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Posted: 19 years ago
thanks a lot ppl...yaar main kia karoon exams annay walay hain ab main kia karoon! 😭 😭 😭
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ppl should i continue TERE LIYE and KPK here??
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Posted: 19 years ago
nahin nahin sirf yahi story idherr likhna koi aur nahin
plzzz plzzz
aur haan agay tu likho
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yaaar jaldi continue kero i m waiting... 😭
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ok ok imaan ronna nahi karti hoon post!!!
Veena: NAHI HAI YEH MERA BETA!!!
Everyone looks at her, shocked at what she is saying
Sujal: mumma yeh ap kia keh rahi hain?
Veena: matt bula mujhey tu mumma....haan yeh sach hai keh main ne tujhey janam diya hai, main hi teri maa hoon lekin tu mera beta ho hi nahi sakta
Prerna: eyh tum kai keh rahi ho Veena?
Veena: haan Prerna...yeh mera beta nahi ho sakta...yeh woh Sujal nahi ho sakta jo scah ka saath deta aya hai, yeh mera beta Sujal nahi ho sakta jiss ne kabhi mere aggay apni awaz oonchi nahi ki...yeh woh Sujal nahi ho sakta jo jhoot ke khilaaf kharra hota hai....iss ne aj apnay pyaar ke liye apni hi behen per haath uthaya hai...uss pyaar ke liye jo aj ghalat hai
Tears are falling from Sujal's eyes....he looks at Veena with hurt look
Sujal:sach kaha ap ne...main ap ka beta nahi ho sakta...agar ap meri maa hoti to aj ap apni aik beti ke liye apni doosri beti per ghalat ilzaam na lagati...Kashish ko beti banaya tha na ap ne...ap to woh hain an mumma jo meri ankhon main dekh ker mera dukh dard pehchaan leti thi...phir aj meri woh mumma kahan gayi hain? kyun nahi dekh pa rahi ap ke Kasak ko ghalat fehmi hui hai
Kashish: haan mumma...yeh scah hai...main ne kuch ghalat nahi kiya...main ooper apnay jootay change kerney gayi thi...wahan aik damm se lights off ho gayi aur koi mere kamray main aya...mujhjey laga Sujal hai lekin woh Rishi tha...uss ne aker kamra lock kia...jab takk woh mere samnay na aya mujhey nahi pata chala ke woh Sujal nahi hai...
Kasak: bass!!! kitna jhoot bolain gi.....ab maan lijiye ke ap ne Rishi ko mohra banaya apnu hawas ke liye...
Aik aur thapar Kasak ke moun per Sujal ki taraf se
Sujal: SHUT UPP!! just shut up....ab aik lafaz tum bolo aur main bhool jaon ga ke tum meri behen ho...aik damm chup...dekh rhai hain ap mumma kitni gandi bata akr rahi hai yeh Kashish ke barray main
Veena: Sujal!!! tu yeh kia kar raha hai.....apni hi behen per haath uthata hai koi? aur haan....Kasak ko beyshak koi ghalatfehmi hui hogi lekin yeh bhool ja tu ke Rishi aur Kasak ka rishta tootay ga kyunki yeh Lalit ka faisla hai...aur iss gahr main un ka kiya hua faisla koi nahi torta...samjha tu
Tears keep on falling from his eyes...Sujal
Sujal: theek hai...to kijiye jo dil main ata hai...jo chahye keriye lekin aik baat yaad rakhiye...ap aur ap ki yeh beti...(oints his finger at Veena and Kasak)..poori zindagi pashtayen gay ke ap ne Kasak ki zindagi tabah ki hai aur yeh baat aj hi bata deta hoon main.....
Veena: hum jo kar rahay hain soch samajh ker hi kertey hain...
Sujal: to kijiye na...lekin jahan takk mera sawal hai to mjhey nahi lagta keh main ab idhar reh sakta hoon...
Everyone is shocked
Sujal: jee haan...jiss ghar main meri aur meri patni ki izzat nahi ki jati...jahan mhumari baat ki qadar nahi hai aur jahan mere pyaar per meri patni per itnay ghatia ilzaam lagaye jattay hain...main wahan nahi reh sakta..main aur Kashish aj yeh ghar hamesha ke liye chor ker ja rahay hain!
Veena: Sujal...eyht u kia keh raha hai...gahr chor ker kahan jaye ga?
Sujal: jahan bhi jaon...bass ab yahan nahi reh sakta....itna yaad rakhiye ga ke aj yahan se jattay huay main iss Sujal ko martay huay ja raha hoon....ab ap logon ka kisi Sujal naami banday se koi taluq nahi hai kyunki aj iss gahr se Sujal ka naam hamesha ke liye mitt jaye ga
Varrun: Big B ap yeh...
Sujal: BASS!!! ab nahi....ab koi na to mujhey rokkay ga aur na koi mujh se iss barray main koi baat karay ga...yeh mera akhri faisla hai...logon ki tarah anhi hoon main...mera daira dastoor ahi keh apnay faislon main main logon ki fikar nahi karta...aur Kashish, na sirf meri patni hai balkay meri zimadari hai aur iss zimadari ko main bakhubi nibhaon ga...
Prerna: Sujal....tum yeh bhool rhaya ho ke Kashish pregnant hai..uss ka akeley khyal tum kaisey rakho gay?
Sujal: haan....Kashish maa bananay wali ahi...aur iss liye mujh per do zimadarian hain ....ap fikar na karain main Kashish ka aur apnay bachay ka poora khyal rakhoon ga...aik afsos hi arhaya ga ke mere bachay ko dada dadi ka pyaar hi nahiu millay ga...(more tears)
Veena is also crying and so is, as a matteer of fact, everyone
Sujal: Challo Kashish!
He takes her arm and drags her to their room...she follows quitely...after abut 15 minute sthey both come down, hand in hand, with suitcases in their hand
Sujal comes and stands in front of Veena
Sujal: ja raha hoon mumma....ap hamesha kehti thi ke kehtay hain main ja ker ata hoon...lekin iss baar keh raha hoon main ja raha hoon kyunki ab main wapis nahi aonga...kabhi nahi..yeh file hai na..iss main RNG ke sarray papers, sab contracts ki details hain....aur mere MD honay ke certificate bhi...sab ap ke hawalay ker ke ja raha hoon kyunki ab iss sab per mujhey koi haq nahi hai...
Veena is still crying...Sujal and Kashish take her blessings
Sujal and Kashish meet Varrun, hug him
Kashish meets Mehek
Kashish: sorry Mehek...tumahri engagement per yeh sab...apna khyal rakhna...aur mere iss devar ka bhi..
Kashish then meets Gunn, Akshat and Prerna
Prerna: Kashish..tum donon humaray saath aker reh saktay ho
Kashish: nahi mumma...ab to jahan Sujal le ker jaye ga whaiin ajon gi ap fikar na karain...
They take her blessings and are abt to leave when Kashish stops
Kashish: aik minute Sujal... (she wipes away her tears)
She goes over to where Veena is standing
Kashish: mumma....mumma please aik baar meri taraf dekh lain...aik akhri baar
Veena looks up at her...Kashish hugs her
Kahsish: ap ne mera bhut khyal rakha hai...thanks a lot mumma...aur haan....
Kashish Veena ka haath leti hai aur uss main ghar ki chabian deti hai
Kashish: ab iss per mera koi haq nahi hai...agar koi ghalti hui ho to mauf ker dijiye ga...apna khyal rakhna...aur papa ka bhi!
Without meeting Kasak she goes to where Sujal is standing, crying with tears
Kashish: chalay Sujal?(she says while crying)
Sujal looks up at her and takes her by teh arm by puting hsi arm around her shoulder...and then tehy step over the household, forever...uss gahr ko chor ker jahan itnay rishtay thay...chor ker chal diye!!!
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Sujal aur Kashish hamesha ke liye Garewal Mansion se nikaltay hain apnay samaan ke saath...Donon ki ankhon main ansoo hain...woh chup chap apnay samaan ko garri main rakhtay hain aur apni personal garri main Sujal Kashish ke saath bethta hai
Kashish uss ke haath per haath rakhti hai...to give him support
Kashish: kahan jayen gay Sujal?
Sujal: tum fikar na karo....aj ke liye to farmhouse janna parray ga...mera aik apartment hai jahan kal shift ho jayen gay...
Kashish: reh apo gay sab se door?
Sujal: rehna parray ga Kashish...kyunki ab in ke beghair rehna mujhey gawwara hai lekin in ke saath rehna bardasht nahi hota
Tears fall from Sujal's eyes on Kashish's hands
Kashish: nahi Sujal...agar tumhain lagta hai ke tumne sahi faisla kiya ai to yeh ansoo kyun?
Sujal: kabhi socha bhi nahi tha ke yeh din bhi ayega....
Yeh keh ker he starts the car and travels towards his farmhuse....pooray rastay donon khamosh bethtay hain...khamosh hain lekin donon aik doosray ka dard samjathay hain...donon ki ankhain namm hai aur donon apnay khyalon main hain
Farmhouse pohnach ker woh log andar jattay hain...aur samaan ke saath...apnay naye gahr main..
Samaan kamray mein rakhnay ke baad Kashish bed banati hai
Kashish abhi bed bana rahi hoti hai with tears in her eyes when she sees Sujal...Sujal window ke samnay kharra hai with one arm on teh wall and on his waits...as our sujal usually stands..
Kashish sab kuch chor ker uss ke saath kharri hoti hai aur uss ke bazoo per haath rakhta hai
Sujal uss ki taraf dekhta hai...uss ki ankhon main ansoo hain aur chehray per udaasi
Kashish uss ke chehray ko haathon mein leti hai...Sujal chehray per rakha Kashish ka haath pakarta hai
Sujal: kia hua yeh Kashish...yeh sab aik dumm se...?
Kashish: qismat Sujal...qismat ka khel hai sab...shayed humari qismat hi un ka itna saath likha tha
Sujal: kabhi sapnay main bhi nahi socha tha ke mumma mere saath aissa kerain gi...
Tears fall more from his eyes
Sujal: janti ho Kashish...aj takk main ne mumma ki harr baat manni hai..woh meri taqat banti ayi hain aj takk...lekin aj unhon ne hi meri himmat ko torr diya..
Kashish: main samajh sakti hoon Sujal...akhir woh meri bhi to Mumma thi...
Kashish starst crying with hiccups...Sujal looks at her...aur phir donon hug kertey hain....aik doosrey ke dukh dard ko samjhanay ke bawajood uss ko mitanay ka koi raasta nazar nahi ata
Kashish Sujal ko hug kerti hai aur uss ke kandhay per sarr rakh ker sab dukh dard bolti jati hai
Kashish: (still hugging) Sujal...mainn ne...main ne...main ne kuch nahi kiya...Kasak ghalat soch rahi hai...Mumma bhi to meri baat nahi manti...kyun kia aissa? kyun hua aissa humaray saath?...aj to party thi na...humaray bachay ke annay ki khushi main...ab to woh khushi bhi hum apnay parivaar ke saath baant nahi saktay...kyun? kyunnnnn? uhuhuh...(crying)
Sujal pats her head...phir uss ka chehra apnay samnay la ker sab ansoo saaf karta hai aur Kashish ko bed per bithata hai aur khud Kashish ki godd main sarr rakhta hai...(like he does with Veena in KTH)
Sujal: Kashish...aj jo hua so hua..lekin amain anhi chahta ke yeh sab dobara ho...issi liye aj tumharay liye duniya se larr ker aya hoon...un logon se larr ker aya hoon jin se main en beyhad pyaar kia hai...lekin mujhey afsos sirf iss baat ka hai keh Mumma ne huamra yaqeen nahi kia...lekin bass...ab nahi...ab na to humara un se koi rishta hai...na hum un se millain ga na hi un se koi rishta nahi hai humara...uss Rishi ko to main chorron ga nahi aur Mumma Kasak ki zindagi barbaad ker rahi hain...lekin insan ghaltions eseekhta hai aur main ne seekha hai keh kabhi kisi per andha vishwas nahi karna chahiye..aur Kasak bhi yeh baat seekhay gi...tum se main yeh nahi keh raha ke tum apna natta torro un se...
Kashish: kia.??? kia kaha tum ne? Sujal agar tum mere liye un se sarray rishtay torr saktay ho, larr saktay ho to main tumharay liye un se natta nahi torr sakti? kyun bhool rahay ho tum ke tumhara adrd mera dard hai...lekin tum yeh baat nahi samjho gay
Kashish gets up and goes to stadn by the door, crying and hurt
Sujal walks up to her
Sujal: Kahsish.....i am sorrry
Kashis looks at him ith tears
Sujal: in ansoon se mujhey sab se ziada takleef hota hai lekin in ka sabab bhi main hi bann jata hoobn...i am sorry..main yeh sab kehna nai chahta tha
Kashish: kehney ki zaroorat hai?
Sujal looks at her and they both hug...then Sujal kisses her on the forehead
Sujal: ab to uun ke beghair hi jeena hai...iss liye main chahta hoon ke jiss tarah woh humain bhool jayen gay ussi tarah um bhi apni zinagi alag se shurro kerein...jiss zindagi main sirf hum donon ki jagah hai..kisi aur ki nahi...aur main eyh bhi chahta hoon ke hum khsuhi khushi rahoon....aur khaas torr per tum...na koi tension lo, na hi koi pareshani...takkay meri Kashish hamesha mera pyar, meri patni aur meri himmat bann ker merey saath rahay
Kashish: aur mera Sujal hamesha mere saath mera pati, mera pyaar, meri zindagi bann ke raho!
SHe smiels a small smile and then they both hug again!!!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
hey M.J kiran did u get PM from dina?????? about the story
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Posted: 19 years ago
no i dint...why amby what was written in it??
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Posted: 19 years ago
btw main ne kal tere liye ka turning point aur climax scene dekha..its great..u will love it!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
good part M.J kiran c im the 1st 1 to reply

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