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i just came across ur ff...
n now m going thru it....
its just brilliant...
loved it very much....
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nice part.......??

who's d new one cumin now?
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hey..
lovely FF...read it all now only...loved it...plz update soon nd do PM me...😊😊
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Really liked ur ff wanna read more plz pm me if u can n I think maan is tking abt sameera dear
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hi ur ff s quite interesting
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Sorry for the delay in the update & friends thank you very much for your loving & wonderful comments … please let me know how you all liked this update … thanks a lot once again …

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Girls I am not that great in medical procedures … but have given a little try over here … please let me know how you liked this update … because I am curious to know your opinion …

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Part 49:-

Continuing form where I left … after maan seeing someone in the room no.701 …

Maan to himself – "is it her … what is she doing in this ward & what happened to her …. & What is she doing in India … she was in canada when I saw her last or rather say when she left …. How can I forget her … after what ever she did to me …. I need to find out what she is doing in delhi …

by the way maan what happened to you why are you worried at the sight of her … not that geet does not know anything about you … geet knows your deepest secrets too … about your past … so geet will not have any problem …

babaji … I don't want any complications in our life specially for geet … all I want is geet's happiness … it took her so long to forget her past …. My past … now all of a sudden … she is in the same hospital as geet … but what is the reason …. Let me find out about her … "

Maan notes down the room no & goes to the reception to enquire about the patient in the room no. 701 ... while maan was waiting at the reception … maan was lost in thoughts … not sure whether he saw her or that was some one else …

Maan to himself – "is it her or someone else … it is her only … my memory is not that bad … that I forget people's faces so easily … but why is she in a sickly constitution … she was looking as though she's been suffering since a long time ….probably since some years … she is looking so aged …. than she is supposed to be … she is looking so different … as though all happiness has been drained out of her life …"

Imaginary Maan in front of maan – what for you maan … how she looks like … is it necessary for you … you go & check on geet …. Geet & prem need you & they must be waiting for you right now … go over there … stay with your family …. just leave from here …

Maan was lost in thoughts debating on whether to find out or not about that person … finally decides to leave … so maan turns his back … thinking about leaving …

Maan – yes I am going back …

but … before he leaves …

Visitor – excuse me … can you please tell me in which room …

is sameera khanna admitted to …

looks like maan's question has been answered even before he enquires about sameera from the nurse at the reception …

Nurse 1 – sameera khanna … you mean the cancer patient …

Visitor – yes nurse … it's her … only …

Nurse 1 – she is in Room.No . 701 …

he over hears visitor & nurse conversation & stops over there as he never expected that she might be suffering from cancer …

Maan to himself – "sameera ko cancer hain … isi liye wo aise dikh rahin thi … apni umar sae bhi jyada dikh rahin thi … aur kamzor bhi… "

Visitor – thank you nurse …

The visitor leaves …

But before maan starts walking away from the reception area … towards his destination … as he was lost in thoughts with so many questions in his mind & due to this … he gets to eavesdrop on the nurses conversation … he is still in reception area …

Nurse 1 – bechari …

Nurse 2 – kaun … bechari ….

Nurse 1 – wohi sameera khanna …

Nurse 2 – kyun kya hua ….

Nurse 1 – tumne suna nahin ….

Nurse 2 – nahin … tho …

Nurse 1 – cancer patient hain na wo ….

Nurse 2 – oh haan … kaun sa cancer hain …

Nurse 1 - almost 7 years se uska treatment chal rahan hain … tab se breast cancer se lad rahin hain …

Nurse 2 – oh 7 years se breast cancer se lad rahin hain ….

Maan to himself – "7 years sae … matlab … "

{ ok need to tell you all some calculations as it is necessary before we proceed … well right now pari is 4 years & 10 months … & geet was married to maan when she was 2 months & 1 week preg* so geet delivered pari when she just entered the 9 month …

so that it makes 4 years 10 months(pari's age) + 9 months (pari in geet's tummy) ….

So geet came to know she was preg* for first time 5 years & 7 months ago … & say appx. 4 weeks before that maan & geet's first meeting happened …

so assuming that since maan & geet first met in the mela … the total time that was passed is 5 years & 8 months …

so now I hope you all got why I am explaining the time gap … well if you have not got it never mind will explain later on …}

Nurse 1 – aur … abhi wo apna treatment bhi nahin karana chahthi hain … par uska treatment zabardasthi karwa rahen hain … uskae parents.

Nurse 2 – acha …

Nurse 1 – haan … bechari ko dekhthe hain naa … tho bahut dukh hotha hain … kitne saalon se … cancer se lad rahin hain … bas ab tho wo chand dinon ka mehmaan hain … patha nahin … ithnae himmat ke saath wo kaise lad rahin thi … ithne saalon se …. Ithni takleef main hain … par phir bhi uff tak nahin karthi …

Maan softly to himself – sirf chand dino ka mehmaan hain … matlab …

Nurse 2 – oh … ho … ho … bechari … par … tumhe yeh sab kaise malum hain … kya tum uski incharge ho … kya …

Nurse 1 – haan … main hi uski incharge hun … achi ladki hain …

Nurse 2 – acha … aur shadi vaadi … bache vache …

Nurse 1 – arey nahin … shadi bhi nahin kiya uss ne …

Maan listens to the entire conversation … now … all his previous questions have been answered … but now he has new questions in his mind … he is walking away from the reception …

Maan to himself – "sameera is suffering from cancer …. Breast cancer since 7 years …. What does this means … she came to know that she has breast cancer when we were going around in canada …. That's why her behaviour changed all of a sudden … after coming to know that she has cancer … is this the reason why she left me … or did she cheat me for real … what should I do …. Shall I meet her … & find out the reason … "

Maan to himself –" now that I have come to know that she is about to die in few days …. Shall I go and meet her … just out of humanity …. "

Maan to himself – "maan what are doing … do you really want to go & meet her … Geet & prem need you and are waiting for you … go near geet ..."

Maan is on the way to geet's room … dadima & vicky are already present with geet … dadima has the baby in her hands … vicky is standing next to dadima … wanting to hold the baby in his hands … but dadima is not giving him the baby …

Vicky – dadima please mujhe dijiye naa …

Dadima – prem ko maine abhi tho liya hain … thodi daer tho mujhe apni par pothe ko jee bhar kae dekhne dijiye …

Vicky – please dadima …

Maan enters the room … sits next to geet …

Dadima – prem ke features aap dono se kaafi milthi hain … complexion & aakhen geet kae hain … uskae alava … prem pura maan jaise dikhthe hain … acha hain .. dono ke features aaye hain … prem ko …

geet is looking at maan & smiling … geet expecting maan to say some thing … but … maan just smiled back to her … but is not participating in the conversation going on …

Geet – dadima … pari ne aap ko pareshan tho nahin ki na …

Dadima – nahin geet … bete … pari … ne kuch nahin kiya … chup chap school chali gayi hain … jab wo school se aajayegi tho usse yahan le ayenge …

Geet – teek hain … dadima …

Geet – vicky … pari ne kuch shaitani tho nahin ki na …

Vicky – nahin … baudi … uss ne kuch nahin kiya ….

Geet – main janthi hun … uss ne jaroor school ke liye ready hothe waqt aap dono ko tang kiya hoga …

Vicky – nahin baudi … ussne aisa kuch nahin kiya … halaki … maine enjoy kiya … uss ke saath time spend karna …

Geet – teek hain …

Geet notices that maan is still not participating in the conversation … she is feeling that it is strange & not common of maan to behave that way … maan is not looking the same how he was … when he left to make a call outside … before he left the room he was looking so happy …

geet thinks that may be maan is tired because of no sleep yesterday night … that's why he is looking like that … totally off …

Vicky – ab tho mujhe dijiye dadima …

Dadima – yeh lijiye vicky …

Vicky takes the baby in his hands …

Vicky to the baby – oh my sweetie pie … you are looking so cute …

Dadima – maan & geet … humare jaane se pehle … aap dono lunch karlijiye … geet aap ke liye … khana alag se hain … aap wohi khayiye …. Teeka khana mana hain …

Geet – teek hain dadima …

Geet – dadima … lagtha hain … maan tak gaye hain … main akeli reh lungi … aap maan ko ghar lejayiye …

Geet – maan … maan …

Geet shakes maan's hand…

Maan – haan … geet …

Geet – aap bahut thak gaye hain … aap ghar jayiyen … shaam ko pari ke saath aajayiye …

Maan – nahin … geet … main tumhe aise akele chod ke nahin jaa sakhtha hun … main yahin rahunga …

Dadima – geet … maan aapke paas hi rahenge …. Aur sham ko pari ke athe hi … main ya phir vicky usse idhar le ke aa jayenge …

Geet – par dadima …

Maan – geet main tumhara paas hi rahunga … samjhi tum …

Dadima – abhi aap dono pehle lunch kar lijiye …

Dadima – maan aapne bathaya nahin … geet ke parents kab aarahen hain …

Maan – wo darji ki tabiyat thodi karab hain isi liye … wo log abhi aa nahin payenge …

Geet – kya … darji ki tabiyat teek nahin hain …

Maan – geet … no need to worry … darji … jald hi teek ho jayenge … tum phikar math karo … treatment chal rahan …

Geet – par maan …

Maan – maine kahan naa … maaji aur papaji ne kahan jald hi teek hojayenge … gabra ne wali koi baath nahin hain … samjhi tum …

Geet nods her head … Geet & maan have their lunch … while prem was with vicky … dadima was serving maan & geet lunch…. Dadima ready to leave …

Dadima – teek hain geet … aap apna khayal rakhiye …

Geet – ok dadima …

Dadima – maan … aap geet ka khayal rakhiye …

Maan – dadima … main hoon naa … main dekh lungaa … aap jayiye …

Dadima – vicky chaliye ….

vicky hands over prem to geet … so vicky is on one side of geet … dadima is on the other side of geet …

vicky – baudi … yeh lijiye … abhi tho main prem ko aap ko de rahan hun … par baad main usse …. main apne paas hi rakhunga …

geet – teek hain vicky … pari aur prem ko tum hi sambhal na … teek hain …

vicky – baap re baap … dono ko …

geet - haan … aap ko majaa aya tha naa … pari ke saath … aur …prem ke saath … ab aap hi dono ko sambhaliye … main maan ke saath ofice sambhal thi hun … aur agar aap ko madad ki jaroorat padi tho hum aap ki shadi kara denge … phir aap ki dulhan se kaam kar wa lenge … hain na …

vicky – haan baudi …. neki aur poonch poonch …

geet – bahut jaldi ho rahin hain shaadi ke liye ….

Vicky – haan baudi … wasie tho main … bahut hi seedha sadha ladka hun … par agar mere pair wair phisal gaye tho …

Geet dadima & vicky laugh … but maan is looking lost … geet notices this … thinks about asking him what's bothering him once dadima & vicky leave …

Dadima – geet … lagtha hain … ab humein vicky ke liye ladki dekhni shuru karni padegi … main apni … circle main uske liye ladki dekhlethi hun … wohi teek lagega … hain naa … geet …

Geet & vicky are surprised & shocked ….& thinking what if she seriously starts searching for the girl …

Vicky & geet – kya …. Nahin …

Dadima – nahin … kya matlab hain …

Geet looking at maan for help … as she did not want to break news to Dadima about rajji & vicky in this way … as rajji & vicky's love story is unknown to the elders of the family … but no response from maan …

Vicky – dadima … main na mazak kar rahan tha ...

Dadima – acha mazak kar rahen thae …

Vicky – haan dadima …

Dadima – par main mazak nahin kar rahin thi … I am serious vicky …

Vicky silently begging geet to do some thing …

Geet – dadima … main soch rahin thi … ki apni devrani ko main doondu … kya main yeh kaam kar sakhthi hun … dadima …

Dadima – geet agar aap yeh zimmedaari apne sirr pae lena chahthe hain … tho mujhe koi problem nahin hain … teek hain … aap hi doond lena … phir tho main bhi chain ki saans le sakhthi hun …

Geet & vicky show thumbs up to each other …

Geet – teek hain dadima …

maan is still silent … geet notices that… & decides on finding out from maan what's bothering him after Dadima & vicky leave …

Dadima – teek hain geet & maan … hum abhi jaa rahen hain …

Maan & Geet – bye … dadima …

Dadima & vicky leave after they bid good bye to geet & maan … maan closes their room door … geet feeds prem … maan is sitting next to geet … after geet finishes feeding prem … makes him to sleep …

Geet – maan … baath kya hain ….

Maan – kya geet …

Geet – aapki pareshani ki wajah kya hain … maan …

Maan – kuch nahin geet … koi pareshani nahin hain …

Geet – par aapka chehra tho kuch aur hi batha rahan hain …

Maan – geet main teek hun … tum aaram karo …

Geet – maan aap kya chupa rahen hain …

Maan – kuch nahin … geet … aaram karo … dekho prem ko …. kitna aram se so rahan hain …. Hain naa …

Geet – haan … so tho rahan hain … maalum hain aap ko … Prem main naa … mujhe aap hi dikhthe ho …

Maan – geet ab thodi daer ke liye so jao …

Geet – aap bhi thodi daer kae liye … aaram kar lijiye naa … aap bhi poore raat se soye nahin naa … main tho phir bhi aaram kar rahin hun …

Geet – maan … prem so gaya hain … aap usse cradle main … aaram se leta daenge …

Maan does as Geet tells him makes prem sleep comfortably in the cradle … pats him a little bit so that prem does not wake up from his sleep … maan then comes back to geet … sits next to her … geet then opens her arms wide … asking maan to come & hug her …

Geet – maan … idhar ayiye … mere paas …

Geet gives some space for him … so that he can lay down next to her … maan hugs geet … adjust himself next to her … lays down next to her … both hugging each other … maan hugs her too tight … hiding himself in her chest … geet is caressing his back … more like a mother … because she understood … that there is something serious that is bothering maan…

maan hugs her like that very rarely … only when he is disturbed & becomes too emotional or when he feels he is helpless … maan singh khurana & helpless you all must be thinking how can that be … well maan was not like this before … he is not any more the same maan who kept himself away from all the emotions …

Being married to geet & having his family with her … the threat that some thing might ruin his geet's happiness his children's happiness makes him feel emotionally weak or say more helpless … sometimes …

geet remembering the time when maan hugged her the same way … when he felt helpless … when he felt that his family's happiness might be affected … one such incident is when pari fell ill seriously …

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when pari was around 3 years old & she was suffering from high fever … that time pari could not even open her eyes because of her health condition … pari was crying a lot because of weekness as she did not want to eat anything … he could not see pari like that … talkative pari lying on the bed with her eyes closed & weak … that day she asked maan 1 question which bought tears to his eyes …

pari – paapa … main kab teek ho jaungi … main tho dawayi bhi le lahin hun … phir bhi babaji mujhe teek kyun nahin kal lahen hain …

maan was almost on the verge of tears … but controlled his tears in front of pari & answered her …

maan – pari beta … tum apni papa ki pari ho naa …

pari – yes papa …

maan – tumhare paapa … tumhare saath hain pari beta hamesha … tum yeh baath … janthi ho na …

pari – yes papa …

maan – phir … tum jaldi hi teek hojayengae … aur mamma bhi babaji se pray kar rahin hain tumhare liye … ab so jayiye …

and after answering her & making her sleep … goes and hugs geet … just the same way like I mentioned above …

he was taking care of pari day and night … he rarely used to sleep in the nights & never used to leave pari's bed side … maan did not allow anyone to take care of her … not even geet … if pari had a speedy recovery it was because of maan …

geet knows how much he loves pari & can't stay without seeing her & talking to her … that's why maan makes it a point to even go to her school during lunch hours when ever possible so that he can meet his pari … like the way he hates to see tears in geet's eyes … it's the same with pari … & any day if pari cries then that day … he makes sure that he makes pari laugh so much that she forgets why she was crying …

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geet now gets it confirmed that there is some thing that is really bothering maan … she decides on finding about it … but not sure how …

Maan slept in her arms till late in the afternoon … he then woke up … geet again feeds prem … maan is talking to geet & prem … & is also asking why pari has not yet come … geet tells him once pari is back home dadima will bring her over here …

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Part 50 will be coming up shortly in next 30 min ….

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Part 50 :-

It's evening … pari comes back from school … dadi makes her eat some snacks & makes her drink milk & then gets her ready & takes her to the hospital to meet her mom ,dad & little brother …

As soon as pari sees maan … she runs towards him … with her arms open …

Pari – papa …

maan kneels down & hugs pari …

Maan – papa missed you pari beta …

Pari – I to missed you papa ….

Geet – ab mamma ko bhi koi miss kar rahen hain ki nahin …

Pari – nahin …

Geet – acha …. Nahin …

Pari laughs … she likes to irritate her mamma by teaming up with her dad …

Geet - batha thi hun main … rukja …

Pari – aap mujhe pakal nahin sakhthi …

Pari is laughing & jumping on maan … she is laughing like any thing …

Maan – pari … apni chote bhai ko nahin dekhenge …

Pari open her eyes more wide – bhai …

Maan – haan … bhai … chalo …

maan takes pari near geet & prem … dadima is already seated next to geet … prem is sleeping … pari wants to touch the baby but gets scared … geet gently makes her touch prem … but makes sure that …. Prem does not wake up …

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It's almost 7 days now that geet delivered prem … geet is back home … but she still notices that maan is still the same … the same worried look on his face ... but when he is around his kids … all his worries dissappear … geet cannot take it any longer & she decides to confront him today after he comes from office …

pari is studying in geet & maan's room … geet is with prem making him sleep & watching pari study & teaching her … maan enters their room … loosening his tie … as soon as maan enters the room … pari runs towards him … leaving everything what she was doing earlier … maan lifts her up & carries her in his arms … & sits on the bed along with pari …

maan – pari beta … aaj din bhar kya kiya …

pari – aaj school main … bahut mazaa kiya papa …

maan – acha … kya kiya pari ne …

pari laughs …. Maan loves the way she laughs …

pari – aaj na … hum ne sab games play kiya thae …

maan – acha … games play kiye thae …

pari – haan ….

maan was tickling her … pari is laughing like anything … while maan was tickling her …

maan – tho kya kya games play kiya humari beti ne …

pari – merry – go – round ….. see – saw …. Slide …. Swing …

maan – acha … tho phir enjoy kiya ki nahin …

pari – yes … papa … enjoy kiya …

Geet is watching both father & daugther …

Geet – maan … pari … shor kyun macha rahen ho … kam awaz main baath karon …

Maan – ok madam …

maan – pari beta thoda kam awaz main baath karengae … nahin tho mamma se hum dono aaj pitengae …

Pari again laughs … geet gives both of them a stern look & signals with her hand … to be silent otherwise she will spank both of them … pari now goes near maan's ears …

Pari – papa mujhe aap ka jhule main jhulna hain …

Maan – pari … ko jhula jhulna hain …

Pari nods her head ….

Maan – aja meri little angel … abhi jhula jhulathae hain …

maan is laying down & pari is now laying on maan's legs … with her head on maan's knees … & laying her self along his knee to ankle length … & now maan is lifting his legs in air & bringing them down … pari is again laughing … geet doing her ishara … to keep the volume down …

father daughter play like this for some more time …

geet calls nakul …

Geet – pari … bahut masti ho gayi aaj ke liye … ab jao …neeche … dadima ke paas … dadima ne tumhe neeche bulaya hain … tumhare dinner ka time ho gaya hain …

Pari – mujhe nahin kalna …

Geet – pari … abhi aap jayenge ki nahin … dinner ke baad wapas papa ke saath khel lena ….

Maan – haan pari beta … agar khana nahin khayenge tho … khelne ke liye energy kahan se aayega …

Pari – ok … papa … main jaldi kha ke aajaungi …

Nakul comes & takes pari with him …. Maan now lays down on the bed & is silent … geet places prem carefully on the bed … pats him a bit … & is looking at maan … maan closed his eyes … but she can see that he is stressed out … geet goes & locks the door …. Geet now comes & sits next to maan … places her hand on his head … maan opens his eyes …

Geet – maan baath kya hain ….

Maan – kaun si baath geet …

Geet – main aap se wohi poonch rahin hun … aapki pareshani ki wajah …

Maan – kuch nahin geet …

Geet – aap ko kya lagtha hain … ki aap kuch nahin bolenge …. aur mujhe kuch samajh main hi nahin ayega …. ab aap bathayiye problem kya hain …

Maan – leave it geet …

Geet – maan maine yeh nahin socha tha ki aap mujhse jo bhi kasme kayi thi wo aap bhul jayenge …

Maan gets up instantly … as soon as he hears geet's words …

Maan – geet yeh tum kya bol rahin ho …

Geet – wohi jo aap sun rahen hain …

Maan – geet maine kya kiya aur Main kya bhul gaya hun …

Geet – jo bhi kasme shadi ke waqt kiye thae …

Maan – geet … maine tho … sab nibhaye hain …

Geet – par aajkal nahin … maan ….

Maan – maine kya nahin nibhaya …

Geet – aapne kasam khayi thi …. ki aap mujhe apne dukh main sukh main sab main shamil karengae ….. main aapki sukh ki hi nahin … balki dukh ki bhi sathi hun ….

Maan – maine kab mana kiya geet ….

Geet – maan aapne mujhe apni sukh ki sathi tho banaya … par dukh ki sathi nahin banaya …

Maan – geet … aisi baath nahin hain geet …

Geet – phir kaisi baath hain maan …

geet hugs maan … maan too hugs her back …

geet – bathayiyen na maan … aap ko kaun si baath pareshan kar rahin hain …

Maan – geet … wo … wo …

Geet – boliye maan …

Maan – maine sameera ko dekha …

geet still hugging maan … but now she is looking at maan's face …

Geet – kya …

Maan – haan ….

Maan then tells her everything what happened from the time he saw her & what he heard from the reception …. Maan is feeling relieved now that he told every thing to geet … his tension is relieved …

Geet – maan … yeh baath … aapne mujhe pehle kyun nahin bataya hain ….

Maan – geet … mujhe laga ki …

Geet – maan … rehne dijiye … koi baath nahin … aap mere liye ek kaam karenge ….

Maan – kya geet …

Geet – hum sameera se milne jayenge … kal …

Maan – kya …

Geet – haan … maan …

Maan – par geet …

Geet – maan … aap hi ne kahan … na ki wo … sirf chand dinon ka mehmaan hain … tho mujhe lagtha hain ki humein usse ek baar millena chahiye ….

Maan – geet … malum nahin … main usse millu … mujhe acha nahin lagega …

Geet – maan … aap janthe hain … hum agar kisi ke shadi main jaa nahin paye tho …koi kuch nahin kahega … par agae koi marne wala hain ya mar gaya & hum unhe naa dekhe … tho shayad hum bhi khud kho kabhi maaf nahin kar paayenge …

Maan is thinking ….

Geet – waise bhi mujhe kal prem ko ek baar hospital le jana hain … uska check up ke liye … tho hum sameera se bhi mill lengae … mana math kariye maan ….

Maan – teek hain geet … agar tum bolthi ho tho … chalenge …

Maan & geet go to the hospital … maan enquires from the reception if sameera is still there in Room # 701 …. They inform him that she is been shifted to ICU …. As her condition has become more critical ….

Geet tells maan that … she will take prem to his check up & maan can meet sameera & she will come over there after prem's check up is finished ….

Maan was reluctant to go alone … but geet convinces him to go alone … maan now is walking towards ICU … & geet is walking in the opposite way with prem …

maan is outside ICU … sameera's parents are also outside …they both are crying on each other's shoulder … maan is now in front of them … they recognise maan & are quite shocked to see him over there … in front of them …

Mr.khanna – maan … tum … maan hi ho na ….

Maan – jee … main maan hi hun …

Mr.khanna – tum yahan pe … kissise milne aaye ho kya …

Maan - jee main … sameera se milne aaya hun … suna hain uski health achi nahin hain …

sameera's parents cry even more …

maan – kya baath hain … aap ro kyun rahen hain …

Mr.Khanna – humse sameera ka halath dekha nahin jaa rahan hain …

Maan – kya main usse mil sakhtha hun …

Mr.Khanna & Mrs.khanna are looking at each other's faces … and they are unable to decide to whether let maan meet sameera or not …

Mrs.khanna – jaa beta … mil lena …

Maan – ji thank you ….

maan enters ICU … sameera was looking even more worse today … than what she looked like the other day … her condition almost … gave maan shudders …. He can't believe his eyes that it was sameera who is lying on the bed in that state … sameera too recognises maan … but as soon as she sees maan …she turns to another side … (over here we all need to assume something that sameera's voice is very weak … & very soft … and barely we can hear it … with pause while she is talking … )

Maan – sameera …

Sameera – maan … why did u come over here …

Maan – sameera … I need some answers from you …

Sameera – what answers ………… will you get …………from a person ……… who is on death bed maan ……….

Maan – that is what I want to know … since when are you in this condition …

Sameera – does it matter …………

Maan – yes …

Sameera – 7 years ……

Maan – means even when …… you were in canada with me ……

Sameera nods her head …

Maan – what was the reason that you left me at that time ….

Sameera – what ever ………. you were …….. thinking maan ……….

Maan – I think I was wrong in judging you … what I thought was the reason ……… is not the reason ……….. why you left me …. Isn't it ….

[ In part 22 in maan's revelation update … maan reveals his entire past to geet … ]

Sameera again nods her head …

Maan – so the reason why you left me is cancer ….

sameera has tears rolling down her cheek … maan is feeling bad … about the whole incident … how he misunderstood her … sameera narrates him her entire story on why she left him …. There is silence in between them …

Sameera – so ……….. how are you ….….

Maan – I am fine sameera … & I am sorry too sameera for misunderstanding you …

Sameera – maan you don't have to say sorry ……… to me because what ever ………. happened was my decision ……… not yours ……….. you are ………… totally ignorant ………….. over the whole issue ………… so please don't blame your self ……………

Maan – but I misunderstood you ………….

Sameera – that was my plan ………… I wanted you to misunderstand me …………

Sameera – anyhow maan ……… I know I don't have much time …………… how is geet ………..

Maan – you know geet …

Sameera - you are forgetting ……. that you are maan singh khurana … I saw your wedding pictures ………….. in the news paper ………. & I am happy for you ……………..

Maan – but I am sorry for you …………

Sameera – don't be ……………..

There is a bit of silence … sameera still has tears in her eyes …

Sameera – I want to meet geet …

Maan – geet is over here in the hospital … she took prem for his check up …

Sameera – prem …

Maan – my son …

Sameera – oh … you have a daughter also na …

Maan – yes … pari …

over there prem's check up is finished …. Geet is walking towards ICU … and asking for directions … but the hospital staff inform her that she can't take the baby inside over there … geet quickly calls maan … telling him that she can't come in … maan informs the same to sameera …

sameera insists that she still want to meet geet & to inform geet that they can meet in the hospital garden & they will be coming to meet geet…

sameera rings the bell for service … Nurse1 comes for her assistance … sameera requests for a wheel chair … but the nurse protests that she can't go out in this condition as it might be fatal …. Sameera informs her that she does not care about it … finally the nurse helps sameera to get onto a wheel chair & accompanies them to meet geet in the hospital garden … as soon as they enter the garden …

Sameera – oh … it's been so long …. that I breathed fresh air … feels so good out here …

geet is already waiting for them …. Maan goes and stands next to geet … maan was about to introduce geet to sameera … but sameera signals him that no need to introduce … as they both kind of know each other …

Sameera – glad to meet you geet …

Geet – same here …. Sameera …

Sameera – may I have ….. a look at your son … please …

Geet – sure …

Geet was about to hand over prem to sameera … but …

Sameera – no geet … please ………. don't bring ………. prem near me … he is hardly few days old baby … I will look at him from far …

Geet – it's ok … sameera … you can hold him … we don't mind …

Sameera – no geet ... please ….. I will look at the baby from far …

geet does as sameera says … shows prem to sameera …

Sameera – he has both of your features …

geet & maan nod … Sameera with tear filled eyes ….

Sameera – maan & geet … I could not ………. wish you both ……… for you wedding … but I am wishing ……… both of you now …. Have a happy married life … & may you both ……… find all the happiness in the world ……….

Sameera wiping her tears … Maan & geet also are feeling bad …

Sameera – ok … maan & geet … I will have to leave now …

Sameera – nurse chalo …

she leaves even before maan & geet could answer anything … geet & maan reach home … & were thinking about how they misunderstood her … maan too narrates geet the entire story … & she just gave him the impression that she cheated him … so that maan misunderstands her …. where as she never cheated him off anything … & what little she took from him on purpose … she actually donated it to cancer ward on khurana's name ….

Next day Mr.khanna calls maan & informs him that sameera passed away in the night …. Maan informs geet about sameera's death … geet & maan both feel bad for sameera & attend her funeral …

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amazing n sad part.......plzzzzz continue soon...n if possible plz add me to ur pm list.......
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di... awesome update feel sorry for Sameera...
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Its realy sad sam did all those thing just to save maan god but luved ur update do continue soon

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