Taming The Wild 6 part-64 pg-139 17/10/10

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kuhu

@kuhus_era

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Posted: 15 years ago

#151

hey di.....
congo for the new thread .....
i know i m late infect veryyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy late but kya karun aapki is little devil ki life me bhi devils aagaye hain huh..... col walon ne nak me dam kar rakha he ..

now about the part it was ek dum mind blowing mera na aisa karna ko man kar raha tha
muze lag raha tha ki ab hoga confession ab hoga ab hoga aur ab hoga hote hote part hi and ho gaya .....

fir muze yad aaya ye to part 61 hi he confession 62 me...63 me... 64 me.... nhi to 65 me to hijayega ..... matlab diwali ke pehle ni hone doge aap confession (ab ek month me 1 hi update doge to yunhi hogana ??? par meri bat ko jada seriously mat lena aur confession September me hi karwa dena.... ok na )

aur mele almaan se ka dushmani hai sabki ?????
pehle vivek fir nikki aur ab rohan ..... aur to aur leo b nhi chodta mele ammy ko .....
sab peeche paden hain mele ammy baby ki love life ke ke huh gande sade log.....

and finally ridz ko pata hai ki armaan vivek ke baare me sab janta tha ... muze laga tha ki scene create karegi par chalo mere ammy ke pyar ne akal dal di thodi ridzz me ....
and that shayri and armaan's reaction was ..............
aur rohan janbhuj ke use confuse karta rehta hai ..... and mera ammy jealous hota rehta hai (ye keval aur keval mere ammy ke liye hai )

chalo mene itna bada comment diya aur itne pyar se likha he soch soch ke to jaldi se update dedo samze na ....

lots of love
muahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
aur ye blush nikki abhi wale part ke liye kyunki muze samza ni aaya ki kya comment karun

KUHU

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Ash1990

@Ash1990

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Posted: 15 years ago

#152

hi mansi part update karne me kafi der kar di 😔
bt the part is awsum mind blowing good how i said👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
n bechara armaan us ki to condition pe tars aarha he specialy when he said "sari hadian mere kabab me he dalni the" 😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆
plzzzzzzzzzz next part jaldi update kar dena plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz😊😊
😊

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ritu

@janu1610

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Posted: 15 years ago

#153

mansi mubaarak ho is naye thread ke liye.yaar comment update kiye hain page 10 pe .plz reply . I know me late lateef but kya karoon .in Armaan's words:........."main aisa hi hoon."
oyye main aise nahi hoon par kehne mein kya jata hai??????????😆
congrats again n do reply.

love
ritu

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nycla

@nycla

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Posted: 15 years ago

#154

Hi Mansi, I am pretty new to the site but very quickly got hooked to your ff! You are a great writer! I read everything in one go! I saw there is a part you did not post here with nikki/abhi -could you send it to me? I am over 18.

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Aditi Sharma

@ADITI.SHARMA_03

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Posted: 15 years ago

#155

the part was really very good but plzzzzzzz armann ko itna wait mat karao😭 bechara
hope riddhima confess soon,waiting for the update
and as usual u r a fab witer.😊

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prety_cool93

@prety_cool93

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Posted: 15 years ago

#156

mansi plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz jaldi update kar do.... =))

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mansibharti

@mansibharti

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Posted: 15 years ago

#157

Originally posted by: princess14
great update!!! loved every part of it!!! conitnue soon and i hope the wait is not so long this time!

hey dear thanks for the comment and yes hopefully this time the wait wont be for long planning and hoping for this weekend

Originally posted by: Black_beauty
Hey!!
The part was gr8!!
I love rohan.'he seems like armaan's duplicate when it comes to flirting!!: P
armaan and abhi back to fighting(for fun)is really funny!!
Poor rohan!!he's stuck in between them!!
eagerly waiting for armaan-riddhima confession!!

please update soon!!

hey dear, Rohan is yes. kind of, like armaan but he has a bit different story you'll know it in the coming part and dont worry the confession is not long now.. thanks for the comment

Originally posted by: sjain
very nice ...hope next time u update soonnnnnnnnnn

thanks yaar

Originally posted by: arshluver_15
Mansi
that was great part i truly loved it.....thanks dear.........but i don't like rohan man he is coming between armaan and ridhima and not letting them have their moment......actually he's stuck up big time and really in need of help .. everything will be clear in the next part dont worry he wont be the third angle between them..........i hope that armaan don't get all the wrong feeling from this new friendship of ridhima and rohan......well wont promise this 😉 but it will be all for the good.........now i cant wait till armaan confess his feeling for ridhima and they be together soon.........your wish is about to get fulfilled just little patience is all i ask for .............
thanks a lot for the pm no worries at all
cont soon trying to
lods of love to u 2 😃
nruti

Originally posted by: sasik
nice part.

Leo n Armaan part is hilarious.

hope Armaan's kabab mein haddi (rohan) don't bring any rift between AR.

Thanks for pm.

Update soon.

hey sasik thanks for the comment dont worry rohan is not the third angle he's just at the right time at all wrong places.. but everything is going to clear out soon 😃

Originally posted by: ..Rukz..
Hey Mansi,
I still havent read the AN part, hahaha, though you did PM me, but since I wanted an AR part and in this hope that you'd put it up soon, I kept on waiting and never read that part only and later, forgot I even had it. Im surely going to read that now soon and then comment. Coming onto today's part. It was awesome, as usual. But now, honestly, enough with Vivek, Rahul, Muskaan, BP Abhi, Nikki and just, everybody, and yeah, Rohan now too, though his character is irritably cute, still, I want the confession part now. Hahaha.. I hope the next one fulfills my wish.

Thanks for the update.
Hope to see the next one soon.

Rukz

hey ruks take your time that part wont effect the storyline anyway, i agree that there r too many haddis between AR😆 but you'll see that it'll all turn out to be for the good trust me it might seem like bit unnecessary but without this story wont progress i assure you that you will agree with me once you have read the confession part .. thanks a lot for the comment the next one is planned for the weekend .. hopefully 😉.. but umm sorry no confession in next one 😳

Originally posted by: sweetnirali
hey mansi !
Wow...u rocked once again as usual:)great part dear.
"Kabab mein haddiyan" dialogue was simply hillarious and so was his fight with poor leo and afterthoughts:)
I guess rohan and ridhhima teamed up to make him feel jealous and confess his love,right?:)but lets see,what u have u in store,but pls dear make their confession soon,its killling now:)

Thanks for the pm:)

inspired by u and many other great writers over here,i also thought of giving it a try with my amateur writing as i had some free time past few days,so if u or anyone here like to read my mini AR ffs,
"Waiting for "Mr. Wrong"
"Love is "BLIND"

i know i stand nowhere near u:)pls update soon:)

nirali my sweetheart how r you sorry , jyada late to nahi hua naa... thanks and glad you liked it.. i thought it might not be upto your expectations as i was writing after a long time i thought that i have kind of lost my touch.. i know you r waiting eagerly for the confession but you see everything will come step by step i cant rush into confession part so u have to bear a little more and plz dont kill me for this but there is no confession ion the next part 😛.. and hey i would love to read your story but havent given the links plz do put them i'll definitely read them and comment too ... 😃😃.. i'm sure they will be really nice read

Originally posted by: anumeha_rajat
diiiiiiiiiiii............
simply superb......amazing....
bechara armaan....everytym he wanna talk to her.....but dont get chance...
n malik - modi talk....the way both get irritated on rohan waking them up in morning...i love it.....
n rohan told eveerything to rids abt ammy knowing vivek n all....
i just love him for this....he did a gr888 job....
n ammy feeling her more close to him....
n leo n armaan scene was superb.....the way he was chasing n shouting on leo.....
i guess rohan likes swathi....n to win her heart...he is taking rids help...
n armi is geeting it it all in wrong way.....
ahaah...atleat may be he confess.....
lovely adorable part.....thnx alot.....
n yes...congrats for the new thread....
n thnx for the pm........

hey dear so glad that you liked it you r nearly right in some aspects but dont worry everything will be clear soon .... the next will be up soon ... thanks for the comment😃

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Heaven

@HeAvEnS

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Posted: 15 years ago

#158

hey Mansi di😛

nice part
liked it😃.
well love Rohan

but My My some one is bruning with "J"

i wonder how will he recat to know that Rohan like someone else hahaha can't wait to see when are they going to confess

long way we have came rather than you made us but i wonder di when are you planing to have the confession atleast give us a hint when ???

please dying to see the romantic moments ....

well glad ypu are planning to update soon

and Leo awww bechara..... Armaan recation is haliorus toward him now he is jelous that Rohan and leo are good on terms with each other i totally cracked up and my "gori" friend was looking at me if i had gone mad .....it was funny and u know glad that Vivek thing is clear up glad riddhima took it postivelly .....well thank you for that di

well i hope ypu are planning to drive all the hurdels away from them soon or i am planing to drive you mad with PM's Please i am dying to know what she will come to know from the diary that maybe all in hospital days can't wait actually i am really waiting like a mad person

and Sorry for not commenting before been busy ....shollly di

now please" UPDATEEEEEEE" dramatic way
keep continue
Thanks for the PM

lots of love .

Heaven

Pease jaldi se updae karooo

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jiku

@jiku

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Posted: 15 years ago

#159

hey mansi ,

nice part again ! new entry like the surprise ! but hope it won't make any barrier between ar relation! Lag to nahi raha!

Anyways thank u so much for such wonderful part!

Just eaglry waiting for confession! Update soon !

Again the part was amazed with some wonderful lines written by you!

Like the part between Leo & armaan ! hilarious !

I like the way armaan saying "biwi hai jo milti nahi aur kutta hai jo pechha chhodta nahi huh , kya hoga mera bhagwaan !? " ( I just imagined armaan's cute puppy face while saying this )

one more line i like which suit to every married man "it was just his insecure mind, working overtime."

In short again very good part with your amazing mind bogling dialoug.

Once agin thanks for giving this😊😊😊😊😊😊

Waiting for next .

Bye ,

Take Care

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mansibharti

@mansibharti

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Posted: 15 years ago

#160

Originally posted by: janu1610
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mansi to be honest this was a filler part for me.well you are not totally wrong this was kind of filler but it was something i cant avoid it has something to fo with the confession u c.... i mean nothing much happened . true nothing much happened but just wait for a while your wish will be fulfilled.i know its a rude comment but i think this is my duty to be honest while presenting my POV... and i fully appreciate it you can be totally honest with me, i agree i cant be perfect at all times and its only going to help me better the story so , thanks 😃
why this Rohit is coming in between this couple ? he cant help it dear he has a story too but i wont go into much details with that ir you guys will kill me 😆😉
i know he love some one n wanna Ridhima to help him to get that girl .And its not a big secret that can't be disclosed to Armaan.I dunno why but this was heights of stupidity ,to let him remain out of the picture. there is a reason for that too which will be explained in the coming part , its nothing much but still it'll add something to the story...Any way i was looking for confession.But now i think u wanna reveal his diary secrets first.though i m also desperate to know him better but still waiting for a
hearty confession. i know dear but plz dont kill me for this there is no confession in this coming part too.. shorry 😳
i know its your ada to tadpao readers 😆 nd i m tadaping here😉

not intentionally😆
tadap tadap ke is dil se aah nikalti rahi...
mujh ko saza di wait ki ,kyun aise kya gunah kiya ???
ke loot gayye hum AR ki mohabat mein?😳

waah waah what shayars i have here , they r excellent at stealing oh no getting inspired from other people 😉😆

plz update soon.
thanks for pm.
love
ritu.

love u too and thanks a lot for an honest comment😃

Originally posted by: sonia-kashian
wonderful update. loved it completely.
abhi-armaan-rohan was very nice.
poor armaan was being tortured by everyone from rohan to leo. poor soul.
happy that finally ridz came to know everything abt vivek part.
loved AR scenes and arman's jealousy for rohan.
waiting for next part..

hey Sonia seeing u after a long time... glad you liked the part the next will be, hopefully, up soon . thanks for the comment😃

Originally posted by: basumandira80
Mansi gr8 part...
Armaan Leo part was hilarious...was in splits...poor Armaan, kyon pareshan karta hai Leo isko itna... 😆
And bechara Armaan... Rohan the kebab mein haddi.... awwwwww....
Cant wait for the AR confession.... thanks a lot for the PM... hopefully the next wait wont be this long...

hey mandira, glad you like the part wasn't expecting much from it though , i know you all are waiting for the confession ...working on the next part... thanks for the comment dear

Originally posted by: Sweet_Ashum
" Leeoo you kutte ke bachhe !! "
Armaan ran after him and in the process slipped on the floor landing on his bums shouting again " Leeoo give me back my shoe kutte.."
" Apne leo baby ko khila do, us bhukkad ko..."
Wah kya baat hai ! ab kutte se bhi pyaar karna padega, biwi hai jo milti nahi aur kutta hai jo pechha chhodta nahi huh , kya hoga mera bhagwaan !? "
" Hey sadu." Rohan teased scratching Leo's ear who had his tongue out as if mocking at Armaan
Armaan burned further not only he was claiming Ridhhima but even his dog, the never ever loyal Dog- kutta kahin ka, Leo, was now on his side.
their friends... Girlfriends. Ridhhima narrowed her eyes at this to which Armaan tried to save himself by making a sweet face, threatening Rohan to stop or he'll kill him.
" saari haddiyan mere hi kabab main dalni thi ?

My fav parts in the part!!!!
I looooooooved the whole part
also the bit where Rohan was flirting with Swati
N I'm waiting sooooooooooo eagerly for the next part coz ye slow coaches ne ab tak confess nahi kiya
*exhales loudly* Kab karenge?????n Congooooo for the 6th thread Chief!

Thanks for the PM di
Take care
Love,
Ashu

hello my little vampie... so loved the part... 😳.. happy to know... the slow coaches r still on the way and wont reach the station in the next part too... sorry to make you wait a little more but dont worry .. ab Delhi duur nahi 😉.. be ready to surprised in any of the part till 65. thanks for the comment dear 😃

Originally posted by: anushkajain
hey di nice part ...... specially the cute fight between armaan n leo over shoes loved it ...............hope to see more romance between AR IN NEXT PART....... this part WAS lack of their moments so i m lil bit disappoint abt it.........hope to get next part soon eagerly waiting 4 it.........love u ,tc

hey anushka.. seeing the battalion eager for the AR moments i have put some in the next one... hope that cools down you a little as their is no confession in the next one too... but its going to come soon just haven't decided the part number yet , not later than 65.. thanks for the comment dear 😃

Originally posted by: aanchal_c
yaar yeh kya rohan ne saari gadbad kar di.plz plz inka confession jaldi rakhna aur bahut passionate rakhna.

hey aanchal.. ab confession hai to sahi but how it is that i leave up to you... and dont worry about rohan you will be blessing him later on 😉, thanks for the comment

Originally posted by: ahenseven
Hey that was a lovely part .. Continue sooooooon .. Waiting for the confession .. Love neha :)

hey neha , thanks for the comment 😃

Originally posted by: diyaa1pk
ATLAST ........thank u mansii ...u gav dosage just in time nai tou mera kya hota😉...aabb meri sansein sahi chal rehhi hain ...heart b normal rat per beat kar reha hai ...OMG ....im an addict .....all cuz of u ...😆😆, aww so glad to see that you are alright how can i make you suffer hmm, so finally i'm back at my fav place with my fav people😃😃😃 and about being an addict well.. i dont mind that i have plenty of dosage to give to you 😉
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...iss baar tou bht wait karaya ....... aisa kyun...you know the reason naa yar...yaad nai aati hmarriii.....aati hai naa bahut aati hai
hamein tarpa kr bht maza aaya ...well thoda sa to aaya 😆 .karle tu jitnay sitam...per dheit(stubbrn) baray hain hum..pecha na chorein ge hm ...mansi ttw ki qasam ...😆😆oh my god maine to sabko kavi banna diya...

khair ...now da real thing ......ye update likhtay v ...tm kiyya soch rehhi thi ....hmarri jaan lene ka irada tha ....perh kr itna pait main dard hua ...jitna apnay bnai hue pakoray khanay ke baad b nai hua .....😆 😆 well mujhe lagaa paet ki thodi exercise honi chahiye naa isliye yeh waala part daal diya ab saare keede mar gaye honge, itna hilne ke baad 😆

😆LEO KUTTAY K BACHAY🤣
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it was so hilarious.... bechara armaan ....us ko kya pata ....HADDIYAN GOD NE NAHI MANSI NE DALEIN HAIN USS KE KEBAB MAIN ..well ab main apni taarif kya karu 😳😳....
evn im curious to know wat else iz in armaans lokr...wo sab next part main pataa chal jayega..

HAS RIDDHIMA TAKEN DETECTIVE LESSONS FRM VINI😃

if yes thn she will succeed in hr mission 'armaan ko jano aur pataoo'... i really think so she's too good at this ,, the female sherlock 😆

hope to c more funfilled updates SOON.... umm i'll try next waala to thoda senti types hai, bade papad belne pade isko likhne main 😕.

nd dis tym it shld be vry SOON
trying yaar

take care u too and thanks a lot for these super lovely words 😳😃

bye shy

Originally posted by: bueaty
nice part... ridz shuld think of armaan and give him time... rohan..whn will he go 😲
eagerly waiting fr the confession part..
plz pm me the nxt update.. i didnt get one fr this one.. 😔

hello dear.. dont worry about rohan and he'll be here for some time... the confession is about to come soon . i did send you the buddy request hope you got it by now and you'll surely get the pm for the next part. thanks for the comment 😃

Originally posted by: sjain
just want to say ..I luved arm leo more then arm ridz in this part...ROFL..wat unique relation they share .."kutta kahin ka"...LOLZZZZ

hope to see more AR scn and conversation in next part...

i see that Leo has increasing fan following, what do you think i should pair up Armaan with leo rather than ridhhima 😉😆😆.. okay i think I'll drop this idea if i want to live for some more time 😆.. there are some AR scenes in the next one not much though but i hope u like it.. thanks for the comment 😃