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@ronojoy_ria

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#891

the up is good

this time it came much early than excepted

anyways the part is good

so adil is taking good care of aashna and he is also giving her the charges of the company

but this thing upset ashan and felt in her in confusion

she pour out all her pain anger over adil andadil he siliently bear it as he always do

i feel bad for adil he got only hatred from his dear ones

reshbash is complaining that gayatri jee loves adil more than him

this thing matters adil alot he felt guilty

but gayatri jee she feels happy to see adil his lovely dutiful son

plz cont soon and pm me

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monika

@monikaseth

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#892

Awesome , Superb and Mind blowing like every time way to go dear

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Sur_10

@Sur_10

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#893

Hey Sumi

I was kind of wondering k abhi tak ye part aya kyu nahi...and dekho i m one person jo kabhi tumhe late hone pe nahi datungi, u see. I guess u know why ;)

khair, its good to read this. Its great how u have portrayed Ashna and Adil's relationship growing gradually with each part. Loved it alot.

Rishabh is another character I wud like to read more about. I guess I have a thing for side characters.

Thanks for the pm

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C3_IF

@C3_IF

Navigator

Posted: 14 years ago

#894

awesome update...sorry 4 ths chintu stuff here, bt i knw u completely understnd me :D🤗

Edited by chinmayi - 14 years ago

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golu_1677

@golu_1677

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#895

Thanks for the superb update...

Was missing Adil am glad updated ...

Loved the way Adil carries Ashna on the stairs ... He is loves her but is hiding his love...

GR and Adil scene was very emotional... I am really worried for him...

There too much on his mind i feel and soon he will taking a drastic step abt which u know better I am just guessing ...

I think he has transferred the Sehgal Group in Ashna's name... She has seen the file but still doesnt trust our sweet Adil...

Adil was sleeping outside coz he didnt want to hurt Ashna ...

Will n waiting for the next update...

pls try n update a bit sooner next time ...

Edited by golu_1677 - 14 years ago

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Purnima

@-purnima-

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#896

awww My Adil poor boy 😔... bechare ko sone bhi nahi dete 😔 ... usse poolside sula diya 😆😆😆 ... & first time i will not agree😛😛 with Adil 😳... he is surely "not thik " kuch toh problem hai ... adil--- if u dont want to tell ashna or ur mom no problem 😆😆😆 u can tell me 😍 😛😛... main kisi ko nahin bataungi 😳😳...

now coming to part 😒... thoda saddy saddy tha 😔 ... My adil was so sad 😔 ... & ashna & Rishab mere adil ko aur tang kar rahe hai 😭😭...

Adil was so sweet to ashna 😳😳 ... & she senseless girl 😡😡... was so mean to ADIL 😳😳 ...she doesn't trust adil ...[ no worries I do Adil 😳😳 ...]. she thinks Adil mein common sense nahi hai he has bakwas sense 😡😡😡 ... she doesn't know Adil is way smart 😎 than her 😳😳 . bachpan se 😳😳😳 ...& Adil u too ... agreeing with pagal ladki 😆😆😆

stairs scene 😍 ... see how sweet is Adil 😳😳😳... {Main bhi apna leg tudwa ke laongi next time fir saath mein dr ke paas chalenge 😳😳... mujhe injection se dar bhi nahin lagta 😛😛... u just hold my and i will be fine 😆😆😆

aww Rashi my fav 😆😆... only supporter of Adil in the house 😳😳... & ofcourse Rashi ur bro is very sweet, friendly , caring ,smart... ahem ahem . long list 😆😆😆

loved Adil's reaction when ashna expected him to pick her again on return 😆 😆
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Ashna 🤣 ... What did she mean "Tum sach mein ho " 😆😆😆... cant my adil come home early 😆😆😆 ...& when Adil in front of u 😍... fir kya TV dekhna 😆😆😆... better look at ur husband 😳😳😳...[by any chance was she watching salman khan 😉😉]

haila 😲... Adil gave everything to ashna 😲... i mean partial rights 😆😆... ladke ke dimaag mein kya chal raha hai 🤔 ... he is planning something 😛... will tell us in good time 😛😛😛

*sigh* ashna mere adil ko dara diya glass todkar 😆😆😆... & how cud she say 😡😡😡 Adil is a problem ...& asked him to get lost ...(Adil come to me 😉 ) 😆😆

Sumiji mere Adil ko pareshan kar diya 😆😆... after ashna he had to deal with rishabh 😡... now i will seriously give him a kick

[ i learnt from mathur saab ]😆😆

aww adil 🤗 u dont give pain to any1 😳😳 u are too good to do that 😳😳 ... his Mom really sweet 😃😃... she understand him perfectly well 😃😃

thank god ashna atleast took trouble to find Adil 😳... else i wud have come to find him 😆😆😆
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I am sure adil is planning some thing big & drastic ... hope i am proved wrong 😆😆...

will wait for next part to see wat exactly Adil has on mind 😳😳... till then Adil 🤗

continue soon 😃😃

p.s-- Sumiji u always complain main humesha Adil ko hugs kisses deti hoon ashna ko kuch nahin 😆😆😆... I have brought something spclly 4 her ... [adil rokega tab bhi ek toh laga hi dungi ashna ko 😆😆😆 i spclly borrowed it from Dr. Aamir 😳😳 ... afterall mere adil ko problem bola 😡😡... she doesn't trust him 😡😡... she thinks Adil mein sense nahin hai 😡😡

😳😆

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Deepa

@spvd

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#897

part 18
hey honey...nice part...
why is Adil keeping himself everyone away from him and hurting himself so much...cant see him like this...he absolutely cares a lot and loves his apne so much but still hes been once again and again mistaken...Ashna will go crazy trying to understand her enigmatic husbamd og hers...poor her cant blame her...why did he sleep outside in the chilly night? what is troubling him again? Rishab i dunno what to say about him...maybe he does like and love and respect Adil ander hi ander per he doesnt like his over powering him and him (Adil) being loved more by his mom more than him (Rishab)...but i absolutely loved the 2 scenes where Adil carries Ashna...hayeee lovely...first i was surprised but the second when Ashna lifted her arm reflexively and Adil's surprised look were adorable...cont soon dear...

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Priya

@Sweet-Lioness

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#898

Sumi...kyoun mera muh khulwana chahti hai...!!! iss fic ki heroine hai Ashna...isi liye bach gayi...varna sachhi me main uss ki supari denewali thi...jab dekho mere Adil ko hurt karti rehti hai...aur mujhe dukhi karti hai...😭

kal raat hi maine ud padha...aur baht dukh hua...maine usi waqt apne ek frnd ko sms kiya aur kaha bhi...voh bhi bichari rone lagi...😭

ab tum muh mat banayo...vaise yeh sach hai ke...tumhari wajah se Adil dukhi hai...par kya karun yeh kehna hi padega ke tum itni achhi writer ho ki...readers ko hassa bhi sakti ho aur rula bhi... yeh ek strong point hai tumhare writing ki...👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

khair abhi hum aage badhte hain...matlab ud par...😃

ashna ki dimag me patthar pade hain...ye toh hum DDPA ke membs se bhi gayi gujri hai yaar...matlab ke dimag se...!!! iss ko yeh dikhayi nahi diya ke doc ke paas le jane ke liye Adil kitni jaldi me aaya tha...par nahi...voh toh bakwaas pe bakwaas kiye ja rahi thi...!!! usse toh Adil ke common sence par hi ajeeb sa comment kar diya...huh...😡

kitna caring hai...stairs ke liye use prob hoti iss liye Adil ne kitne pyar se smbhala usse...!!! aur iss baat par toh main bhi Rishabh se agree karti hun ke...dono sath me achhe lagte hain...par iss Ashna ko yehj koun samjhaye...use plz koi mirror dikhye ya phir iss scene ka video footage... taake ise bhi yakeen ho...😆

khair main toh rashi ke liye khush hun...behn ho toh aisi ho...varna na ho...😛

aur phir voh wapas aate waqt stairs ke scene par Adil ka reaction...ha ha ha...maza aa gaya...main sach em mushkura rahi thi...😆

aur yeh kya...agar Adil ghar jaldi aa gaya toh use khush hone ki wajay voh ajeeb sa sawal puch rahi thi...aur kya comment kiya uss ne ke...'iss waqt normal log ghar me hote hain'...sahi hai na...Adil normal inshan nahi hai...voh Spl hai...aur wo jo bhi karta hai...hamesha sahi karta hai... iss baat ko Ashna kahin baht der se na samjhe...!!! vaise agar der se samjhegi bhi toh koi prob nahi hogi...main Adil ke dil me Ashna ke liye baht sare nafrat bhar dungi...aur uss ke baad use le kar Ladakh bhaag jayungi...ha ha ha...😆

adil ne usse kitna pyar se sab kuch samjhaya...par ladki me toh bacha-kucha dimag hi nahi hai...kya se kya tak soch diya...aur ek glass bhi tod diya...dekha...faltu ka kharcha bhi kar diya na uss ne...!!! aur upar se Adil ko prob bol rahi thi...jab ki voh uss ki prob solve karne aaya tha...😡

do min ke liye mujhe vahan bhej sumi...main iss Ashna ke kaan ke niche do aur Rishbh ke kaan ke niche char baja kar wapas aayungi...😡

GR aur Adil ka scene baht touchy tha yaar...dono hi ek dushre se kitna pyar karte hain...yeh scene sach me baht khaash tha...!!! ek taraf adil apne sare dard bahar lana chah raha tha...par karr nahi pa raha tha... dushri taraf GR adil ko sambhalna chahti thi...par uss ki prob puri tarah se samajh nahi pa rahi thi...ohhh...sumi...main na thodi si emotional ho gayi thi...😭

Thank God ke Ashna ne yeh notice toh kiya ke Adil raat bhar room me nahi tha...aur apne pairon ko taklif de kar uss ne use dhundha bhi...!!! aur yeh kya...Adil swimming pool ke paas so raha tha...aur voh bhi iss tarah se...!!! chalo Ashna me thodi sa dimag toh hai aur voh yeh samjhi bhi toh sahi ke...uss ne galat kiya hai...par 'sote hue Adil' ko sorry kyoun bola... jab ki ulta-sulta toh 'jaage hue Adil' ko bol rahi thi...huh...😡

aur Adil ne bhi thodi baht caring khud ke liye notice ki thi Ashna ke ankhon me...😃

chalo abhi iss point pe khatam kiya hai toh jaldi se next part chahiye...😃

Goshhh...Sumi...yeh mera comment hai...dekh lo...kitna lamba hai...hadh hai yaar...Adil ke naam se toh mujhe kuch sujhta hi nahi...ha ha ha...😆

ohk...main chahti toh nahi thi...par phir bhi keh deti hun...yeh ek writer hi karr sakta hai...jo ki tum ne iss ud me kiya...matlab ke Adil ke feelings ko iss tarah se describe kiya ke...ja ker siiidha dil ko touch kiya...👏

Love youuu(Of course...ye Adil ke liye hai😆...par thode se pyar par tumhara bhi haq bannta hai...ha ha ha... Love you Sumi)😃

PS:- Plz ab Adil ko thoda sa bukhar la do...taake Ashna uss ki seva karr sake...😆 jab dekho...Adil se apna kaam karwati rehti hai...ab Adil ke liye bhi toh kuch kare...

Edited by Sweet-Lioness - 14 years ago

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manali

@Revolutionbreez

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#899

Awesome update sumi !!

Adil somehow always intrigues me...

and so everytime the update ends, I crave for more !!

main abhi detail mein comment nahi kar rahi hoon coz i'm commenting in hurry...

but plzz...yaar...you update soon haan...

bye...tc.

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shreya

@XoxowpdXoxo

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#900

poor adil ashna ka kitna khayal rakhta hai lekin wo stupid aashna😡😡😡 uske achche waale sense ko bakwaas sense bolti sumi iss aashna ka kuchch karo nahi toh main aakar isko injection dungi iski sense ke liye😡😡😡 baad me bhalayi roti rahe ki muje injection se darr lagta hai🤢🤢🤢

aur wo kaise keh sakti hai ki wo uspe trust nahi karti binea kuch kahe sune uski help karta chala jaata hai tab bhi aashna ko problem hai 😲😲😲 don't worry adil agar aashna nahi karti tum per trust to hum sab yahan baithe hain na tumhaare liye you are always welcome here😉😉😉 dont need to worry😊 aur bechara poore raaste uski bad - bad ko sun kar ignore karne ki koshish kar raha tha🥱🥱🥱

aur rishabh uski pata nai kya problem humesha adil ke aage , peeche , uper , neeche pada rehta hai🤢🤢🤢 par koi baat nahi hai na apni rashi jo hai usko theek kar deti hai rishabh ko👏👏👏

and now when he is giving the responsibility to aashna to usme bhi usko problem ha😡😡😡 adil ko hi problem keh rahi thi😲😲😲 ye sunkar to muje bhi bura laga tha to usko kaise nai hurt hua hoga😭😭😭

sumi please aashna ko samjhao nahi to wo mujse injection lagne ke saath saath pitegi bhi😡😡😡 and pls sumi itna pareshaan mat karo adil bechara kitna pareshaan rehta hai aur tum uske peeche padi hui ho🤢😳😉 pls. sumi jaldi se sabkuch theek karo na😊😊😊

and finally ashna ko kuch toh feel hua jab usko adil nahi mila and now what he was planning for which he was asking gr's forgiveness😕😕😕 i hope not going to do something big and drastic😕

pls sumi iss jungle se adil ko bachaayo😳😉😊

and continue soon and yes in this update was superb with more of a & a scenes😊😊😊