀒...............
I never thought Vridanth can be so mean........😑😑😑😑😑😑😑.........I want to Kill him......😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑.........
How can he lie to Maan........😑😑😑😑........He is sooooooooooooo Selfish..............
I really Can't see Maaneet in Pain......😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭........
I hope Geet gives a tight Slap to Vridanth......😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑......
I hope Geet tells the Truth to Maan and clears everything........πŸ˜’πŸ˜’πŸ˜’πŸ˜’πŸ˜’πŸ˜’........I want to see Maan punching and hitting Vridanth........😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈.......That Jerk really deserves it.....😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈.......
I want Maan to throw Vridanth out of their Life forever................
Loved every single line.......❀️❀️❀️❀️❀️❀️❀️❀️❀️❀️❀️❀️❀️❀️❀️❀️❀️❀️❀️❀️❀️❀️❀️❀️❀️❀️❀️❀️❀️❀️❀️❀️❀️❀️❀️❀️❀️❀️❀️❀️❀️❀️.....
U made us see Maan's Love for Geet in every line he Spoke....❀️❀️❀️❀️❀️❀️..........
Eagerly waiting for the next part😍
Pls Update Sooooooooooooon
Edited by .sireesha. - 14 years ago
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hey that was so good...really loved..

i so loved it...great as ever..great...

and maan is so dakan...

Vridant is so selfish..

and geet should be angry..

really awesome...and keep writing πŸ‘πŸ‘
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Okay I really really want to slap Vridant! What a selfish bad jerk! Shame on him!

Please update soon! You better solve this distance between Maan-Geet. I dont want to wait to see them fight over that jerk and then take longer time to get together. Do Something and Do it soon!

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