FF: You & I...Collide Part13 pg145 July 27 - Page 94

Originally posted by: manashi

i am sorry for commenting late...😳 its k...better late than never...thanks for taking the time to do it now 😃

i congratulate you for taking the story towards the direction where it should be...👏 THANK YOU!! 🤗you and only a handful of people are ok with me taking some creative liberties...everyone else is just saying how much they hate it...so basically they hate my, my story and all that...lol...

geet should never go back to the khuranas...they just dont deserve her...😡 thats what im saying...thank you for seeing that...she's better off without them 😛

but i have a point to make : maan doesnt belong anywhere...its that he SHOULD NOT be happy...neither with geet nor with sameera...😈 ...lol...thats a way to look at it...but you havent seen all of Maan's demons yet...hold your verdict if you can...or hate away...i love the reactions!! 👏

as a loyal geet viewer i have an allergic reaction towards the name "sameera"...as everyone...but as she is a nice, caring lady in your story...i guess even she should not be with maan and even naina who hates her for no reason...though its her doings that brought her in the first place...😒 naina doesnt hate her...thats why she said its difficult to hate sameera because she's so sweet...you cant NOT like her...😆...and with all the people wanting Maneet still...i cant do it...i mean...iss mein what did Sameera do...she's married to Maan...why ruin her life just for Maneet...she's innocent in this mess...😳

so whatever i have read so far...

# get adi and geet together...with geet flourishing in her career...😊 working on it...just setting the building blocks for Adeet 😉

# naina can go away from geet's life...and settle with career and friends...😕 there is SOOO much more to naina and her "friends" and "career"...stay tuned...because it might just end up that Geet is the only one who might be able to help naina save her life...and not from a medical stand point 😉

# arjun either dies or rots in jail...😡 lol...arjun...arjun..arjun...bada kamina hai

# sameera moves on in life and probably have a family who will love and respect her...😳 ...who says she doesnt already? 😛 cuz even the most loving families are dysfunctional on some level...more so than other i think 😆

most importantly...

# maan singh khurana should be left all alone...so that he can spend all his life repenting for his deeds and also for his sister's...😡 ...if you say so 😉

then may be...Geet can forgive him some day...😊 ...what if she already has? i dont know if she has yet...but...hmm...i should think about that 😆

no offence to anyone...my POV...even i want maan and geet together forever mostly...but this is one of the two ffs i read in this forum where i dont want geet to ever forgive or go back to maan...😊 oh oh...one of two...which is the other one? tell tell...i've got to read it...another fellow "out of the box" thinker ⭐️

its heart breaking but its fair...😛 thank you! thats all i ever wanted to hear! 😳

wonderful update...please continue soon...🤗 next week paaka 😛

p.s. : geet should not cry and be sad anymore please...she has had enough...😊 oh no...she's done crying...just that once emotions got the best of her...but she's done with tears over MSK.

god bless...😳

Originally posted by: blahblablah

This damn interesting, I hate you Jaz, it's just to bloody good. As much as I hate Maan and Sam together, I just love the story. Adeet (as Nadia put it) is so much better an Maanmeera. I can't feel the vibe between Maanmeera. Adeet is sooo cute together. Who screamed at the end? Hmmm...

aww...love you too!! 😆...there is more to Maanmeera (lol) than meets the eye...and there's more Adeet as well...lol...and who screamed...i have no idea 😛

JAZ

Originally posted by: sam1234fly

i think naina screamed!!!!!!!!!

only next weeks update will tell 😛

JAZ

Originally posted by: Maaneet_09

you woman dont you just love teasing us 😡 wait wait teasing is too small of a word a better word would be hmmm ya i got it! TORTURING US😡 i hate u for the fact that u want to take this in maan-sameera direction n in fact made sameera a good person so its harder to hate her...ugh! ugh! i hardly want to read the update [but i may end up reading it anyway 🤣... ugh stupid heart] i shall return to crib more about this but later... for now me running away, crying!!!!!

have you read it yet...im just working on the comments...so maybe you have..ill keep checking...but lol...you're in the same shoes as naina...trying to hate sam but cant for some reason!! 😆

JAZ

Originally posted by: Nanthini9

I kind of like to this twist to the story bc otherwise the story wud become predictable. Also, this FF bring out the reality in many ppl's love life. All the couples who are in love do not end up together but that does not necessary mean that their love for each other was any less say another couple who did end up together. (hope that make senses cuz im writing on my BB lol)

see...thank you!! what the point of a predictable story...you never remember those...or not really any way...you remember the unpredictable ones 😉...and yes!! many people dont end up with their first loves...its sad but its a reality...you totally make sense!!
JAZ

Originally posted by: darkice7_12

interesting chapter. this story has a lot of characters acting realistically, which doesn't really happen in romance novels. it's uncomfortable, because I want to see maan and geet together but you've said that won't happen, and the characters and your great writing still keep on pulling me back. i don't know whether i will keep on following the fic, but for now, it's keeping me engrossed. well i hope to see you around because your comments are wonderful...i love how you can state your views yet not bash me in the process like some have done 😕...but im happy that you see the reality angel of it...because this is in no ways a romance novel type story 😃

for now, I still want to know how maan found such a great woman so quickly, usually it's marry in haste and repent at leisure. i also wouldn't be surprised to find out that there is already a relationship between adi and geet, since that would be something that would have developed organically between them over time. I don't think geet waited around for maan, it might have taken her a while to heal, but i doubt that she would wait for someone that she left behind. there is a story behind them as well...it will come out soon...i think next update...so stay tuned 😉...very good point...im still developing Adeet in my head...because honestly...they are brand new to my story line in terms of being a couple...but...yeah...maybe...something is there...but she didnt wait...definitely didnt wait 😳

i can't wait to find out who screamed and what more maan will do to arjun (this guy needs way more than just a beating). update soon! lol...all will come to light soon enough 😛

Originally posted by: -dia-

I have said already with U everything is unexpected ...U have turn the story 360 degree with one disclaimer ...liked it😆

loved the update!!!

But who screamed???

glad you liked it...not many people did...but oh wells...😳..and only time will tell who screamed 😉

JAZ

Originally posted by: bansipatel

loved adi n geet's scenes.. were better than maan n sameera's🤢
who fell with a thud...???😲

ha ha...everyone keeps saying that!! 🤣...why so much hate for maan?
JAZ

Originally posted by: mandymore

fab prt,who screamed at the end..

thanks...stay tuned to find out 😛

JAZ