FF: You & I...Collide Part13 pg145 July 27 - Page 67

Originally posted by: basicquestion1

argh 🤢

u keep replying to comments...and all my mind thinks is... 😍what if she updated, may b it'll say part 11 now 😃

part 11 wont come til next monday/tuesday...so if you see me commenting...dont get excited...lol...sorry.. 🤣

JAZ

Originally posted by: Mk.Gh

So Ms. Naintara Khurana's kartoot finally came out. How young yet how devious she was! 😡

At first I thought ok she's young, she's only thinking what every other kid may feel when their parents passed away and they had one other person to look after them but when she did her little victory dance I had the utmost hatred for her. if you had made a plan...no matter how crazy or evil it was...once that plan succeeded...wouldnt you do a happy dance? 😉...im just saying...i would...lol...i did actually...not cuz some evil plan worked...but when i got exam results...i was jumping for joy! 🥳...

I mean, is it wrong that I wanted to strangle her despite her age at that moment? Well I did -- in my head not wrong...disturbing...crule...but not "wrong" 🤣

Ok so Maan finally finds out .. still waiting to see what drove a wedge between NT and Maan that she'd end up in a situation like this and Maan had to find out in this manner. all will come out in good time...not sure when...next few updates focus on other things...but...eventually it will all come out...😊

I feel for Geet right now the most. Hell she's been trying to cope with the fact that NT out of all people ends up at her hospital and in such a condition .. and she's having to face Maan Singh Khurana in all his wrath but you drop the biggest bomb on both her and US. *innocent muh* 😳...maine kuch nahin kiya...i plead the 5th amendment!! 😆

So Mrs. Sameera Khurana huh? Well I won't hate her just yet. I mean I hate Maan the most for marrying her but then again I thought why would he marry her? he he...there's more to Sameera and Maan..or...Saman as i call them...then meets the eye! 😉...stay tuned for the background on this relationship! but omg..*hug*...at least you're not in denial that she is maan's wife...haar koi yeh hi pooch raha hai...does maan have a brother? 🤣

Poor Geet .. aik aur dhamaka jhelna padega ab i know...she's a trooper isnt she! 👏

Awesome update Jaz, I liked it .. what do you mean you didn't like the way it turned out. i just wasnt happy with the way it flowed...i dont know...im just like that...very particular about my stuff

Z

JAZ

Well yea I'd jump for joy .. but I'm not evil like you so I wouldn't know how to do a victory dance if I accomplished something that evil 😆

Originally posted by: Mk.Gh

Awww well I love whatever outcome you give us because I cannot write to save my life and when I read your work it's like reading some award-winning novel .. that's why I say writing should be your plan B LMAO! No, I know you are really passionate about the medical field but consider writing a book as a side hobby would ya? I'd totally buy it! 😆

Z

i totally should...with the support of all of you guys...my IF buddies...i'd be rich!! 😉

JAZ

Originally posted by: scorpiobhavika

omg ! i just read the whole ff in one go !! this is sooo intriguing

in just 10 updates u've created such a vast story line :D

i hate I-F for moving evrything in the fan fiction forum ..its getting difficult for me to keep tab on all the awesome writings :(

anyway, no worries now... plz add me to ur PM list :)

eagerly waiting to see how the story further unfolds

ps. the flashback moments in the initial updates were supercute with all the maaneet scenes and naina's childish talks..and the litte sex education part b/w geet and naina was out of the world what with maan's mega hilarious reaction !

aww...im glad that you liked the ff so far 😳..ya...when they move the ff's to the FF section it gets hard to monitor...i usually drop a comment so im able to find the thread...lol...😆and im glad you're enjoying the flashbacks...i do another story...similar format...called Humesha Saath if you're interested...😛

JAZ

Originally posted by: jnawaz

JAZ

Originally posted by: jnawaz

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haye haye...should i call a doctor? at least Naina had Geet...who do you have? main aajaun?
JAZ

Originally posted by: SOLACEofEYES

r u a doctor, n sorry i hav not came across dis ff of ur's i'll read it 4m starting. But thanks 4 pm n link of dis ff

im not a doctor...but im in the medical field and medicine is my passion...thats why most of my stories has some sort of medical aspect...whether it is a main focal point (like it is here) or if its just something on the side...😃...hope you enjoy this story..cant wait to see your thoughts

JAZ