Maneet FF-A Lifetime of Gratitude-updt pg 146 - Page 80

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Posted: 14 years ago
AWESOMEE update soon PLZ :D
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey pls update fastttttttt
really waiting 2 read d next part eagarly waitingggggggggggg
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Posted: 14 years ago
Nice updates
Its for 6 parts toh may be lil long
Mr 0 I wanted to Kill him yaar😡😡😡
He had the guts hurt Geet how culd he evn touch her 😡😡😡
Jus hated teh way he was trying to make Geet against Maan
Maan was left alone
I was hell scared
Thank God Geet came n made Maan feel better
Liked her trust on Maan
Her support towards him
Maan's past was really painfull
Liked the way Geet helped him in plan all thgs
The way she made O confess al thgs was fab
Liked that she didnt revelied Maan's mothers relation truth infrnt of Vicky
It was far better
Sumthg is really cooking between Rajji n Vicky but its jus frm Vicky side i feel
Maan got atlast wat he wanted😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey everyone!

What's up?

I was told by *ahem* someone that I should have elaborated on the bliss part..so here's a special description of bliss for my romance ke maare maneetians..😉


They woke up with their arms around each other..opened their eyes, looked at the other sleeping and closed their eyes again..wondering what the other will do.

Geet- kitne pyare lag rahe hain..koi nahi maanega inme itni himmat aur taakat hai

She moved closer to a content Maan who was thoroughly enjoying this.

She kissed him on the lips, while he had a hard time stopping himself from kissing her back

she moved downwards with her hands on the hard panes of his chest, lips replacing hands as she moved towards his heart..

Maan could barely control himself from touching her but thought it would be better if he stayed put..unless his heart betrayed him..

Geet whispered into his chest but he caught the words

Geet- this heart echoes the beat of my heart,
the love it contains, just enough for a lifetime to start,
every day and every night will be witness to this love,
the love that echoes and beats in every beat of our hearts

Geet moved downwards..driving him almost crazy..almost.
IT took every ounce of his self-control which vanished around Geet usually to not ravish her at that moment

She kissed his flat abdomen sweetly and Maan pulled her up.

Geet gasped..shocked...

Geet- MA..A

Maan silenced her by putting his lips on hers

he made her lie down and got on top of her.

Geet- Maan..I..

Maan- Geet..you drove me crazy just now..Don't you think I should return the favour?

He smiled with a wicked glint in his eye

He gently kissed her on the head..her eyes,...her cheeks,..her nose...her chin..and stopped..to see her eyes closed..

Geet- maaan

MAan smiled and moved lower- kissed her neck, her collarbones and then..he held her by the shoulders..went all the way to her hands, gently stroking her arms..knowing the effect that had on her

Geet dragged him by the hair but he refused to budge from his gentle stroking

He put a hand on her belly, leaving her hot and breathless.
He stopped there.
He kissed her abdomen and said in a raw tone

Maan- yeh mehek ke liye tha

Which brought tears to her eyes and this time he went upwards and kissed away the tears that started flowing

MAan- shh...nahi..ab ek aasun nahi...chup bilkuul

And he kissed her on the lips..slowly building the rhythm, driving them both more into each other with every passing moment..

Maan decided to drive all thoughts out of her mind now..anything but the pleasure she was feeling..

Maan- just relax and let me do the rest..

His low growl filled with desire made Geet breathless and made her heart skip beats but she managed to lie skill while he worked his magic over her..
Those long fingers that knew the right place to touch, those lips that applied firm yet gentle pressure on places so tender...Geet let go of everything..except MAan and the feel of Maan around her, on her, in her.
Her hands gripping his as he moved lower and lower and she higher and higher till they reached the same place and full of love..he lay beside her, belonging to her, and with her.

Geet could not think.

Maan- Geet...
Geet- hmmm...

Maan looked at her with amusement..

Maan- Geet...main jaau?

Geet stopped him with his eyes still closed
Geet- maar khaoge agar hile bhi yahan se...

MAan- toh what do you want me to do?

Geet opened her eyes and turned on her side so she was facing him- a gently graceful movement that filled him with desire..

And Geet noticed..now said

Geet- hmm..kahan jaa rahe the aap?

and Maan in answer pulled her on top of him and said..

Maan- main aisa soch bhi nahi sakta..

About an hour and many phone calls later..

Geet got up and said

Geet- ab chaliye..let me get up and go for a shower..

MAan(stroking her arm)- you shouldn't have said that..

Geet- MAan..let me go...

Maan- okay..go ahead..Waise bhi..poori raat tumne sone nahi diya

Geet- jao..im going.

She went into the bathroom..without realizing that there was no towel inside after their shower last night..and...she hadn't taken any clothes- the door lock he had broken that day
and now..all Maan had to do was go in after 5 minutes into the bathroom...

Geet had decided yesterday night itself that she will try out the new Chocolate shampoo she had found that day and decided to use it..when she realized Maan was in the shower behind her..

TO BE CONTINueD!


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Posted: 14 years ago
Its getting hot in here! *fans self*
Update soon you devil!
You can't just leave it to that😳😳
cheers,
ak
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Posted: 14 years ago
Wicked girl ! Why did u stop ? 😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
hahahah u leave it at such a point where i want to knw more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
hahaha hmmmm welll i think we shud all thank *ahem ahem* for their suggestion to u - that was a rlii good update!!!!
hahahahaha im glad the Mr O issue is out and now its alll luv - ooooo cnt wait to see how u shape rajji and vicky = rajky luv story!!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey amazing update.. hot n romantic.. but y did u stop??? do continue soon..
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Dhara_s

Wicked girl ! Why did u stop ? 😳




hahahhahaha🤣

i too wanted to say that😡
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Posted: 14 years ago
hi geet
awesome part
.loved it😳.

but y did u stop here 😳?
update soon.
Edited by PrithviSanyo1 - 14 years ago

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