ONLY YOU FF(Maaneet) Part 13 : Page 131 (28/8/11) - Page 30

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Posted: 14 years ago
pls cont soon am eagerly need to wat will happen finally the truth is out pls put next part soonnnnnnnn super thanksssss
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Posted: 14 years ago
di what shud i say??????
i just luved it....luved the way maan behaved ...its quite natural from his side...
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but i m shocked to learn that geet is not at all ashamed of ehr behaviour....i mean after doing such things to him,she still has the guts to say that she needed to win the bet so she needed to do that...😲😲

this girl really derserves a slap...if i were at maan's place i dont know what i will do with this girl......😡
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and di just stop the engagement of maaan-sameera..its so shocking to read dat she is kissing his lips.......keep him single........its ok but not with sameera.....😉😉

with geet definitely but if not with geet keep him single....its better i guesss...it would be better
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and di i seriously hate this clifff-hanger.....i tell u di......u stopped at the most important point..i was dying to read what would be geet's parents' reaction and u stopped it....i m seriously heart broken...🥺🥺🥺

i promise one day i seriously kill you.....😳😳😳😳😆😆😆
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AND PLZZZZZZ PLZZZZZZZZ PLZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ UPDATE SOON........I AM DYING TO READ THE NEXT PART PLZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ
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Posted: 14 years ago
Good fanfic plz do continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow ur ff is soo different to the actual story but in a good way!

Plz pm me when u next update
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome update yaar
It was Mindblowing
Loved it
How r the handa going 2 react when they find out what Geet did
How r maaneet going 2 fall in love
Can't wait 2 read more
Con soon
Thanks 4 da pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice updated and update th nxt soonnn
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Posted: 14 years ago
update soon..............
i liked reading this again
Plz update the Premeer one also
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Posted: 14 years ago


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Thanks for liking my FF guys..........

And who all commented thanks a lot............i love u guys...........this time i cant reply but dnt stop giving comments......they meant a lot...............
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Posted: 14 years ago

So here goes update......this may be bit boring or totally boring but couldn't help........im sorry guys..........and next update will be after October 20th.....i have prj dead lina and after that im going to my home town for dussera so i cant write anything between.......

Part 8

Garden fell in silent there is no music no talking only silence is acting………all the guests arrived for viewing great and rich engagement are stunned to Maan's words…what he is talking……everyone are waiting for Geet to talk but she is fiddling with her duppata and kept her gaze down…….

Maan moved towards her and caught her wrist as tight as possible showing all his hatred in that grip he asked 'Tell Ms. Geet Handa where are you last two months….!????' Geet tried to release her grip but he didn't care for her or for her pain he only need answers know……….'Tellllll Meeeeee…….' He growled not only Geet all are terrified seeing Maan's anger…….

'I….I…Am….i…in …..Khu…Khurana's house……..' Geet said in quivering tone….Sameera Darji Latha are terrified listening her answer and felt extreme rage on Geet……….Sameera is just staring at Geet……..how can she be there and why she went there….. and that to she stayed in their house for whole two months….. and why did not she tell me…and why Maan never said to her….all the Q's are running in head….she is unable to make the connection how and when her sister went to Khurana's house………

'Very good Ms. Handa atlast u confessed half truth…. now the question is why n for what u stayed in my house could u care to explain ur family and friends over here…………..???' Maan questioned her in sarcastic tone and its very clear that he is not going to leave her until she confess whole truth…….he is feeling nothing for her at the moment only hatred for fooling him…….all glue their ears to listen what Geet would tell…….

Geet is finding really hard to breathe……she never expected this situation I mean she know that what she did was not normal thing I mean who will stay with her would be jiju in his house and fooling him around as she is mad and not only fooling him but whole family……………..she know that its not small issue when she agreed for challenge but after seeing Maan and his family believing her in minutes she felt that they are really too nice to believe and also she had seen them whole two months and only made sure that there very kind hearted and never hurt others even though they hurt them……..

That's the reason she thought that never her stay in Khurana's house will be exposed……….. but here Maan is totally behaving different to what she had seen him earlier………..and now what he wants to do with this true story……..what he will do by revealing her bet and her stay in that house………she is in her own land as why Maan is behaving like that what his intensions and why he want me too reveal my story before everyone………….

'Everyone are waiting Ms. Handa……….' Maan brought her out from her thoughts giving her deadly glare as to confess the truth…………Geet gulped the lump in her throat and looked pleading way towards Maan but being him he didn't melt a single and gave "im -not -going -to –leave" look……………'she understood that Maan is going to take his revenge but why Maan is very sweet to me and im his bacha…….how can u Maan….' She thought

And started looking at her parents who are totally shocked and couldn't understand single bit what's going around………………and her eyes travelled to her sister who is showing no reaction her face is all pale……….she is feeling that her legs are going to leave her now……for the first time seeing her sister guilt touched her heart……….

Swallowing gulp she tried to confess but words didn't let out of her mouth……..anyone can tell that she is afraid to death……'Im in Maan's house……..' she said and looked at her sister………'That u already said Geet im asking why u stayed in my house and for what u stayed…….' He said looking straight into her eyes and gripping his fingers more strongly into her skin…….'…'Ahhhh' Geet winced slightly but that didn't affect Maan infact he tighten his grip on her hands…….

'Beca…I mean be…be….because I ……bet ……….with my………. friends….that…that I'll ………' she stopped not getting words to confess the truth she is truly felt fear run her spine….what now after confessing Sameera di will feel and what she will do…….omg this whole crap bet was becoming more dangerous……..'come on Geet speak out dammit…….' Maan growled making everyone in the party stunned…….

Geet closed her eyes tightly and said ' because I had bet with my friends to make Maan and his family fool by acting like im MAD….'…….

All are stunned hearing what Geet said and looked with 'I cant believe ' look……….especially Darji Latha and Sameera……..and also Rishab…….he always treated Geet as his princess who came in disguise to keep his colorless family to bright colorful family……..i mean its not like their family is sad and relation less but definitely something missed but Geet fulfilled that gap sweetly by filling everyone's heart with her cuteness……..

Darji and Latha felt shame after hearing what their daughter did and they are feeling extremely embarrassed to face anyone in the part specially Khurana family… ……Naina is feeling really happy she loved Geet like her daughter but what she gave them a name plate 'FOOLS'……she though dnt want Geet to be humiliated in whole bunch of people but she shouldn't be left free without confessing her mistake…..how dare she fools us……Naina is naturally very sweet and kind hearted but after hearing what Maan said that day that they are fooled by Geet she felt anger run through her nerves…..she never in her dreams thought that Geet would such thing with them and especially with their feelings………they all loved her to death but what she gave………..her thoughts are disturbed by a sound…………..

SLAPPPPPPPPP………………

Garden again fell in silent……..Sameera came towards them and turned Geet with her shoulders harshly and gave a tight slap……….yes the very Sameera who loved her sister dearly and can do anything for her happiness but this slap is for fooling not only Khurana's but also her….'how could she fool with them and how dare she do this with Maan………slap is so small to do for Geet compared to what she did to Khurana's…………what is with this girl how much she loved her……she always treated her as little girl and she always shares everything with her but she kept everything hidden from her and fooled me……how could she do this to me……. ' Sameera thought……………..

Geet felt pain for not slap but seeing her dii's eyes which were questioning her for what she had done……she couldn't see that look in her dii's eyes which are piercing her heart………….now this moment she just want earth to crack and take her away from all of them specially from her dii who is seeing with 'why u did' to me' look………………

Not only her dii her parents are also seeing her with full anger in their eyes and now she clearly felt guilty for what she had done……because of her stupid prank her parents are standing with shame before everyone and mostly her sister……….she is cursing herself for playing with her dii's love……..

'Tell me Geet how could u do this to my love……….dont u care for me……..u know that I love him the most if he is hurt it makes me most hurt than him………and least u care about anyone right???......what have I done ever to u for treating my love and his family like this……..dont u know about emotions……..' Sameera is yelling her lungs out on Geet…all the time Geet is crying with her down………Darji and Latha felt bad for Sameera getting so much pain due to her own sister…………….

Sameera left Geet not getting any response from her turned to Maan who is staring at Geet and who staring at ground…………………'Maan I am really sorry I never know about this and u never told me too……..anyways I am sorry for my sister had done to you and ur family…………' she told by holding Maan's hands…..and on other side Sameera's parents are apologizing behalf of their daughter………..

'Sameera why you and your parents are apologizing when it should be some one in that place…….' Said by eyeing Geet………..and Geet's head is still glued to ground…….Sameera once again turned to Geet and told her 'Geet what u have done is not correct infact it is a mistake……….now if u feel guilty apologize to them……….' Geet with teary face raised her head Sameera instantly felt sorry for her sister but she cant excuse or melt Geet has done mistake and she should apologize……….Geet also thought that saying apologize would end this situation but she is wrong……………

'I.I…a..am so..sorry Maannn….' She said keeping her head down not looking into his eyes………..'Sorry hmmm sounds good from ur mouth but let me know one thing Ms.Handa do u know meaning of that 'S' word…….' Maan said raising her head with his fingers……….'And do u know when that word will be used when u feel really sorry from bottom of your heart………but ur making it an excuse to come out from this situation……u just want to escape from this situation so your using that word………………' Maan said seriously seeing into her eyes……………….'thennnn'………both Geet and Sameera asked…….

'U have to marry me…………..' Maan said looking deep into Geet's eyes………….

All are hell shocked hearing him…………………………reporters are also in same shock but clicked their pictures and quickly wrote their note to be printed……..

I don't know why this time less comments may be its getting bored if so tell me i'll stop and give good romantic ending..........

Please press like button if u like it.......and give comments yar (only if u like😊)it means a lot......in fact this time those comments only made me to write otherwise i wouldn't have.......more comments give more strength and so that i can write more........😉
Edited by suha_hasini - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
owsme update luv it plz continue soon cnt wait to read nxt part

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