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Posted: 14 years ago
superb parts!....
good that armaan told shilpa everything about his past!....
so geet too has a past!....hope that she'll tell that to maan soon!....
continue soon!
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hey every1 a big thank u to all of u for being so loving nd supporting. thanx to all those also u have given me suggestions which help me in improving my FF. nw here's d Part 14 of my FF. hope u all will like it too. pls feel free to criticise if u all dnt like it😊😊

Part 14:

The sun has setted nd it was getting dark wen Geet realizes dat she was in Maan's Embrace from so long the moment she realized it she backed out from his Embrace. She was feeling Awkward to hug him so long but wen she looked at him He assured her through Gesture that she has done nothing wrong.

Geet: I think we should go nw.

Maan: ok. But r u feeling fine.

Geet: ya very much.

Maan: ok.

Maan stood up nd lent his hand to help her get up. Geet reached for his hand nd get up. After dat dey both headed towards Car nd as soon as dey got in Maan started Driving. On d way Geet reminded of Something.

Geet: Maan, we have Meeting wid Mr. Chopra na?

Maan: No Geet.

Geet: But u said dat.....

Maan (looking at her): I lied.

Geet: But y maan?

Maan: Because if I told u d actual Reason for coming out den u'll never get Agreed. So dats d only way to getting u out from d office.

Geet looks at him. Day by Day he's making her Feel dat she's Special for him. And as he's doing dat there's a new Feelings arising in Geet's Heart for him. The Feelings that she never wanted to be arise. So why is she thinking all dis nd y is he doing all dis for her? Dis is the Second tym he left his office for her. Y? he could get 100 times better girls den her den y is he doing all dis for her? She looked at Maan who is constantly concentrating on his Driving. She closed her eyes to get away from all her thoughts wen Maan notices her discomfort.

Maan: Geet, wats Wrong?

Geet: huh.... Nothing Maan. Just feeling tired.

Maan: hhhmmmm... I can sense dat. Y not have some Coffee? There is a Coffee Shop in a way nd I really like Coffee of dat shop.

Geet: ya sure

Geet agreed to it because she wanted to get away from all thoughts that were arising in her mind. She thought dat this will be d best way to get rid out from all dis weird thoughts. Maan started heading towards Coffee Shop.

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In Sanjeevani Shilpa was in the Locker Room taking her Belongings to Go home wen Armaan reached to her.

Armaan: So going Home?

Shilpa: ya.

Armaan: u Feeling fine nw.

Shilpa: ya Armaan. Thanx

Armaan: For wat?

Shilpa: For being there wid me nd Assuring me that I can share my pain wid u.

Armaan: Shilpa, stop dis Thank u Speech. I told u before also dat u r an important part of my life. Nd wen u cant see me in pain den hw come I see u in such a pain. There was an eyelocking between both of dem for few seconds den Armaan broke d gaze.

Armaan: Chalo bahut hui ye Emotional Baatein. Come I'll take u somewhere.

Shilpa: where?

Armaan: Dnt Worry Shilpa. I'll nt kidnap u. we'll just go nd have some Coffee at my Fav. Coffee Shop. After dat I'll drop u home.

Shilpa: ok.

Dey both headed towards outside nd den towards Cafe.

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Maan parked d Car outside d Cafe nd dey both get down d Car nd headed inside d Caf. As they entered Inside d Cafe Dey saw Armaan nd Shilpa over dere. They Both were surprised to see dem over dere. They headed towards d Seat where they were seated.

Maan: Hi Armaan! Hi Shilpa!

Shilpa: Di! Jiju!

Maan: Wat r u guys Doing over here?

Armaan: Playing Cricket. U want to play? (den looks at Shilpa which reminds her of something)

Maan: Sorry I asked.

Armaan: dnt be Dude! By the way what r u guys Doing over here?

Maan: Just felt like having some Coffee so me nd Geet just come over here.

Armaan: den y dnt u guys Join us?

Maan: ya sure.

Maan get himself seated.

Geet: I need to go to washroom. I'll join u guys later.

Shilpa: Di, I'll also come wid u.

Geet: ok.

Dey Both headed towards Washroom. Wen dey both have gone den Maan started his Conversation wid Armaan.

Maan: So what r u doing over here wid Shilpa?

Armaan: D same wat u doing wid Geet?

Maan: Wat Rubbish?

Armaan: Relax Maan. Shilpa was feeling Sad nd u know d reason for dis so I just wanted to cheer her up. Dats it. Nd m sure u have also came for d same reason only.

Maan: Ya. So finally u confessed ur Feeling Towards her?

Armaan: Not yet. I wanted to know her Perception first. By d way wat About u?

Maan (smiles): D same as u.

Armaan: these Both sisters will really drive us crazy.

Maan: ya. Acha Armaan there's something imp I need to talk to u.

Armaan: ya dude tell me.

Maan: see next Week its Geet's B'day nd I wanted to make it special for her. But I m confused what to do.

Armaan: Dude u love her rite?

Maan: No doubt.

Armaan: Den no need to ask me. Just ask urself nd u'll get ur Answer.

Maan: I think u r rite. I have to find d answer on my own.

"Which Answer u r going to find Maan"

They Both looked towards d direction where Voice is coming nd Saw Geet standing over dere. She headed towards dem nd gets herself seated. Maan nd Armaan both got tensed. Wat if she listened everything.

Geet: wat r u guys talking about?

Dey both sighed of relief. Thank god she didn't listen anything.

Maan: wo Actually I was thinking about a project. So we are just discussing dat only.

Geet: C'mon Maan. Atleast leave ur Work here.

Armaan: ya I m also saying d same to him but he never listens to me

Maan: Armaan.....

Shilpa: Stop it both of u nw. y not do the work for which we all were here. I mean to have coffee.

Armaan: Wow Shilpa! Sometimes u really talk so intelligent.

Everyone laughs at it.

Shilpa: Very Funny Armaan.

Everyone have their Coffee nd den left for their respective places.

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In d Outhouse Geet nd Shilpa has changed to their Night dresses nd were trying to Sleep. But it seems dat sleep r miles away from dem. Both are not able to forget that happened today. Dey have shared something close to their hearts to the persons to whom dey hardly know 6 months Before. The thing dat dey didn't even shared wid each other. Hw come they have developed so much trust on dem. Finally Shilpa Got up from her bed nd looked at Geet who was also trying hard to sleep.

Shilpa: Di! U r still awake?

Geet: ya Shilpa. Couldn't able to sleep. But y were u still awake?

Shilpa: Same here Di. Couldn't able to Sleep.

Geet: Y? is everything Fine Shilpa?

Shilpa: ya Di everything is Fine. Di can I ask u something?

Geet: ya Shilpa. Tumhe kabse permission ki zarurat pad gayi?

Shilpa: di wat is love?

Geet didn't understand y shilpa is asking dis Question. She was always away from dis Lovey-Dovey talks. Den y today? She goes nd sits next to her. Den touches her Forehead wid her hands.

Shilpa: Wat r u doing di?

Geet: Checking ur temp.? Everything fine na.

Shilpa(irritated): o Pls Di! I m talking so seriously to u nd u r making fun of me.

Geet: dats y m worrying so much. Shilpa Malhotra d ultimate pranker is Serious.

Shilpa: U know wat Di? Forget it.i m going to sleep.

Geet: Acha baba Sorry. Tell me wats wrong. Y r u asking about love?

Shilpa: I don't know Di. I just felt like asking.

Geet: Shilpa, I m noticing a change in u from couple of days since u return from Lonavala. Is something happened over dere? Wait u have gone wid Armaan rite. Did he......

Shilpa: no di armaan has not done anything. He didn't propose me. Dnt blame him. He's very nice.

Geet: Shilpa, wen I said dat Armaan Proposes u? nd m not blaming him also but by Seeing ur concern I m sure dat its related to him only. Tell me wat happen?

Shilpa told her everything dat Armaan told her dat day nd den wat she did after dat nd happened today. She was always comfortable to talk wid Geet.

Shilpa: Di I dnt know y but since Armaan told me about his Past I was feeling restless. I don't know y his Pain ached me. At dat Moment I wanted to take all his pain away. Trust me Di I dnt want to hug him but I couldn't help dat tym. I don't know wats happening to me nd today also wen I was feeling lonely den it was only he who make me feel Comfortable nd I dnt know y I trusted him so much nd I told those things to him that I even haven't told to u yet.

Geet listened very quietly to her. Shilpa thought dat she feels hurted as she has never shared her pain wid geet.

Shilpa: Di I m sorry I dnt wanna hurt u nd trust me I dnt want to share it wid him also but I dnt know y I shared it wid him.

Geet put her hands on her Cheeks to make her relax.

Geet: Shilpa Relax! Wen did I said dat I feel hurted. Infact I m happy dat atleast u shared it wid Someone. Nd as far as ur Feelings r concerned I thing u r falling for him.

Shilpa: wat rubbish Di! Hw can it be possible?

Geet: y not Shilpa?

Shilpa: Di I dnt know hw it feels to be in love. All i knw dat i like his Company. i want to make him happy so that he forget all his pain dat he got from his past

Geet: u need not to be know d Meaning feeling of love to fall in love. Acha tell me wat made u trust him so much dat u shared ur pain wid him.

Shilpa: I don't know di may be he shared his pain to me.

Geet: nd y did he do that?

Shilpa: Because he says that I m important to him nd he wanted to share all his Joys nd Sorrows wid me. Forever.

Geet: bus u got ur Answer. He make u feel important in his life nd dat gives u happiness dat he's considering u such an important part of his life. U like dis fact dat u r important to him. U like to be wid him more so that u understand him more. U wanted to give all d happiness to him that were taken away by his past datsy u hugged him dat day.

Shilpa: So do u want to say dat I m in love wid him.

Geet: May be.

Shilpa: But Di I dnt know whether he also feels d same for me or not. Wat if I left heart broken?

Geet: Shilpa, dnt think too much. I told u all dis just to clear ur Doubt between Attraction nd Love. U take ur own time to realize his as well as ur Feelings nd den only tell him nd may be he was also doing d same. I mean he too wanted to make u realize ur Feeling for him.

Shilpa: I think u r rite di.

Geet: I m always rite my sweet sis.

Shilpa hugs geet.

Shilpa: thank u so much di. Nw I know what I have to do. I need to analyze myself to know my feelings nd to know his as well.

Geet: ur most welcome dear.

Shilpa: Di jiju is very Lucky that he had u in his life. No actually u r lucky to have him. No actually u both r lucky to have each other.

Geet: Shilpa wat r u talking about?

Shilpa: Di the things dat u have told me all I noticed in d relationship of both of u. Like Armaan jiju also cant see u in pain. Whether it is mentally or Physically. U know dat day wen u were suffering from Infection. Jiju was so worried that he has to call me nd d way he was asking about u I could feel hw restless he was seeing u in pain nd even u also was awake whole nite to complete his project because it was important to him nd u want to see him happy nd dere r many more things dat I have observed.

Geet: Shilpa wo......

Shilpa: Di u both really love so much each other na.

Geet: Shilpa suno......

Shilpa: yes or no?

Geet said nothing but smile faintly

Shilpa: yes I knew it! Tumhari Smile ka matlab haan. Oh Di I m so Happy for u.

She hugged again Geet. Geet too hugs back. But she wanted to cut off d topic

Geet: Acha bahut ho gyi ye loveology ki class. Nw go to sleep ok. Rest we'll talk tomorrow.

Shilpa: ok Di Good nite.

After dat Shilpa went to sleep. Geet can see hw Comfortably is she sleeping. Afterall she has got answers of all her questions but wat about the Questions running in her own mind. She walks towards d Window nd started watching at d Sky nd started thinking Hw easily she has given answers of all d questions running in Shilpa's Mind no actually she was answering Questions dat Running in her own mind. The things dat she has told to shilpa were actually she was saying to herself.

Geet (to herself): y Maan? Y r u affecting me so much? Shilpa was rite. D things dat I was telling to her all were their in our relationship. U were always their for me wenever I need u nd even today I shared d thing dat was really close to my heart. D thing dat I never ever shared wid anyone not even Vindhya Di. Y Maan y I shared this wid u?

Then she closes her eyes

"Because he has made a special place in ur heart" A voice came from her mind.

She quickly opens her eyes. Den she remembers everything dat happens so far. He agreed to help her wen she didn't wanted to get married, the moment wen he takes her to an Indian restaurant because she was missing her mom though he don't like Indian food much, nd den taking care of her wen she was suffering from infection nd even she also helped him for dat Project which she has decided to leave. Geet Malhotra who has never broken her stubbornness for anyone except her Di nd Bhaiya has leaved it because of Maan nd stayed awake whole nite. Maan came running over wen he heard dat she's in Problem nd she too made Pasta for him. She cant even stand anyone in front of her eating Italian nd she actually made Italian for him. What makes her change so much. Maan or she herself? Den all dat words of her own echoed in her mind dat she has told to shilpa just now.

She again closes her eyes nd dis tym a Drop of tear rolled from her eyes. that tear is not due to Sadness but due to this new Feeling dat she realized just nw. y she couldn't able to figure it out from so many days. Everytime wen Maan came closer to her she feels uncomfortable. She didn't mind wen Maan lifts her up to his Arms, nd dat dey at phone wen he calls her as his Fiance. She didn't mind dat too.

Geet(to herself): Yes! Maan is nt just my friend anymore. I m falling for him nd I cant deny this fact nw. But Do Maan also feels d same? Wat if he only consider me as his friend only. First I need to know his Feelings before I tell mine.

Saying dis she has also gone to sleep.

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1 week has been passed by nd finally d day of Geet's B'day has arrived. In this One Week Geet tried many things to know Maan's Feeling towards her but poor girl didn't able to figure out afterall she's trying to Find Maan Singh Khurana's Feeling nd dats not an easy Task. But She's also Geet Malhotra afterall nd she loves to do things dat r tough so she's not going to give in so easily. Nd Maan he spend all d week thinking how to make Geet's B'day Special. Wat to do in her B'day which makes her happy nd finally he came know what he have to do. O yes Hw can I Forget our Dearest Armaan nd Shilpa well both were giving each other tym to realize their feelings for each other frankly say it was only Shilpa who needs tym to understand d Difference Between Attraction or Love towards Armaan. Armaan already knew that he loves Shilpa nd he was quite sure that Shilpa too had started loving him but rite nw quite confused with her feelings so he decided to give her some more time.

Nd now Finally D day of Geet's B'day. But she's Angry on her own B'day. Y? Arey if no one wishes u on ur B'day den gussa to aayega na. yes u all got it rite geet has not been wished by anyone not even by her Di nd Bhaiya. It was Sunday so there was no office also so dat she can kept herself busy in work. So she angrily working in kitchen. Shilpa was sitting on couch watching her working angrily. She smiles nd den turned to work on geet's laptop.

Geet: Shilpa! Last tym I m telling u. mere laptop ko kuch hona nahi chahiye.

Shilpa: Relax di! U were saying like dat its d first tym I m working on ur Laptop. I dnt know y u r getting so much irritated today. (den she again started working)

The attitude of Shilpa has made her more angry.

Geet(to herself): Very Good she's asking me wats Wrong? Stupid girl didn't even realize that today is her Di's B'day so she has to wish her but no she didn't care. But y to blame her wen my own mom who has given me birth she didn't even remembers my b'day. Very good. Amritsar kya choda yeh sab to mujhe Bhool hi gaye. Thank God I have not been married. Friends se to waise hi koi umeed nahi thi. Nd I wonder hw come Di has not wished me. Vansh bhaiya is having d nature of forgetting everything, infact I use to remind him of my B'day but di hw can she forget. (den she reminded something) nd Maan has also not wished. He knew dat today is my B'day den also.

She was murmuring to herself while cooking lunch wen Maan entered d Outhouse. He noticed dat Geet is in disturbed mood. He can easily figure it out that this tym it is dangerous to talk to her. Till nw he thinks that it was only he who has so much anger but nw he knows that Geet too can give him Tough Competition to him. He smiles nd headed towards Shilpa. As soon as Shilpa notices him she smiles at him nd closes d laptop.

Shilpa (slowly): Hi jiju!

Maan: Hi!

He gets himself seated on d Couch beside Shilpa.

Maan (whispers) : Wat happen?

Shilpa: di is Angry.

Maan: y?

Shilpa: Nobody has wished her.

Maan: oh!

Shilpa: Jiju I had done whatever u said. I informed everyone not to wish her till evening nd also Diverted all her calls to my Phone. But do u think ur plan will work?

Maan: U r having any Doubt on me Shilpa.

Shilpa: Jiju I dnt have any Doubt on u. I m having doubt on di's Anger. Because as d tym will pass Her anger will cross all d limits aur fir na to main aapko yahan Dikhoongi aur na hi aapka yeh outhouse.

Suddenly dey heard some noise from kitchen dey turned to look over dere nd saw a Pan has been fallen down as geet is working angrily so she didn't noticed it nd her hand hit to it.

Maan: omg! Itna Gussa!

Shilpa: I told u. this is just the trailer. U have to do something jiju.

Maan: Hhmmm.... dnt worry I know what to do. Just wait nd Watch.

Dey were talking only wen Geet arrived to dem. Till nw she didn't notice dat Maan has arrived. She was happy to see him. She thought that he has came to wish her.

Geet: Maan wen did u came?

Maan: Just nw Geet.

Geet: But dis Tym?

Maan: Geet wat do u think? Will I forget such an imp thing.

Geet(to herself): I knew it Maan that u'll never forget my B'day.

Maan: u said something.

Geet: huh... no Actually yes. U remembered it Maan.

Maan: Ofcourse I remember Geet. Hw can I forget that. Afterall its so important.

Geet: ya Maan but I thought dat.....

Maan: wat have u thought Geet that I'll forget that we have to work on Project Report of Chopra's before he leaves to London.

Geet: ya u r rite (wait! did he just said) Project report?

Shilpa laughs nd den stop nd looks at dem.

Maan: ya Geet Project report. Afterall dis project is so important for both of us. U had worked so hard on it nd u expect me to forget about dis.

Nw its enough to make Geet angry but she controls herself.

Geet (to herself): Babaji! Is insaan ko kaam k alawa kuch aur Soojhta hi nahi. ise kaun samjhaye ki kaam k alawa bhi kuch imp hota hai. Oh! Hw can I forget I m expecting something from a Robot. Dusht Daanav.

Maan: u said something?

Geet(angrily) : no! nothing!

Maan: Good so get ready fast we have to go to Office.

Geet: Office? today also?

Maan: ya I knw today is Sunday but Mr. Chopra is leaving day after Tomorrow before dat we have to complete Project report nd dere's lots of work in it.

Geet (tauntly): ya u r rite. Its really very important.

Maan: yes Geet I knw nd I m happy that u realize it. Nw go nd get ready fast. I m waiting here.

Geet: Sure Boss!

By saying dis she angrily move upstairs to her Room nd Closes d Door wid Bang. As she left Maan winks at Shilpa.

Shilpa: not bad Jiju! But nw I m getting worried for u. u r going to be wid her Whole day. Nw only God will save u.

Maan: dnt worry my sweet Sis-in-law. I'll manage. By the way as soon as we leave from here u go to mansion nd Help Armaan over dere. He has already reached over dere.

Shilpa (happily): Armaan aa gaya! Usne mujhe batauya bhi nahin ki wo aa chuka hai. Armaan bhi na.

Den she looks at Maan who was watching her talking so excitedly. She realizes that she has said a lot. He raised his eyebrows to gesture wats wrong. To which she only smiles Nervousy. Suddenly dey notices Geet coming downstairs.

Geet(angry but try to be normal): Chale? Boss

Maan: ya sure nd pls stop calling me Boss. I dnt know wat makes u so much irritated today.

By saying dis he smiles nd headed towards outside.

Geet(to herself): nw he's asking me d reason. Very Good.

Den she gives a disgusted look to shilpa nd headed towards outside too leaving shilpa behind laughing.

Shilpa (to herself): oh di! U dnt have any idea wat jiju is doing for u. ok nw I also have to rush towards Mansion. Armaan must be waiting.

Nd she also headed towards mansion.

Precap:

Maan keeping Geet busy in office

hey guys hope u all like dis part. Hit d like button if u all like it nd Do leave ur Comment/criticism
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Edited by aakritisri1111 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice update ... post next part soon
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Posted: 14 years ago

brilliant

too marvellous for words....
waiting for the next part
reva
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Originally posted by: revav

brilliant

too marvellous for words....
waiting for the next part
reva



thank u so much dear
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Posted: 14 years ago
oh aakriti plz update the next part today itself na. im really restless to read the next part. Nice update.
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey....that was really awesome...
i really loved it...it was so nice...
maan and geet scenes are so nice..
and so are shilpa and armaan...
loved your update....do keep writing
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Posted: 14 years ago
hahaha... awesome part yaar......
nice plan...
hey pls update soon..............

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Posted: 14 years ago
wow thats Awesome Dear👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
Loved it soooooooooooooooooooooo much❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
Im so Happy that Finally Geet and Shilpa realised that they are in Love....😊........
Loved Geet-Shilpa's Sweet Bond..😊.........
OMG how is our Sweet Maan going to handle the Angry Geet.😆😆😆............
Eagerly waiting for the next part
Pls Update Sooooooooooooooooooon
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: .sireesha.

wow thats Awesome Dear👏

Loved it soooooooooooooooooooooo much❤️
Im so Happy that Finally Geet and Shilpa realised that they are in Love....😊........
Loved Geet-Shilpa's Sweet Bond..😊.........
OMG how is our Sweet Maan going to handle the Angry Geet.😆😆😆............
Eagerly waiting for the next part
Pls Update Sooooooooooooooooooon



awww thank u so much dear. i m so happy to see ur lovely Comment

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