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affu123

@affu123

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 15 years ago

#11

Awesome Aye.... 😳 ..was brilliant.....
regularly update kar warna 😈...and this shld be an FF

and unke pichle meetings ko bhi describe kar..i wanna read their Tom and Jerry fights 😳

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315925

Hibernated

Posted: 15 years ago

#12

Umm...so okay....I wake up after this extra ordinarily long sleep of three hours. 😃 Then I check my phone and sees two missed calls from you. . And then I come on IF and check my PM inbox. And lo and behold!
What do I see? 😲 😲
One of my jaanus aka best friends on IF and Hyderabad, (🤣) has written an FF and it's NOT by janwar. It's by Sweeto aka Ization aka Aamir Ki Deewani aka Ayesha.

And I'm shell shocked. And happy. 😃

Very, very, very awesome my Sweeto. But why didn't you tell me before? 😡

You write really well (already knew that).

Oh, and just one suggestion. When you are writing the line-
"So you were eavesdropping all the while, right? Bad, Gunjan." Said Nupur.

Make sure that the said is in small letters. Like-

"So you were eavesdropping all the while, right?," asked Nupur. "Bad Gunjan."

Oh and don't get pissed off with me or think am a know it all, the above is just something I learned from experience.

Anyways, that's all,
-Me

[Oh and the above is the BIGGEST comment I've written for anyone on the FF forum. You are special. 🤗 I love you.]

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stuti

@stuti123

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#13

awesome start ayesha loved da concept ..........do continue soon ................lovely FF you are writing nd it doesnt seem ur first time at all .......

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ShwePoo

@ShwePoo

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#14

WOW!!! AWESOME....
loved it....
pls continue soon....
pls add me to your pm list.....

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Beet

@Beet

Rocker

Posted: 15 years ago

#15

OMG ! Aye 🤗

Your writing an FF. This is quite interesting. *goes in a deep reflective thought*

*Comes out of it * Ization, this is simply brilliant. Loved the idea. And yes you write amazingly well.

Needless to say I know this FF is going to be tons and tons of fun. And full of humour, is what I expect too, beacuse you are one of the funniest people I have ever met. 😃

All the best Aye. I loved the way you write.

Continue soon.

Love ya <3

-Well, me. 😆