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Posted: 14 years ago
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Interesting story, can u add me to yr Pm list.
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I read them all, and loved each n every one of them.
Good job.
It was awesome.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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sorry guys i wanted to update yesterday.. but yesterday was my birthday, and i was so busy.. i want to give u something special in my ff for my birthday or birthday gift 4m me to all of u..i wi'll update tommorow..stay with me..love u all..
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Part 8

Conference room, maan was discussing their new project. Geet enter the room, maan look at her & stop himself. Nayantara see geet & asking her: who r u? why r you entering this room? Geet try to answer it, but maan said, she's geet & she's my assistant. nayantara gives her bad expression. Maan continue start his discussion. Maan: ye project hum middle class logo ki leye kar raha ho. Jaha ek chota sa parivar reh sakhta hain. Isleye is project ki leye humhe alisan apartment tayer karna paregi. Jaha pool, garden , parking area sab hoga. Every body agrees with his decision, except geet. Geet raise her hand & said I want to say something. Everybody was shocked. Nayantara: what do u want to say? U r not an advisor, u r only an assistant do ur job properly. Geet sad, maan notice that & said: bolo kya kehna chateho? Geet quite smile & said: ye ghar hum middle class logo ki leye bana rahi ho to , onki vabnao ko samaj na parege. Aaj v India me aise bohut sare parivar hain jinko leye onki ghar se jada parivar important hain. Parivar chota ho o bara onki leye apno ke sath rehna khushi hain. Isleye pool , parking se jada ghar ki taraf dhan dena chaheye, jaha o apno ki sath har pal beta sake. Geet remember her family. Nayantara: please geet ye sentimental ki place nahi, aaj ki jamane me ghar alisan ho ye sab chata hain. Geet: oss alisan ghar kiss kam ka jaha par apne sath na ho. Apno sath rahe to log khole asmaan ki niche v reh sakti hain. Middle class logo ki leye parivar sab hain, isleye onki ghar aisa hona chaheye jaha parivar ki har member ki sath har otsab mana sake. Maan listen her very carefully. He likes her every word, don't know why? Nayantara : kitna khatiya soch hain tumhara, hum sabko tumhari ye emotional baat sonneki waqt nahi, so. Maan stops her, nayantara shocked. Maan: this project design will finalized next, now everybody leave now. Everybody walk out, except geet. Maan: geet, she turn tumhe dekh kar aisa kue lag rahi hain ki bohut kuch chupa rahi ho humse? Geet shocked to hear this geet: matlab main kuch samji nahi. Maan: jistara tum bol rahi thi, aisa laga tum is project ki bare me bohut kuch janti ho? Maan try to catch her response. Geet: nahi bas aisi bol diya. Maan becomes angry & said: aise bol diya bina samjhe? Kuch bolne pehle socha karo, ye office hain, ya par har kaam soch samaj kar kara jata hain. Samji tum? Ooh! My mistake, samaj ne ki leye demag chaheye jo tumhari pass nahi hain.leken ek baat sunlo, mujhe falto bakwass pasand nahi hain, isleye agli bar jab bolna tab thora soch samaj kar bolna. Maan walk out. Geet think herself: kha faas gayi ho main, maan sir ko to bolvi nahi ki aise company humari v hain matlab thi, isleye mujhe pata hain. Chato! Onko bta kar kya faida? O thori na mere madad karege. Onhe to bas muka chaheye mujhe nikal ne ka.

Raat ki 10 baj rahi hain, sab log ja chuki hain sirf maan or geet office me hain. Geet: haad hogaye, kaisa boss hain? Sab log ja chuki hain or main nahi ja paye. Kue? Kuki oss danav ki assistant jo ho, isleye jab tak o nahi jayega tab tak main nahi ja paonge. Maan was working in his cabin, he does not notice the clock. Geet enter his cabin: sir, kya main ghar ja sakti ho? Maan looks her angry: kue itni jaldi kue? Mere sath kaam karne me acha nahi lagta? Ek kaam karo main yeha kaam karo, or tum ghar jake aram karo. Or ha kal tumhe office aane ki jarorat nahi. Main tumhe chootti de do humesha ki leye? Geet : par sir main to. Maan stop her, jao yeha se mujhe tumhari cehra nahi dekhna. Geet scared & ran out from here. After few moment maan saw the clock & shocked: 10 baj gayi or mujhe pata nahi chala, or main geet ko kya keh rahi thi? Itni raat me ooo bechari akeli kaise jayege? Maan quickly walk out from office, & try to find out her. Suddenly rain starting. Maan: kaha ho tum geet? Hope tum thik ho. Maan starts his car & and look ater the around but he doesn't find her..

sorry guys i m late. coz my birthday was two days ago. so i was quite busy.. today i write it very quickly today.. hope u like it, perdon me any mistake..
Edited by reea88 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#65

wesome...it was really good...

i loved it...do keep writing..

and update soon

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Posted: 14 years ago
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amazing update!

cant wait for the next part!!

pls cont.soon and thanks for the PM

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Posted: 14 years ago
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awesome update
loved it
hate nayantara
hope maan finds geet
cant wait 4 more con soon
thanks 4 da pm
ps happy belated birthday
hope u had a nice day
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wow..love it...
plzz update soon and
plz...add me to yr pm..thanks...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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this is awesome.. please add me to ur PM list! looking forward to it.. :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
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belated happy birthday dear😊awesome lovely update👏

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