FF Pyar ka ehsaas Maan and Geet thread 2

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Keertee

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Posted: 15 years ago

#401

I guess ager priya chali gayi to story khatam which i dont want to khatam :)

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Priya

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Posted: 15 years ago

#402

just read the last to updates muski di. it was gr8. hmm Jealousy plan 1? looks like Maan has a plan?

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Mishti Patel

@MistiofMistz

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Posted: 15 years ago

#403

Muskaan.... You such a best.... in bringing twist of the twist...

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Isha

@Sidarth_lover1

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Posted: 15 years ago

#404

loved it mucho

cont soon n thnx

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Muskan

@muskanp

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Posted: 15 years ago

#405

smartnsmexx - thanxs dear

Miketa - thanxs ..glad u like the twists..

loveangle_4ever - hi dear thanxs a lot

kurtee - picture abhi bhaki hain mera dost

amritsar007 - trying hard to shoo..this priya away..
umm..jathi hi nahin

KBfan- - glad u liked it

Sigma - i told u my priya is extremely positive character

rockin_gal - again jealousy with a twist I told u....
wonder who is will be hurt more!!!

thanxs u ..lovely beautifull people..u guys are a rockstar

love

muskan

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Muskan

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Posted: 15 years ago

#406

thanxs u lovely people for ur support & love

glad u like the FF..I really love u ..u guys make my day brighter & happier

krish ran to priya & hugged maan & priya..
geet's eyes were fill up with joy...& delight..

Part 57

Geet leaves them alone & goes to her room..& sleeps peacefully..
maan & priya have a small discussion over their past
maan - I am really sorry..main upne eham..main ..did'nt think of ur pain..
priya - its ok...main 10 saal se tumhe jo nahin kha paai
geet ne tumhe kitne aasan sabhdhoo main kha diya..
maan - umm!! pata nahi mujhe se judi har baat ko aasni se samjh
lethi hain...
priya - aur tum ho ki us ki koi baat nahin samjhthe
maan - samjne de tab na...har baat pe manmarzi
aur uska gussa...
priya - gussa aur geet..wats wrong with u?
maan - are tumhe pata nahin hain...gussa to uske naak pe rehatha hain
ek bar uske college gaya tha mere buttons open the...u know how I
used have it college...(priya I used to hate it)
she walked in & just closed the buttons & glared at me..
priya - don't tell me..
maan - oh god sasha & flowers incident was even worse
she gave me the flowers on the stage..when I turned to give it to sasha..
the way she looked at me..OMG ...trust me..meri to himat hi nahin hui..
pata nahin kya kar de
priya burst out laughing..all the while u did'nt know she was ur wife
maan - uske ankhee khe dhathi hain sab kuch ..lakin woh kuch nahin kah thi
priya - just stop this hide & seek..business...maan I have an idea
maan - wat?
priya - why don't we try to make her feel Jealous..
maan - nahin ..No ways
priya - darr gaye kya?
maan - nahin yaar..its not that..actually I don't want to hurt her..in any way
waise bhi..I have hurt her enough for life time..
main aise kuch soch bhi nahi sakta jise use taqlif ho...
priya - phir tum bhate raho aise he..devdas bankar..don't u want her to
say that she loves u
maan - nahin..
priya - wat?
maan - mera matlab haan..lekhin aise nahin..
waise bhi..I know she loves me..I can see that in her eyes..
my love is not dependent on her saying I love u..
mera pyar uske haan ka mutaaz nahi
probably even before she knew she loves me..I knew she did..
woh use ki pyaar ki kashish hi to hain..jo mujhe mera na chate hua bhi
use ke pass le jathi rahi hain..
aaj nahi to kal ..she will read it in my eyes..then she won't be able to
stop herself..they way I am not able to...stop myself
priya - great..u keep on waiting like this & soon she will announce our engagement
maan - woh aise kuch nahi kareghi jo mujhe hurt kare...
waise bhi she can never feel jealous of u
priya - why do u think so...agar woh tumahre dil mein meri jagah le sakthi hai
to she will definitly feel jealous of me..
maan(looks into priya's eyes) - mera dil main tumhari jagah koi nahi le saktha..
(priya lost in those words) yeh woh bhi jaanthi hain...ise liya shayad use ne kabhi
woh jagah lene ki koshish nahin ki...aur pata nahi kab.. kaise..use ne aapni
kudh ki jagah bana li...(they break out of their eye lock)aab yeh dil sirf use
ke liya dhadktha hain...woh door ho kar bhi..hamesha mera dil ke paas rehta hai.
Dil ke paas ho kar bhi..Kyon pata nahin use ka intezaar rehta hai..
her pyar se pyare lagte woh mujhe..Maine phir se pyar seekha bhi to sirf uske liye
maan & priya..part with a good night hug...

maan sees geet sleeping peacefully..his heart was filld up with bottled emotions
he slips into the spread beside her & hugs her
she turns into his embrace in sleep..she rests her head on his chest above his heart..
she could feel it being heavy in her sleep..her hands reaches..slowly to his eyes & wipes
his tears..maan kisses those fingers..& hugs her tightly..never to let go..

next day morning geet wakes up maan was not around..she was not sure..if maan
did actually sleep with her last night or she was dreaming..she shakes
her head & goes to the kitchen & gets his juice ready..she comes out to see
he was in the pool with priya..

maan - priya..please don't do any thing..I don't want geet to get hurt
priya - just wait & watch..
when they come out of the pool..priya sits close to maan..both of them wet & HOT
maan - stop it..priya..& holds hes hand & then turns away..
the nakul serves the juice..maan has juice & asks nakul for some ice..
nakul comes back & says maam ne mana kiya hain
priya - see told u she will get jealous
maan(gets angry) - nakul ice lekar aaoo..abhi
maan worries if geet actually felt bad..& his frustration was pilling
nakul gets the ice ...geet rushes & says...maine mana kiya tha na..
maan was suprised at geet behaving like..this
maan - I just asked for an extra ice..tum itna gussa kyu ho rahi ho..
geet - no ice for u maan..
maan shakes his head..& drinks the juice with ice
geet - maina kaha na nahin ufff!!..& she walks out..angerly
priya smiles at maan..& says..see it is working..
maan holds his head in stress & sever sudden pain..& notices geet aggressively
walking towards him..& he closes his eyes..wondering wat she going to say..or think
geet - maina kaha tha na..ice mat daloo..
aab hogaya na sur main dard..
she gives him the medicine & applies the balm on his forehead
mumering to priya..di yeh kisi ki baat nahi sunthe..
inko swiming ka baat dandha pina se sur me dard ho jatha hain
but nahin..kuch bolo tu ..gussa..ghurna suroo..
maan just enjoys her mumering & for some reason the pain to seemed soothing
looks at priya & winks
geet - aap ko hasi aarahi hain..
maan - nahi woh!!
geet - no more juice for u...dry ur hair properly..(she takes the towel & wipes)
maan kisses geets hand..she pulls it back & walks away..
maan tells priya with a winning smile - I told u...