ONLY YOU FF(Maaneet) Part 13 : Page 131 (28/8/11) - Page 17

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Part 6

Everything is dark…..doors are opened but no lights…Naina thought and came inside and switched on the lights………and saw Maan sitting on couch with his head in hands and looked like sobbing……..

'Maan beta are u alright……….?' Naina asked him by sitting beside him…..and saw him sliding to her lap and sobbing uncontrollably……….she doesn't no what happened but one thing she knows is he is crying for Geet………..he cried horribly last few weeks but know his cry is different his pain has something more…..his pain is visible………..when he cried for Geet he know that sometime or other she will be back in his life…..but now his sorrowful eyes are visible for ultimate pain……..she don't know what the pain and who gave but she is literally cursing them…………….

Why her son cant live happy…………and know why he is crying………did he had said Sameera about Geet and then she would have left him…….if it is then why would he cry……he also wants the same…..he don't want to cheat on her and get his Geet back…….so that is not the reason then why he is crying…

'Maaa I am that bad…………….?????????' Maan asked in very heart aching way no mother can control…..she took him in her arms and hugged him so tightly as if taking all his pain………but one thing she don't know is his heart broke and never can be mended…………

'Maan what happened……….your words are killing me….' She asked….'Tell me maaa I am that bad to get love from loved ones…………..' he asked while sobbing with all his pain…………..'No beta ur too sweet to be loved and everyone loves you more than u does…….see myself and your papa loves you a lot………' Naina is trying to answer him while pacifying but he is not convinced 'No maaa I loved her a lot but she…she…' he couldn't talk.….. his words stopped….tongue tight……..

'She….' Naina enquired …………'Whom ur referring Maan….i cant get u….' She asked all confused……….

'GEE…GEET………….' Maan said with dry voice………..

'Geet…' she said slowly and looked at him with 'Care to explain' look

'Geet is Sameera's sister………I saw her in airport….she came to receive Sameera……..' Maan said gulping his answer……..

'Geet is Sameera's sister…..that means have u seen her Maan……..how is my little princess……is she alright……did she ask about me…...' asked excited Rishab for their little princess……he entered house when Maan said about Geet and very eager to know about her well fare……'she sh…..' Maan couldn't speak…...''She she what Maan tell me how is she….' roared Rishab as he is loosing his temper…..

Maan knows how much his father loves Geet as a daughter……….infact everyone in home loves her a lot…….'Maan im waiting……' Maan heard his father voice and looked at him…………

Few hours back

'Maan this is my lovely sister GEET……….Geet he is my fianc Maan……' Sameera introduced……..Maan felt all his nerves stiffen after hearing Sameera…'Geet is Sameera's sister……

His mind is blocked for the quite introduction and his eyes moist……..Geet is Sameera's sister……and she is normal……she said simple 'Hi' to me as if im stranger……….had she forgot me……..has she really forgot me……..no that cant be……….she cant forget me…..i mean I know she may got her memory back but how can she forget her memories with me…….no she cant………and now how I am going to say about Geet to Sameera and mostly how im going to get Geet back……………………wait wait Maan why are you so frustrated think think…………

'Maan ur worrying unnecessarily….. who knows she may remember u…..yes she may(smiling at his thought)…..but if she remember me why the hell she is not reacting in the same way as im……like happy shock confuse………in fact she is is looking like she is the most happy person but that happiness is not for him but for her so called sister which I don't know still about their realtion……….by passing each second Maan is feeling restless…….

Atlast like eternity Maan came to earth when Sameera called him 'Maan u don't want to meet my sweet sister……..i introduced but I think ur not interested in meeting my sister……….' Sameera said with slight mocking………'hmmm Sameera is she really your sister……?' Maan asked atlast gathering some voice………….'Maan was that a question……..ya ofcourse she is my one only one beautiful little sis.........and that's what I said before……' she said and turned to Geet 'Hmmm Geet so he is ur jijaji………'

Geet pouted and said 'ohooo no di…..look at him he is soooo cute I cant call him jiju I love to call my jiju by his name……..MAAN haaaaa it sounds so cooooooooolllllllllll……..!!!!!!!!and di I must tell u he is sooooooo chweeeeet……….i like pulling his cheeks………' Geet said in super excited tone………'And I like pulling my hair out…….what they are talking…and 'jiju' what the hell is happening……so has she really forgot me……..' he thought and felt tug when he thought she forgot him…..that only thought is enough to end his life……his Geet forgetting him this is equal to 1000 deaths……….

'hi Maan…………' Geet extended her hand excitingly….Maan too responded for her handshake…why not he is dieing to touch her……'Maan u know I heard about u from Dii a lot…….she simply adores u…..and from the day I heard about u im dieing to c u…………and at last im here to c u………..' she said in high happy voice……….

'Are u seeing…m… me for the fir…first time…..???' Maan asked in quivering voice to Geet…. 'No…….' Geet said and both Sameera and Maan looked at her with questioning and shocking eyes……'I had seen you in Page3 with Sameera di for the first time……u remem di u should his pic in page3……'she said………..'So this clearly means she doesn't remember me…….now what im going to do…….how im going to get her back……for first I have to know what happened to her after leaving his home and how she lost and gained memory…………for this I have to talk to Sameera….and decided to know Geet's past………..' thought Maan

Maan Sameera and Geet left to Handa's house……….car journey was hell for Maan……..he constantly looking at her to get her smile only for him but she engrossed in her talk with her sister and she never saw him through out the journey…..other side Sameera is not leaving Maan's side…….always tugging her arm to his and leaning on his chest which is completely irking him…….. but he controlled……

Darji - Sameera and Geet's Father

Latha – Sameera and Geet's Mother

'Hi Maan beta how are you it's a long time seeing u………….last two weeks u never walked to your office I think…….' Darji asked Maan….'Haaa uncle voh kya hain na….im little bit busy that's why…………' Maan said to make sure that everyone believed his answer………Darji Latha Sameera and Geet all are talking happily and discussing about their marriage………..he is dieing to talk to Sameera about Geet but he didn't get any chance……

'Sameera take Maan to ur room until I arrange food…….'Latha said 'Come on Maan…..' Sameera said while grinning……'oye hoye my sweet di is feeling so shy to talk to his would be……… ' Geet said while hitting her shoulder with her in teasing manner 'Shut up Geet…..i know Maan for last two and half years and why should I feel shy my sissy……' Sameera said while twisting Geet's ear..'Ohooo diii its paining…….ok ok now stop this and take your sweetheart to ur room…….and no dirty thoughts yar…please…..' she said while winking at her sister and walked away from them…………

Maan saw Geet and how mature she looks and her cute little talks were replaced by sweet and teasing talks……all the time when she talks he can only assume her as his little bacha his princess………..how she used to always bug him to take her to ice cream in mid nights and take his all pain away with her cute talks when he return from office…..and playing with his father around the house and making his mother drain for the day doing her little things and mostly her sweet cute childish talks with her toto…………….and his experience with this little princess are never forgettable…..seeing her in this new avtar is so different………….

'Maan shall we………' his thoughts were interrupted by Sameera…'Ye…Yes..' he said and laid his way with her……both entered Geet's room as Sameera's room is getting cleaned……..after entering his eyes rest on Geet's photo which is on wall..it is so large and she is looking so cute with goggles on her hair and licking ice-cream as cute as possible………….he is disturbed from his favorite land when he fell himself on bed with Sameera on top of him………

'Maan I missed u like hell………..u know I feared when I didn't get ur calls in last two months………and im really very angry on u………but when Naina aunty called me and said that ur were busy in some new contract I felt peace……and when aunty said that u said to prepone marriage date I felt jump in my heart…and I thought that ur more happy for getting married than myself…….thanks a lot Maan……………' telling she hugged him on bed and started kissing his neck…….

'Sameera please….leave me….Sameera please……..' but Sameera didn't feel leaving him and this is seriously annoying him and just by looking once at Geet's photo he felt guilty as if he is cheating on her……….. 'Sameera please leave me some one may come…..' he is trying hard not to hurt her but she is making no way other than push her……then he heard Latha calling Sameera…'oho maaa what a timing……..Maan I'll just come….' Sameera made a exit from room leaving alone Maan in Geet's room……………..

Maan feeling angry on himself……he doesn't no how to tell Sameera that he is in love with Geet who happened to be her sister………and the big problem is he doesn't know what happened to Geet he want to find about her past……then his eyes caught red........ dairy……….

He opened it and saw a beautiful pic of his heart yup its his Geet's pic………looking once at her picture is enough why he fell in love with this girl will be revealed…she is truly sweetheart………the look in her eyes speaks a lot…....he eagerly turned pages and learned she is most mischievous girl as expected…… and her pranks are countless………he laughed reading her pranks on people………then his eyes stopped on one page which is return…….

'Today Di told me about Maan Singh Khurana her fiance…………Di is madly in love with him but how this guy looks inner I mean his attitude and his heart in real………….i cant just marry him to my di without knowing him clearly……..i mean u know na dairy I love di so much…….i cant see her sad…..if this so called Maan do something which makes my di sad I'll kill him……….but according to di he is very kind hearted and single women man…………..so I think he keeps her happy whole her life….if not I'll take his life out…………..ok good night dairy…….catch u tomorrow………'

'Oho dairy im really so happy u know why……….u know Maya…..arey yar my stupid friend…yup ya that girl challenged me again to loose her challenge as usual……..u know what the challenge is.....'after reading that he felt killing himself…………..

'To Make MAAN SINGH KHURANA believe that I am "MAD"……..for two months…….'

He read that line repeatedly to make sure whether he is reading it right or not but to his dismay he read it correctly and feeling that earth to divide and eat away him………dairy slide from his hands and he felt dizzy……….he is feeling suffocated………..' To Make MAAN SINGH KHURANA believe that I am MAD….these lines are constantly echoing his mind………he felt suffocated and left the room which led him to corridor of her room…..there he saw Geet with her friends talking……………….

'Geet I must say u u are born actress……what an acting Geet…………!!!!!!!!we followed all places where u went last two months and really i must say the whole family believed u like hell…………and the great business man Rishab Singh Khurana believed you and what he used to call u 'Princess'……..and that lady, most Famous Naina Singh Khurana Doctor also believed you………..and Maan he just believed you like hell…….he will always be there for you……and took care of ur single need like ur a small kid………………' a girl(Maya) said and all the girls laughed……….

He watched carefully Geet during all the conversation Geet is giving her best smile may be for winning her so called challenge by making me fool……….yes she won the challenge he truly made himself clearly a fool………..and her laugh is breaking his heart into small pieces which can never be attached……….

'So Maya now will u believe that I always win……….and atleast now make something my level challenges……….' And laughed evilly……..'But if he asks Sameera di about u…………..' Maya asked….'Maya dear he wont ask because he thinks that I got my memory back…So now keep ur idiotic and stupid thoughts a side and enjoy my success……………u know Maya I must say thanks to u……..because of ur challenge I entered his life and got to know that he is very nice person and most suitable to my sweet sister…………..' Geet said with victorious smile………

'but u know Geet whenever we see u both….u both looked as "Perfect Pair"…..' her other friend said…..''Me and Maan never……..he is totally opposite to me…and stop ur bakwas about that "Perfect Pair"…' because he is only my dii's hubby and sweet heart of my dii………………' she said dreamily……..

That's it he cant hear anymore……he left the room and headed down the stairs……'Maan Maan……..' Sameera shouted seeing Maan leave the house…………. 'Sameera Maan left……..why beta…..' Latha asked her daughter…..' don't know ma……may be he got some important call…..' Sameera said…………

'Maan where are u going……..' Geet asked seeing him exit house……….he didn't answer but glared at her with red blood shot eyes……………..Geet felt fear and shiver run through her veins seeing him like that………

Geet felt something wrong in Maan's behavior……she know him very well than anyone…………..'What happened to him……….did he got to know about me………???? NO NO how would he know…….actually what will he know….he thinks I got my memory back………………I wish God to keep him believe that I got my memory back and keep shut before my parents and my Diii………' she thought

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OMG!!!!!!!!

😲i hate "GEET😡"awesome update but "SHOCKING😲TWIST"

hey it is awesome update

OMG wat an update luved it WAIT did Maan read the full diary. I think nooo. ok m getting impatient plz update quickly

Hate Geet for doing that yaar

What an update! Plz update soon.waitin 2 read more of it plz ths tym cnt wait til nxt sat..

der goes my verdict ...........awesome twist ........i hate Geet ... gosh she knew Maans her jiju still she hugged him nd slept lyk a lid ........changing clothes nd stuff.......must say shez reall bold ....nd bechara Maan he luvd her ...he called her bacha ...my princess .....he shud nvr accept Geet ...she playd with his emotions ..all while he searchdfr her nd dis female enjoying his victory .........