FF: (new) part: INTRO on page99 - Page 14

Originally posted by: .sireesha.

OMG thats a long update

Thanq so much .....................Thats Awesome...........................Loved it

The songs are superb

Thats was a Lovely treat.....................

Thanq so much for the PM

pls update soon

thank you, thanks you, thank you and more of thank youu! 😊

Originally posted by: -afsha-

Ur FF is fab

Jus loved all the updates

The way Maneet's relation progressed was fab

Devky relation was also awesum

Dadi was such a cuteipie here jus love her to the core

Ur 9th part Killing ant wit knife was awesum

Geet culd all this also i culdnt imagine that

Maan was loosing himself in Geet

Hop both becum one soon n Maan is serious abt her

Update soon n plz add me to ur pm list

lolz, yes i can even imagine geet like dat!! u are already added so dw! 😊

Originally posted by: neahakhan

Hey minhaaa
awesome Ff. I was randomly going thru if and I saw ur ff so I started to read it. My gawd this is jsut too good.
I like how maan and geet are getting all dream. Lol funniest part when dev says ohh I don't look like geet;)
hhahha.
Okaay so pls do add me to ur pm list.
And yeah once again keep up with ur amazing work.

Neaha.

thank you neaha soo veri much, and yes i will add you to the pm list so dont worri... 😊

Originally posted by: -Premeena-

WOOOOWWW... WOOOOOWWW..... WAS ALL I CAN SAY DAYYUMMM DAYYUUMMM URE A GOODD SORI A FABULOUS WRITER... I HAVE JUST READ ALL YOUR UPDATES RIGHT NOW AND THEYRE MIND BLOWING........

PLZ DO PM ME..... THANX SSOOO MUCH WILL SO BE LOOKING FORWARD FOR THE NEXT UPDATE..

ABSOLUTELY CANNOT WAIT......

WOOOOWW...... STILL IN THE THOUGHT...!!!!

AMAZING WORK ...!!

thank youuu sooooo much, i reali appercaite ur comments, and yes i will add u to the pm list dw... and thanks ones again! 😃

Originally posted by: shivangi783

[Hey loved your update 😊
was waiting for it, and wen you did update, didn't get the PM 😭
Anyhow, but I just read the update, it was fabulous 😊
Maan is a big time music lover 😉

i soo soriii shivangi... bt i did try to send u a pm bt ur inbox was full, dats y it didnt go through... and thank you for liking itt... 😃

Plz add me in ur Pm list realy loved ur ff

Originally posted by: chubzy

Plz add me in ur Pm list realy loved ur ff

consider it donee!

maan laughed at her: wid a kinfe???

geet looked at him embrass: toh main haath se toh nhai mar sakti ab

maan: how about a shoe?

geet nw got reali embrassed bt thot a way to cover up her mistake so she doesnt look stupid infornt of maan: gr8 idea, likan main hp main na haath se hi ants mar sakti hoon

maan: wot.. reali i--

maan knew she was lieing... cuz it is imposible to kill a ant wid a knife so he said

maan: i would like to c u kill da ant like dat...

geet: no it is okay we will use a shoe..

maan: kyun

maan moved forward to her making her get blocked into the counter

maan: geet u got scared 4om a small, ant

geet nodded her head

maan: kya tum mujse darr thi ho kya?

geet: nhai

and looked deep in his eyes

maan: agar phir se asey dekhaan gay toh khana phir jal jaya ga

geet looked away and maan backed up

tring tring (fonr ringing)

maan: helow

dadi: its me beta

maan: dadimaa where r u...

dadi: look i mite take long here as my freinds health is onli getten worse, i mite hve to take her to the docs

maan: i will cum there

dadi: nt at all... did u c the wheather outside it seems like it will rain any moment so plz dont go back to the hostel, and plz just dont leave the house under any cricumstances got that? and plus geet the poor gurl, i called her and nw i m nt dere for her... plz tell her i said sorri

maan: dadimaa ap geet ko sorri khahan gi...?

dadi: well wen a person is worng u hve to say sorii rite..

maan: yes i guess soo ... toh dadimaa tc of urself

dadi: yes u to and tc of geet okay... bye

geet: food is ready to be served and dat was dadimaa rite... is she on her way back home

maan: ummm, no actuly, her friends gone more sick and she was saying alot of geet dat tc of her and dont leave the hme as the wheather has gone reali bad... and did u say food is ready

geet: bt how can i stay here wid u alone?

maan: just the way v were a while bac... and dw, im nt like dat...

geet: bt--

maan: just shut up and cum lets eat

geet followed maan to the dinning table maan took his 1st bite geet looked at him awkardly...

geet: kasey hai?

maan: it is.....

geet: tell me already...

maan smiled: it is reali tasty... like yum

maan and geet started eating soon they were done and went to watch tv wid popcorn and pepsi

maan: so do u like to watch movies?

geet: yes i just love kuch kuch hota hai... dat my fav movie of all times

maan: reali, and look at this (maan pulls out a dvd)

geet exclamined in happness: kuch kuch hota hai...

maan smriked and put on the movie

and geet liped w/e kajol and srk would say

maan would look at this and he would laugh: plz geet stop it naa

geet: fi9 pass me the pepsi

maan was about to give it to her... wen he accidently spilled it on her clothes...

maan: oh i m sooo sorri

maan started wiping off the pepsi wid his hands in her lap... bt geet moved back

geet: it okay i think i will have to take a shower as this is getin stcik to my clothes and my skin i will just wear my clothes i bet they are dryed off my nw

geet went upstairs to take a shower... she wrapped a towel around wen the lites went out making her scared

geet: AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH

maan ran upstairs and knocked on her bathroom door: geet dont be worried it is okay...

geet tried opening the door bt cuz it was soo dark she banged her head in the wall: OCHHH

maan: geet wots happenin? at las maan breaked open the washroom door wid a hard pull and wid all the force geet was pushin the door trying to open it, she landed rite on maan and maan hit the floor

geets wet hair hit maan in the face

maan: geet are u okay

geet held maan titely and nervously said i m okay

maan: wots worng

geet: nuthing much, im just scared of the dark

maan: wait

maan tried gettin up bt geet was so stick to him:

maan: ek min geet

geet: nhai

maan finally pushed her off of him and stood up and geet huged him

maan: geet

geet: its okay we will walk together

maan: no it seems like we will hug and walk together

and geet didnt let go maan went a draw and lit a candle up and saw geet in a towel her wet hair was coverin her face maan put the candle on the table and slowly moved her hairs off of her face geet looked at maan deep in the eyes maan slowly moved his hand over her face and wid his index finger he moved dat on her head to the nose to the lips and slowly moved his finger around her lips, not even for a secound did geet blink her eyes, maan moved down towards her... and wid his lips he touched her... and den geet finally closed her eyes and they started off smoching... maan moved down to her neck to her shoulers to her hand

geet: maan

maan looked up at her: hmmm

geet moved a bit away

maan held her 4om the back and picked her up in his arms and took her to the bed and took his shirt up and slowly losened her knot on the towel...

(and den i suppose u guyz nw wot im trying to describe here rite??!!)

anyways i hope u guyz liked it, and plz comment! and this is for all the people who wanted me to update today... thanks for the gr8 incougrment... love u all! and yes if any1 wants me still to decribe wot happens next do rite and i may count wid veri this part other then moving straigth to the morning!! it ur choice... and yes thanks once again... <3

I have made the pm list on page 1, and if by mistake i missed ur name plz letme nw and i will add you.. thankss

owsm update i m wondering jst about nxt update😕

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