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Priya

@Sweet-Lioness

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Posted: 14 years ago

#491

jis din tum ne ud kiya tha na...maine tabhi padh liya tha...aur tabhi reserved bhi kiya tha...!!! par prob yeh hai hua ki...ek toh tumhe pata hai ki kuch dino se meri bettery low hai...upar se apni studies ko bhi ignore nahi kar sakti...aur in sab par bacha kucha dimag kharch karne ke baad OL aane ka mann nahi karta tha...n main jaldi so jati thi...jab ke main hamesha 1 baje ke kareeb hi soti hun...

khair meri kahani toh khatam hogi nahi...is se better thing par aate hain...matlab...aap ke ud par...

fabulous....👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

sab se pahle raj...tumhe toh pata hi hai mera qoute...'tere naam se suru tere naam pe khatam'...

yaar...yeh banda bada smart nikla...!!! use toh pata bhi hai ki biwi ko kaise handel karna hai aur office me use kaise kaam karwana hai...!!! apni baat bhi manwa li us ne ashna se...!!!

aur phir yeh ashna bhi na...kaisi ladki hai...??? ek toh in-laws ke yahan itne itne late uthti hai...aur upar se adil se use uthaya...is baat se bhi use prob hai...!!!pachtayegi...baht pachtayegi...huh...

aur gussa hui adil par bhi toh kitni choti si baat par...aur phir presentation bigad diya...!!! kya farq padta hai ki us ne kya bigada...!!! apne adil ne us ka dimag bigad diya...aur voh line par aa gayi...!!! kya kya dail mara us ne...!!! in fact...ashna jo muh pe bol nahi pa rahi thi...adil voh bol bhi raha tha...aur khud hi us ka jawab de raha tha...!!! kya halat hui hai ashna ki...!!! aur karti bhi kya...jo us ne biagada tha...use hi sawarna pada...

adil kitna important hai...yeh philhal na toh adil ko pata hai aur na hi ashna ko...!!! mujhe pata hai...mujh se pucho...!!! ashana ke dil me abhi blood supply bandh hai...jab hoga tab sayad use kuch pata chalega...

dono ke jhagde me na...mujhe kuch ajeeb sa feel hua...matlab...nafrat nahi thi...jo story ke suruwat me ashna ki taraf se feel hota tha...matlab kisi khaash chiz ka SUBH-AARABH lagta hai...toh MEETHA HO JAYE....ha ha ha...

par jab adil ko ashna ne dadi ke hathon jhuthi galiyan sunwayi na...toh mujhe dadi mahatma par gussa toh aa raha tha...par ashna ke liye koi bad-feeling nahi thi...!!! matlab...u see...us ne adil ke bare me socha...n us ke sath mazak karne ki koshish ki...!!! is ka matlab toh yehi hota hai na...ke voh ab use...gair nahi samajhti...ek kareebi inshan samajhti hai...!!! jaise hum akshar apno ke sath masti-mazak karte hain...vaise...

ab dekhna yeh yeh hai ki aage kya hota hai...matlab..aisa lagta hai jaise adil aur ashna ke bich kuch khaash scene honewale hain...

isiliye ab tum jaldi se ud karna...okay....

Edited by Sweet-Lioness - 14 years ago

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vvdn

@vvdn

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#492

Rocking update Sumi.....!

Ashna is like a sweet kid yaar....luved her all mischief & Adil vo toh pyara hai hi...n now Ashna is going to jodpur m looking ahed as Adil n Ashna r quit used to each other
hope u will update soon

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ria

@ronojoy_ria

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#493

hi😊

the up is really good 😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊

toh aashna subhe 9 baaje tak so rahe haai😛😛😛 aapna sab kaam dham bhul ke😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆 par adil jab tak haai woh humare aashna ko kaise bhul ne de sakte haai😉😉😉😉😉😉😆😆😆😆😆😆 he called aashna aur usse office mein bulaa leta haai 😉😉😉😉😉😉woh bhi dhamka ke par usse kaise pata tha ke aashna usse sabak sikhane ke liye prsentation he kharab kar deke

par adil usse gussa na hoke bohot he pyaar se aur polietly samjhata haai 😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃

he is so nice😊

aur aashna bhale he woh adil se nafrat karne ke acting kun kare but she really cares for him 😳😳😳😳😳😳which she herself doesnt know 😕😕😕😕😕😕

ab ashna is going to attend her friend's marriage😊😊😊😊😊 par yaar adil ko bhi beeju naa shaadi mein

plz cont soon and pm me

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Suhana

@suhana.dixit

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#494

Hi Sumiya

Update was just awsome..👏👏 U know u have really grown as a writer 👏👏 ..I mean u r just in clas 12 but u write like someone who has so much experience abt life..

Adil's character is really complicated here somewat similar to Shlok of Golden Illusion and I am a big fan of both..😃 They have certain passion and intensity in their characters which makes girls hate them and love them simultaneously 😃 atleast its true in my case..😆😆

Adil very wisely handled Aashna when she spoiled her presentation deliberately..😃 he really is a hard hitting boss..he made her do exactly as he had planned.she was left with no choice apart from the one offered to her by her husband..😊

Aashna has really started caring for Adil unknowingly..she is worried over his health..

Car scene was really cute..Aashna was busy lecturing her husband and even the driver was smiling hearing her speak like this..That was the first time when Adil was trying hard to control his precious smile😊

Even Adil is observing small little things abt his wife..he knows her moods well now..😃 like a perfect hubby he can very well tell when his wife is seriously tired..

Aashna loves it when dadi scolds Adil..she did it purposely..Even Adil know it 😉

I hope Adil miss her when she is away..😃

Pls continue soon😃

(and pls dont remind me of that Jodhpur wedding)

Bye

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golu_1677

@golu_1677

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#495

This was a superb part.........

Loved the way he made aashna do the work...... hv a feeling he wants her to be capable of handling Sehgal Industries ......... I think once he feels she can handle shgal industries he will hand it over to her thats why he hasnt merged it with RGI.....

As far as his conversation with shekhar whr he asks him to make someone convince for something.. I guess its Rishabh .... I think he wants him to come to India and handle the business....

For me the mystery abt Adil is deeping with each part I read... I have a feeling either he will go away somewhere or there is some problem as at two three places he has said he will not be always there........ Thats why mystery is deeping for me .........

Loved Ashna in the last part whr she is happy weh Dadi scolds him as she got wat she wanted.....

Waiting for more but soon..........

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Deepa

@spvd

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#496

lovely part dear...................
aashna is so much like a kid....................
and adil knows her well......................
the scene where he shouts at her on the phone and she planning to pareshaan him and he in turn making her do things his way and the last scene were so lovely.........................
cont soon dear....................

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monika

@monikaseth

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#497

so sweet and nice part love it thanks a lot for pm

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Oliveya Aniston

@Illumination

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#498

omg! suymiya you are amazing writer .Nice ff
i loved ur concept

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Purnima

@-purnima-

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#499

ashna 😡😡😡....can i come & kick her 😆😆😆....bechare adil ko dant khilwayi 😲😲😲..shaitanni ki bhi hadh hoti hai 😆😆😆..
as 4 adil 😳😳😳 smile adil 😛😛😛.......smile karne mein koi burai nahi hai 😆😆😆.....we love ur smile 😍
as 4 part its a lovely part 👏👏👏.............quite a releif ...after previous part 😆😆😆....liked adil's way of waking his biwi 😆......on mobile phone 🤣......
& ashna.......... 😛....husband ko stupid idiot bolte hai 😆.... not fair 😆😆😆...........& then uski presentation bhi bigadi 😆😆😆..... & smart adil he knows how to convince ziddi ladki 😆............kitna acha samjhata hai 😍 .....
& i didn't knew.... no1 says NO to Adil 😆.....
adil its really difficult to imagine that u dont exist 😍..... 😆😆..... & sawal ashna se tha but me answering 😉😉😉.....yes u are important 😳😳😳....

adil-ashna dono ki fights bhi cute hoti hai 😆😆😆..... so ashna noticed that adil stays in balcony 😔

is someone getting jealous of file 😆😆😆.....puri raat file ke sath 😆😆😆..as if adil gonna romance the file 😆

dadi u are second in list 4 the kick 😆😆😆......... bechare adil ne sharafat se toh ashna ko permission di thi then too 😲😲......so angry 😆😆😆..

i know smart adil will keep everything under control ..... & is ashna going alone to jodhpur .. 😉😉😉....... akela adil yahan kya karega 😆....

ok now continue soon 😛😛😛............ lets see what adil will do all alone here 😛😛😛.........

Edited by Puri_2711 - 14 years ago