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Posted: 15 years ago

#51

hey sumi, gr8 2 see u bak so soon.... the fic seems different & nice...wil b eager 2 read ths 1 also as the previous 1, so u hav 2 b regular ok achi bacchi???? :)

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Daebak

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Posted: 15 years ago

#52

Nicee !! Very Cute part !!

I wonder why his Dadi pretends to hate him if she was watching him receive awards on the news channel !!

Cant wait for Ashna and Adil to meet !!

Continue soon !!

Luv,

Vandu

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amrutha,akhila

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Posted: 15 years ago

#53

Intersting part

waiting for more

loved adil's character

do cont soonnnnnnnnnnnnnnn

ammu

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Priya

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Posted: 15 years ago

#54

helllllllllllllllloooo...maine LIKE button par isliye click kiya tha...taki tumhe pata chal sake ki...main comments karungi...samjhi...!!! main abhi thoda sa BG hun isiliye cmnts nahi kar payi...aur tum galati se bhi yeh mat sochna ki main sirf LIKE button press kar k tumhe aasani se chod dungi...samjhi...??? thoda sa tym chahiye jaldi hi comments karungi is fic par...kyoun ki ILUTMTLY par thoda late comments karungi toh chalega...par mujhe lagta hai ki is par jaldi cmnts karna padega...???

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Deepa

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Posted: 15 years ago

#55

wow very interesting intro dear..................nice choice of names too.........interesting character sketch..................what does dariya mean?????????????

thanks for the wish sweety.....................

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Deepa

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Posted: 15 years ago

#56

hmmmmmmmm interesting and also intriguing dear...........nice start.................adil's family has 3 more people..................and his dadi doesnt like him wonder why but she was seeing his award part..............hes like a robot...............kaam kaam kaam.................his life should be added with colors.................waiting for the heroine to make the entry dhoom dhaam se...................cont soon dear...................

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Nisha

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Posted: 15 years ago

#57

Nice part

Adil has achieved a lot of success in his business not just for his company but for himself as well. But he is alone on such an important day.

He cares very much for his family...he has made them his first priority. Uski mom ke saath aisa kya hua tha ki she has stopped talking...and why does his dadi dislike him?

Waiting to know all this and more. please continue soon

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Priya

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Posted: 15 years ago

#58

tohhhhhhhhhhhhh...hum hazir hain...suru se suru karne k liye...!!! arre tum kya pakayogi...mujhe...??? maine toh pakane me ph.d kiya hai...dekha nahi mere fic me kitne paknewale chiz hote hain...!!! main bhi tumhe apna hi maanti hun na..!!! isiliye main tumhe na pakayun...yeh toh ho hi nahi sakta..!!! in fact main bhi abhi abhi dazzler bani hun...!!! aur ek dazzler (main) jab dushre dazzler (yani tum) ko pakane lage toh sone pe suhaga ho jayega...hai na...!!! toh Sumi...taiyaar ho jayo...main paakane aa gayi hun...😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

sab se pahle...LOVE YOU...!!! ab yeh kyoun kaha...pata hai...??? kyoun ki tumne ek aur AWESOME fic ki suruwat ki...!!! vaise aur koi wajah nahi hai tumhe LOVE YOU kahne ka...😃 😃 😃 😃 😃 😃

DROPLETS...BEAUTIFUL...yaar...totally loved it...👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

Adil...n Ashna...!!! matlab dono hi 'A' se suru...!!! is ka matlab is fic me 'A' one Factor hoga...kyoun ki maine bhi AWESOME hi kaha hai...is fic k starting k liye...👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

intro k kya kahne...Too Gud...Awesome...!!! ab main first part padne ja rahi hun...jab tak use khatam nahi kar deti...mujhe galati se bhi disturbed mat karna...!!! varna tum toh janti ho ki main kya hun...???😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😉

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Priya

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Posted: 15 years ago

#59

sab se pahle main apna fav dail balun...??? yeh ud itna chota kyoun tha...??? tha toh tha...par Adil k sath tum aisa kaise kar sak ho...??? jab dekho bichare ko tang karti rahti ho...!!! kabhi Arnav bana kar toh kabhi Ayaan bana kar...aur abhi Adil bana kar...!!! okay...okay...no more nautanki...point par aati hun...

veri nice part...

Adil k paas...yun toh sab kuch hai...par dekha jaye toh kuch bhi nahi...!!! itne imp din me bhi voh akela hai...!!! us k mom dad ki story kuch samajh me nahi aayi...!!! voh toh tab samajh me aayega na...jab tum humain batayogi...!!! lekin haan...Adil k liye bura laga...!!! ab umeed hai ki Ashna ki jaldi hi entry ho jaye...Adil k zindagi me...!!!

ab jaldi se ud karna...

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ChhalkiSyaahi

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Posted: 15 years ago

#60

Hi Sumi..........

So u r back with another fic...The first part was really awesone...A switch from Ayaan to Adil...kuch connection hai kya A se...???

Adil itna sad kyun hai... Aur agar uski Daadi usse pasand nahi karti to fir wo uske liye kyun news dekh rahi thi,...??? Felt bad abt Adil's mom... Rashi's role is being played by one of my fav actresses....😊

SO confusing... Hero ki entry ho gayi hai to heroine ka intezaar hai.... So continue soon...

Love
Guglu