New ff:MANEET( Love War ) Thread_1upt PG97 prt 45 - Page 21

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Posted: 14 years ago

Hey

That was a nice update!!!!
liked the Maaneet moments,
Daadimaa s chedkaani was also very good,
Hmm I think Geet can give some unique antic peice
or colour box to fill colour in his life
Love
Lakshmi
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Posted: 14 years ago
that was awesome update.....really love it
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Posted: 14 years ago
loved ur update yaar soo gud
lovee maaneet soo much
plz update soonx!:):):):):):)
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Posted: 14 years ago
loved da update
do continue
that was amazing
cant wait to see wat gift geet got for maan
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue
it was super
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice part..Maan & Geet looks nice..I think Geet should give Maan watch..that way when ever he looks watch he remember her..
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Posted: 14 years ago
a kiss!!! can be a best gift!!!!
please update soon and add me to ur PM list!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
Great update plse add me on ure pm list. Thanks
537048 thumbnail
Posted: 14 years ago
hi i really lyk ur ff its cool
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Posted: 14 years ago

just read all of it!!!

its amazing!!!

loved it!
please continue soon!
thanks,
Sanju
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Posted: 14 years ago
part 22
every one just shocked to see them like this. after few moments every one talking about them. dadi interfer & said: wow! that was a brilliant performance. big appoluse to them. every one did except nt & dev. maan & geet hear it & they back their sense. they find themself each others arms. they fell uncomfortable & then move away. geet noticed every one eyes on them. maan also but he did not care. geet slowly walk out from there. maan try stop her but media captured him.
media: aaj pehli bar khan mention me itni bari function hoa. ov msk ki birthday. hum janna chahenge kaisa laga apko ye party maan.
maa fell irretetate but he said: this party credits goes to geet. she made it special. so i want to thanks her. maan goes to his room.
dadi managed the party and finished it.
11 pm. maan restless to see her. he changed his sherwani and wear a white shirt.
otherhand geet asked herself: keya hoa tujhe geet? tu kue aisa kar rahi hain bar bar? kue maan sir ki itni kareeb gayi. she again asked : tu hamesha aise karti hain, pehli oski itni kareeb jati hain badme khud ko sawal pouchte rehte hain? kue? suddenly light gone. geet screamed, ye keya hoa light kaise chali gayi. she went to window and open it. then she saw a man comes to the window. she couldnot see his face in dark ness. suddenly he open the match and put it on candle. geet could see his face clearly now. it was maan who see her closely. his eyes is seductive now. geet lost in his eyes again.
maan: aisa kue dekh rahi ho? keya hoa?
geet back her sense & asked: aap yeha, aap itni raat yeha keya kar rahi hain.
maan: tumhe andhera se bachane aaya ho? and smirks.
geet: mujhe nahi chahi aap ki madad.
maan: main tumhari madad nahi kar raha ho main is ghar ki sare members ko bacha raha ho tumhari chaillani se.
geet irretetade & said: main chilla nahi rahi thi, waise v ghar me bohut sare nakar hain candle jala ne me mere madad kar dete.
maan: ha kue nahi pure ghar sar pe uttha ne ki bad.
geet open the door & asked keya matlab.
maan enters & closed the door.
geet quite scared
maan comes to close her, matlab iss andhere me tum kuch na khuch garbar to karti or oski wajase saki nind ur jati. waise tumhari naam geet kisne rakha tumhari naam to miss "MOSIBBAT" rakhna cahi tha.
geet gave him angry look & said: or apki naam mr." PERESHAN'. humesha dosro ko tang karne me expert.
maan:geet! ek to main tumhe madad kar raha tha oparse tum mujhe sona rahi ho.
he turned to leave geet hold his arm & said: sorry sir, actually mujhe aap ko kuch dena hain.
maan surprised to hear this he look at her & asked, keya.
geet took a antic colour box & give him. aap ki birthday gift.
maan very excited suddenly & said really!!. geet noded & looked down.
maan open it. this antic colour box was made by exclusive design. maan saw there r some things in this box.
he picked first a silver colour watch. which was extreamly beauti full.
geet: main janti ho aap tym ki bohut pakka hain, isleye maine ye watch apko dia. she stopped.
maan did not response, he picked another small box it was a red tie and other was a cristal show piece which made by multi colour. maans eyes stuck them. he could not belive how beautifull that was.
geet: aap jada waqt for mal me reh te hain, isleye ye tie or ye show piece she could not said further word.
maan fell so happy inside. this is the most wonderfull gift for his birthday still.
maan: show some fake attitude, and said tumhe mujhe gift dene ki koi jarorat nahi thi. khmokha taklif kia hain. he was ready to leave.
geet fell bad: lagta hain gift pasand nahi aaya. per main onki pasand ko nahi janti to keya karti main. inki leye madhu makhi ka chatta lana caheta, tab ja kar khush hoti. dust danav.
maan turned & said:keya kaha tumne? any ways thank u so much show the gift for everything then smirk.
geet smile.
ahole night maan just saw her gifts. its look priceless & wonderfull gifts for him. he dont know whats the reason.
precap: geet chor😲. how?
thank u guys for ur warmly support AND SUGGETION FOR MAANS BIRTHDAY GIFT. ITS HELP ME LOT. I PUT UR SUGGETION IN THIS.. HOPE U LYKE IT..DO COMMENTS..
Edited by reea88 - 14 years ago

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