A DUKE AND A DUCHESS' STORY - Page 35

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Posted: 14 years ago
diiiiiiiiiii!!!!!!!!!!! um so glad dat u finally updated this ff!!!!😊😊😊 the part was lovely......um eagerly waiting for da wedding to take place.........hmmm riddhima's bro is here too......lets see wat happens....eagerly waiting for da next part.....plz do continue soon....

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Posted: 14 years ago
luved it n u added maan singh khurana also luvvvvvvvvv u for it n nice name ridhim
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Posted: 14 years ago
punam,i loved your ff :D
its awesome fantastic
especially your writing style...Hinglish <3
its adorable 😳

loved all the parts..just read all of them today :P

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Posted: 14 years ago
Hiiiiii sweetie
Pls update soon
Missing ur ff
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Posted: 14 years ago
just read all parts of ur ff its awesome loved it can't wait more plz update super soon plz add me to ur pm list MONIKA
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Posted: 14 years ago
sorry friends,i know i am very late...but promise now i will ud regularly....plz.read it in ur free time...hope you will like it....love..
punam
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RECAP

Muskan :" tu arman ko chahti hai na?....tu apni marzi se saadi kar rahi hai na?...
Riddhima :" haan…of course…..mai arman ko bahut chahti hun…..muskan bata na kya baat hai?....

Muskan :" wo…wo….wo…………
Riddhima (worried) :" muskan plz.bata kya baat hai….tu itna ghabrai keun hai?.....
Muskan (dheere se): " riddhym bhaiya aayen hain…tumse milna chahte hain?........


NOW...segment---38.

Riddhima toh shayad riddhym ko bhul hi gayi thi!!…..arman ke pyar ne ushe sab kuch bhula diya tha!!….lekin riddhym ko ushne kaise bhula diya ?...itni selfish toh wo kabhi nahi thi!!……

Muskan boley ja rahi thi….:" wo tere liye hi wapus aaya hai riddhima…tujhe yaad hai na…ushne jaane se pahle tujhse promise kiya tha……….

Riddhima: "…………"

Muskan :" sorry riddhima….maine ushe tere aur arman ke baarey mein bataney ki bahut koshish ki….but tera naam lete hi wo teri baaten karne lagta….apne meethi yadon mein doob jata…tujhse kiye hue promise ko dohrata……..feer mujhse kuch kahte nahi banta……….

Riddhima questioned :" kya ushe kuch bhi pata nahi?....
Muskan : "wo janta hai teri saadi ho chuki hai….but itna pata hai tuney wo saadi majburi mein ki thi………
Riddhima : "wo kahan hai?....
Muskan :" ghar par hai….but thori der mein hospital aayega…tujhse milne….
Riddhima(like helpless):" ab mai kya karun?....
Muskan :" ek kaam kar riddhima…tu aaj ghar chali ja…mai dr.aditi ko bata dungi teri achanak tabiyat kharab ho gayi….aur tujhe ek din time mill jayega..khud ko sambhalne ka….
Riddhima tensed :" mai usse kya kahungi muskan?..

Muskan( held her hand): "ghabra mat riddhima…sab thik ho jayega…hum sab friends ushe samjhayenge…..
Riddhima (with tears in eyes): "sorry, muskan……..
Muskan :" sorry keun?...mera bhai hai ishliye?.....ye toh kismat ka khel hai riddhima jo tu arman ki bani…..hum yahan kuch nahi kar saktey…ye ushka faisla hai….wo god hi humari jodi banakar bhejta hai….ok..bye…riddhima…ghar chali ja….


***YADEN***

( when riddhym was in 9th standered and riddhima was in 6th)

Riddhym:" hi,miss ..mai riddhym…unfortunately ish chipkilli ka bhai…
Riddhima :" mera naam riddhima hai….
Riddhym(smartly):" haan ,mai yahi puchne aaya tha…tumne mera naam churaya keun?....waise mai girls se baat nahi karta……….

Muskan (trying to save riddhima):" dekh riddhym…tu mujhe parsaan karta hai thik hai…but riddhima ko chor dey…nahi toh mai dadi se kah dungi….

Riddhym(mischieviously) : "mai teri buddhi dadi se darta hun kya?
Muskan : "shitt!!..dadi ko buddhi kahta hai?..
Riddhym :" budhiya ko aur kya kahun?...
Muskan: "huh!!...tujhse baten karna hi bekar hai……
Riddhym : "toh mat kar..waise mai bhi girls se baten karna like nahi karta………..
Muskan : "chal riddhima…….


At canteen

Muskan : "dekha na…mera bhai kitna badtameej hai……
Puja:" wo tera bhai hai muskan……….
Muskan : "toh kya hua?…..
Rahul : "ye tera bhai achanak paida kahan se hua?..

Muskan : "arey! Rahul…tujhe kya hua tha…kuch deen se school nahi aaya?....
Rahul :" wo mai nani ke ghar gaya tha…bata na..ye bhai ka chakkar..
Muskan : "arey…wo mere uncle(barey papa ) ka ladka hai….kuch deen pahle meri aunt ki death ho gayi…uncle ka autralia mein apna business hai…toh dadi ma ne ishe apne paas bula liya….ab ye humare saath hi rahega aur meri jaan khayega………
Atul :" hi everybody…..how are u?....kal se 1st unit test start…padhai ki ya nahi?...any problem?..
Muskan : "haan atul..thori problem …

Riddhym (from back):" tujhe sharam nahi aati?...apna bhaiya rahte dusre se help leti hai?...
Muskan :" bhaiya?..my foot!....tu kabse bhaiya ban gaya?...mai kabhi tujhe bhaiya nahi kahungi..samjha!!…bachpan se naam lekar pukarti rahi aur aaj bhaiya…………huh!!! ..aur tu padhayega mujhe?..chal mujhe biology mein problem hai..padhayega?...

Riddhym: "bio??...wo bekar subject mai nahi padhata….koi achcha sa I mean literature sub. ho toh mujhe kahna……..bio!!huh!!...most bakwas subject!!........

He left the canteen……………

Muskan : "dekha! Ushe bhagane ka yahi ek tarika hai….jab bhi aaye…koi science group ki subject samjhane ko kaho…gayab ho jayega……..
Abhi : "keun?....
Muskan : "actually he likes literature …..and he sings mindblowing………ushe bara hokar singer banna hai……and sabse bari baat…he likes old songs and classical based songs…..
Atul :" I like classical songs…and I think riddhima too…..kabhi kahna muskan ushe sunane ko…………
Muskan : "1 month baad hi toh cultural function hai…dekhna wo jarur gayega………..


……………….
Riddhima is sitting in the garden and trying to colour a pic which she made last night………..
Riddhim :" hi…bhootni……

Riddhima turned towards him but nothing said………….

Riddhim:" hey…senior ke call per answer dena chahiye…samjhi………
Riddhima :" mera naam bhootni nahi riddhima hai……….
Riddhim :" ok..ok…kya kar rahi ho dekhun…..wow!! very nice pic….tumne banaya?…..

Riddhima nodded her head…………..

Riddhima : "then u are in my group….. u like classical songs?

Riddhima nodded her head…………

Riddhima (happily): "chalo ..koi toh samajhdar mila……what is ur aim?...i mean tum bari hokar kya banna chahti ho?....

Riddhima :" doctor………
Riddhim(upset): "hey bhagwan!!...tumhe arts padhna chahiye….jarur papa ne kaha hoga doctor banne ko…….

Riddhima (looks at the ground):" mere papa nahi hain……….
Riddhima : "so sorry….toh feer jarur papa doctor they aur tum unse aur wo tumse bahut pyar karte they……….
Riddhima (tears in eyes): "nahi….i hate my papa………

Riddhym was shocked !!! ...and before he could question ,riddhima ran away!!!…………………….


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Riddhima ki yadon ki kadi (chain) kaki ke bulane per tooti………

Kaki : "kya hua beta?...tabiyat thik nahi kya?...hospital se wapus aa gayi?.....
Riddhima : "nahi kaki..thik hun..bush thori tiredness………
Kaki :" thik hai beta tu rest kar……mai lunch time per bula loongi…..

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Posted: 14 years ago
Very nice part and the twist is also superb.
Update soon.
Thanx 4 d pm.
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Posted: 14 years ago
i think i've read further on the blog..But i was always wondering how on EARTH riddhima came into Ridzy's life...!!! Soo now I'm clear on that too!! Lolx..Thanks loadzz.!! do cont soon..
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sanaa
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow loved it so ridhym loves ridhima
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice part.... hope riddhum's entry doesn't create problems.... thanks for the pm..i didn't knew abt this ff so read earlier parts to get the idea....nice ff 😊 continue soon...

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