Maneet FF-A Lifetime of Gratitude-updt pg 146 - Page 83

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Posted: 14 years ago
Hi i just fineshed reading your FF and i really liked it i have just one requested can you make more Rajiji and Vicky scenes
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Posted: 14 years ago
lolz oh oh maan and chocolate shampoo sound slike a deadly combination
plz add me to ur pm list
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Posted: 14 years ago
vicky and rajji ? intresting couple
loved maan and geet plz add me to ur pm llist
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Posted: 14 years ago
awww... why stopped there? u should have continued... lol... ok u can continue now... plz update soon....
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Posted: 14 years ago
any updates possible this week???
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Posted: 14 years ago
hi everyone :)
thanks a lot for your lovely comments and liking the update
I'm sorry for the infrequency of the updates..I try but it gets difficult to balance with stuff sometimes..

For all those who asked why I stopped..well..because I got tired of writing..LOL

My arms are hurting badly..so I'm gonna write a short update...and hopefully post one during the break too...

So..yeah- update in progress
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Posted: 14 years ago
Suddenly shivering, Geet dared to turn around and see her husband, who stared at her in a way that made her shiver.

as her heartbeat rose, her voice became shrill as she said a little breathlessly

Geet- a-a-aap..

Maan- haan. Main..kyun, tumhe aur kisi ka intezaar tha?
Geet looked down from his eyes, unable to take the gaze searing into her soul and concentrated instead on his chest

She could feel Maan's gaze as he drank her in- the vision of his beautiful wife..who had become very shy all of a sudden.

MAan's eyes fell on the shampoo bottle still in her hand and he moved to take it from her

As he did, Geet turned away from him..unable to bear the heat.

Maan put a hand on her naked shoulder, that tingled from contact and sent tingles all over her body. she shivered in the warm water as Maan stroked her arm and went to her hand...extracted the bottle from her hand .
Surprised she turned and looked at him with eyes wide and dark with desire

Maan- shampoo lena aaya tha.tumhe kya laga?

Geet- urh..woh..nahi..maan..I want to use it abhi.
MAan- Toh Geet..Ek kaam karo let me shampoo your hair and let me take it then ok?

Geet- but Maan..

Maan- But what Geet. I really don't have time..chalo..close your eyes now

Geet was infuriated. She was thinking he had come to...come to what?
Geet you have to stop this .Unlike you, Maan is perfectly capable of thinking about things other than you

Maan could barely think through the hammering of his heart..he wondered if she heard it..wondered if she felt the same everytime she looked at him.
Eyes closed..he was tempted to kiss her but resisted and simply put some shampoo on her head.
He will make it pleasurable to her..and that would give him pleasure.

As Geet felt his comforting fingers on her head..massaging, caressing with firm pressure, all the tension in her body seemed to disappear.
Maan being Maan didn't stop at the head..he went all the way to the end of her back till where her hair reached...leaving a trail of hot shivers behind him.

Geet held his hands- eyes still closed

Geet- yeh aap..kya kar rahe ho?

MAan didn't answer, merely waited till she let go of his hand, and took the silken strands in his hand instead.pulled gently..bringing her closer to him- crushing her back against his chest, her body moulded against his.

He whispered in her ear as he bunched her hair on her head..

Maan- it smells wonderful..i love it Geet

Geet- main woh...woh..

MAan turned her around gently
and removed the foam from her forehead, caressing her gently and kissed her cheeks one by one as Geet opened her eyes and smiled

Geet's eyes smiled into Maan's and mirrored the storm of passion in his..
He put his hands behind her and dragged them both under the water so that the shampoo could be washed off..Geet closed her eyes as Maan once more started the wonderful caressing that made her breathless so she buried her head into MAan's chest ..hugging him

immediately his hands went around her as he hugged her, pulled her closer.. he could feel her lips over his chest where Geet dropped a gentle kiss

He smiled a little.It's so ironic, how a simple kiss like that fills me with such indescribable happiness. Geet cuddled closer and Maan gently growled

MAan- Geet..there is a very thin thread keeping me sane right now...if it breaks..there's no knowing what might happen..or maybe you know what exactly..

Geet pulled away, yet in his arms and pressed her lips to his heart

MAan- GEEET...
Enough shower for you

He turned off the shower and with a wicked gleam in his eye that Geet understood all too well...

MAan- Ab tum bahar chalo..

Geet started shivering because of the cold...
and hugged maan...

Maan- arre...you're cold..wait here..I'll get you a towel to wrap yourself in

Geet- suniye....

MAan looked back at his wife, indescribably beautiful and yet shivering like a fairy in a snowstorm..

He must go..

MAan- Geet..ek minute ruko..thand lag jayegi...

And he went out...
Geet decided a towel will not warm her as much as MAan could and so she waited.

MAan- Yeh lo..

Geet wrapped it around herself and stepped outside to see Maan about to wrap himself in a towel..

But Geet went to him from behind and wrapped her arms around his neck..moving lower to his chest..tracing the contours of his muscles so gently it made him shiver with desire

MAan- Geeet....
She went lower and he stopped her by holding her hand
She moved backwards and he kept advancing towards her, till she fell on the bed
Maan got on top of her and kissed her gently at first..probing and when she agreed, demanding, not gentle anymore..and yet loving

Geet put her hands on his arm..the hard muscles flexing under her touch..and Geet marvelled at the sheer beauty of them
But he increased the rhythm and made it hard for her to concentrate on anything..so she gave herself up to the kiss and the passion, that possessive longing to make her his, in every way- reflected in his every act...he loved her, as if she was one half of him.

Geet gripped his shoulders tighter as he entered her gently..looking deep into her eyes to see them change color again..from green to dark brown.
That was the moment that made him lose control...the look in her eyes, the way he felt that moment, connected in body, mind and soul to the woman who was his life and they reached together the point of ecstasy before collapsing in each others' arms...

They lay silent listening to each others' heartbeats and breathing resume their normal pace, hands entwined they hugged each other tightly..revelling each moment..loving each other more with every passing moment

Vicky- Rajji
Vicky- Rajji..Rajji!!

Rajji- hmm? what's up?
Vicky- nothing. I just wondered where you were
Rajji- listen..Sasha called for you
Vicky made a disgusted face that made her laugh

Rajji- she isn't that bad..
Vicky cocked an eye-brow
Vicky- tumhe itni pasand hai toh baat chalau...waise bhi..tumhe toh koi milne wala nahi

As expected
Rajji- What do you mean to say? Am I not beautiful?

Vicky- Kisne kaha?
Have you seen your hair?

Here he moved closer to her and cocked his head to one side

Rajji- kya hua?
Vicky came closer and opened her hair.brushed it backwards

Vicky- not that bad actually..

Rajji- aur kya problem hai mere saath?

Vicky- your eyes...
Rajji- inme bhi kuchh bura hai?

Vicky- ....haan?

Rajji- Vicky..what's wrong with you?

Vicky- Aur tumhare yeh gussa? How can any one like you if you keep getting angry?

Rajji- woh toh u make me feel angry..I don't scold anyone else at all...

Vicky- fine.. We'll see

Rajji- why don't you set me up with a date..and then we'll see..

Vicky- Fine!

He thought
she wants to go out on a date..with a guy..who's not me?
Yeah..right..like that's going to happen..

Rajji was thinking merely-
do I get angry? no..it's only this idiot who makes me lose my control..ullu

Vicky- fine. I will set you up. Give me a day,ok?

Rajji- fine! You're on!

Alright guys..that is it for today..hope you like reading it
love to all!

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Posted: 14 years ago


heyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy

JAAN

first one to read ur update

loved reading it before PM

wooooooooooooooow

awesome as always...........🤗

par tum meri FF nnahi pad rahi ho naaa comment kar rahi ho.............😕😭
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Posted: 14 years ago
dear geet
thank you for your ff
it was☺️☺️☺️.........
good luck
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Posted: 14 years ago
geetu baccha u r surely improving in describing ur love making scenes.... lol....

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