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Posted: 14 years ago
No plsssssssssssssssss I love youR FF please....................Please dont end.........Please i loved all your Updates till now and i commented also..pls and will cooment..pls dont end ...😭
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Posted: 14 years ago
next update will be here
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i will cont my FF's at the address above if i have readers
do tell me ...
i had enough over here
i love you all allot will cont here if you all want

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: puja360

noooo plzzzzz i love ur ff i im srry i dont comment plzzz update i love u ff

thx dear i love you too
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: maangeetcrazy

No plsssssssssssssssss I love youR FF please....................Please dont end.........Please i loved all your Updates till now and i commented also..pls and will cooment..pls dont end ...😭

not at all ending FF's
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Posted: 14 years ago

Early next morning

Maan: woke up saw his Janu Manu sleeping peacefully in his arms.." my life" k*** her forehead..

Geet: murmur "don't move hold him more tight"

Maan: "you sleep i will work out "

Geet: "bola na don't move aik dafa kia baat samajh nai aati"

Maan: looked at her in bit shocked."are you ok"

Geet: "yes talking in your tone"

Maan"oh mera Janu Manu in naughty mood" move curls from her face

Geet; jee nai

Maan: phir

Geet: bus i don't want you to move a inch...

Maan: Geet it is 7

Geet: so what? replied from closed eyes

Maan:i have to go to office

Geet: chup aik dum chup....

Maan: Geet... bit loud

Geet: shhhhh baby will be scared

Maan:couldnot stop smiling " sorry baby but you mama is impossible some time"

Geet: what i have done bola bola ? suddenly got up pull her sleeves up

Maan: uff Mrs Geet Maan you are too laraka

Geet: Maan , beat him with pillow..

Maan: try to free him self

Geet go i am not talking to you... again slept pull blanket over her face

Maan: tickle her feet but she didnot reply.. he walk to freshen up . walk out for room

Geet: oye he didnot talk to me, theek ha i will too not talk to him now

Maan: heard her voice out side the door.he walk to work out..

Geet: for some time waited but at last got up walk to wash room ... walk out

Maan: grab her you were saying you wanted to sleep more

Geet: but you

Maan:what me?

Geet: didn't let me

Maan: but i didn't ask you to get up.

Geet: shyly i can't sleep without your presence ..

Maan: why you didn't said that? looked in her eyes

Geet: is it must to say every thing

Maan: hug her" i am sorry"

Geet: its ok

Maan: aggar kabhi mein na hoon tou... whisper

Geet: shhhh you will always be with me.hide her self in his arms

Maan:meri janu manu k**** her

Geet: shyly go change we have to reply their questions.

Maan: had a laughter "yes" peak & walked to wash room..


they walk together to hall...

Geet: hi everyone.....no body replied.... both looked at each other

Maan: dadi how are you?

Dadi: fine... Pari give me paper

Geet: why you all are angry from me?it is all his fault, he drag me out of the party..

Maan: oh you are blaming me you said to me take me home at once..

Geet looked at Maan in surprise...

Vicky : dadi i am going to dr ... walked with a stick..

Geet: what happen to you?

Vicky: do i know you?

Geet: bahut hogai tumhari nautanki, bolo yeh kya ha.. she sit on floor to see .. "aahh"

Maan: kya huwa. just kneel down.

Dadi: aaram se

Vicky : quickly are you ok bhabi .. sit on floor at once..Pari & dev left their seat.

Geet: hold Vicky ears... Tit for tat... winked..everyone had a laughter

Maan: pat at her shoulder " pagal ha yeh bhi" help her getting up.

Pari: now open your bandages , dumb it took hour to warp it...

Maan: "know you guys got why i selected her? she is just perfect.."

Geet: bus kara..whisper

Dadi: you and your mischiefs my naughty kids

Vicky:had a long face

Geet: whats wrong you?

Pari: "dadi papa called he asked me to come back home"walk to her room

Maan whisper "that is the cause "

Geet: dadi it does not look nice i & Maan will go to drop her.

everyone shocked

Dadi: per beta you can't travel

Geet: dadi dr will be with me , aur Maan tou ha saath,

Maan: but office

Geet: dev & vicky will look after it

Maan: but

Geet: are you coming or not , or i hire another driver.... walk behind Pari

Maan:dadi why she is getting so short temper.. worried

Dadi: hota ha beta... her mood swings.

Maan: dadi stop her

Dadi : we all will go accept Vicky

Vicky: why not me?

Dev: it does not look nice..dhula raja

Vicky : then you also dont go...

Dadi stop it...

in Pari room

Geet: why are you that down?

Pari: bhabi hug her

Geet: what happen?

Pari: my parents had found some one for me...

Geet: what?

Pari: for my marriage

Geet: how it can be possible?

Pari: every thing is possible in my natives

Geet: did you told this to Vicky?

Pari: no

Geet:hmmm

Pari: "why bhabi we can't marry who we love? why our parents make it a ego problem?why cast & religion become a problem?...is Vicky not a human being.. bhabi he loves me, care for me, understand me .more than

any body in this world .

Geet: bas Pari don't lose hope

Pari: "bhabi how my parents are that sure the guy they have selected for me will love me.or care for me... some time i pray to lord why you made us fall for some one if they are not in Our fate"

Geet: that is the test ...

Pari: what test bhabi?

Geet: wipe her tears..."lets see how we can help you"

Pari: what will you do?

Maan: enter " we will go with you"

Geet: smiled at Maan.

Pari: what will you do?

Geet: you don't know Mr & Mrs Maan Singh Khurana they can do any thing.

Pari : at last smiled

Maan: ok girls get ready we will leave after 2hours ...

Pari: engagement is day after tomorrow .

Geet: how that fast?

Pari: i don't know

Maan: dont sit like that.. do packing

Geet: oh yes...she walk to bed room with Maan"what we will do?"

Maan: pata nai

Geet: he still does not know any thing

Maan: hmmm...your mind work very fast why don't you think

Geet: What do you mean by that? look at him in anger

Maan:uff babji meri ghusa wali biwi.. copied geet

Geet; Maan patted him

Maan: tell me what to pack

Geet: you go i will manage it ...

Maan: i am taking risk Geet

Geet: kuch nahi hoga.. she packed with help of Maan.

Vicky : knocked

Geet: yes.. she was surprised to see him as he never knocked at there door

Vicky: bhabi

Geet: yes kya baat ha

Vicky: ask him to let me join you guys

Geet: looked at Maan: dear you are coming with us , with out you what is the use of going , tumhara bhai kai shadi karwani ha kya...

Vicky :but bhai said..

Geet:let him say who listen to him.wicked at Vicky.

Maan: acha theek ha Geet.. wrap his arm around his chest sit

Geet: oh mera shona wala baby naraz hogaya

Vicky: smiled '& went out

Maan: Geet if we are unable to convince them then?

Geet: if their love is pure they will together .. hug him

to be cont.. sorry for late up date i had fever .. Eid mubarak

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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome part di!!!
Hope you are better now!!!


EID MUBARAK TO YOU TOO 🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
eid mubarak dear and awesome update... i see something fishy is going to happen...
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Posted: 14 years ago
excellent update
naddiya
get well soon dear
Eid Mubarak
Continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
excellent update pls cont soonnnnnnnnn i hope get well soonnnnn
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome too gud...pls continue soon...

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