FF: ***MENT TO BE**. part 69 is on new thread - Page 28

Happy to see that u love my comments....bas tu likhti jaa aur main comment pe comment marungi XD :P

Originally posted by: NoorFatima

nice

</div>what punishment do i get now coz i am not even 17?? 😆
<div>update soon

and let it be real not a dream

😲 U not 17.... Lol
hee... Ur risk... Haha.
Dw i am 17 so... Idk what lol.

I had to hid my laptop from my parent to write this and edit... Bcs my friend decided yo write very very sick stuf. Which I didn't like lol.
But glad u enjoying it. I don't think it's that bad. Long as u arnt 14 or 15 or younger lol
hehe xxx

Originally posted by: -afsha-

<font color="#9900ff" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Man whose evr dream this was wen that person will cum out of it na he/she will be shattered</font>

<font color="#9900ff" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Updates were quite passionate</font>

<font color="#9900ff" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Maan actually was covering for whole 2 years marriage😆😆</font>

<font color="#9900ff" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Lets c wat happens aage</font>

Hahaha yep I would defo.
:D
dw it's not a dream anymore. I couldn't be that crisp to them. Lol
specially maan making up fir 2 years love. Hahah.
Xxxxx

Originally posted by: sweet scorpio

wow!....soooo romantic!

you know what my cheeks were red by the end of this part!....

but great job because i know its really difficult to write romantic parts!

continue soon!

Awww thankyou Hun. Really do appriate that. Yep it is.
I am sorry I made ur cheek red. :D xxxx

ty again xxx

Originally posted by: neahakhan

Hey keyamal aweosomw update. I must say this I loved it.
One question u have mentioned in ur pm that it was dream sequence but which one? The part where dev nt and other family memebers celebrated maans birthday and then this recently updated part maaneet's love making night, are they both dream sequence? If so? Then when did all started and from whom's point of view does this event took place. Sorry I know I'm asking way too many questions but hun I'm confused.
Once again keep up with ur brillant work and update soon.

Neaha.

Hay sorry to make you confuse well.... It's not a dream sequence anymore.
I changed it lol.
Bcs nun of u wanted me to make this a dream... So instead I making this... "special moments spend by manner" :D

Hop that clears everything :D xxxx

Originally posted by: desigurl953

Omg..Mujhe nahi pata tha ki tu itna X-rated bhi ho sakti hai.....naughty update...but damn it is a dream sequence right

please update soon

Not any more 100% true hahah lol.
:D xxx

Originally posted by: pickle6586

hi honey,

wow that was a dreamyyyyyy update...!!!!! 😉.....the passion that was held back by maan for 2 years found its way out finally.. lovely.. cant wait to read more...!!!!!


thanks for the PM...!!!!!


soumya

Np Hun...glad u enjoyed it.
Hahah 2 years of maans passion lol. I love that. Heheh.
That makes him sound despreat lol. Haha
kk I am not gn make his chracter like that. Lol

still u r to good

loved ur comments xxxx

Originally posted by: anufa

awsuM!!!!

loved it...but its only a dream seq....y??????????


update sooNNN!!!!

Not any more chaged the story line :D enjoy xxx

great part
superb
so it is real not a dream