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Part 44:-

After making all the necessary preparations for the baby shower … Geet & maan both get ready for the baby shower … geet is wearing a hot pink & green ghagra …. While maan is wearing a green sherwani to match with hers …

Maan then picks up his mother's pink spinell set which has jades also in it … as he wanted geet to wear it for her baby shower …

Maan – geet … tum aaj yehi peh nogi …

geet is sitting in front of the dressing table & looking at maan with a smile & blinking her eyes in a yes … maan now coming towards geet … takes the necklace out from the box & Keeps the jewelry box on the dressing table & stands behind her & then bends down & moves her hair forward on her shoulder … places the necklace in geet's neck … & hooks it & then kisses her back …

Geet – maan … main bhi yehin pehanna chahthi thi aaj … aur aapne bhi yehin necklace pick kiya ….

Maan – kyun ki main tumhara dil, dimag aur ankhen sab padh sakhtha hun … hain ki nahin … geet …

Geet – haan so tho hain … aap sab padh sakhthae hain … maine kab mana kiya hain ….

Geet now takes out the earrings from the box which maan kept on the dressing table … maan comes & stands in front of her & places his hands in front of her for the earrings … geet gives it to him … geet gets up from her seat looking into his mesmerizing deep love filled eyes … as she understood what he had in his mind … he places the earrings in both her ears & one by one … while his forehead was touching hers & both of theirs eyes closed … & feeling the moment & then after that … maan places his hand on geet's chin & pulls her face towards him & then kisses her forhead ... her eyes … her nose … then her cheeks …

Maan – geet … janthi ho … aaj tum kaise dikh rahin ho …

Geet – kaise …

Maan - dulhan jaise dikh rahin ho … tum aaj bahut khoobsurat dikh rahin ho geet …

Geet – acha … tho sirf aaj hi khubsoorat dikh rahi hun …

Maan – aaj hi nahin … roz sundar dikh thi ho … par aaj aaj tumhara chehrae pae wo chamak hain …

Geet – acha …

Maan in his sensous voice – haan … aur … dil tho kar rahan hain ki tumhein aaj mere paas hi rakhu kahin nahin jaane du …

maan pulling her even more close to his face with his hand on her chin … that their noses are touching each other's noses … head to head … nose to nose … they both remain like that for some time … & then geet gives a side hug to maan …. while hug continues …

Geet – maan … aap hamehsa … aise hi mere paas rahiye …

Maan – sweetheart main tumhe chod ke kahan jaa ungaa … aur yeh tho batho … tumhe chod kae main kabhi akele reh sakhtha hun … kabhi nahin … ek pal bhi nahin … aur dur jaane ka tho sawal hi nahin uttha hain …

Geet – maan main aap ke bina … nahin reh sakhthi … hun …

Maan – jantha hun … isi liye tho main london bhi nahin gaya … kyun ki tumhe aise halat main chod kae jaane … wo mujhsae nahin hota …

Geet – meri wajah sae aap ko pareshani ho rahin hain naa … aap apna kaam bhi nahin karpa rahen hain …

Maan – kabhi bhi aise math sochna … geet …

Geet nodding her head in a yes …

Maan - mere life main … kaam sae jyada important hain family … agar family hi nahin hain … tho main kaam kiskae liye karun … tho isi liye sweet heart jyada soch na nahin … bas kush rahon … kyun ki ….

Geet – meri kushi main hi aap ki kushi hain … hain naa …

Maan – haan … hum dono ki kushi ek dusre main hi hain … aur hamare pari main hain … geet ….

Geet loosening the hug for a second & then planting a kiss on maan's cheek … maan while bending on his knees maan now placing his cheek on geet's belly …

Maan – main aap ko bhula nahin hun … yeh lo aap ka daily dose …

Maan Then kissing geet's belly … & again has his cheek on belly …

Maan – ab jaldi sae aajao beta … papa ko aur kitna intezaar karwaogi …

Geet – sirf papa ko … aur main … mujhe bhul gaye …

Maan – haan … haan teek hain … pari beta … mama kae liyae bhi …

Geet – abhi aisa … haal hain … ek baar beti aa gayi tho uskae baad tho mama ko koi yaad bhi rakhengae ki nahin … naa papa …. Na pari …

Maan – haan nahin rakhengae … papa aur pari ek team …

Geet – kya …

Maan looking at geet ….

Maan – kya … kya …

Geet – maan …

Maan – geet …

Geet – maan …

Maan – chalo teek hain … aap ki mama bhi kya yaad rakhegi … hum unhen bhi hamarae team main shamil karlaengae …

maan plants another kiss on her belly … maan looking at geet & then they both give a smile to each other … now that geet is ready … maan makes her sit on their bed … he too sits on the bed holding her hand … geet resting her head on maan's shoulder … maan keeping his hand on her head … geet suddenly …

geet – oh … yaad aaya …

Maan – kya yaad aaya tumhein …

Geet – vicky kae baaren main …

Maan – vicky …

Geet – haan … aapne dekha … uss ka chehra parso raat sae kaise khil rahan tha …

Maan – haan dekha tho tha …

Geet – janthae hain aap … uss din jab main uss sae baath karnae gayi thi … tab bhi wo udaas tha … par achanak … dinner kae baad sae uskae cherae pae kushi dikh rahin hain …

Maan – chalo … tumhara ek phikar kam hogaya … ab tho kush raho geet …

Geet – kush tho main hun … maan … par aap samjhe nahin …

Maan – ab main kya nahin samjha ….

Geet – mujhe tho dal main kuch kaala lag rahan hain …

Maan – daal main kaala …

Maan – tum yeh kaun sa code language use kar rahin ho …

Geet – uff pho maan … aap tho kuch samajh thae nahin hain …

Maan – main kya nahin samajh rahan hun … geet …

Geet - ab tho mujhe shakh ho rahan hain … ki … kya wo aap hi thae jisne mujhsae pyar kiya … aur mere peeche pade thae … aap tho pyar kae baaren bahut kuch janthe hain … ab kaise nahin samjhae …

Maan – geet … yeh tum kya bol rahin ho … aur humara pyar ka vicky sae kya sambandh hain ….

Geet – hain … sochiyen jara …. jaroor kuch baath hain … vicky humse kuch chupa rahan hain …

Maan – kaun si baath … chupa rahan hain …

Geet – mujhe lagtha hain … koi ladki hain …

Maan shocked – ladki …

Geet – aap ithna hairan kyun ho rahen hain … akhir bhai aap kae hain … kuch tho asar ho ga na …

Maan – acha … ab maine kya kiya …

Geet – aap ne kya kiya … kyun bhul gaye hamare baaren main … ab suniye meri baath …

Maan – phir bathayiyen …

Geet – suniye … jab parso ke din main usse dinner sae pehlae baath karnae gayi thi … tho wo khoya khoya tha … aur main jab usse baath kar rahin thi tho … wo baath tho kar rahan tha … aur jawab bhi dae rahan tha … par jab maine usse ladki kae baaren main puncha … tho achanak baath ko palat diya … aur neeche dinner kae liye aane ke liye ready ho gaya …

Maan – kya …

Geet – haan … isi liye … mujhe laga ki koi ladki ka chakkar hain … aap patha lagayiyen naa …

Maan – ye lo … maine tho socha ab wo kush hain … tho tumhari chinta kam ho jayegi … par nahin … ab aap ko ek aur chinta satha rahin … aap kae pyare devar … nahin nahin bhai kae baaren main … thoda sa phikar aapki pati kae liye bhi tho bacha kae rakho …

Geet keeping a sad face ….

Geet – tho aap ka kehne ka kya matlab hain … ki mujhe aap ki phikar nahin hain …

Maan notices geet sad face & gets scared about her pregnancy mood swings …

Maan – nahin geet … kyun nahin rakhthi … main tho bas aise hi bol rahan tha … tumhara taang keench rahan tha ….

Geet – kyun …

Maan – ab bolo geet … yeh sab main tumhare saath nahin tho aur kiske saath karun …

Geet – haan wo bhi hain … aap mere alava aur kiske saath kar sakhthe hain … hain naa …

Maan – haan … par agar tumhe koi problem hain tho bata do geet … main …

Geet – nahin … nahin …. Mujhe koi problem nahin hain … aap kar sakhthe hain …

Maan laughing & kissing geet on her forehead ….

Maan – oh meri bholi biwi … issi liye tho tum mujhae ithni pasand ho …

Geet & Maan both holding each other's hands … & sitting next to each other for some time ….

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In pia & rajji's room … pia is ready she is wearing yellow & green ghagra with sequence work done on it … rajji is not yet ready … she just finished her bath … & comes out of the bath room in a mauve ghagra with silver mirror work … pia notices that rajji needs to get ready … as she just came out of the bath … pia wanted to go & help geet if she needs any help … but she does not know that maan has taken care of every thing … pia while leaving the room …. She is outside the room … before closing the door …

Pia – main bhabhi kae kamre main jaa rahin hun … tum bhi ready ho kae aa jao …

Rajji – teek hain … pia tum jao main aa jaungi ….

pia walks out of their room after she closes the door … vicky who was waiting for rajji Was close to pia & rajji's room understood that pia might be going towards maan's bed room … vicky thinks this is the best time to catch rajji so … he goes to meet her … but decides not to use the door … so he rushes towards the garden … grabs a ladder … in the meanwhile rajji is almost ready …. vicky is climbing into rajji's balcony ……. Just little bit touch ups left in rajji's make up …

While rajji is doing her make up … she is applying maskara , then lip gloss & suddenly she spots vicky's reflection in her mirror after she's done with her make up … vicky's in rajji's balcony …

she is shocked … while broadening her eyes … vicky is lost in her as she was definitely looking beautiful …. He never saw her like that before … as he always saw her in salwar suits only … vicky could not take his eyes off her … till rajji spoke …

Rajji – aap …

Vicky coming back to his senses ….

Vicky – haan …

Rajji – tho aap ko bhi darwazon ka concept samajh main nahin aatha … armaan aur samrat ki tarah …

vicky coming close to rajji …. Raising his brows on listening to the names of armaan & samrat …

Vicky – armaan & samrat … yeh dono kaun hain …

Rajji – mere heroes hain …

Vicky – heroes …

Rajji – haan … aur main in ko bahut bahut pasand karthi hun …

Vicky now feeling jealous as he does not have any clue on who samrat & armaan are … vicky feeling jealous of them … walking towards rajji slowly …

Vicky – oh tho tum unhen bahut bahut pasand karthi ho …

Rajji turning … now with her back to vicky & smiling ….

Rajji – haan … kyun nahin karungi … wo teenon ithne handsome & dashing hain …

Vicky coming close to her ….

Vicky – teenon … par armaan aur samrat … tho dono hi hue naa …

Rajji – haan … mayank bhi hain naa …

Vicky – mayank … ab yeh mayank kaun hain ….

Vicky totally now has no clue about who mayank is …

Rajji – haan mayank … par mayank thode jiju type ke hain … aap jaise nahin hain …

Vicky now moves forward & faces rajji …. vicky could not take it any more longer … grabs her by her shoulder & pulls her close to him …

vicky – aur kaun kaun hain … rajji …

rajji – kaun kaun kya ….

Vicky – wohi …. Tumhara samrat ,mayank, aur armaan …. Inkae alava aur kaun kaun hain …

Rajji - agar koi aur bhi hothe tho isse aap ko kya … chodiye mujhe …

vicky – nahin chodungaa … pehle batao ki aur kaun kaun hain …

rajji trying to free her self … while vicky pulling her close to himself …

rajji – kyun batao main aap ko …

vicky – kyun nahin batao gi …

rajji - waise bhi … yeh kaun sa tareekha hain ladki kae kamre main aane kaa … aap maan jiju kae bhai hain iss liye maine kuch nahin kahan hain … agar aap ki jagah pae koi aur hotha … tho … ab tak …

vicky – nahin … tho … ab tak …. Ab tak kya …

rajji – kuch nahin …

vicky pulling her very very close to him … rajji's face is very close to vicky's face only few inches distance between them …

vicky – acha … isi liye kuch nahin kahan hain … aur koi wajah nahin hain …

rajji – nahin … hain … chodiye mujhe …

vicky now pulling her even more close to him …. There is only few millimeters distance between them now …

vicky – nahin … chodungaa … pehle mujhe batao … ki yeh sab kaun hain … aur in ki wajah sae hi tum mujhe apne paas aane nahin dae rahin ho …

rajji – kin ki wajah sae …

vicky – wohi … tumhara … armaan … samrat … mayank …

Rajji's expressions change … she is sure that vicky is feeling jealous … rajji thinks about using these 3 characters …

rajji – haan … wo 3 mere liye bahut khaas hain … ab aap ke samajh main aa gaya naa …. Tho abhi aap mujhe chodiyen … aur yahan sae jaayiyen … mujhe aap sae koi baath nahin karni hain … yeh baath abhi aapke samajh main aa gayi naa …

vicky's eyes are burning with anger now … he leaves her … rajji going near the door & opening the door for him …

rajji – aap ko aap kae saare sawalon ka jawab bhi mil gaya hoga na … ab jaayiye yahan se …

vicky storms out of the room in anger … but his brain is thinking some thing else …

vicky to himself – "par vicky uski aakhen tho kuch aur bol rahin hain … shayad usne mujhsae yeh sab jaan bhuj kae kahan hoga taki main uss kae paas na jau … patha lagana padega … "

Rajji thinks that what she did was correct atleast vicky will not bother her … even if she is hurt by the way she behaved with vicky … but thinks that it is good for every one …

vicky still lost in rajji's words … & repeating those 3 names to himself …. So that he does not forget them … pia is back to her room … as she forgot to take geet's gift along with her … pia & vicky bump into each other … after bumping also he is repeating those 3 names … pia's on the floor as she did not expect that she would be hit by vicky ,who was rushing like a mad bull …

Pia – bhai … aap kya soch rahen hain … dekh kae kyun nahin chalthe … mujhe gira diya naa …

Vicky – armaan … samrat … mayank …

Pia expecting vicky to lend her a hand … but vicky is busy with the names … Pia stands up on her own …. & then hears vicky uttering those 3 names instead of giving her a hand & pia shakes him …

Pia – bhai … yeh aap kya bol rahen hain …

vicky knows that pia & rajji are good friends as they both stay together most of the time … thinking to himself that pia might know about them …

Vicky – pia … tum janthi ho … yeh 3 kaun hain …

Pia – kaun 3 bhai …

Vicky – armaan … samrat … mayank …

Shocked Pia …

Pia – kya … kya kahan apne …

Vicky with a question mark face ….

Vicky - armaan … samrat … mayank …

Pia – par aap yeh kyun poonch rahen hain …

vicky is scared …. But quickly thinking in his mind an answer for her question …

Vicky – batao naa … maine kahin suna tha inke baaren main par yaad nahin aa rahan hain …

Pia – arey bhai … yeh 3 … charcters hain …

Vicky – characters …

Pia – haan bhai … TV show ke actors hain … aur yeh unka characters ka naam hain … paper main pada hoga na …

Vicky is feeling relieved …

Vicky – tv show characters … thank you pia … mujhe answer karne kae liye …

Pia – par bhai aap yeh sab kyun poonch rahen hain … wo bhi iss waqt …

Vicky – wo … kuch nahin … mere friend ne mujh sae pooncha tha … uska hi kuch problem hain … tho maine kahan ki main pata karwa lunga …

Pia – problem … kya problem bhai …

Vicky – kuch nahin … tum rehne do …

Pia – main kuch help kar sakhthi hun … aap ka … aur aap ke friend kaa…

Vicky – pia … agar jaroorat padi tho tumhara help jaroor lunga …

Pia – ok … bhai … jaroor batana …

Vicky – haan … sure … I will …

Vicky to himself – "rajji tum kuch bhi karlo … main tumhe mujhsae dur nahin jaane dunga … & I know what to do … Thanks rajji … jaane anjane tumne meri help kardi … "

Pia goes back to her room … vicky goes downstairs … Pia picks up the gift … pia & rajji have their conversation & decide to go to geet's room together … dadima & geet's parents busy with the final preparations … pia & rajji go to geet's room … Geet was ready in her bed room with maan sitting beside her … as pia & rajji entered maan's bedroom … maan asked pia & rajji to be with geet as he was going to go & check on the arrangements … pia & rajji with geet … complimenting her on how gorgeous she was looking …

maan too checking on every one & every thing … vicky & tito too helping maan … while Pia & rajji are with geet … all the preparations for the shower are done …

pinky too comes with her dad … pinky's dad is with geet's dad … pinky joins her old team geet,pia & rajji … dadima calls rano & asks her to bring geet … rano goes to geet's bedroom to bring her ….

rano ,pinky,rajji ,pia all accompany geet & are walking towards the hall …

Office staff also arrive for the shower … sasha was sent to london as maan did not want to go abroad because of geet's condition … so they sent sasha over there …

Geet along with every one … is in the hall now … maan too comes near geet & is with her now … pia pinky rajji are now together in the same hall but in another place … as maan is with geet … Vicky is looking at rajji … rajji too is looking at vicky once or twice but as soon as his eyes meet hers she is turning them away … looking else where …

tasha arrives alone & she spots vicky … she really looks glad on spotting vicky …

Tasha While adjusting her hair … running her hands over her hair … in her stupid silly me style …

Tasha to herself – "DD naa sahi …. Tho unke bhai vicky hi sahi … vicky sae kaam chala laengae … "

tasha goes near vicky …. Vicky is looking at rajji … had not noticed that tasha Is beside him …

Tasha – hello vicky sir …

Vicky is busy starring at rajji … as though he might devour her … just the way maan looks at geet always … akhir bhai kiska hain … vicky does not pay attention to tasha … tasha again speaks to vicky … increasing her volume …

Tasha – hello vicky sir ….

Vicky – hello tasha …

Tasha - how are you ? …(pause) sir …

Vicky – I am fine … how about you … tasha …

Tasha – silly me …. I am also fine sir …

Vicky – ok good … take your seat tasha … I will be back …

Tasha following vicky – vicky sir … is there anything I can help you with …

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Thank you all friends for all the lovely & encouraging comments you all have posted …. Please let me know how u like this update …. Critise if u don't like any thing … comments are always a welcome … as they are my vitamins to write the next update …. Plz hit the like button if u all like this post … by the way friends …

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part 45 will be followed in 2 min ...

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Thank you all friends for all the lovely & encouraging comments you all have posted …. Please let me know how u like this update …. Critise if u don't like any thing … comments are always a welcome … as they are my vitamins to write the next update …. Plz hit the like button if u all like this post … by the way friends … important note ...

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i know that we all like more maaneet scenes ... but need to have some Vijji(Vicky + Rajji )scenes ... then later on we will have plenty of maaneet scenes ...may B till next part we will have some vijji scenes ... once done ... then more concentration on maaneet only ... 😊

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Part 45:-

tasha is following vicky … rajji notices this & is feeling angry … now vicky too notices the feelings of rajji … & understood that rajji is feeling jealous because of tasha …

Vicky to himself – " rajji jaane anjane tumne hi mujhe yeh jealousy ka idea diya hain …. Agar tumne subah mayak ,armaan aur samrat kae baaren main nahin bataya hota … tho mujhe shayad yeh thought aata bhi nahin … aur yeh sab try hi nahin kartha … thank you rajji … tumne meri madad kiya hain … ab dekho main kya kartha hun … "

Vicky decides on making rajji jealous with the help of Tasha as he notices that tasha is hitting on him & as all his trials to impress rajji failed … so another trial … the famous one … jealousy … where any girl can not bear … another girl close to the one whom she loves … tasha is following vicky where ever he was going … & he too did not stop tasha as he knows that rajji is looking at them …

vicky looking at rajji but is talking to tasha …

Vicky – haan … tasha … will you help me …

vicky did not stop tasha when she was touching his hands on some pretext or the other … while she was helping him …

rajji was angry … so much that she was taking out her anger on the garland present in front of her … they bought that garland to place in geet's neck for the ceremony … the garland was made with lilies & red roses … she was so angry that she was tearing off all the flowers present in the garland into bits & pieces watching tasha & vicky …

rajji to her self – "yeh chipku chipkali tasha … vicky kae saath kya kar rahin hain … "

she was pulling out all the flowers while watching vicky flirting with tasha & vice versa … now all that was left in the garland was only the thread …

rajji to herself – "par rajji tumhein kyun pharak padh rahan hain … tum hi tho chahthi thi na .. ki vicky tumharae paas naa aye … tho ab kya hua … phir bhi wo ladki achi nahin hain … unke liye … "

pia notices that all the flowers are lying on the floor & rajji has the thread in her hand instead of the garland …

Pia – rajji … rajji …

pia shakes rajji … pia raising her voice a bit …

Pia - rajji

rajji comes back to her senses …

rajji – haan pia …

pia – yeh garland ko kya hua … sari flowers aise neechae kyun hain …

rajji dropping the garland thread instantly …

rajji – wo … malum nahin … shayad acha nahin tha …

pia – kya … aise kaise acha nahin tha … kaun laeke aaya tha … isse …

rajji – malum nahin …

pia calls changu mangu … showing them the garland & asking them about it … while pia was showing the garland to them … rajji is checking on the other stuff … careful not to mess anything … & feeling bad because of her … changu mangu are being yelled at … but still rajji keeping an eye on vicky … vicky was happy that …. Atleast rajji was feeling jealous … as he too saw her tearing the flowers into pieces & thinking in his mind that his plan worked …

pia – changu yeh kya hain …

changu confused & looking at pia as he did not understand what pia wanted to ask …

changu – pia didi … kya hua …

pia – yeh kya hain … changu …

pia showing him the garland thread … which is in her hand …

changu – kya hain didi …

pia – wohi tho … main bhi poonch rahin hun … yeh mala aisa kyun hain … tum logon ko aur koi ache mala nahin mili … jo aise mala lae kae aaye …

changu – nahin didi …

mangu – hum tho achi mala hi laeke aye thae …

pia now has the thread in her hand …

pia – phir yeh yahan aise kyun pada hain …

changu – jab humne yahan …

mangu – rakha tho teek tha …

pia – teek tho tha … par sab ab neeche floor pae hain …

changu – haan …

mangu – so tho hain …

pia – ab bhabhi kae liye … dusra garland chahiye … ab kaun laeke aayega … time bhi nahin hain …

changu – pia didi …

mangu – hum do maala …

changu – laeke aye thae …

mangu - dusra bhi hoga …

changu – usi tokri main …

pia – patha nahin … uska kya haal hoga …

pia checks on the other garland & finds it fine …

pia – chalo … teek hain … tum dono atleast ek aur tho laeke aye …

changu – haan wo maan baba nae …

mangu - do laeke aane kaeliye kahan tha …

maan did not want any problem in the function … so he was being extra careful … & ordered every thing extra for geet … now that all the preparations were done … rano & dadima inform everyone that the function will be starting in few minutes & asks all men to go out … maan who was with geet till now … did not want to go … pia & rajji think that … now is the time they can again tease maan … maan was reluctant to go away from geet … as he wanted to be with her … geet too wants maan to be with her … so she is holding his hand tight … maan too reciprocating it … was holding her hand equally tight …. Dadima saw that …

maan – dadima … main geet ko chodke nahin jaungaa … dadima …

dadima – maan bete aap ko jaana padega … sab kae samne acha nahin lagtha hain na …

geet not leaving maan's hand … maan thinking … he too did not want to go & geet also wants him to stay with her …

geet – dadima … maan rukh sakhthae hain kya … dadima …

dadima – nahin beta … dekho agar maan rukae tho sab rukhengae … phir …

geet – please dadima …

dadima could not say no to geet … so she aagrees … on a condition …

dadima – teek hain … teek hain …. Maan bahar nahin jayengae … par idhar hall main nahin rahengae … par aapki nazron sae bhi dur nahin rahengae … aap dono ek dusrae ko dekh sakh thae hain … maan aap udhar dining area kae paas bait jayiye … aap bhi geet ko dekh sakhthae hain udhar sae …

maan – teek hain … dadima …

dadima – geet ab tho aap kush hain naa …

geet not that happy as maan is not going to be beside her … but still ok as they both can see each other … so she too agrees …

geet – teek hain dadima …

dadima makes her sit in the chair arranged for her … maan goes & sits in the dining hall occupying his place so that they both can see each other …

dadima … sends every one outside … informing that men's party has been arranged outside … now vicky is not happy at this outcome … he goes out unwillingly … as he wanted to be over there so that he can continue his starring session at his love … vicky is searching for maan in the garden & does not find him outside …

vicky to himslef – "par bhai kahan hain … agar sab bahar gaye tho bhai kahan pae hain …."

after vicky's search did not yield him a result … he thinks that maan must be inside … as he can never leave geet alone … vicky too knows how much maan loves geet … so he thinks about going inside through his favorite route … the window … he remembers the ladder he used to get into rajji's room thinking that the ladder must be still over there as he did not remove it from there … he goes over there … that is where he left his ladder … climbs the ladder … gets into rajji's room … from her room quickly goes into his room … get's his cam corder … as he wants to record rajji … & keep her locked in his camera …. So that he can see her when ever he wants ….

In the hall the function has started maan's eyes only on geet & no where else … & geet also looking at maan … but simultaneously greeting the guests who were filling her godh with gifts & blessing her … compliemnting geet that she was really really looking beautiful …

Dadima asks rajji & pia … if they have arranged any special program for geet … rajji & pia inform her that they are ready with their dance number …

They both dance to … bole chudiyan bole kangna … from … K3G … while rajji & pia were performing … vicky's concentration is only on rajji & he is only shooting rajji's dance … & vicky most of the time is getting her close up shots …

Vicky to himself – "for now I can manage with her video … but later on she will be with me & I will surely see to it that it happens … this is a promise I am going to make to myself that she is the one who will be my life partner …."

While vicky was shooting rajji … nakul passess by from there … nakul is surprised to see vicky in the corridor … but did not get what vicky was upto …

Nakul – vicky baba … aap yahan …

Vicky startled … but tries to cover himself … & tries to show some authority as he was cought …

Vicky – haan … main … bas dekhna chahtha tha ki function main meri jaroorat tho nahin hain …

Nakul – jaroorat … hogi tho hum hain naa … vicky baba …

Vicky – nakul … tum tho ho … par main bhi rehna chahtha hun … mere pyare bhaiyya aur baudi kae liye ….

Nakul – par maan baba tho already neeche hain … tho ab aap ki jaroorat nahin padegi …

Vicky – nakul ab tum jao …. Agar bhai ko kuch jaroorat padi tho main hoon naa … main dekhlungaa … ab jao yahan se …

Nakul – teek hain … aap ki marzi …

Vicky – aur haan … kisi ko batha na math … ki main yahan pe hun …

Nakul – par …

Vicky showing his eyes to nakul …

Vicky – ab jao yahan se …

Nakul leaves …

Vicky – uhh iss ki wahaj se maine rajji ko teek sae shoot nahin kar paya … uhh nakul … galat timing …. Baad main dekhna padega ki yeh video kaise aya ….

Vicky again starts shooting properly … now that earlier song finished …

now rajji is dancing alone … for nimbooda nimbooda from HDDCS ….

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ETFzvCd4v6I[/YOUTUBE]

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ETFzvCd4v6I

Vicky Is even more happy now … he is thinking that rajji is dancing to this number only for himself … patting on his back …

rajji while dancing is indeed thinking about him ….

So while she was dancing her eyes were searching for vicky inspite of knowing that vicky was sent out along with all men … but deep some where in her heart she still thinks that he might be watching her from some where … from may Be behind a pillar & rajji was correct in thinking so …

as vicky was certainly beside a pillar & shooting rajji with his cam corder while she was dancing …

Vicky – I never knew rajji could dance so well …. nakul … came & disturbed me when the first dance was going on ... & made me miss her peacock steps … never mind … hope fully my camera got her steps … will chk it out later on … once her program is done …

Rajji's eyes were searching for vicky every where … then all of a sudden her eyes fall on a figure beside a pillar in the corridor … she is still dancing … finally she gets to see that it was none other than vicky who was looking at her …. She stops dancing …

Pia – rajji … kya hua … dance kyun band kar diya ….

Rajji – wo bas thak gayi thi … pia …. pinky & tasha se poochon ki wo ready hain tho wo dono dance kar sakhthe hain na …

Saying this Rajji walks away from the center of the hall … pia asks pinky & tasha if they are ready to dance … they say they are ready & dance to dola re dola re mann dola … from devdas …

Rajji is hiding from vicky but still looking out for him … the program ends … dadima requests every one to have the dinner in the garden as all the arrangements have been done outside itself …

Every one walks out … maan now came & sat beside geet …

Maan – geet … chalo … room main … thodi daer rest karlo …

Geet – maan main teek hun … idhar hi rahengae …

Maan – teek hain … geet … phir dinner … hamare room main karogi … ya phir bahar …

Geet – bahar hi karengae maan … khuli hawa main …

Maan – phir chalo … bahar chalthae hain …

maan now helps geet to get up … makes her stand …. Holds her hand & then takes her outside with him …

in the garden every one already occupied their seats on the dining tables arranged for them …. For a change … pia ,rajji,tito were sitting with pinky & adi … vicky spots that rajji is with pia & pinky … so decides to go & take his seat along with them … instead of sitting with dadima ,maan,geet & geet's parents & pinky's dad …

Tasha watches that vicky was going towards pinky's table …. So she too rushes over there … vicky takes his seat besides rajji … & tasha quickly sits next to vicky …

the food has been served & every one started having their dinner …

rajji is feeling really scared now … as vicky Is right next to her … she is trembling while holding the spoon … pia is right next to her …

Pia – rajji … kya hua … tum teek tho hona …

Rajji – haan … pia … main teek hun …

Pia – phir … kaamp kyun rahin ho …

Rajji – shayad mujhe tand lag rahin hain …

Rajji is very scared because of vicky … as he is sitting beside her … he now starts playing footsie with rajji legs well thinking that it is rajji's legs … well it's not rajji's legs … as rajji moves her legs just few seconds before vicky places his legs over another pair of legs …

vicky thinking that he is playing with rajji's legs while he was actually playing with tasha's legs … imagining that they were rajji's legs & is watching the expression on rajji's face while he is still playing footsie …

vicky is confused as to why rajji is not reacting … even after he touching her foot & why is she still having the same expression as of earlier … confused vicky turns his face & is now looking at tasha's face … the look on tasha's face … scared the hell out of him …

vicky drops a napkin on the ground & on the pretext of picking it up quickly bends down & checks where rajji's legs were … to his surprise rajji's legs were not under his legs … his legs were over tasha's legs … he quickly removes his legs … tasha wondering what happened to vicky all of a sudden … vicky finishes his dinner quickly & runs away from there.

Rajji too completes her dinner … every one else also present over there finish their dinner … dadima calls pia … rajji as she was feeling tired informs pia that she wants to rest ….rajji leaves …

Maan ,geet ,dadima & pia thanking every one for coming … pinky ,adi & pinky's dad leave … tasha leaves but while leaving she was searching for vicky … but does not find him … dissapointed tasha leaves from there … hoping that she may get to talk to him later on …

While every one was outside …rajji was walking towards her room …

vicky was waiting for her near rajji's room … as soon as he spots her …

rajji too spots him … she is walking back wards now after spotting vicky … vicky is also advancing towards her … rajji still walks backwards & stops at a point as she could not move further … taking this as an oppurtunity vicky pins her against the wall by blocking her way with both of his hands … rajji's heart is beating faster as she has been pinned to the wall with vicky very close to her …

Rajji – mujhe jaane dijiye …

Vicky – abhi nahin … pehle mere sawal ka jawab do …

Rajji – maine aapke saare sawalon ka jawab pehle hi dae diya hain … ab aur kisi bhi sawal ka jawab mere paas nahin hain …

Vicky – hain … main jantha hun …

Rajji – kya janthae hain aap …

Vicky – bathatha hun …

Vicky – tumhein … tasha sae jalan kyun hui thi …

Rajji – jhalan … aur muhae … jhale meri jhoothi …

Vicky – acha … tho issi liye tumne wo mala kae saare phool thod diye thae gusse main … ya phir jhalan ki wajah sae ….

rajji shocked to know … how come vicky knows that …

Rajji – aise kuch baath nahin hain … wo pehle sae hi aisa tha … maine bas usse pakda tha …

Vicky – jhooth … main jantha hun … ki tumne hi uskae phool thode thae … maine khud dekha …

Rajji – aapne dekha …

Vicky – haan …

Rajji – ab mujhe jaane dijiye … aap ko aap ka sawal ka jawab mil gaya naa …

vicky coming now even more close to her ….

Vicky – acha yeh tho batao … ki tum naachthe nachthe rukh kyun gayi thi …

Rajji looking else where …

Rajji – nachthe nachthe ruk gayi thi ….

Vicky – haan …

Rajji - main thak gayi thi …

Vicky – phir se jhooth …

Rajji – waise aap ko kaise maalum ki main naach rahin thi …

Vicky – kyun tumne mujhe nahin dekha …

Rajji – nahin dekha …

Vicky putting up a sad face …. & coming close to her now …

vicky - kyun jhooth bol rahin ho rajji …

rajji – main jhooth kyun bolungi …

vicky – tum jhooth bol rahin ho …

rajji – nahin ….

Vicky – haan … kya yeh sach nahin hain ki … tumne mujhe dekhnae ke baad dance karna bandh kar diya tha …

rajji – nahin …

vicky – haan … tumhari nazren mujhsae mili aur tumne dance karna band kar diya tha …

rajji – nahin ….

Vicky – haan … ek aur baath batao ki … jab tumne mujhe dekha … tho tumne kisi ko bataya kyun nahin …

rajji – maine aapko nahin dekha …

vicky now holds rajji's shoulders & coming even more closer to her …

vicky – isi liye … tum mujhsae chup rahin thi … tumhara dance performance kae baad … chup chup kae mujhae dekh rahin thi …

rajji – main chup nahin rahin thi … aur main aap ko dekh bhi nahin rahin thi … aur mujhe maaloom nahin tha ki aap thae …

vicky – mere paas proof hain …

rajji – proof …

vicky – haan … proof …

rajji – kaun saa …proof …

vicky – tumhara video …

rajji – mera video …

vicky – haan maine shoot kiya tha …

rajji – kya …

vicky – haan … ab tho bata do rajji … ki tum nachthae waqt mujhe doond rahin thi … tumhare aankhen mujhe doond rahin thi …

rajji – nahin … aisa kuch nahin …

vicky – agar aisa kuch nahin … tho jab tumhara nazar upar padi aur hamari nazren ek dusrae sae mili tho … tho tum dance karna band kyun kiya hain …

rajji – maine kahan naa ki main thak gayi thi … ab mujhe chodiyen … pia ya koi aur ayen yahan … uss sae pehlae aap mujhe jaane dijiye …

vicky – kyun … jaane du … dekhne do sabiko … mujhe parwa nahin hain …

rajji – aap ko nahin hogi … par mujhe hain …

rajji now takes his hands off her … pushes him & then runs away from there …

vicky – bhago rajji rajji … main bhi dekhungaa … tum aise kab tak rahogi ….

Vicky too goes back to his room …. Now every one is retiring to their rooms after a tiring day & change & then get ready to go to bed … maan helps geet to lay down on the bed ... maan & geet have a conversation on how tiring the day was for them … vicky thinking about rajji … & rajji too thinking about vicky …

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I know many of you all don't know this song … but plz do watch & listen to this song ...so that u can get the feel of vicky's pain … 1 sincere rquest from me it's only 1 min & 16 sec songs … very very short song … the whole lyrics are in english & music is awesome … my fav. Song …. Thought that might fit into situation of vicky … so used it over here … let me know on how u liked this song …

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1VwVrTo9FI8[/YOUTUBE]

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1VwVrTo9FI8

next day morning … Rajji wakes up early as she was unable to sleep & is standing in her balcony … vicky too unable too sleep is walking in the garden …

we see that vicky is so lost & sad & is walking in the garden … vicky starts singing this song ….

So much to say that I love you ….

Now that so much I need? you ….

How would it be if you leave me ….

Feel it for me to believe me …

rajji too is listening to the song & she too is feeling bad … she is unable to decide what to do …

I want to love but not alone …

Living for you and dying for you ….

I want to love but not alone ….

Living for you and dying for you ….

P.S.Thanks to the original uploaders of the video …

Edited by dewdropred - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
First to comment!!!
Woooo
Awesome loved the long update
Loved the maan and geet scenes
I would say 1 critiscm:
Less Raji and viky scenes lol!!
It's not a criticism hahaha I prefer the maneet scenes however cute the raji and vicky scenes were
XxxxX
Edited by Ilovemsk - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Ilovemsk

First to comment!!!
Woooo
Awesome loved the long update
Loved the maan and geet scenes
I would say 1 critiscm:
Less Raji and viky scenes lol!!
It's not a criticism hahaha I prefer the maneet scenes however cute the raji and vicky scenes were
XxxxX

hi naina ... i know yaar we all like more maaneet scenes ... but need to have some Vijji(Vicky + Rajji )scenes ... then later on we will have plenty of maaneet scenes ...may B till next part ... once done ... then more concentration on maaneet only ...😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey i just read ur post. bechaari tasha pehle maan phir arjun aur ab vicky... uska kya hoga...i couldnt stop laughing and yes really loved ur post. well written. Vicky s entry, geet s family, baby shower ceremony... i hope cvs bring in all these... wud be fun to watch..gr8 job hima...
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Posted: 14 years ago
lovely update dear.................

update soon

i hope rajji soon accepts her love for vicky. poor vicky
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Posted: 14 years ago
😛Thanks for the double update...and tx a ton for uploading the song from Santhosham, I love this movie and have watched like 20 times...tx..
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Posted: 14 years ago
thnks for the double update....nice one....but i feel like the story is moving from maan-geet to vicky and raji......
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Posted: 14 years ago
lovely update maandew!!!!😃 vicky is stepping into his ig bro's shoes!!!!😆 loved maaneet conversation!!!! n loved how vicky follows the staring sessions his brother used to do 4 his love.... akhir bhai kiska hai.....🤣

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