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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: nine2

Finally u updated!!!!...yup n when u did i dint come on i-f...srry for the late reply ...had a buzy weekend...so now back to ur story


great part...i think the way he asked ridz for forgiveness was sooo cute...wonder how the proposal will be like.....awww...the bond b/w sid n tam is soo sweet...i was sad n happy.....really looking forward to ur next part...n ofcourse the interaction b/w sid n ridz :) plz cont ASAP

thanks dear😳

well even i dont know hw the proposal will be like😆😆

lets hope for the best
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: JATINTHAKKAR

Noorya,😊

Absolutely Mindblowing & Invincible Update.
Sid in the Process of Regretting,Yet he Managed to Make Riddhima More Angry.....Liked Riddhima's Locker Gussa & Small Siddhima Nok-jhok.
The Process of Assignment of Duties.......
Sid @ Patlab.......By the Way,Patlab main Susu collect karna hota hain?......I Never Knewed This......😆
Liked Sid's way of Regretting In Front of the Whole Hospital.......Riddhima Though For a Second That Sid Will Confess her Love......Sid Too took Riddhima's Test to see what Affects Her.
BTW......Riddhima's True......Coz You can't Become Angry on Sid for Longer Time.
The TJ room Surprise by Sid & Everyone was Beautiful......They all Spread Hope of Light in TJ's Life.
Bad News coz TJ's Going London but want to see her Back soon 100% Fit & Fine.
Liked The TJ-Shanky Scene too.
Finally Liked the Airport Scene.
It Was Emotional but Written Perfectly......Sid Giving Ganpati(Lucky-Charm) & Riddhima Kissing TJ was Nice.
Feels Bad that TJ's Left for London But She Needs Re-Juvenation Treatment to Get to Normalcy.
Liked Last Scene Where Riddhima Comfort's Sid By putting her hand on his Shoulder & "Ghar-Chalein".
Looking Forward for Next.
I Feel Proud & It's My Honour to Get Associated with this FF coz this is Heavenly.
"Mera Bina Main Rehne laga hoon.....
Teri Hawa Main Behne laga hoon.....
Jaane Mian Kaise Tera Hua hoon.....
Mujhe toh Lagta hain main Shayad tere Dill ki dua hoon......Ha
Tujhko Jo Paaya.......Aha.....
Toh Jeena Aya......
Ab Yeh Lamha Teher Jayye,Tham Jayye,Bas Jayye...Hum dono ke Darmiyan.....

thanks a ton yaar!

im sorry i know i really like Tam but dont worry she will come back
not right now but she will for sure😉
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: sidhima3jsp

update soon.................

the part is comin up

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Fahranaaz

nice update

please update soon

thanks dear

the part is comin up😳
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Posted: 14 years ago

Hey guys😊

sorry sorry sorry yaar
plzz maaf karo...im again damn late
but im seriously tryin to post soon
but time hi nahin mil raha🤢
anyways i hope u'll like this part
and plzzz sont kill me for the endin😆
~Tum Mile~

PART 15

The same evening after sid and ridz came back home, ridz was in her room thinkin about sid…she was worried for him coz she knew hw much he loved tamana

Ridz: pata nahin sid kaise hoga…khana tho door im sure usne paani tak nahin peeya hoga…main ek kam karti hoon…uska mood change karne ke liye usse bahar le chalti hoon

She took her phone n dialed his number. Here sid was in his dark room lookin at the sky when his phone rang. He looks at the screen n saw ridz name

Sid: haan riddhima?

Ridz: Sid…voh…kya kar rahe ho?

Sid: kuch nahin bas…aise hi…

Ridz: chalo kahin bahar chalte hain…I mean…main ghar mein bohut bore ho rahi hoon aur bahar khaane ko maan kar raha hai tho maine socha kyun naa tum saath chalo…(sid knew she wanted to change his mind so he can think about somethin else than tam…but right now he needed to be alone)

Sid: heuuu riddhima…voh actually…main…main JP Jiggy ka wait kar raha hoon…voh dono bas aate hi honge tho…aaj nahin jaa paounga sorry

Ridz: no its ok tum…u have fun main kal milti hoon…bye

Sid: bye…(n he disconests the phone) im sorry riddhima…mujhe tumse jooth bolna pada…main janta hoon tum mere liye pareshan ho par iss waqt mujhe akele rehna hai kyunki main tumse kuch galat keh ke tumhe hurt nahin karna chahtha…

Here ridz is relieved that sid is not alone and that with JP Jiggy he will forget his pain.

Ridz: chalo at least sid aaj akela tho nahin hai…jp aur jiggy ke saath rahega tho at least apni udaasi kuch der ke liye bhool jaayega…

***

The next day riddhima and sid did not talk much. She knew sid needed some time so requested all his friends to avoid talkin about tamana. The few times she talked to him were only about duty. At the lunch break while everyone went to the cafeteria sid was at the terrace when his mobile rang…he looks at the screen but it was a private number

Sid: hello

Voice: hello…can I speak to dr siddhant modi plz?

Sid: yes…who's this?

Voice: BF!!!!!! Main hoon! (sid gets happy hearin tam's voice)

Sid: tamana!...tum kaisi ho?

Tam: im fine BF par tumhari awaaz theek nahin thi…tumne promise kiya tha tum sad nahin hoge

Sid: ab tumne phone kiya naa tho main sad nahin hoon…acha yeh batao tum kaisi ho aur London acha laga?

Tam: BF main bilkul theek hoon…and London is soo beautiful Gaurav bhaaya mujhe ghoomne ke liye laaye hain…pata hai Gaurav bhaaya bohut ache hain aur mera bohut khial rakhte hain aur aaj mujhe ice cream bhi dila diya……par BF I miss u sooo much

Sid: I miss u too tamana…pata hai yahan kitna borin hai tumhare bina…kam karne ka bhi maan nahin hai…

Tam: BF don't be silly…tum bhool gaaye tum doctor ho…aur patients ko tumhari zaroorat hai (sid smiles)

Sid: oye dadimaa maine kab kaha ki main apne patients ko bhool gaaya…main bas keh raha hoon ke its boring

Tam: BF riddhima didi kaisi hai? Voh tumhara khial tho rakhti hai naa?

Sid: riddhima…theek hai par I think voh toda pareshan hai mere liye

Tam: uffo BF tumne didi ko phir pareshan kiya!...main ek din tumhare saath nahin hoon tho tumne didi ko naraaz kiya

Sid: arre nahin baba…voh jab se tum gaayi ho naa tho main kisi se ziada baat nahin karta hoon tho voh pareshan hai…but don't worry main break ke baad baat karta hoon uss se…

Tam: cool!...ab yeh batao ki tumne didi se kuch kaha ?

Sid : arre abhi kaha naa maine kuch nahin kiya hai

Tam: uffo BF tum kitne stupid ho!...i mean didi se apne feelings ki baat ki?

Sid: ab jab meri love guru mere saath nahin hai tho main riddhima se kya kahunga?

Tam: BF tumhe kya lagta hai main vahan nahin tho tum didi se kuch nahi kahoge?...abhi last lesson baki hai……tumhe didi se I love u bolna hai aur voh bhi aaj! (sid gets shocked)

Sid: kya??? Tamana tum theek tho ho naa? Lagta hai London ka hawa tujh pe bura asaar karne laga hai

Tam: BF main mazak nahin kar rahi…ab tumhe didi se kehna chahiye

Sid: tamana main kaise keh sakta hoon?

Tam: jaise tum roz mujhe bol rahe the!

Sid: dekho tamana main aisa kuch nahin karne vaala…ek tho tum chali gaayi ab riddhima se apni feelings bol kar main uski dosti khona nahin chahta

Tam: trust me BF aisa kuch bhi nahin hoga…tumhari aur didi ki dosti bohut strong hai tum dono humesha dost rahoge…now promise me ke tum didi se kahoge

Sid: tamana yeh tum har baat pe promise kya leti rehti ho?

Tam: kyunki main janti hoon ki jab tum promise karte ho tho usse humesha poora karte ho…ab chalo promise karo (sid closes his eyes coz he didn't wanted to promise this time) BF promise karo naa plzzz (sid takes a deep breath n opens his eyes)

Sid: ok fine! Promise (tam gets happy)

Tam: Gaurav bhaaya BF ne promise kiya!

Sid: ohh hello…tum kya poori London ko mere bare mein bata chuki ho?

Tam: BF ab Gaurav bhaaya mere saath hai tho unhe pata hoga naa

Sid: acha tamana zara phone dr khanna ko dena

Tam: ok BF…love u

Sid: love u too

Gaurav: hello

Sid: hello dr khana…

Gaurav: plzz yeh sab formalities ki zaroorat nahin hai tum mujhe gaurav bhula sakte ho

Sid: all right…gaurav…actually main bas thanks kehna chahta tha…tamana se baat kar ke acha laga

Gaurav: well main bas yahin kehna chahta hoon ki plzz don't worry tamana yahan bilkul theek hai aur uska treatment kuch hi din mein shuru hone vaala hai…and believe me yeh ek choti bachi tho hai par isse pata tha ki tum theek nahin ho…soo don't worry at all sid main tamana ka khial rakhunga

Sid: thanks man…

Gaurav: ooo and btw…best of luck…dr riddhima ko apne dil ki baat batane ke liye…hum ek doosre ko nahin jante par pyaar ke mamle mein sab ek jaise hai…so I just wanna say ki aur intezaar mat karo aur riddhima se sab kuch bol do iss se pehle ki der ho jaaye……anyways take care man

Sid: bye…

***

After the phone call sid was feelin much better n was goin back for his duty when he saw riddhima in the corridors with a nurse.

Sid: I think mujhe riddhima se ek baar baat kar leni chahiye vaise bhi mujhe leke voh pareshan hai (then he remembers what he promised to tam)…maine tamana se vaada tho kiya hai par main riddhima se kaise kahunga ki main…anyways main yeh baad mein dekhta hoon (then he walks toward her) riddhima…(she looks at him n looks back at the nurse)

Ridz: ek kam kijiye app yeh file mere cabin mein rakhiye main baad mein dekhti hoon (the nurse leaves n ridz turns to sid) kya hua sid kisi patient ke bare mein baat karni hai?

Sid: nahin voh…actually tamana ne phone kiya tha kuch der pehle…

Ridz: kaisi hai voh? Ziada udaas tho nahin hai?

Sid: nahin voh bilkul theek hai…hume toda miss karti hai par gaurav uska khial rakhta hai

Ridz: chalo at least tumhe pata hai ki voh theek hai (then her pager disturbs them…ridz check and it was atul) heu sid main tumse baad mein milti hoon

Sid: riddhima voh…actually tumse kuch poochna tha

Ridz: kya?

Sid: voh kal tumne jo bahar jaane ko invite kiya tha par main aa nahin paaya im really sorry...

Ridz: its ok sid…tum jp aur jiggy ko chor tho nahin sakte the naa

Sid: voh…main soch raha tha…kyun naa hum duties ke baad bahar jaaye?

Ridz smiles: theek hai…(sid gets happy)

Sid: great…tho main tumhe shaam ko 8 baje lene aounga…

***

The day passes…sid now was feelin much better coz tam was fine and he knew gaurav will take good care of her. It was 7:30 sid was ready wearin jeans with a white shirt but tensed thinkin about hw to tell riddhima about his feelings…

Sid: kaise bataounga main riddhima se…yeh tamana bhi naa…ek tho voh yahan nahin aur ab mujhe riddhima ko yeh sab kehne pe majboor kar rahi hai…(then he remembered what gaurav said) "riddhima se sab kuch bol do iss se pehle ki der ho jaaye" gaurav theek keh raha hai agar main iss daar ke waje se riddhima se kuch nahin kaha tho bohut der ho jaayega……

***

He reached ridz house n called riddhima to come out. He gets out of his car waitin for her. And when the door opened he saw her in her red churidar…a smile draws his face n he remebered their first meetin…ridz was walkin toward him with a smile on her face and sid was just lost…he couldn't see or listen anytthin else he was realizin hw the red color suited riddhima…she stopped in front of him confused n waved her hand

Ridz: sid? Kya hua? (sid comes back to his sense)

Sid: hun?...heuu…kuch nahin

Ridz: tho chalein?

Sid: haan chalo (they get in the car n he drive away)

Ridz: vaise hum jaa kahan rahe hain?

Sid: yahan pass mein hi ek naaya restaurant khula hai its very nice

After a while they reach the restaurant. A waiter comes to welcome them and guides them to their table. Sid like a gentleman helps ridz to sit n then sits himself n noticed that ridz was lookin all around

Sid: kya hua riddhima? Jagah achi nahin lagi?

Ridz: nahin its very beautiful…aur yahan ka atmosphere bhi acha hai

Sid: sirf atmosphere hi nahin khana bhi bohut acha hai…chalo order karte hain

Ridz nods and they order their food. Until now they enjoyed their evening the food, their conversations, and the music…

Sid: riddhima kal ke liye im very sorry…

Ridz: sid tum ab baar baar sorry bolna band karo…tumhare ghar jp aur jiggy aaye the…unhe chor kar tum mere saath nahin aa sakte the naa

Sid: kal raat…main ghar mein akela tha…jp aur jiggy nahin the

Ridz: tho phir tumne aisa kyun kaha?

Sid: kyunki jab bhi main aisa hota hoon tho mujhe akela rehna hai…jab bhi main udass hoon mujhe gussa jaldi aa sakta hai…main janta hoon kal tum mera mood theek karne ke liye bahar jaana chahti thi par main tumhe hurt nahin karna chahta tha kuch ulta sida bol kar…tho issi liye main voh jooth bola…im sorry

Ridz: acha chalo baba maine tumhe maaf kiya…ab plzz tum yeh sorry bolna band karo varna main gussa ho jaoungi…(sid looks at her n they smile to each other when the manager comes to them)

Man: excuz me sir

Sid: yes?

Man: hume abhi pata chala hai ki yahan ek couple ki shaadi ki anniversary hai…tho humari request hai ki saare couples dance floor par aa kar ek dance kare (sid n ridz look at each other surprise)

Sid: voh actually hum dono…

Man: dekhiye sir jis couple ki anniversary hai voh kafi buzurg hai…unhe bohut acha lagega

Ridz: par dekhiye hum dono…(he cuts her)

Man: dekhiye madam agar aap dance floor pe kade bhi honge then its fine…hum bas unke liye yeh shaam toda khaas banana chahte hain…excuz me mujhe baki logon ko bhi batana hai

And he leaves before they could say something. After some time he comes back to make the announcement and wish the couple.

Man: ladies and gentlemen…aaj shaam humare iss restaurant mein do log ke liye ek bohut hi khaas din hai…aaj Mr n Mrs Jaiswaal ki 50th wedding anniversary hai…tho humare taraf se unke liye ek cake ki tayaari ho rahi hai…par sirf yeh hi nahin balke yahan jitne bhi couples hain dance floor par aa kar ek dance karenge…plzz ladies and gentlemen aaye…inki yeh anniversary apke liye bohut shub hogi aur aap logon ki bhi jodi yun hi banni rahegi…love is in the air my friends mauke ka faida uthaaye aur apne pyaar ka izhar kijiye…

All the couples go to the dance floor and ridz gets confused when sid stands in front of her n forwards his hand

Sid: may i?

Ridz: par sid hum dono tho…

Sid: couple nahin hai pata hai mujhe…par dost tho hai naa? Tho kya hum dost ho kar ek dance nahin kar sakte taaki voh dono khush ho jaaye?

Ridz smiles n gave him her hand n he lead her to the dance floor. She was still holdin his hand n puts the second one on his shoulder. Sid smiles n puts his free hand on her waist n pulls her a lil closer and they start dancing…

Ridz: sid tum aise kaise ho sakte ho?...i mean tum uss couple ko jante tak nahin ho par phir bhi unhe khush karna chahte ho…

Sid smiles: issi ko tho jeena kehte hain…pata hai riddhima log aaj kal bade waje dhoond the hain khush hone ke liye aur voh bhool jaate hain ki aisi choti choti kam se bhi bohut khushi milti hai…dekho unhe (lookin at the old couple) humare ek dance karne se unki anniversary khaas baan gaayi aur unki chehre pe smile aayi…

Ridz: maine kabhi nahin socha tha main ek din iss Sid ko dekhungi…I mean tum ek selfish aur spoiled brat se aise baan sakte ho mujhe nahin pata tha

Sid: yeh sab meri zindagi mein kisi ki aane se hua hai

Ridz : really ?...kaun ? (sid thought that its the right moment to tell her everythin but before he could say it the crowd start applaudin for the end of the dance)

Sid: heuu…chalo hum unhe wish karte hain (both went to see the couple)

Hello…

Man: hello son

Sid: happy anniversary

Lady: thank u beta…aur tum logon ne humare liye yeh sab kiya uske liye bhi thanks (sid kneels down n holds the nanny's hand)

Sid: arre iss mein thanks kehne vaali kaun si baat hai dadi…agar humari ek dance se aap dono ko khushi hoti hai tho humare liye iss se badi baat kya ho sakti hai…

Lady: acha laga yeh dekh kar ki aaj ki generation mein bhi tumhare jaise log hai…(n she blesses him by carresin his hair) aaj humari anniversary hai aur hum dono sachi dil se yahin dhuaan karenge ki tum dono ki jodi humesha bani rahe (sid n ridz look at each other shocked but didn't say anything)

Sid: heuu…ab hum chalte hain (the couple bless them both once again n they leave)

Lady: kitni pyaari jodi hai inn dono ki hain naa?

Man: bilkul…inki jodi bhi upar wale ne banaayi hai jaise humari banaayi…

***

After the restaurant sid n ridz were at the beach for a walk…they were sittin on a rock, ridz was lookin up at the stars while sid was lost in the waves…

Sid: ek baat poochun?

Ridz: hmmm

Sid: kya agar humne jiss se pyaar kiya tha usse bhool jaate hain tho kya voh galat hai? Ya kya voh pyaar hi tha?

Ridz: hum apne pyaar ko kabhi bhool nahin sakte sid…voh yaadein baan kar humesha humare saath rehte hai…aur agar tum khud ki baat kar rahe ho naa tho tum kuch bhi galat nahin kar rahe ho…tamana ki shaadi ho gaayi hogi ab tho aur kisi ki patni ke bare mein sochna theek nahin hai…shayad issi liye tum usse bhula rahe ho

Sid: ya phir shayad kyunki main kisi aur ke bare mein sochta hoon…koi aur mere dil aur dimaag mein bas gaaya ho…

Ridz: tum kehna kya chahte ho…tumhe kisi se pyaar ho gaaya hai?

Sid: pyaar…jo main feel kar raha hoon uske liye maine pehle kabhi aisa feel nahin kiya…tamana ke liye bhi nahin…pata hai jab voh muskuraati hai tho bhagvaan se bas yahin maangta hoon ki uski hassi kabhi naa cheen le…aur jab usse dard hota hai aur uske aankhon mein aansoon aate hain tho maan karta hai uske saare ghum apnaloun aur dunya ki har khushi doun usse…mere dil mein jo uske liye hai voh pyaar se bhi gehra hai (ridz smiles)

Ridz: kya tumne uss se baat ki hai? Uss se apne feelings ke bare mein bataaya hai?

Sid: nahin…

Ridz: kyun?

Sid: dar lagta hai…kahin usse yeh sab keh kar voh mujhse door naa ho jaaye…main usse khona nahin chahta

Ridz: sid tum aisa kyun sochte ho…agar meri sunoge tho tumhe uss se baat kar leni chahiye usse batana chahiye…kya tum apni poori zindagi ek dar ki waje se uss se yeh baat chupa sakte ho? aur vaise bhi koi bhi ladki tum jaise itne ache insaan se pyaar karegi…tho meri baat maano aur usse batao apni dil ki baat………par abhi ke liye I think hume chalna chahiye papa mera wait kar rahe honge (she stands up n turns her back to leave)

Sid: I love you…

Love and Luck to All
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome update
Loved d convo B/w Sid & Tammy
And SR dance 😍

And finally he said ILU to her
can't wait 4 d next part
Continue soon....
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Posted: 14 years ago
Noorya🤗

Awesome update👏
Loved the interaction between SR
and their dance....haiyeeeee😍
also lyk Sid-Tam's convo...she's so sweet😳

and Sid said I love you to her....AWESOME!!!!
But why did u just end it there...
do continue soon....cuz mujhe cliffhangers bardhasht nhi hote😆
So eagerly waiting for the next part
plzzzzzz continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome part 😊
SR dance 😍
finally Sid said it 😉
continue soon..........
Edited by sidhima3jsp - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
OMG yay he finally said I love u to rids...bt then cliffhanger...u need tp update ASAP b/c i am very impatient to read the next part...oh n love the sid -tam convo...awww i love her for making sid promise that he will thell ridz abt his feelings...fab prt n plz update ASAP
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Posted: 14 years ago
superb i loved it👏

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