Originally posted by: Surya.Ravi
sumi le jaise maine waada kiya tha main aagayi apne comments lekar tere fanfic par...i hope tumko mera comment pasand aaye... 😃I am sure I am gonna like it...coz u always go to sum amazing details...😳chalo abhi let me start typing my comment...well jis tarah se story agge badh rahii hai woh mujhe behad pasand aa raha hai...jaise, jaise kahani agge badh rahii hai, i can see that tum mere request par bhi kaam karr rahii ho is fic mein...i can see that with every passing scene adil aur aashna ek doosre ke kareeb aa rahe hai...Hmm...process kaafi slow hai...I admit...lekin thats the pace of this story...😆...am glad u r liking it...😃you know it is like a magnet is pulling adil & aashna closer... woh dono chahe jitna bhi kyun na ek dusare se durr rehna chahe, woh dono chahe kitna bhii kyun na ek dusare kii taraf indifferent rahe, but kahiin na kahiin un dono ke beech ke unchahe rishthe mein, ek kisam kii chahat aagayi hai...aur yahii chahat hai joh unhe ek dusare kii taraf kheenchthi chali jaa rahii hai...Haii...u put it so nicely Dii...and yup...u r extremely correct!! 😃😃😳after saying this i would also like to tell you that yes while reading the parts i can see & feel that adil aur aashna ek dusare ko jaanboochkarr avoid karne kii harr koshish karr rahe hai...Hehe...true!! Dono thode nasamajh hai...khud se bhagne ki koshish kar rahe hai...😆lekin is koshish par main kudh adil aur aashna ko yeh batana chahthi hoon kii sorry guys aap dono ka yeh joh koshish hai woh bilkul nakaam hoga...kyunke bhale hii aap kuch bhi kyun na kar lo, ek dusare se kitni hii doorie kyun na rakho, lekin tum dono joh unchahe rishthe mein judh gaye ho, us rishthe mein tumhar dil ek dusare se judh gaye hai Yup...fruitless attempts !! 😆...woh dono chahe, na chahe lekin unke dilon ne ek dusare kii parwaah karna, ek dusare ka khayal rakhna, ek dusare kii pasand, na pasand jaanna, ek dusare ke saath adjust karna, in short ek dusare ke saath jeena seekh hii liya hai, Hmm...they have got used to this lyf where they share it together...and nothing else is gonna suffice for the other...😉aur is baat mein koi dauraahe nahii hai...in pichle kuch parts mein i liked that finally rishabh is back, zabardasti hii sahii lekin woh lauta tho sahi... waise bhii apno se aisi kaisi naraazgi...Yeah...aur usse baat samajhni hai...😳i know rishabh misunderstands adil, but you know what i want adil to clear rishabh's misunderstandings...one side aashna does not understand adil, on the other side rishabh, adil's dadi have misunderstood adil...well adil kii problem bas itni hai kii usse kudh ko explain karne kii aadat nahii hai...& to an extent i agree with adil, rishton mein explanation dene kii zaroorat nahii padthi, lekin jab baat hadh se badh jaye ya phir jab ek explanation se saari problem, misunderstanding durr hojaye tho it is better to explain things... isse yeh hoga kii sab log khush rahenge and even adil will get the love he deserves...Hmm...but may be Adil will w8 for the extent when he has no other option but to kncok sum sense into Rishabh...😆when i read about adil, i feel as if woh raichand's aur unke family ke beech rehkarr ek ehsaan utaar raha hai, woh ehsaan kii un logon ne usse apna maana...but you know i feel adil should realize that the raichand's did not do any ehsaan on him, balki they love him as a part of family, though there are misunderstandings, but adil has to understand that the raichand's are adhure without the elder son of the house who is adil raichand Oh yes...I shud say...u r quite true...and Adil will have to realize this...but eventually I guess...😳 ...& he should just stop distancing himself from his family & from aashna too kyunke isse kucg bhi haasil nahii hone waala hai...Seriously...main bhi yehi samjha rahi hu usse...😆aashna ke leg mein sprain hua tho adil kii tension dekhle laayak thi, though with irritation, ya with ghussa each & every time it is proved that adil deeply cares for aashna...Yup...I wud say...he has this unique way to show his care n love...😉😆& the scene where aashna ws worring about adil sleeping outside that showed the concern aashna had for adil...this shows that adil, aashna have become a integral part of each others lives...& that is very good to know...Am glad u liked this care of Adil-Ashna for each other!! 😃i liked when adil carried aashna down the steps while going to the doctor...aur yeh hui na humare hero waali baat...hmmm...Hehe...yeah!! 😳aur wapas doctor se milne ke aane ke baad tho, the way aashna leans on adil taking for granted he would carry her up the stairs...hyeee...how sweet...this is the sweetness & closeness Am glad u liked that scene...one of my favs...😳i want to see in adil & aashna's relationship...sumi you know what i feel you should fill adil, aashna's life with so much sweetness that it should be sweeter than the sweetest honey in the universe..hehe...Aww...that has to happen...as I think love makes lyf that sweet...literally!! 😉😳 while reading about rishabh i can sense that, slowly, but steadily he is loosening up...though with thodu sa force rishabh has joined work... nice...Hmm...he'll loose up...just needs tym...😊 on the other side talking about aashna's confusion, regarding her fathers business & how she got to know that adil has transferred everything back to her name...but still when adil tells aashna to handle her dad's work, though he acts as if he is the boss... is baat par i would like to say yeh adil na bohat bada dramebaaz hai...haha...I liked this term for Adil...none ever said so...😆😆 i think i know why adil is doing like that, he is doing like that because adil does not want aashna to think he is a nice person & get attached to him...so that is the reason why i feel yeh adil aashna ke saamne aisa bura bannthe phirtha hai...Hmm...God...yaar koi adil ko kudh ke liye bhi jeena seekha do, jab dekho dusron ke liye jeetha hai...Ye to usse Ashna sikhayegi...jisse apne liye jeena bakhubi ata hai...😉😆& you know why i'am liking aashna's confusion well that is because, i feel that it is because of this confusion aashna thinks more about adil aur issi baat kii wajah se aashna adil ke aur bhi kareeb hue jaa rahi hai...Haha..true!! Jitna chhupao utna curiosity badhti hai...Adil doesnt realize that...the more he tries to hide himself from Ashna...the more Ashna will try to get to knw him...😉😆aur mujhe yeh baat bohat zyada pasand hai...now talking about aashna being back at seghal groups to work...hmmm...well though the days are going by adil at RGI or aashna at seghal grop of business both are not happy...the things missing at RGI is aashna & adil is missing her..& the only the missing at seghal industries, the only things missing around aashna is adil...Yup...😉aashna is missing having adil around...ufff...yeh scenes padhkar tho lagtha hai kii aag dono tyaraf barabarr kii lagi hui hai...haha...Very true dii...😆😆bas i wish yeh missing kii baat ek dusare kii zubaan par aajaye tho mazaa aajaye..Yeah...that will happen too...😳hmmm..next talking about the karwachauth scene...ahem..ahem...aashna is slowly fulfilling her duties as a good wife...this shows humare hero sahab chahe ya na chahe lekin aashna ko tho unse attachment, aur lagaav ho hii baita hai...adil is pareshaan kii aashna ko saara din kuch khaana nahii hoga & he suggest kii woh chori chori khaa le...very bad adil...Haha...bechara apni biwi ke bare me soch raha tha...hopelessly in love!! 😆😆& for this he faced wrath of aashna too..serves you right adil for trying to coming in the way of a dutiful wife..hehe...haha...usse kya samajh thi...this tym he was not talking to just Ashna...he was talking to a wife!! 😉😆waise iske pehle ka scene where aashna keeps hogging is very cute...good one..Glad u liked it dii..😊now talking about the actual karwachauth day, vrath thodne ka time... hmm...adil mahashay is late...& he gets disapproving looks from raashi & even rishabh, this is cool rashi ka tho i can understand, but disapproving looks from rishabh, this shows rishabh is again getting close to his brother though na chahthe hue hii, Yeah...amine kaafi subtle tarike se itna show kiya...am quite surprised u caught it...😆😳...gud to kwn it dii...😳par rishabh is changing...& i feel the main reason for it is aashna..may be having aashna around, knowing aashna rishabh is feeling that he is wrong about adil... anyway talking about the last scene jahaan aashna was giving adil silent treatement, with adil's every reaction it showed how much adil is getting affected by the silent treatment...Haha...silent treatment works heavenly...trust me!! 😉😆😆chalo koi baat nahii dair se hii sahii adil ne aashna ka vrat tho thoda...you know i feel with this karwachauth ka vrath adil aashna ka ristha thoda aur mazboot hogaya & they have atleast gone a step or two ahead in their relationship, accepting each other in their lives...Hmm...at least its time for Ashna to realize that...😳so then adil tells aashna to leave, leaving the thaal behind...aur aashna ke jaane ke baad he eats from the thaal.ufff...hyeee...iska matlab yeh hua kii humare hero mahashay, yaani Mr. Adil Raichand ne apni pyaar Mrs ke liye vrath rakha...very good jii.. yeh hui na baat...this shows that unke rishthe kii ek aur kadi jud gayi & both are coming close, chahe, woh chahe ya na chahe, lekin aisa ho raha hai...Yup...just like a truly loving husband he fasted for his wife...he just had to...😉😳& i'am very,very glad that adil, aashna ek dusare ko samajne lage hai...ek dusare ke harr unkahii baat ko jaanne lage hai aur ek dusare kii aankhein aur bechaini bhi padhne lage hai...that is completely super cool...Am glad u think so Dii...😃& i'am completely loving it...sumi you keep up the good work going...the story is progressing very well..ek dum dhaasu, raapchik... superb... fantastic...ek dum bindaas...keep it up...good going...indeed very interesting.Thanks Dii...am glad to hear such words from you...😃...and wow...how cool emoticons!! Love them dii...😃..
now talking about the forth coming parts i don't know but my guess is that adil, aashna ek dusare ke aur bhi kareeb aajaayenge...bhale hii adil kitni hii koshish kyun na karle to run away from aashna & his feelings for her but it will not be possible...Yup...after all wo apne hi dil ke feelings se kaise dur reh sakta hai?😉😆& you know i don't know why i feel this but i think shekar will appoint aashna as one of the new recruits, may be he might feel that both adil, aashna are miserable without each other & he would appoint her..this way both adil, aashna will spend more time together aur issi bahane dono ek dusare ke kareeb aajaayenge...Shekhar wud love to do that...only if he cud oppose Adil...😉& i also think that now aashna will jaanbhoochkar create doubts about business & tell adil to assit her in the seghal groups work...hehe...Hehe...I can vouch that once she wants to be wid Adil...she is gonna create serious trouble...😆😆& i think now one by one misunderstandings will start to resolve & secrets will come out, whether the misunderstandings are between adil & dadi, or rishabh & adil or aashna & adil, i feel slowly one after the other all will start clearing up... Of course...😃anyway this is just my guess... so sumi what do you think is my guess work correct...do let me know...I wud say...many of ur guesses are right...u are almost there...thoda aage pichhe karke...i guess u realize how things r gonna unfold...😃sumi yaar please do continue soon..& i have a small idea for the next part of the fanfic, i will tell you that through PM...jaldi se update karna, main palkein bichakarr update ka intezaar karr rahii hoon...😃😊😃 Aww Dii...I hope to continue real soon...and thanks for such an overwhelming comment!! It was truly nice to knw ur views...and as I always say...u put everything so beautifully in words that I am quite amazed...😆...thanks for taking so much trouble...hope u like the next part enough!! 😃
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