FF: You & I...Collide Part13 pg145 July 27 - Page 97

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Posted: 14 years ago
sameera is so positive cant digest
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: ammu5

sameera is so positive cant digest

hajmola doon kya? 🤣
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Go with your flow Jaz no issues ; but I feel if your this Tara is taking a lot of space . Sorry to say but I find Tara to be extremely insensitive & highly irritating for one's sanity . With all due respect to her present plight one can't deny that she is indeed responsible for her condition.
If a girl does not know where to draw a line or have an inkling of pros & cons or for that matter what is good or bad for her ; then this will be the outcome . Another thing she just talks too much ; I mean she should better concentrate on how she's gonna face Maan & give her explanation once she's out of the hospital , coz no Geet will be with her post treatment . Rather not thinking about that she , like a thick- skinned female appreciating Sam in front of Geet ; I mean there is a limit to one's foolishness .

As I said earlier I have no issues with Maneera ; I wanna see & know the character who you've planned as Geet's love interest or soul-mate . I would personally love if he would be senior Doc in the same hospital 😳 Enjoyed Adeet 👏 👏 👏 scenes .

Since this is a FF you've the liberty to space & give time to characters equally ; keep little bit more time space for your leads rather than Tara or Arjun . Just a suggestion but finally take your own call 👍🏼

Nice part 😊
Edited by drashsree100 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Jaz are you hinting that... the story is gonna go in Adeet and Maaneera way instead of Maaneet way...???

though you have clearly stated that Maaneet are not gonna unite... but that does it mean Adi- Geet gonna make a pair...

Jo bhi ho... I know one thing for sure and that is ...I'm gonna read it no matter what it is going to be...coz I love whatever you write...

I simply love the way you twist and turn and manipulate things in your update...

Love the way you write... and I loved this part too... so finally Arjun is in hands of Maan... lets see what gonna happen...
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: drashsree100



Go with your flow Jaz no issues ; but I feel if your this Tara is taking a lot of space . Sorry to say but I find Tara to be extremely insensitive & highly irritating for one's sanity . With all due respect to her present plight one can't deny that she is indeed responsible for her condition. umm...tara is a very important part of this story...its because of her that there is a story to tell...and yes...while karma is a b*tch...and she had something bad coming...i dont think she's responsible for her rape...no girl wants to be raped...i think that no matter how "horrible" a person might be...i could never feel that they are at fault for being raped...
If a girl does not know where to draw a line or have an inkling of pros & cons or for that matter what is good or bad for her ; then this will be the outcome . Another thing she just talks too much ; I mean she should better concentrate on how she's gonna face Maan & give her explanation once she's out of the hospital , coz no Geet will be with her post treatment . Rather not thinking about that she , like a thick- skinned female appreciating Sam in front of Geet ; I mean there is a limit to one's foolishness . everything that tara does...from telling Geet maan is married to saying that sam is a sweet person...every thing she says and does has reason...you guys just dont know that reason right now...

As I said earlier I have no issues with Maneera ; I wanna see & know the character who you've planned as Geet's love interest or soul-mate . I would personally love if he would be senior Doc in the same hospital 😳 Enjoyed Adeet 👏 👏 👏 scenes . Umm...Geets soulmate/love interest is Adi...i thought that came across in the last upate when Geet thought about how his one smile could brighten her whole day Embarrassed

Since this is a FF you've the liberty to space & give time to characters equally ; keep little bit more time space for your leads rather than Tara or Arjun . Just a suggestion but finally take your own call 👍🏼 Tara and Arjun are the ones that are making the story possible...so its possible that even they are the leads,..beecause their actions, their relationship, and they themselves are going to be huge catilysts in our "leads" lives 😉

Nice part 😊 thanks! Smile

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: JayaR

Jaz are you hinting that... the story is gonna go in Adeet and Maaneera way instead of Maaneet way...??? lmfao!! 🤣 what "hinting"...maine toh saaf saaf keh diya!! 😆

though you have clearly stated that Maaneet are not gonna unite... but that does it mean Adi- Geet gonna make a pair... yes!! most definitely...thats why i set the foundation for Adeet's relationship in the past update...with Geet thinking about Adi's presence in her life all these years 😳

Jo bhi ho... I know one thing for sure and that is ...I'm gonna read it no matter what it is going to be...coz I love whatever you write... thank you!! i appreciate that...really i do...many readers have fell off...but oh wells...their loss...😛

I simply love the way you twist and turn and manipulate things in your update... a few more coming...all of which...you will NOT see coming at all!! 😈

Love the way you write... and I loved this part too... so finally Arjun is in hands of Maan... lets see what gonna happen... Arjun ki toh aab band bajne wala hai...just you wait and watch!! 😉

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Posted: 14 years ago
hey
gr8 part..
cont.sooon
thanks for pm jaz..
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Posted: 14 years ago

here's the sunday teaser!! 😃

"You left your letter behind," Maan said as he placed the piece of paper on the desk. "I'm sorry but I read it."

Sameera's face went pale when she saw what paper it was.

"Why didn't you tell me Sam?" Maan asked.

"It isnt your problem," she said frankly.

JAZ
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Posted: 14 years ago
so we now get to know the reason...

or it can b abt the present also..

waiting for the update...
Edited by jyoti_l - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
hmmm i'm thinking loophole 🤓

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