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Posted: 15 years ago
Muskaan..That was lovely..even we want Maan to come for lunch everyday...........so that we can have some maneets scenes..
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Posted: 15 years ago

absolutely delightful........

i wud say u r the star of our life.....jisne hamare berang zindagi mein romance ke rang bhar diye with ur FF...........simply love ur FF
plzzzzz give us a long update
looking forward for moreeeeee updates...........
reva
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Posted: 15 years ago
awesome!
really like the lunch part!=)
i think its high time for geet to understand her feelings for maan!
continue soon!
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: revav

absolutely delightful........

i wud say u r the star of our life.....jisne hamare berang zindagi mein romance ke rang bhar diye with ur FF...........simply love ur FF
plzzzzz give us a long update
looking forward for moreeeeee updates...........
reva

thanxs reva i am so touched...
love
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Posted: 15 years ago
thanxs u guys..me again with tiny miny update..writing to correct my self & give big ones..
still trying😕
maan - lunch was exotic...I am planning to come home for lunch
every day...
geet shied & walked away..

Part 62

maan contiued to work & geet caught up with krish & priya

geet, priya & krish were having dinner..
maan joins them..geet gets up & helps him with dinner
she walks into the kitchen..maans presence really made her nervous
& restless...her heart would beat faster ..geet became even more shy
with her body reacting to maans presence so evidently..
she blushed as he looked at her...maan could notice her lost in him
maan kept on calling her asking for spoon then soup then water then salt
geet ..was getting nervous walking to him..serving him..
his mere presence around her was tickling her senses..
his muscline seductive smell would just pull her to him..making
it difficut to move away..she knew if she stood any where close
to him..she would do some thing drastically stupid...or just start glaring at him..
maan was enjoying her restlessness..how she stood serving water
when he actually asked soup..priya smiled & tried to distract krish

krish - maa yeh aap kya kar rehaho..dad na soup maga tha
pani nahi...
geet - nahi main..soup lake aathi hoon
krish - maa soup udehar table main hain..kitchen main nahin..
geet gets fed up & walks into the kitchen
krish - maa mera dessert kahna hain..
geet brings the tiramisu for krish...
maan - looks at geet..mera dessert kahna hain..& looks at her lips
she quickly looks away.. cluctching her dupatta & goes to the kitchen..
maan..quickly sneaks in behind her..& wispers in her ears..
mera dessert!!!geet jumps up..& drops the glass down..
krish comes in ..maan stands holding geets waist..
geet tells maan..krish aa..raha hain..please mujhe choto..
maan - kyun..?? uske maa ko hi pakdha hain..
kisi aur ko nahin..i am sure he won't mind
krish(smiles) - maa ice cream party karne challen..please..
maan - challo..atleast mujhe dessert to millega..tunhare maa
to mujhe kuch nahi dethi..subha breakfast nahi diya..aur abhi dessert
geet - keh do lunch bhi nahi diya..use kyun choda !!!
maan kisses her cheeks & says..lunch to diya tha na..
he had a devilish grin on his face.
geet stood realzising wat maan actually meant...

geet hops in with krish..behind..& they start playing on a vedio game
maan keeps glancing at geet through the rare view mirror
they reach the cafe...geet & krish run in togather..
priya - maan..aapne pyar ke rang me rang diya use!!!
maan smiles
priya - i am really happy for u guys..I have a conference come up
need to leave ...meri ticket ek din baad ki hain..
maan - thanxs for every thing..miss u yaar..
priya & maan have warm hug...geet watches them from the cafe..
geets was happy & felt that atleast they are not fighting any more
but just wondered wat next...the thought just rushed through her nervous..fearing..uncertainty

geet & krish get their ice creams..geet sits in the couch
krish was sitting in the opposite couch..
geet was about to have a bite..maan holds her hand & puts the spoon
in his mouth...
maan - yum!!!& takes the ice cream away from geet
& cuddles in next to her in the couch..geet wondered wat was happening..
little while ago he was hugging priya..& now he is being so warm towards her
(babaji..yeh chathe kya hain..yeh daag picture ke bare mein to nahin soch rahen..
chi chi..babaji..maan bhi naa..itne sidhain nahin hain..)
he calls the waiter & orders a coffee..for geet..
geet makes a baby like face...looking at the ice cream
priya - yeh kya kar rehe ho..khana do use..
maan - nahi..puri raat phir mujhe iskha sur dabhna padega ...kudh bhi soyai ghi aur mujhe bhe sonahi deghi....isko sinus hai
geet looked at maan totally impressed
geet likes that maan actually remembered that ...she felt so
touched..she looked at maan & was lost at his caring yet
teasing nature...maans eye met hers..he lifted his eyebrows &
asked wat ..she shaked her head for a no..& looked away..
maan put his hand around her..& rubbed her arms...
the waiter brought geets coffee..maan asked the waiter to pack his ice cream..
priya - why wat happened
maan - nahin ..I am too full now shall have it latter..

after they reach home..
geet goes to krish's room & they were almost finshing their
homework..
maan caught up with his work..
geet walks in latter at night..maan was still working
maan - geet
geet - ji
maan - mera dessert leker aana...
geet - walks in confused & in anticpation...walks closer to maan..ji..kya
maan waits for her to come real close & naughtly says...mera dessert..
geet comes still closer...her heart was beating faster..like she was
in a marthon..her senses were working & reacting faster than ever before..
maan - woh!! ice cream jo cafe se lekar aya the..
geet snaps back..realizing wat she was anticipating..she really felt odd
& embaressed to have thought ....dhust dhanav


precap
Maan enjoying his ice cream...😡

i hope u love this part
please do let me know how is it going...
love
muskan
Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Thanks Musks, was impatiently waiting for your update 😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
Maan is a devil lol. me likey the part. continue soon. kya hana bari bari updates deke greedy bana dia tumne muskan di.
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Posted: 15 years ago

a beautiful, cute, lovely, romantic update........loved it...........superbbbbbbbbbbbbbbb

mazaa aa gaya
reva
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Posted: 15 years ago
Wow...its hyperventilating!!! tell us wen u gonna update next part so that we will be ready wid the icecream to have wid Maan singh khurana.....
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey muskan,

i want to see geet becoming sick and maan talking care of her where she should atleast know how imp he is in her life.

I love your update and waiting for the next one.

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