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Posted: 15 years ago
#71
Aweosme update do cont soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
#72
awesoooome..
superb........
rocking.......
wonderful upd.
loved it......
thanx for the pm........
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Posted: 15 years ago
#73
hey dear....
nice part but very sad....
bechara mayank.....i hope he gets well soon...
plzz continue soon and thanks alot for the pm....
love,
gunjan mariya....
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Posted: 15 years ago
#74
awesum update sry 4 late late cmmnt........
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Posted: 15 years ago
#75
nice one hazra......... do continue soooooooooooooon..............
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Posted: 15 years ago
#76
hey very nice update
i hope mayank is fine and every thingwill be well b\w mayur
sorry 4 late reply
and thanks4 pm.
plz update soon.
waiting 4 next update.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#77
awesome update loved it
but a sad part
thnx alot 4 the pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
#78
mayank ka accident😭
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Posted: 15 years ago
#79

hi guys..updated next part...i hope u like it..dont forget to comment..read n njoy..

shilpa aunty was shocked..
mm-kya...😔
g-ha aunty..ap jaldi se city hospital aa jaeye....😔
mm-ye....ye sab kaise hua??aur...aur mera mayu kaisa hai....😭
g-aunty..mayank operation thetre mai hai....ap pls jaldi hospital aa jaeye...😔
mm-op..operation thetre...😭
g-aunty..pls ap jaldi aa jaeye..
mm-mai..mai abhi ati hu..😭
both cut the call...
g-aunty bohot ro rahi thi..pata nahi ab kya hoga..😭
n-ye sab meri wajah se hua hai..😭
s-tumhari wajah se..nupur isme tumhari kya galti hai..
n-meri hi galti hai...maine mayank ko bohot daata tha....mujhe use itna nahi daatna chahiye tha..😭
g-di...ap roiye mat.....chup ho jaeye di..mayank ko kuch nahi hoga...vo bilkul thick ho jaega...😭
n-gunjan..mujhe bohot dar lag rahi hai...agar mayank ko kuch ho gaya to...😭
g-di ap aisa kyu soch rahi hai...mayank ko kuch nahi hoga..😔
s-ha nupur..gunjan bilkul thick keh rahi hai...mayank ko kuch nahi hoga..
after sometime..mayank mom comes..
n-shilpa aunty..😭
mm-mayu...mayu kaha hai??😭
n-vo..vo operation thetre mai hai...😭
mm-😭😭
n-aunty..pls ap roiye mat....mayank ko kuch nahi hoga..😭
mm-pata nahi kya ho gaya hai mere mayu ko..jabse aya hai tabse pata nahi kya hua hai...mujhe kuch batata bhi nahi hai aur mujhe bina bole bahar chale gaya....😭
n-😭
after sometime...doctor came out...
n-doctor..
mm-kaisa hai mera mayu??😭
doctor-mayank ab bilkul thick hai...
all became happy..
doctor-par..
mm-par kya??😔
doctor-par vo puri tarah thick nahi hua hai...bohot bada operation hua hai isliye mayank ko complete bed rest ki zarurat hai...
mm-ji doctor....mai mayank ka pura khyal rakhugi...
doctor-ap log ander jaa sakte hai..thodi der mai use hosh aa jaega..
mm-ji doctor...
all went inside....after sometime..mayank ko hosh ata hai..
n-mayank....mayank ko hosh aa gaya..😊
mm-mayu...mayu beta..tu thick to haina??😊
m-haa maa...
mm-tu mujhe bina batae kaha chale gaya tha..
m-maa....mai....
s-mayank pata hai ham sab kitna dar gaye the..
m-vo......pata nahi kya ho gaya tha mujhe....
then mayank saw nupur....
m-nupur..
mm-mayu beta..nupur bohot ro rahi thi tere liye...nupur beta..aaona...
nupur went to mayank..
mm-beta...doctor ne tumhe complete bed rest lene ko kaha hai..isliye ab kuch din tak tujhe yaha hi rehna padega..
m-maa..mai..clg..
mm-mayu...mujhe kuch nahi sunna hai....jab tak tu thick nahi ho jata tab tak tujhe yaha hi rehna padega..
n-ha mayank..shilpa aunty thick keh rahi hai...
mm-beta..tum log bohot thak gaye hoge...tum log jao..mai mayu ke paas hu..
n-aunty..ap akeli..
mm-koi baat nahi beta..kuch din ki to baat hai..
n-par aunty..ap akeli kaise..
mm-nupur beta..tum fikar mat karo..mai sab handle kar lugi..
n-thick hai aunty..
mm-to beta..ab tum log ko chalna chahiye...bohot der ho gayi haina...tum log bhi thak chuke hoge..
n-ji aunty...mayank apna khyal rakhna...
m-hmm...
g-bye mayank..
m-bye gunjan..
s-mayank...kal milte hai..ham kal ayege tumse milne...ok..😊
m-😊
all leaves....
m-maa...mujhe kitne din tak yaha rehna padega...
mm-beta.....3 din tak to rehna padega...3 din to yu guzar jayege tujhe pata bhi nahi chalega..
m-3 din...maa meri clg...meri padhai...😔
mm-mayu..ab tu chup beth jaa...3 din mai kuch nahi hoga..aur doctor ne tujhe complete bed rest lene ko kaha hai..aur mai is baar teri ek bhi nahi sunne wali hu samja tu...
m-par maa..
mm-mayu....tu mujhe bina batae kyu chale gaya tha??
m-maa..mai bhul gaya tha...
mm-beta...agar tujhe kuch ho jata to...
m-hua to nahi na maa..
mm-mayu...mai to mar hi jati agar tujhe kuch ho jata to..
m-maa..ab mai thick hu...aur ab ye sab baate chodo..mujhe bohot bhuk lagi hai..
mm-thick hai beta..😊
hey guys..here ends my next part...i know its small but dont have much time...dont forget to comment...so kya hoga ab??kya mayank aur nupur ka sach sabke samne aa jaega??kya hoga jab sabko pata chalega??janne ke liye wait kijiye mere next update ka...love u all..
hazra
Edited by hazraluvarjun - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#80
the part was very nice 😊 n m sorry was busy so didn't commented for before parts i m happy mayank is fine continue soon n thanxs for the pm 😃

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