Hi Mansi,
Ok , I am back, 1st of all correction please, it was 23 pages back to back & not 18 pages, hats off to you for writing so much
Also, this part was very informative, you have done so much research on all those medical jargons & symptons, it was really nice to read. Now, Arman's problem can be resolved soon (hopefully)
I also loved that you did make Ridz realise that she was avoiding Arman or giving him wrong signals by being with Rohan, that way she could understand bit of Arman's mood off's
I loved the way you had streched the mis-understanding, from Arman avoiding her calls, avoiding her at home, then the party & little talk before the party, then at the party, I was on the edge of my chair the whole time, that ok, ab.... bas ab.....but nope everything was smooth, till the time Ridz saw those Divorce papers & her world came shattering down, then our hero came to the rescue, I was doubtful if she would confess her feelings towards him, Ridz ka koi barosa nahi :))
Finally they confessed their love to each other....am very happy....
Now Angie in hospital, think this would help Arman's problem's as well, can't wait to read the next update, but would surely like to give you a break for sometime now, you deserve it!
Congrats on the new thread!!!
Edited by Jodubai - 14 years ago
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