MaanEet FF: Once Upon A Time... Chapter14-Page125 - Page 11

Originally posted by: shreya satish

loved it..... nicely written... DD & JB.... Pls include me in your pm list

Love the story........pm me please

OMG plz plz plzzzz make the angry person at Geet's door MAAN!!! that'd be soo much fun! esp as she has her spongebob pj's on lol thats so cute!

Their car-convo and tryina irritate the hell out of eachother was hilarioous! Geet and her bubble gum antics are just too funny. I love all u wrote about her expressive eyes and change in expressions when Maan was angry, tryina scare or anything!
The fact that she asked him if he was gay literally had me ROFL-ing hahaha - and his response to her question mmm mmm :D noice! I was expecting it to lead to something more 😳.. he was leaning in next to her n everything, I thought he was actually gonna Prove to her that he's not gay 😉 😆 Buttt, instead him speaking close to her ear, I think is good enough to get Geet's heartbeats out of control hehehe - I'm super pleased that they're both feeling drawn towards eachother!
Also, it was so lovely that although they've known eachother for sucha short timespan, they can read eachother so well. The fact that Maan worked out why she didnt touch his stereo n all.. n put in her earphones.. =D

My fav part... the fact that Maan called Geet a "jungli billi" hahahah LOVE that! I couldnt imagine Maneet do that in the show, so its just soo much fun to read that here! Its so funny, and so apt for Geet! lol

This was a full on entertaining part!!! Lots of fun, with hints of attraction, hmmmm cant wait for whats next!! :D
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Originally posted by: xxJaSsIxx

Thank you soooooooosoooooooooosoooooooooooo much for loving it

I happy u liked it!

I'll be updating soon

4 u

Love Ya!

-Jassi

CONT SOON PLS NICE UPDATE PUT IN YOUR PM LIST PLS SEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE

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Originally posted by: Chotii

OMG plz plz plzzzz make the angry person at Geet's door MAAN!!! that'd be soo much fun! esp as she has her spongebob pj's on lol thats so cute!

Their car-convo and tryina irritate the hell out of eachother was hilarioous! Geet and her bubble gum antics are just too funny. I love all u wrote about her expressive eyes and change in expressions when Maan was angry, tryina scare or anything!
The fact that she asked him if he was gay literally had me ROFL-ing hahaha - and his response to her question mmm mmm :D noice! I was expecting it to lead to something more 😳.. he was leaning in next to her n everything, I thought he was actually gonna Prove to her that he's not gay 😉 😆 Buttt, instead him speaking close to her ear, I think is good enough to get Geet's heartbeats out of control hehehe - I'm super pleased that they're both feeling drawn towards eachother!
Also, it was so lovely that although they've known eachother for sucha short timespan, they can read eachother so well. The fact that Maan worked out why she didnt touch his stereo n all.. n put in her earphones.. =D

My fav part... the fact that Maan called Geet a "jungli billi" hahahah LOVE that! I couldnt imagine Maneet do that in the show, so its just soo much fun to read that here! Its so funny, and so apt for Geet! lol

This was a full on entertaining part!!! Lots of fun, with hints of attraction, hmmmm cant wait for whats next!! :D
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Heyy jas, plz update already.... it has been sooo long, i m dieing to read ur update... and OMG did i read it write... ur just 13... i think ur lieing, ur writing skills are sooooo dammmm goooddd... ur amazingg... plz update soooonnnnnnnn

Originally posted by: Mina H

Heyy jas, plz update already.... it has been sooo long, i m dieing to read ur update... and OMG did i read it write... ur just 13... i think ur lieing, ur writing skills are sooooo dammmm goooddd... ur amazingg... plz update soooonnnnnnnn

I'm updating today
For sure
And yes i am 13
Lol
:-)
-Jassi