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Posted: 14 years ago
Nice update
Liked the way Maaneet's bonding was becuming more strng
Liked Arsh scene Armaan was sho cute
Maaneet dinner was fab n the ice eating convo was fab
Maan thks a lotttttttttt😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
update soon...
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Posted: 14 years ago
just read all the parts!
superb!
continue soon!
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Posted: 14 years ago
lovely part yaar aakriti
thanks for pm me
both parts were nice
continue soon....
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Posted: 14 years ago

hi aakriti

how r u dear.
part 6 & 7 is
in part 6 maneet basketball
and in part 7
armaan shilpa sorry scene is
maneet dinner scene is
it
plzzz conti soon



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Posted: 14 years ago
Hi every1 first of all a Big Thank u to all of u for ur over whelming Response so far. i m feeling like m on cloud 9. it really feels gr8 reading ur comments. Nw here's d part 8 of my FF. Hope u all like it too. Pls Feel free to criticise if u all dnt like it😊

PART 8:

Three weeks have been passed by since Geet Joins d office. She is doing her work wid full concentration nd dedication nd as she promised she is nt letting Shasha to give any chance so that she can throw her out of d office. Her Friendship wid Maan is getting stronger day by day. They both used to play Basket ball almost every nit end to everyone's surprise Maan has nw started smiling more den he used to do before. Dai nd Armaan can easily noticed d change coming in Maan due to Geet but dey didn't said anything to him because dey know dat he'll deny it. Although in office he's still d same Angry Boss but only Geet has seen d other side of his which is friendly, caring nd sweet nd she knews dat one day evry1 will see dis side of his. Armaan nd Shilpa were also doing Good in Sanjeevani. Armaan was always dere wen shilpa needs some help. Shilpa knows dat she'll not get any Senior doctor better den Armaan though she always use to reminds him of his Promise to show her Mumbai.

Its Friday nit end nd Savitri Devi Decided to gather all of dem for Dinner as its been a long time since dey had dinner together as all of dem were busy in their work. Everyone agreed to dis. Everyone is enjoying Dinner at d dining table nd Savitri Devi asking dem about their works.

Savitri Devi: after so many days everyone is dining together. Geet, hume to laga tha ki agar aap yaha rahengi to kam se kam hum akele nahi honge par aap bhi Maan ki tarah Kaam me doobi rehti hai.

Geet: Sorry Dadimaa, but wat to do? Maan use to give me lots of work (den winks at him).

Maan: wat I use to give u lots of work. Madam its u who didn't move from Office until u finishes ur work.

Geet: So ultimately its u only na whose work I use to do. Hai na Dadimaa.

Savitri Devi: ofcourse Beta. U r absolutely rite.

Maan: Dadimaa dats nt fair. Its just been 3 weeks since Geet came nd u have started taking her side

Savitri Devi: Maan whats wrong wid u? u r complaining like a kid. U were not like dat?

Everyone at d table begins to laugh.

Armaan: Dadimaa, he's been in Geet's Company nw a days. Kuch to asar hoga na.

Maan(realized that he has been caught): No.... Armaan nothing like dat.

Armaan: let it be dude. Acha I want to say something very important to u all.

Everyone listens to him carefully

Armaan: guys I had promised Shilpa 3 weeks before dat I'll show her whole Mumbai.

Shilpa: nd he still didn't fulfill it.

Armaan: Shilpa, let me come to the point. So I was saying tomorrow is our off nd if I m nt wrong Maan u nd Geet r also Free tomorrow so y don't we all plan to go together. I m sure Geet also wanted to see Mumbai.

Savitri Devi: it's a good Idea Armaan Beta, waise bhi Geet is been in too much work pressure these days. She'll get a change.

Maan: armaan, I m nt sure dat I'll come. I had some work. U guys carry on.

Armaan: C'mon dude dnt be a spoil sport. We all have fun together.

Maan: no armaan, u knw I dnt like funs.

Armaan: C'mon yaar. Geet tum hi bolo isko.

Geet: ya Maan chalo na. Waise bhi I haven't seen Mumbai yet. Pls chalo na.

Maan: Geet main.....

Geet: kya Maan, tum apne frnd ke liye itna bhi nahi kar sakte.

Everyone looks at her shocked

Geet(realizes what she has just said): I mean to say Armaan ke liye. Dekho na he gets a break after his long Hectic schedule. Pls chalo na.

Savitri Devi: maan, ab wo itna keh rahi hai to chale jayiye na.

Maan: Acha Baba theek hai. I'll come.

Shilpa: that's like My jiju. Di I hope u won't mind.

Geet: Shut up Shilpa.

Armaan(whispers to maan): Sahi ja rahe ho. Wen I said u told me dat u have work nd wen Geet said u agreed.

Maan: Shut up Armaan. Nthing like dat. I agree because of u only.

Armaan: oh stp dat crap. U agreed because Geet has said to u. Maan u really changing nw a days. D man who never says Sorry to anyone has said sorry to Geet. Y? because he was wiping away her ice-cream.

Maan: No, because I thought I had been so close to her.

Armaan: whatever. Dude y dnt u admit dat u r in love wid her (looking at Geet who is busy in talking wid Shilpa nd Dadi).

Maan: oh really! Den y dnt u admit dat u r in love wid Shilpa?

Armaan(for d first time stammered): Wat rubbish! Dnt try my words back to me. Shilpa is just my gud friend.

Maan: oh really! Armaan, after Riddhima hw many girls r dere for who u have been such a gud frnd.

Armaan: Maan I m sure about my feelings moreover there's a diff b/w Shilpa nd Geet. Shilpa is my friend nd Geet is ur Fiance.

Maan: Armaan more den Fiance she's my frnd. Too nd u knw d reason behind dis engagement.

Armaan was about to say something wen Shilpa intervenes

Shilpa: wat r u guys were talking from so long?

Armaan: nothing just discussing our plan for tomorrow.

Shilpa: like dis. It seems dat u were discussing some confidential conversations.

Maan: No shilpa nothing like dat. (turning to Armaan) so armaan tomorrow at which tym we have to leave.

Armaan: I guess we must leave by 10 in d morning.

Geet: ok fine we'll be ready by 10.

Armaan: r u sure. I doubt so.

Geet: y?

Armaan: no I heard dat girls take lots of time in getting ready.

Both Shilpa nd Geet said together "Armaan" to which he laughes.

Savitri Devi: Chalo acha hai that u people will hang-out together. Kam se kam isi bahane Maan ghar se bahar to niklenge.

Maan: Dadi.....

Armaan: to theek hai see u all tomorrow.

Everyone agreed nd after Dinner went to sleep.

Next Morning as per d plan Everyone is ready nd waiting for Armaan. Armaan reached by 10 nd make a call to Maan to come at outhouse only. Shilpa, Geet nd Armaan all were waiting for Maan. It has been decided that Armaan will leave her Bike at outhouse nd dey will all go by Maan's Car. But it seems that shilpa has some other plans of her. She was eagerly waiting for Maan so that she can execute her plan. As soon as Maan reaches to dem she decides to execute her plan.

Maan: Hi! So everyone is here. So lets go.

Shilpa: ya jiju lets go

Den suddenly she puts her hand on d head nd acts like she was fainting armaan was standing next to her quickly holds her by her waist dis was d first time wen he was so close to her. For a moment he admired her den suddenly he realizes that she's not well. He raises her upwards. Geet nd Maan too looked worried.

Armaan: Shilpa! Wats wrong r u okay?

Shilpa(in a low voice): ya! Actually I dnt know y bas thoda chakkar aa gaya.

Geet: wat? But u were perfectly allrite few minutes before.

Shilpa: ya Di. I dnt knw all of a sudden wat happened?

Maan: I think we should cancel d plan for today as she's not well.

Geet nd Armaan agreed to it. Shilpa notices that her plan is about to backfire.

Shilpa(screamed): No!!

Everyone looks at her surprisingly

Shilpa: I mean. Pls dnt cancel because of me. Waise bhi itne tym baad Jiju ko time mila hai. It would nt be nice if he won't go because of me.

Maan: No shilpa dats perfectly fine. We can go some other day.

Armaan: ya Shilpa maan is rite.

Shilpa pinched him on his hand nd gestured him to be quiet.

Shilpa: no I'll be fine after sometime Den Armaan will bring me from his Bike. Till den u both enjoy. Otherwise u both will spend ur half day like dis only.

Nw Armaan understands whats in her mind.

Geet: Stop it Shilpa! Hw can we go leaving u here like dis.

Shilpa: Trust me Di. I'll be Fine moreover u knw that Car Journey Doesn't suits me also so Armaan will take me from his Bike. Hai na Armaan. (winks at him)

Armaan: huh.... ya I'll bring her .u both go.

Maan: r u sure Shilpa.

Shilpa: ya Jiju.

Maan: ok den lets Go geet.

Geet looked at shilpa. She didn't want to go. But shilpa assured her dat she'll join dem soon. So she has to give up nd go nd sits in d car nd Maan starts driving. Shilpa notices dat dey have gone far den she gets up nd started smiling suddenly she notices dat Armaan is standing next to her raises her eyebrows gesturing her to knw whats all dis to which she winks.

Armaan: Shilpa, wat was all dat.

Shilpa: Plan! Which has been successful nw.

Armaan: Plan?

Shilpa: ya.

Armaan: shilpa I really dnt get u.

Shilpa: O god Armaan! Dekho Di nd Jiju both were busy during dese days. They didn'y got much time to spend wid each other nd if u have forgetten then let me remind u that dey r engaged nw. So nw dey will have some time to spend alone.

Armaan: Oh! Nw I understand.

Shilpa: aur waise bhi un dono ke Beech Kawab Me Haddi banna galat baat hai na.

Armaan: Not Bad Dr. Shilpa. Mere saath reh ke kaafi smart ho gyi ho.

Shilpa: Excuse Dr. Armaan. I was born Smart.

Armaan: whatever. Nw if ur Drama has been over den can we go nw.

Shilpa: Armaan, u r really stupid. If we'll go just nw den may be dey can catch us in route.

Armaan: I m not stupid Dr. Shilpa. Dey have gone towards Gateway of India nd we'll go at Juhu. So collision.

Shilpa: Hmmm.... Smart.

Armaan: So shall we go nw.

Shilpa: ya lets go.

Armaan Started d Bike nd dey both also headed towards Juhu.

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On d other Hand Geet was sitting worried in d car. Maan notices it but doesn't know what to say.

Maan: wats wrong Geet?

Geet: Shilpa theek to hogi na.

Maan: Dnt worry Geet. Armaan is dere na.

Geet: Ya But......

Maan: Geet, she said dat she'll join us after Few hrs. den dnt worry.

Geet smiles but still in worry.

Maan: acha I heard dat u love to listen music.

Geet: ya.

Maan: chalo lets listen to music. May be ur Mood will get Fine.

He switch on d FM in which a old Song of Kishore Kumar was coming nd d song was

Dil Kya Kare jab kisi ko kisi se pyar ho jaye, jane kahan kab kisi ko kisi se pyar ho jaye.

Maan was not feeling comfortable wid d song so he decided to change it but Geet gestured him to not to change. She was enjoying d Song as Kishore Kumar was her Fav. Singer. He saw dat she's feeling Relief after listening to song so he didn't change. He decided to concentrate on driving. While driving he watched her nd saw dat she's smiling nd enjoying d song. He was looking at her face just wen another song came:

Tere Chehre mein wo jaadu hai.....

nw he can't take dis anymore. These songs were almost pouring out his feelings. He gets frustrated.

Maan: C'mon Geet. Wat kind of rubbish songs r u listening pls change d songs.

Geet: Excuse Maan, its Kishore Kumar. Aaj tak unke dushman ne bhi unke bare me aisa nahi bola haoga.

Maan: whatever pls change it.

Geet: no, he's my Fav. Singer nd I love all his songs.

Maan: Geet, in d world of Enrique Iglesias u were listening Kishore Kumar.

Geet: Maan, Enrique Iglesias can never beat d magic of Kishore Kumar's songs.

Maan: Geet, u r really impossible.

Geet: theek hai (she switch off d music player). Happy nw.

Maan felt guilty as he annoyed her.

Maan(to Himself): Wats wrong wid u Maan. Badi mushkil se to uska mood theek hua tha nd u again spoiled it.

He switch on d music player again nd den looks at Geet who is looking at him surprisingly.

Maan: Wat? Nw listen to d songs. Otherwise u'll complaint to ur Vansh Bhai.

Geet: ya to i m listening na. I dnt need ur permission for dat.

He smiles at her answer den again starts concentrating on his driving.

They saw many places together. Maan has shown many places to her. Gateway of India, Nariman Point etc etc. on the other hand Shilpa nd Armaan were also having d good time together. Its been 1:30 PM nd both Geet nd Maan were feeling hungry. Maan called armaan to ask hw Shilpa is Feeling Armaan told him that Shilpa is Fine nd dey have decided to join at d Restaurant at Bandra nd after dat dey will go together for Shopping nd Movie. After lunch all four of dem has headed for shopping. Its been 5:00 PM wen all their shoppings were over den Shilpa insisted for Movie. Maan was too tired for it but he didn't want to break her heart so he agreed.

Shilpa: So, which movie will we go.

Maan: whichever u like Shilpa.

Geet: I think we should go for some Good Romantic Movie.

Shilpa: oh please Di! They all have d same story. Hero-heroine meets den song Sequences nd blah blah blah. We'll go for some Horror movie.

Armaan: ya dats a good idea. Wat say maan.

Maan: ya I think Shilpa is rite.

Maan too doesn't wanted to go for romantic movie otherwise he couldn't able to control his emotions.

Geet: no I dnt like Horror movies.

Shilpa: because u r getting scared rite.

Geet: No, nothing like dat.

Maan: den wat Geet. I was not knowing dat Geet Malhotra is afraid of ghosts.

Geet: Dekho Maan dnt start it again. I m nt afraid of anything. Fine we'll go for horror movie only.

Maan: no Geet it's completely ur Choice if u want u can go for ur romantic movie.

Geet: No I'll watch Horror movie only. Nw lets go otherwise we'll get late for show.

She left from dere wid Shilpa which brings a smirk on Maan's face.

At d show as expected Geet is getting scared while Shilpa, Armaan nd Maan were enjoying d show. Geet looked at dem Disgust. Den again watched at screen. Suddenly a Horror Face came on d screen to which Geet gets almost scared nd he holds the Maan's arm tightly nd hides her face behind his shoulders. Maan looked at her nd noticed that she's getting scared. He regretted his decision of watching Horror Movie.

Maan: Geet r u fine?

Geet(angrily): Ya. Sorry I got scared.

Maan: if u want we can go home.

Geet: No thanx. I'll watch d whole movie.

Maan: but Geet......

Geet: pls Maan I m f9.

Maan knows that its useless to argue rite nw as she was really in angry mood. He decided that he'll make it up during their Journey towards Home. After d movie gets over its been decided that Armaan will drop shilpa Home while Geet will go wid Maan. During d whole Journey Maan keeps on thinking what to do so that her mood will become fine. Suddenly he remembered Morning's incident so he quickly switch on his Music Player but to his Bad Luck none of d stations were playing Kishore Kumar's song infact it made Geet more angry she switch off d music player.

Maan: oho Geet! Y u r so upset?

Geet: y I couldn't be angry maan? Oh I forgot this Licence belongs to u only na?

Maan: Geet, I asked u during d movie dat if u want we can go home but its ur decision only to stay over dere?

Geet: ya I knw, so wat do u want to leave me from dere so that Armaan nd Shilpa can make fun of me nd including u?

Maan: c'mon Geet its not such a big Deal.

Geet: oh really! Maan u r my fiance nd as a Fiance u must ave to support me.

Maan couldn't believe on his ears for d first time Geet has considered him as his Fiance even Geet didn't realize what did she said just.

Maan(softly): Fiance?

Geet(realizes): I mean officially u r my fiance na. nd moreover u r my friend also atleast for dat sake u must have taken my side.

Maan: Geet.... actually..... (suddenly d car stops maan tried hard but couldn't able to start it). Dekha tumhara Gussa Car se bhi bardasht nhi hua.

Geet: oh to isme bhi meri galti.

Maan: Geet u r really impossible.

He gets out of d car to see wats d problem is Geet too follows him. He noticed dat Radiator needs some water. He knows dat Driver has kept some water in d car only so he gone at d back to search for it den suddenly dey heard d thundering of d clouds.

Geet(Happily): Maan I guess its going to be rain

Maan: ya we should hurry up.

As he said dis its began to rain. Maan quickly gets into d car but notices dat Geet is still outside.

Maan: Gee twat r u doing? Come inside.

Geet: r u mad Maan? Its been so much fun here. U also come outside.

Maan: Geet u really out of ur mind I dnt want to get ill.

Geet: oho Maan! Tumhari life bhi na ekdum tumhari tarah hai. Boring!

By saying dis she again started enjoying rain. Maan saw her from inside d car. She is feeling so carefree all her anger seems to ba vanished while she enjoyed d rain. She is dancing like a kid. He smiles at her nd unknowingly get out of d car. Geet is totally wet he can observe dat her dress has sticked perfectly to her curves, he didn't realize wen did he started moving towards her, Suddenly he noticed dat a car is moving towards her nd geet is so lost in herself dat she didn't noticed it. The car was almost closer to her, Maan quickly pulled her towards himself nd bring her closer to him. Geet didn't realize first den she noticed d car going she got scared quickly ran to his embrace. Maan firstly hesitate den hugged her tightly. He too got scared from d thought of geet getting harmed. Dey were in each other's arm for few mins. Den suddenly geet realized what she was doing. She quickly snapped back nd started feeling embarrassed.

Maan: Geet, r u okay?

She nodded in yes.

Geet: maan can v go home?

Maan: ya sure.

They headed towards home. During d whole journey dey didn't speak to each other. First tym Geet is Feeling awkward of her action. She looked at Maan who was Continously concentrate on his driving. she thought may be he was angry. Maan leave him to the outhouse nd headed towards mansion. After changing his clothes Maan laid on his bed thinking about their hug but dis tym he didn't feel uncomfortable all he could think is dat if he haven't pulled her at tym then he can't even think of dat wat would happen. Then he thought Was Armaan right? Am I really Falling for her? Y did I got scared wen that car was coming towards her? I guess I had really started Falling for her. His thoughts were distracted wen he heard his cell ringing nd to his surprise its Geet.

Maan: Hello!

Geet: Hello Maan!

Maan: Geet! Wat happen?

Geet: Maan, I want to say u something.

Maan: ya geet.

Geet: thanx nd sorry.

Maan: for wat geet?

Geet: thanx for saving me nd sorry dat I hugged u. Actually I got scared.

Maan: Geet u dnt have to say Sorry or thanx to me. Afterall u r my fia....(he was about to say Fiance but den stops) I mean friend. Nd I have done all dis for my friend.

Geet: r u sure na dat u r nt angry for dat hug.

Maan: ofcourse not geet. U were scared nd I was cheering u up dats it.

Geet: Thanx Maan.

Maan: Geet tumhe itni baar thanx kehne ki zaroorat nhi hai. aur waise bhi Friendship me no thank u nd No Sorry.

Geet(smiling): Maine Pyar Kiya ka dialogue.

Maan: Acha. I was nt knowing.

Geet: Very Funny.

Maan: Geet, its getting late nw. I think u should go to sleep. Good nite

Geet: good nite Maan. Bye!

Dey hang up.

Geet(To herself): Tu bhi na Geet. Bekar me itni tension le rahi thi. Dekha use bura nahi laga. Waise bhi who itna bura bhi nahi hai (with smile) He's really very nice. But wait! Ye sab tu kya sochni lagi. Chal nw lets go to sleep.

On d other hand Maan after talking to her Feel relaxed.

Maan(to Himself): Pagal! Thank god she's Fine nw aur ab gussa bhi khatam ho gya. But mujhe itna fark kyun pad raha hai. I think Armaan was rite geet is getting More den a frnd for me.

Precap:

Maaneet Discussing on a Project (sorry For Delaying)

Hey every1 hope u all like dis part of mine. Sorry for delaying d Precap. press d like Button if u all like it nd do leave ur Comment/criticism😊

Luv Aakriti😊😊
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Edited by aakritisri1111 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Aakrtit

sorry was nt able to to catch up on all the chapters, but frm 4-7 amazing.. the engagment to geet moving to maan's house.. the way he has started to feel something for her. I must say he is totally gonna be in love with her, while geet undoubtedly will also fall for him. Shilpa & armaan bickering nice.. i want to see where that leads...

u r doing a brilliant job more soon:)
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: vika1981

Aakrtit

sorry was nt able to to catch up on all the chapters, but frm 4-7 amazing.. the engagment to geet moving to maan's house.. the way he has started to feel something for her. I must say he is totally gonna be in love with her, while geet undoubtedly will also fall for him. Shilpa & armaan bickering nice.. i want to see where that leads...

u r doing a brilliant job more soon:)


aww dear thank u so much i m glad to knw dat u were liking it
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Posted: 14 years ago
Realy nice part and the hug woow soo dremy wating for more of scene and thanks for pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
Thats Awesome👏
Loved it

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