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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Lakshmi86

Hi,

Well, well,well, fantastic update!👏👏👏

It was truly amazing and unexpected,
u revealed the half truth so fast, which was really promising,

I loved teh update,

Update teh next part soon,

Love
lakshmi



thank u so much dear. loved that u liked it. ya i revealed d half truth because i dnt feel like Dragging it purposelessly like Ekta Kapoor do in her serials😆😆😆😆😆😆. Soon u'll come to know the whole truth. thanx for liking once again
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Posted: 14 years ago

hi aakriti

how r u dear. greatttttttttttttttttttttttttttttt update.
ArSh track is going fast i really like it. Itsssssss
and our maneet shoooooooooooooo cute.
but now i think geet maan ko nahi batae gi vridant k bare me.
1. maan ya to khud hi pata lagae ga.
2. yeh bhi ho sakta he k maan ne geet aur vridant ki baten sun li hoon.
and 3rd and last may b vridant geet se misbehave kare and our hero maan ki great entry ho.
waiting for next
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz conti soon



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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: cute-aly

hi aakriti

how r u dear. greatttttttttttttttttttttttttttttt update.
ArSh track is going fast i really like it. Itsssssss
and our maneet shoooooooooooooo cute.
but now i think geet maan ko nahi batae gi vridant k bare me.
1. maan ya to khud hi pata lagae ga.
2. yeh bhi ho sakta he k maan ne geet aur vridant ki baten sun li hoon.
and 3rd and last may b vridant geet se misbehave kare and our hero maan ki great entry ho.
waiting for next
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz conti soon





hey dear i m fine. thanx for liking it. ya i know ArSh track has gone too fast. Actually may be i couldnt able to show dem in future updates as dey can be purely on Maaneet. so thats d reason. nd all ur doubts will be clear in future updates. thanx for liking dis one
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Posted: 14 years ago
so whts the mystery behind virdat guy
nice update
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome update...really nice..
i loved it...amazing...do keep writing
and do update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome part dear
thanks for pm me
wating for next to come
update soon.....
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hi Aakriti😊

Another great update!!!
You are slowly opening the secrets of Geet's past. But Thank God, you didn't drag the secret unfolding part to later updates😊
Mrs. Khurana sounded soo good when Geet herself said it
I loved it😊

I think Geet should confess her love to Maan lest Vridant creates tension between them!

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Posted: 14 years ago
Geet's anger baap re she was than too controlling a lot
Liked the way Geet challenged Maan to take er to teh dhabba
Maan eating frm Geet's plate was also fab
Armaan was such a sweethear
Loved the way he was making Shilpa feel special
Vridant hurted badly too Geet
It looks lik taht frm her talks
Lets c wat she will tell Maan wen he will ask her abt her sudden confession on their relation to sumone else
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey every1 thank u so so so much for ur Gr8 Comments nd love so far nw here's d Part 19 of my FF. Hope u all like it too. pls feel free to criticise if u all dnt like it😊😊

Part 19:

Geet has actually turned d table. Last day it was Vridant who has given her shock nd Today it was Geet who has left her stunned. She dnt know hw she'll answer Maan wen he'll ask about it because till nw she don't knows wat he actually feels for her but she didn't care at that tym. All she cares is to get Vridant away from her life. Nd nw by seeing his Expression she was sure that her Arrow hits at the right place.

Geet: Wat Happen Vridant? Seems u couldn't able to digest this Good News.

Vridant: No its nothing like dat. Actually......

Geet: its ok Vridant. I can understand. Afterall its such a Big news. Wont u congratulate us. Afterall u was my classmate.

Vridant: Ya ofcourse! Congrats to both of u (He says while shaking hand wid Maan)

Maan: Thanx.

Vridant: Congrats Geet!

Geet: thanx Vridant. (den looked at Maan) Maan I think we should go nw. Dadimaa must be waiting for us.

Maan: ya Sure. Ok Mr. Vridant See u.

Vridant: Ya Mr. Maan. Bye.

Geet nd Maan headed towards d Parking Lot Leaving Vridant behind Stunned. Maan still couldn't understand d reason Behind Geet's Behaviour. Y did she said dat? He thought. On the other Hand Geet was thinking wat she'll say to Maan because she knews dat Maan will definitely ask her about it. In these thoughts dey had reached to their car.

Geet (to herself): ok Fine. I'll tell him the truth whatever I feels for him. No matter hw will he react.

Maan (to himself): Geet has to answer me today. Why did she said dat?

"Maan" "Geet" dey both said together nd den looked at each other nd den started laughing.

Maan: ok u tell First

Geet: No Maan. U tell

Maan: its ok Geet. U can say first.

Geet: Maan, u say first.

Maan: Geet, I told na that u say it first.

Geet: nd I also told that u say it first. Warna tum kahoge ki maine tumhe bolne ka mauka nahi diya aur Amritsar Express ki tarah shuru ho gayi.

Maan: Sach me bahut ziddi ho

Geet: tumhari sangat ka asar hai. khair leave it. Wat u want to say?

Maan: Geet why did u told to Vridant about our Engagement?

Geet was knowing somewhere that Maan will ask this to her

Geet: Because I want to.

Maan: But y Geet?

Geet: y u didn't like it?

Maan: no its nothing like dat. But I was surprised because it was u only who wanted to keep dis engagement secret nd nw u urself told him.

Geet: Wo actually Maan, Vridant was asking me that hw we both r so Comfortable wid each other. U know I m calling u by name nd nt sir nd moreover thanx to ur image of staying away from girls but u r so comfortable in my Company so he was suspecting something Fishy so before he could understand anything wrong about us, I said that we are engaged.

Maan: R u sure, dat this is d only reason.

Geet: ya Maan. (den murmurs) Kya Bolna tha aur kya Bol rahi hoon?

Maan: Kuch kaha

Geet: huh Nahin.

Maan: So soon u'll be going Mrs. Khurana rite? (he says while walking towards her)

Geet takes her steps backwards as he moves towards her

Maan: or should I say Mrs. Maan Singh Khurana?

Geet was getting restless. His Gaze was burning her. She continued moving backwards as she saw him coming towards her. Maan pulls Geet closer towards him nd looked into her eyes. Geet found himself Lost in his Eyes. Her Heartbeats were racing millions of miles a second. Their faces were just few inches away from each other They both have an eyelock Session

Maan (whispers): Or Mrs. Geet Maan Singh Khurana?

Geet couldn't say anything. Her heart was leaping in her chest. Maan noticed her Hair hair strand caressing her cheeks. He extended his one hand nd tucked dem behind her hairs caressing her soft skin while his one hand is still on her waist. Geet found it difficult to breathe. She dnt know how long she remained lost in his eyes

Vridant came to parking lot to go back to his home wen he saw both of dem in dat Condition. He couldn't bear the situation nd left from dere as soon as he could.

Geet was still lost in Maan wen his laugh brought her back into senses. She gets Annoyed nd pulled him back nd move few steps ahead. Maan realizes wat has he done.

Maan: Hey Geet I m sorry.

Geet: shut up Maan. Its not funny.

Maan: Acha tum jo bhi karo wo theek hai. aur maine thoda sa mazaak kya kar diya to tumhe bura lag gaya.

Geet: ye thoda sa mazaak tha? Nd by the way maine aisa kya kar diya?

Maan: Acha! U were asking me?

Geet: ya Because aur to yahan koi hai nahi

Maan: ok! Tum zabardasti mujhe dhaba le gayi aur mere liye khana bhi order kar diya without even asking me like u r my Wife.

Geet: But u liked dat Food

Maan: Watever! Nd wat about dat which u have done inside?

Geet: I told u the reason for dat.

Maan: o ya! To agar tum would be Mrs. Khurana ho sakti ho to main tumhara Would be husband hone ke naate thoda sa flirt nahi kar sakta (he says while winking at her)

Geet: Very Funny Maan but unfortunately tumhare is joke pe mujhe hansi nahi aayi.

Maan: Acha Baba Sorry once again! Hey tumhe bhi to kuch kehna tha na

Geet has completely forgot that she has to tell her Feelings to him.

Geet: ya.

Maan: So tell? Wat r u waiting for?

Geet: Actually Maan..... I need to tell u something important....... Actually

Maan(intervenes): wat u r hungry again?

Geet: Maan pls stop interrupting me

Maan: ok Baba! Carry on

Geet: Wo actually baat ye hai ki...... I dnt know how to start....... Actually from few days...... shit! (den she looked at maan who was staring at her) Aise mat dekho main nervous ho jaoongi

Maan: C'mon Geet neither u r giving any kind of a Viva nor I m ur examiner that u'll get nervous.

Geet: Giving answers to the examiner would be more simpler den saying dis.

Maan: oh really?

Geet: ya. Acha nw u stop staring at me.

Maan: So wat do u want me to do. Should I close my Eyes

Geet: No, Don't close, just look away that side.

Maan: o gosh! Fine (he turns away) nw say.

Geet: Maan...... Actually I wanted to say dat........ I....... (Den to herself " Dnt worry Geet , Bol de jo bhi bolna hai") Maan I...... I like..... I like....... ur phone

Maan who was smiling wen he was listening to Geet has became shocked. He turned to Geet

Maan: Wat? U like my Phone?

Geet: no I mean ur phone is ringing. Someday I'll definitely throw it away

Maan realizes that his phone is ringing. But didn't care to answer it

Maan: oh! Nw wat problem u had wid my phone?

Geet: aur kya? Beech me interrupt kar diya

Maan: listen Geet that's not my Phone fault ok. It was u who was taking tym to say. Nd by the way y r u sweating so much? Its not hot over here

Geet: Leave it u wont understand (she says while wiping her sweat)

Maan: den make me understand.

Geet: ya I'll but first answer d call. Its ringing second tym.

Maan: let it be.

Geet: pls Maan! It may be an important call.

Maan: ok Fine (he takes out his cell phone nd saw Dadimaa's name flashing over dere.) Dadimaa.

He answers d call nd started talking to Savitri Devi while Geet started cursing herself

Geet (to herself): Gadhi, ullu ki patthi, ekdum paagal hai tu? It was such a Golden chance u can tell him about ur Feelings. But no u make it all blunder. (den she notices her Sweat) nd y m I sweating dis much like he's a monster nd will eat me if I told him. Dnt worry Geet tell him wen he finishes with his call. Ya!

She waited for maan to finished with his call. As soon as Maan finishes with his call he turns to geet.

Geet: Maan Wo main tumhe...... Main tumse..... I mean I lo.....

Maan: Geet, wait! We can talk later Rite nw Dadimaa has called us in mansion. She is waiting for us for Dinner.

Geet: But Maan......

Maan: Geet afterwards till den u too practice for wat u r going to say so that u wont stammer again ok.

Geet nodded innocently.

Maan: good! nw lets go

As soon as Maan turned towards his Car. Geet hits herself hard on her head nd den goes to sit wid him

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At Khurana's Mansion Maan was in his Room, changing after taking the Shower wen he reminds dat Geet wants to say something but at that tym he couldn t able to listen to her as he has to come home nd afterwards he has forgot to ask her. den he reminds dat Parking lot incident nd Geet's nervousness nd it brought Grin to his face.

Maan(to himself): I know Geet wat u want to say to me? Ur nervousness has said everything. Ye ladki sach mein paagal hai. itni si baat nahi keh payi

On the other hand Geet is also in her Room Cursing herself for not saying it yet

Geet(to herself): Ye lo! Itna acha mauka tha fir bhi nahi bola? Agar aisa hi chalta raha to ho chuka pyar ka izhaar.

Maan's Room:

Maan: But Geet y didn't u said anything?

Geet's Room:

Geet: Kaise kehti, ye koi Film ki story thodi na hai that I can narrate in one breath.

Maan's Room:

Maan: u never thought of anything wen u started to speak. So wat happened today?

Geet's Room:

Geet: waise to i use to say everything even before thinking nd today y d hell did i stammer?

Maan's Room:

Maan: Bol Do Geet! Bol do jo bhi tumhare dil mein hai

Geet's Room:

Geet: Bolna to chahti hoon but jab bhi wo saamne aata hai, I couldn't able to say anything

Maan's Room:

Maan: itna bhi difficult nahi hai Geet.

Geet's Room:

Geet: haan why don't I use any other communication. Hw about letter? Nahin agar wo TV serials ki tarah tym pe nahi mila to? Ya main use mail kar deti hoon? But he hardly checks his mail that too the important one what if he doesn't notices mine? Bad Idea. Wat else SMS? Ya SMS will be rite option. But hw could I be able to write so many things in dat Short SMS. (Den she hides her face wid her hand.) Babaji! Kya karoon main?

Maan's Room:

Maan: u have to do something Geet to tell ur feelings.

Geet's Room:

Geet: But wait a sec. y Should I tell him first? Who bhi to mujhe bata sakta hai? I m sure he too feels d same for me. (den she reminds d parking lot incident nd d feelings dat she saw in his eyes) Yes he too feels

Maan's Room:

Maan: No Geet, bolna to pehle tumhe hi padega

Geet's Room:

Geet: these guys can never understand hw difficult it would be for a girl to confess their feelings first. Nd I tried it also but he has many other important things to Do. No I m nt saying about Dadimaa. Ofcourse she's Important. But baad me to meri Baat sun sakta tha na. but no he has straight away walked to his Room. I Don't care he has to say me first.

Maan's Room:

Maan: I promise u Geet, it would be u who'll confess ur Feeling for me.

Geet's Room:

Geet: Bilkul nahi! Ab to use hi pehle bolna padega. Den I'll also See that hw easily he can tell his feelings.

Maan's Room:

Maan: Dekhte hai Geet, Kab tak tum apni Feelings ko chupaogi?

Geet's Room:

Geet: yes Dekhti hoon, kab tak nahi kehte ho, dat u too likes me, I haven't misread ur eyes Maan.

Dey both headed towards d Window (ofcourse of their respective Rooms) nd looked at d moon who was silently being the witness of their unspoken love that dey Couldn't able to Confess to each other till nw.

Precap:

Geet Thinking about her Past

hey guys i know its kind of a short update nd pls dnt kill me for dis but i need to prepare for my Audit tomorrow. So, Sorry. next update will be longer. Hit d like button if u all like it nd ya Do leave ur Comment/Criticism😊😊

Luv Aakriti😊😊

😊


Edited by aakritisri1111 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
HI AKU

GREAT POST .................................NICE SELF CONVERSATION ..........................MAKE THEM TO CONFESS EACH OTHER ASAP.............................. AND AFTER THAT A STRONG LOVE STORY WILL GO ON....................
Edited by seema05 - 14 years ago

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