MaanEet FF: Once Upon A Time... Chapter14-Page125 - Page 30

In response to Chapter 6..

awwwww Jassi ur sooo cuuute! I love u for that little 'Wanted' dedication How sweeeeeeeet! awwww!!! jasssiiii I couldnt stop smiling I was like "huh?" which quickly turned into my typical "awwwwwwwwww" squeal of too much happiness lol
and umm.. i dont mean to sound lame + this is totally random but she watched it for the 17th time..? 😳thats my fav number!!! lol i had to mention that!!!

and before I run off to read ur current update I gotta let u know that this chapter was fun! full on fun! I mean pretty awesome little nuzzling sessions goin on between a sleeping maneet lol - those were indeed the *special moments* lol
and once again - Fab, Fab, FAB job with the dialogues u wrote for maan and geet - awesome bit of speech there!! gosh, they're always fighting and it just makes me laugh = D i'm sure things will be heating up in Shimla - some hot headed banter / some hot hot hot maneet??? lol

*flying to the update ;)*

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Uhm... excuse me.. did u say u didnt edit.. sorry for the mistakes???

er.. Jassi.. that was the Best part ever in this entire ff! lol seriously... this has officially become my favvvv chapter!

How adorable are they? right let me tell u my thoughts in order of when they occurred lol
firstly.. I was completely LOL-ing whilst perfectly imagining a super excited Dadi watching the news of Maneet on tv lol - she's one of us!! A full on maneet maniac + i just thought it was a greatttt little touch in the chappie!
Next..
omg even I almost blushed when Maan told geet that she looked beautiful during their dance. Now that was sucha lovely little part in the chappie girly! it was... Sparkling ;D I could picture them perfectly, n gosh they look heavenly - and be it maans actions, his thoughts or his words - he keeps on getting sexier lol
BUT...
HAwww hayyye! he said she didnt even know how to kiss properly what a naughty munda!! lol brilliant finish to their little argument.. but i was like.. omg! did he just say that to her!!

That ending, from geet playing in the snow, to maan letting her know her dress was getting transparent, to geet wearing maans waistcoat, maan being chooo chweet and getting her some tea to geet giving maan a genuine kiss on the cheek and maan doing the same to her... awwwwww sooooooo cuuuuuuuuute!!!! That was magic piled upon magic! That was sooooooo .. Sooooooooooo cuuuuuuuuuuuute! awwww Jassi, i Loved this part! Of course, I love ur ff to bits its soo much fun but this time round not only was it fun, but totally *dreamy*..! I'm all smiles - you've successfully swept me into Maneetland of Once upon a time.. ;)

Lovvvvvved the update!!! :D keep up the amazing work my lovely!!! i forgot to mention how fantastically written both the last parts have been too..!! Insanely great work hun!!!

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awesome luv it 👏👏👏

lovely part dear!!!

amazin update plzzzz update nxt prt soon

Thanx for the reply on my comment

Awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee update.

Thanks so much for the dedication!

What a fantastic update! Superb! Maan actually lifted Geet in his arms.....and gave her his waistcoat to keep her warm.....he is so caring.....lovely! He was completely blown away seeing her in that white dress......lolz......and poor Geet had to put up with the party......but she must have enjoyed it. Oh, Sid....Geet's friend was there too.....and Maan was jealous.....ahaha......lolz.....and asked for dance......pretty close hun.....me loves it! Their car journey was amazing.....their bickers.....and then he commented on the kiss.....lmao.....Geet sure was dumbstruck......he was adoring her while she was playing in the snow.......and gave her his coat yet again and also some tea.....like seriously.....he is really sweet and she is so innocent....lolz.....and they kissed each other on their cheeks.....and did not even get embarrassed about it.....they sure are getting comfortable with each other.......awesome! I agree with that chai-wala bhaiya.....Maan and Geet are indeed perfect! lolz. All in all a great update! Do update soon.

Originally posted by: .sireesha.

Im Extremely Sorry for the Delay..............

Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww Thats Awesome.......👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏............Fabulous....👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏........Beautiful.....👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏........

Loved it soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

Haye I Just Loved Everyone's thoughts when they saw Maaneeet in Lift......😆😆😆....

Daadi tho bohot Disappoint hogayi hain..🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣......

Loved the way Maaneet Spoke with the Kid....🤣🤣🤣🤣...

Thats really Good that Geet squashed the Guy's toes with her heel..😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈.....

Its really Sweet of Maan that he switched his seat with that Guy....😳😳😳😳😳😳😳.....

Loved Maaneet's closeness....😳😳😳😳😳...They look Cute together....😳😳😳😳.....

Loved these Lines soooooooooooooo much (Loved every single line.......But U know it occupies a lot of space so I had to restrict myself to state only a few lines..........)I Just Love the way U Write....❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️..

Mujhe Engagement ki tayaariya shuru kardeni chahiye! *Thanks God* In dono ko nazar na lag jaaye 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣Daadi hamari nazar nahi lagegi lekin Sasha ki Nazar zaroor lagegi........Jaldi se kuch kariye............😉😉😉

'Yeh Dadi hamesha wrong time par hi entry maar ti hain! Dadi abh mujhe bahut cherne waali hain!' 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

'GetUsOutOfThis!' Expression🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

'YourMyHero!' Expression🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

"I know that you're a total sleepyhead, but I don't care! You better be ready! Now get out of my office!" 😆😆😆😆😆😆😆

"Aur tumhe bacho se baat nahi karna aata. Bechara rone laga tumhari awaaz sun kar."🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣As if Maan knows how to speak with a Kid🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

"Aapko toh kisi se bhi baat nahi karni aati!"🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣Thats True.........

"Acha! Aur tum? Kabhi sunna hain apne boss se kaise baat karti ho! Woh toh main bahut acha hoon isiliye tumhe tolerate kar raha hoon!" 🤣🤣🤣🤣Maan we know how good Ur as a Boss...🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

"Probably missed out on her average 50 hours of sleep"😲😲😲😲😲😲Yaar I too Love Sleeping........Maan pls don't say like that.......

"Can you walk any slower!?" 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣Dekh ke bolo na Maan bechari Heels pehani hain aur Uncomfortable feel kar rahi hain..........🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

"Choti bachi ho!? Kya karu!? Tumhara haath pakad kar, tumhe chalna sikhau?!" 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣Haye If U are ready to teach how to walk then U will find a Big never ending Queue Maan.......Hum sab zaroor ayenge chalna seekhneke liye.........😆😆😆😆😆

Actually according to me U are the only one Precious Piece of Ur kind........Ur Update gives me a lot of Happiness..........It makes me Laugh, Cry, Emotional, Love..........and so on........What not everything.....⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️.............

Thats Lovely Dear.......

Thanq so much for the Lovely Update....🤗..

Thanq so much for the PM🤗🤗🤗

Eagerly waiting for the next part

PLs Update Sooooooon

Originally posted by: daniella05

awesome part...

really loved it...it was amazing😆

do continue soon

thanks 4 the pm