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Posted: 14 years ago
well... sometimes you tend to get confused ...!!esp when you dont wanna hurt the other person .. plus there are other issues involved too na ???

Originally posted by: sweet scorpio

lovely!...

why can't geet uses her little brain and try to figure out wat maan wants from her???
OMG!...that is sooo embarassing!...
wonder how will maan react...
continue soon!

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Posted: 14 years ago
as always very nice update
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Posted: 14 years ago

thank you ... like always !!

Originally posted by: queen_ali

as always very nice update

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Posted: 14 years ago
NT is too mean
When is she going to change?
pls continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome update dear 👏.
thanks for pm
do continue .
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Posted: 14 years ago
Nice part dear...
Loved it...
NT and her dirty tricks...
Loved the Maan and clients scene after geet's call
Continue soon!!!

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Posted: 14 years ago

Part 24:

Scene 1:

NT's Bed Room: Maan, Dev and Geet

At that moment you think Maan might see Dev, but Dev is quick enough to walk back into the bathroom.

Maan: geet .. tum theek toh ho ha?

Geet nods looking down…
Maan takes Geet's dupatta and covers it around her bare arms … Geet also manages to grab her clothes from the bed. He simply lifts her and takes her out of the room. Into his own. And places her on the bed. Even the western clothes fit her perfectly and she looks like an angel. He cant take his eyes off her, but the next minute he turns away .. and says …

Maan: main bahar rukta hoon, tum change karlo …

He walks out, without turning and looking at her even once. Geet changes back into her old attire once more, and opens the door … and adjusts her dupatta … she is more at ease now .. She smiles awkwardly at Maan … but Maan has a serious look on his face …

Geet: sir actually wo main …

Maan doesn't say anything….

Maan: tumne apna soup piya ?

Geet nods ….

Maan: aur aaj tutor aayi thi?

Geet nods again ….

Maan: good …

He starts fiddling with the mobile not talking to her …

Geet: sir .. aap mujhse gussa ho ?

Maan: (cant control his emotions any longer and says ) tumne abhi abhi kya pehen rakha tha Geet?

Geet: dress tha !

Maan: discovery ! yeh baat toh mujhe bhi pata hai … par main pooch raha hoon .. tumne wo dress pehena kyun tha ..

Geet: kyun? Aapko accha nahi laga ?

Maan: Geet … !

Geet: nahi … aapke aas paas ki ladkiyan jab aisi kapde pehenti hai .. tab aapko koi farak nahi padta … main pehenoon toh kya problem hai ? ( going into a total defence mode)

Maan is really angry as he grips her shoulders and says … "kyunki tum mere aas paas ki koi bhi ladki nahi ho .. samjhi tum"

Geet feels her eyes glisten up ..

Maan: aur wo heels ..!! Geet .. shayad tumhe yaad bhi nahi hai … ke tum pregnant ho …. Koi aise heels pehenke ghoomta hai kya ?

Geet feels really bad, she knows she had made a mistake .. but she still doesn't want to back down…

Geet: arey! Wah .. ek toh main aapke liye ye sab karti hoon.. aur aap ulta mujhpe gussa hote hai ….

Maan: tumne yeh sab mere liye kiya ? (exasperated) aur tumhe kisne keh diya ke mujhe yeh sab pasand hai …

Geet: (mumbling to herself, and trying to bring out NT's name at the moment as it could be fatal) err…. Koun kya bolega … maine khud kiya … apni marzi se …

She makes a face, like a baby, sulks and turn around to sit on the bed …

Maan looks at her .. her hair flying … Geet pouting, he melts a little …and he says …

Maan: (trying to calm down) dekho geet … yeh sab tum kyun karna chahti thi …

Geet: kyunki ….

Maan: kyunki kya?

Geet: mujhe laga … main aapko impress karoongi … yeh sab karke …

Maan: toh madam for your information main bilkul impress hua hoon… ulta main tumhari iss harkat se depress ho gaya hoon…

Geet: itna bhi bura kya kar dia sir maine …mere liye itna kuch karte hai .. maine socha main bhi aapke liye ….

Maan: (turning towards her) humare beech koi business deal nahi chal rahi hai Geet .. ke main kuch karoon toh tum kuch karo… main tumse pyar karta hoon… aur tum jaisi ho, job hi ho .. main tumhe aise hi pyar karta hoon.. samjhi tum?

As he says this .. Maan turns around… wiping his forehead … and looking away from her ….

Geet: par sameera toh aise hi kapde pehenti thi na ?( in a low tone)

Maan turns around to look at Geet is surprise … the mention of sameera actually takes the color off his face …. He doesn't know how to react …

Geet realizes, she shouldn't have said it … but its too late…. Maan has suddenly turned cold …Geet feels really bad…

Geet: mera kehne ka wo matlab nahi tha .. maan sir .. I am sorry …

Maan: nahi .. its okay ….

Geet: nahi sir … mujhe ye baat nahi bolna chahiye tha … maine aapse waada kiya tha ….

Maan: Geet tum Sameera nahi ho !( he has a resigned look on his face, and this line seems to convey to her that she perhaps means a lot more to him than Sameera ever meant)

A tear finally drops out of geet's eyes and she slowly starts to sob …..

Geet: (sobbing) main … aapko dukh nahi pahunchaana chahti thi .. maine toh bas aapko khush karke ke liye .. ye ajeeb se kapde pehen liye ….

Maan and geet are by now the window .. and curtains are flying with the breeze from outside … each of them is standing by either side of the window looking out.. Maan looks at Geet who looks at him and tries to smile .. as his serious expression slowly changes into a more relaxed one …

Maan: main kabhi nahi chahoonga .. ke tum mere khatir ye sab karo .. aur .. mujhe yeh sab pasand bhi nahi hai .. tum apne salwar main kitni khoobsoorat lagti ho…

Geet: (turns towards him smiling)

Maan: Geet .. main.. tumhare pehenave se nahi .. tumse pyar karta hoon.. aur mujhe koi farak nahi padhta ke tum kis tarah ki kapde peheno … bas wo mat banne ki koshish karo jo tum nahi ho … aur tum jaisi ho … meri geet ho .. mere mann main, tumhari ek tasveer hai … ek aisi ladki ki jissey main behad mohabbat karta hoon … uska oopar tum kuch karke tum mujhe khush nahi kar sakti …

Geet: har waqt aap mere bare main sochte hai … issi liye ….

Maan: meri Maa .. for gods sake … yeh raag alaapna band karogi ( joining hands) .. main kisi ke liye kuch nahi karta .. sab apne liye karta hoon.. kyunki main bahut swarthi hoon.. kyunki main tumse bahut pyar karta hoon.. Phew! ( fast in one breath …. Gurmeet style) .. samjhi tum ?

Geet nods smiling ….. And she blushes …. Maan comes close to her, pushes the strand of hair falling on her face, and her her entire hair to one side such that her shoulder is visible … he slowly bends forward and kisses it … Geet blushes …and she circles her arms around him and hugs him….

Note: okay, I am too overwhelmed after the current episode .. and don't want to ruin the mood or the feel .. so this is just a short one for now … I vant believe tomorrow is the 25th part !! So double celebration …. I love you guys so much for coming, reading and encouraging me to write …what started as a prediction turned into a full fledged FF thanks to your support guys …!! Hugs to each and every one of you!!

Love,

Niha

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Posted: 14 years ago
Loved it....it was an amazing update...i thought maan would be angry but anyways he understand geet more..i hope all plans of NT fails and only it makes maan and geet more close...


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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey wow thats lovely
Loved it
Im so happy that no misunderstanding occured
pls continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago

niha its really awesome though it was short............

loved the way maan handeled sameera topic......
will wait 4 the long update..........
Edited by pooja83 - 14 years ago

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