SR FF ~Tum Mile~(PART 26 p144) - Page 31

Originally posted by: Urstruly

Hey Noorya, great update👏👏loved SR in rain & Siddy's imagination 😳 awwwww shhhooooo beautiful.

N i also enjoyed the way Sid was trying to ignore his feelings for Ridz 😆😍.Eagerly waiting for the next part , plz update it asap.

Saher

thanks Saher😳

Originally posted by: kusumfan

I am so sorry for the late reply, actually i don't how i missed your FF cuz it's amazing
The best part about your OS is that their love story starts on the right foot. That even though they both have a past, they are moving forward (through your FF). The way Sid's mood begins to depend on Ridz, the way he imagines her. It really signifies that Ridz has started to make a place in his heart, mind and hopefully in his soul. Amazing writing and can you please add me to your pm list (don't want to miss an update😊)

thanks sooo much Prachi😳

Originally posted by: ...Noorya...

thanks Saher😳

after its Sid so he will do his best to ignore his feelings as long as poss

but no fikar i am the CV here😆😆

Originally posted by: hewascool90210

this is amazing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!👏

thanks Bani😛

Noorya,😊

Originally posted by: JATINTHAKKAR

Noorya,😊

First Of All.....Sorry For Being Late But It's Good Coz I Can Enjoy the Whole FF Bit to Bit without Any Hurry.

I Feel This FF & Without Feeling It,It's Not Worth To Give A Comment.

So Checked the Update.

Whenever I Come In Our FF,I Reached to a Tranquility which is at It's Highest Zenith Ever.⭐️

The Starting Was Nice With TJ Making Sid Realize That He Has Feelings For Riddhima.....I Always Loved TJ playing a Cupid for Siddhima in Actual Too & Whenever i'll Go Mumbai......I'll defu Land to CV's Office & Will ask Them Why They Ended TJ's Track So Soon.

If You Remember,I Made My First OS On TJ as Centre Point.

TJ is Very Close to My Heart & I Love Ishita Panchal Too.Sid Seeing Riddhima & Smiling.Liked The Canteen Convo b/w all.

Your Humour is Top Notch hun.....That Dialogue of Raj to Naina about Sid,"Woh jarrorat se jyaada Coffee peeta hain" was Hillarious.😆Loved It.😆

Raj Planning Something......He Wants Money From Sue......Bad Intentions of Raj.....Yuna & Sue were Awesome.

Liked Siddhima's Last part too Where Sid Drops Her But Car Gets down & Rain starts pouring.Like Riddhima Enjoying In Rain & Sid Imaging Romance in rain with Riddhima.

Last Part When Sid is At Home & Feeling Restless.....As I always Say......Siddhima Can't Imagine Life Without Each Other & Sid Conveys That.He's Missing Riddhima & spurting his Anger on Sue.

Liked The Interpretation of "Kabhi Kabhi Haar Main Bhi Jeet Hoti Hain".

Sid-Sue Convo.....I Miss It a Lot These days.

At Last Sid Getting Angry & Sleeps.

Waiting For Next part Now.

All the Emotions Were Handled Nicely By You.👏👏👏

BTW.....You Changed Your Avatar......I Mean Only Sid & Not Riddhima......She's Good & Loyal.....It Just Someone's Blackmailing Her.....I Loved the First One Very Much.....Anyways,It's You Choice & I Respect It.😊

hey Jatin

helloz all the SRians out there😛

PART 8

Sid couldn't sleep the whole night so he was really tired at morning so decided to rest the whole day…but these days what he wants does not happen and it will not change today…so he finaly gets up and all he wants to do is goin to Sanjeevaani…he just wanted to meet her once…even 5 mins were more than enough for him…but he dicide to stay at home…at least he tried…playin games…sleepin…he did his best but gave up few hours later n rushed to sanjeevaani……

He was walkin through the corridors of sanjeevaani. He didn't want anyone to see him so carefully was lookin around when his eyes fell on her…she was lookin like an angel in her white churidaar…seein her sid went to his dreamland starin at her passionately…he was so lost that he didn't realized someone was watchin him he just heard tamana's tiny voice but did not recognized her…

Tam: bohut sundaar hai naa?

Sid smiles: haan…bohut…(n he just realized that someone actually asked him this question n comin back to his sense he finds tam) I mean……kaun?...

Tam: vahin…jisse tum ghoore rahe the…

Sid: main…kisi ko bhi nahin…no…

Tam: vaise tum yahan kya kar rahe ho? aaj teri chutti hai naa? (sid looks at her surprised n takes her in his arms)

Sid: tujhe kaise pata?

Tam: BF…yeh jaan na zaroori nahin hai ki mujhe kaise pata…tum bas yeh jaan lo ki mujhe sab kuch pata hai…

Sid: btw main tumse baat nahin kar raha

Tam: kyun? Maine kya kiya?

Sid : teri waje se main itna confuse ho gaaya hoon ki theek se soo bhi nahin sakta…jab dekho riddhima ke bare mein baat karti rehthi ho…

Tam : acha sorry…aaj naa main kuch nahin kahungi (by time they reach children ward n sid makes her sit on her bed) chalo ek game khelte hain…

Sid: nahin…mera mood nahin hai

Tam: uffo stupid…iss game se naa tere saare confusions clear ho jaayenge

Sid: acha?...game kya hai?

Tam: bohut simple hai…main tujhe ek word batati hoon aur jo word tere maan first aayege tum jaldi bataoge…maine yeh Kuch Kuch Hota Hai mein dekha tha…

Sid: ok…chal start kar

Tam: life?

Sid: hmmm…khushi

Tam: doctor?

Sid: main!

Tam: dosti ?

Sid: zindagi

Tam: pyaar ?

Sid : riddhima (sid gets shocked by what he said n looks at tam who smiles)

Tam: BF tum riddhima se pyaar karte ho?

Sid: nahin…main…

Tam: ab yeh mat bol ki koi mistake hua ya voh teri dost hai…kyunki maine dosti bhi poocha…BF tumne yeh baat khud kaha abhi…ab tujhe maan ni chahiye ki riddhima tere liye sirf dost nahin hai (sid keep lookin at her even more confused now)

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Raj and Sue had their duty together…raj was quite happy coz he got a chance to spend time with sue who was not feelin the same way…she was actually very annoyed and angry workin with raj

Sue to herself: poori sanjeevaani mein issi ke saath duty milni thi

Raj: yeh tho achi baat hai…at least hum saath mein toda time spend karenge ab…and who knows maybe u'll like me

Sue: listen…ziada smart baan ne ki zaroorat nahin hai ok……aur tum yeh baar baar dosti aur tumhe like karne ki baat kyun karte ho?...tumhara koi dost nahin hai kya?...mere hi peeche pade ho…jaake kisi aur ko pareshan kar mujhe naa hi tumse dosti karni hai aur naa hi like (sayin this she just wanted to leave but raj holds her hand n pulls her close to him)

Raj: par main tho tumhe like karta hoon naa…(n whispers in her ear) aur jab tum yeh gussa dikhati ho tho aur bhi pasand aati ho…(n he left from there leavin a surprised confused n even more angry sue)

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Sid came back home after what happened with tamana…he didn't wanted to see anyone n specialy riddhima…he had to clear all this confusion once and for all and to be sure about what was happenin to him…

Sid: maine riddhima ka naam liya……kyun? Jab voh mere pass nahin hoti…tho main uske saath time spend karne ke liye bahana doundta hoon…kya sach mein mujhe riddhima se pyaar……? Lekin main tho tamana se pyaar karta tha……tha ? (n he remembers all those things she said at her engagement day to him) "hum dono ke beech dosti ke elava aur kuch mumkin hi nahin tha…kyunki tum humse pyaar nahin karte…aankhein band karo…haath dil pe rakho…kya dikh raha hai tumhe?" (sid takes a deep breath n closes his eyes putting his hand on his heart…and he saw exactly the same things he saw the first time….all the moments he spend in sanjeevaani…with his friends…and he saw again this girl's shadow…and when she came closer he recognized her this time…her long dark hair..her big green eye...her smile…n he remembered what tamana told him at the airport givin him the ganpati) "inhe tum apne pass rakhna…yeh tumhari zindagi mein dher saari khushyaan…naayi kismat aur naaya pyaar laayenge…" (sid opens his eyes in shock) Riddhima……(the girl he saw was riddhima) meri aankhein, meri zubaan aur mera dil…sab riddhima ka hi naam lete hain…yeh sirf dosti nahin ho sakti…sab kuch badal raha hai…mere feelings badal rahe hain…main badal raha hoon……

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Sid couldn't sleep that night either…it has become a routine for him to have a new tension to deal with every day…now that he kinda understood his feelings but still didn't admit it he didn't knew what to do next…hw to tell riddhima…infact he didn't knew if he should tell her or not……with his confused mind he went to sanjeevaani. He was wearin his lab coat when Jp saw him in locker room

Jp: arre Sid bhaya…aap itni jaldi aa gaaye hain…(sid does not even looked at him)

Sid: hi…

Jp: arre ka hua hai sid bhaya?...kahin phir se riddhima flowerji ke saath tho jagda nahin hua hai? (sid did not answer) lagta hai baat serious hai iss baar

Sid: jp…mera mood theek nahin hai tho apne yeh faltu baatein band kar…

Jp: dhaya re dhaya…hum tho bas jaan na chahte hain ki apko hua kya hai

Sid: har baat jaan na zaroori nahin hai…aur maine kaha naa mera mood theek nahin hai tho peecha chodo mera…(he left for his duty angrily)

The whole morning sid avoided everyone and specialy riddhima. Every time she tried to talk to him he gave her excuses. And now that riddhima came to know sid with time when he used to behave like this she knew it meant that something was wrong…at lunch break when she went to cafeteria to see him yuvi told her that sid didn't join them for lunch…now riddhima was sure that something was botherin him and she knew where to find him.

Sid was at the terrace of sanjeevaani of course…where he could openly think about the whole situation.

Sid: mujhe riddhima se pyaar hua hai…kab aur kaise…kuch pata hi nahin chala…aur main yeh baat riddhima se kahun kaise?......nahin…main yeh baat riddhima ko bata nahin sakta…voh tho aaj bhi armaan se pyaar karti hai…aur main yeh galti kar ke riddhima ko khona nahin chahta…at least meri dost ho kar voh mere kareeb tho hai…usse apne dil ki baat batana matlab usse khud se door karna aur main yeh nahin kar sakta…(riddhima saw sid there n got the biggest proof that he was tensed)

Ridz: sid? (sid gets surprised hearin ridz voice n looks at her worried to know if she heard him talking alone)

Sid: riddhima…?

Ridz: kya hua sid? Tum itne pareshan kyun ho? (sid feels relieved coz she didn't heard anything)

Sid: kuch nahin…

Ridz: sid…agar tum batana nahin chahte tho its ok…lekin yeh mat bol ke kuch nahin hai varna tum yahan terrace pe nahin hote…subah se mujhe avoid kar rahe ho yahan tak ki lunch bhi nahin kiya…(sid is amazed by her…hw well she knows him)

Sid: ek sawaal poochoun?

Ridz: kya?

Sid: jab pyaar mein humara dil toothta hai aur hum saare umeedein chorte hain…par waqt ke saath hume aisa lage ki hume kisi aur se pyaar hua hai tho kya voh galat hai?

Ridz: nahin sid……infact agar aisa hota hai tho hum bohu lucky hote hain…sid sacha pyaar milna bohut mushkil hai aur agar humare zindagi mein hume doosra mauka mile tho usse ghavana nahin chahiye…bohut kam logon ko life mein doosra mauka milta hai…

Sid: kya tumhe aaj bhi pyaar pe wishwaas hai?

Ridz: haan……mere saath jo kuch bhi hua…uske liye main pyaar ko dhoshi nahin tehra sakti…pyaar mein hume jo bhi milta hai chahe voh khushi ho ya gham…yeh sab tho humare kismat ka khel hota hai………lekin…yeh sab tum kyun pooch rahe ho?

Sid: yun hi…bas…apne pyaar ke bare mein soch raha tha…

Ridz talking about tam: sid…shayad voh pyaar kabhi tumhare liye tha hi nahin…

Sid: shayad nahin riddhima…tamana mere liye thi hi nahin…

Ridz: ek baat kahun? (sid nods) tum bohut ache ho…aur uthna hi saaf tumhara dil hai…jis ladki se tum pyaar karoge naa…voh bohut lucky hogi

Sid: nahin riddhima…agar jis ladki se main pyaar karta hoon voh meri zindagi mein aaye tho sab se ziada lucky tho main hi hounga…

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