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Posted: 14 years ago
Kya yaar katal ker ke bolti ho uth jao... :) jokes apart.. lovely update... Keep it up.. I like about this story is it is original.. nothing to do with the show, Some FF I read they are way too similar even the scenes..not complaining but this interest me more... You will not believe i keep checking if update is there.. same way i wait for the show... :) this is how it is... Keep it up honey.. u the best... :)
Love you
Mona
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Posted: 14 years ago
The parts were fab
Liked the way Geet called Priya n suprised Maan but Maan was more lost in Geet
Maan n Priya's convo was sweet liked the way Priya pulled Maan's leg
Geet was really independent tabhi she asked money frm her dad rather than Maan
Though i knew it hurted Maan but for wat all he did to her he will ahv to face this
Krish was sweet her loved the way Maan cuddled up n slept wit Geet n Krish
Geet was jus ignoring wat Maan's eyes were telling
Krish actually lead them to passionate moment yaar
Geet is feeling sorry because she feels Maan loves Priya yaar
Wen will Maan clear her doubt
Their dance haaye was went back to Maneet dance sequence
Lets c wat happens aage
Keertee thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
All I think about this FF and song come to my mind for Geet is
Pyar ka anjaam kisne socha hum to mohabbat kiye ja rehe hain...
from movie bewaffaa
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Posted: 14 years ago
wooooooooooooooow
nice shot
i loved it and qurban howa was the best one ;)
hmmm now its time its time its time for who whooooooooooooo?
for maan to feel for geet that too head over heals
update soon dear
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Posted: 14 years ago
AWWW poor Geet . . . . Maan should just tell her he loves her so that they can actually unite instead of running away from one another
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Posted: 14 years ago
awwwwwww.....previous was something ...ahem....i was totally xxxxxxxxxrated..
u know i loved when geet asked money from her dad ....and maan over heard it ...
and this one .....again m touched ....
this a ff..i feel like ...uhh....i love you yaar ......
hey hey ...just a sec,......fight ???????????
again ..???
kiun...?
ohhnoooo..........!!!!!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
hi lovely people this is for u...
she slowly let go of his hand from her waist..
that really hurt maan...he walked away in anger...

Part 52

maan walked into his room & removed his shirt & vest ..& throws it away
geet rushed in yelling..
geet - maan wat is all this...(pulled is hand & turned him around)
maan - just leave me alone
geet - aap chate kya hoo..
maan - main tumhe chatha hoon..samjhi tum main tumhe chatha huin
(pushed against the rim of the bed..she gasped her breath)
geet turned her back..her voice weekened
geet - wat is all this..we are married for over 4 years now
every single day u just made me realize how much u loved di
& how much u disliked my mear presences..& when di is back
u suddenly fall in love with me!! it really does'nt make sense
maan - main kya karo tum ko mujhpe yakin ho!! (he moves towards her)
geet - mera pass mat anna tum..
maan violently hugged her from behind and said..geet I really love u..
his voice trailed off as his lips crushed her back, his hands capturing her slim waist,
hugging her closer to him...(she protested with a very low voice..maan mujhe chodho)
he pulled out the strings of her blouse while his lips feathered her neck..
Maan twisted her around, jerking her to him..she protested weekly..
he cupped her face into his hand & closed the distance between the their lips
his hand freed her from her blouse & slowly kissed her along the chin..lower to the
neck line... He slid the strap aside.. his mouth burning to taste the curve of her
breast he had exposed. He cupped the gentle weight of her breast in his hand,
his thumb passing back and forth over them, his body growing taut with need.
She was so soft and warm yet so cold with fear..and tempting, her body seeming to come to life under
the touch of his hands and mouth.But her fear stopping her within..
he pinned her on the bed & his left hand made their way to the skirt..& pulled the strings
He wanted to explore her in detail, to taste her sexy saltiness, to feel her convulsing
around him as he violently filled her with his life force.
as she said maan chodhoo mujhe..his mouth came back to hers, subjecting it to a passionate
onslaught that left her totally breathless. She quivered in his arms as he deepened the kiss,
his unshaven jaw rasping against the softness of her face...his fingers entangled hers..
holding her down..reminding her whose is command..
forcing himself through her..she moaned in pain & pleasure..tears rolled down her eyes
as he gave in more of his passion filled with anger side...both where breathless & sweaty..
maan kissed her tears & kissed her again in passion & said it again with all
his love...Geet I love u ..I can't stay with out u...& lied next to her..panting
she tried to put herself back togather & she just collapsed..while she pulled
the spread around her naked body & walked away..she noticed ..
stains on the spread & on her she looked at maan..he knew she was embaressed, scared & shy...
& did'nt know how to react ..maan walked upto her...closed her teary face in his hand and
said ...its ok...she fainted into his arms
he quikly dressed up & changed her..& rushed her to the hospital..
it was definitly an odd situation..for his luck it was Dr.Kiran on night duty..
he could have asked for anything better...(he remembered how all the time she assumed things
but she was understanding)
Dr. attended to her..& suggested ..nothing to worry...she is stressed..
dr.Kiran - thoda jada hogaya..(and winkd).u can take her home..once she is concious
maan waited for geet to wake up...
geet got up & shocked to see herself in the hospital..she checked if she was
dressed ...she looked at maan..he was very tensed & walking up & down
in the room...she got up & tried to walk out..could take the pain...
maan rushed to her..& said don't get up...I will help u..
geet - mujhe abhi ghar jana hain
maan - geet u need to rest (she pulls away & tries to walk & she could
really feel fluid oozing out)
geet - why did u get me hear
maan - u fainted..I got worried..I tried splashing water ..& ..
geet - since when did u care about me..u did'nt care about me before forcing me
maan - i did'nt force u ...(stirn voice)
geet - u did
maan - i was just expressing my love
geet - really !!!!!Why is it always about u...
"stay away from me...don't talk to me...don't interefer in my life
because u love some one else...when I try to live with all that"
from no where u discover that u love me not her..
insab main mein khana hoon....
u love me...but I don't love u...
maan - nahin geet..I love u since the first time I saw u at tajmahal
geet - see u go again..knock..knock..we were married for 2yrs..before that maan
so actually the first time u saw me was in my house..then our wedding
then our so called SR..where u gave me the verdict of not bothering u
maan - u r getting it all wrong
geet - no u r wrong..its all ur false ego..stopping u from getting back to di
maan - geeeet chup..ek dam chup...tumhe jo sochna hain soch loo...
I love u....damit..

Precap
Priya moving into maan's room

ok guys..I hope it make sense..angry, passionate maan..expressing his love
i don't know how many times have editted this to express his passion..I hope
u guys love it..please do comment..I am really nervous
love
muskan
Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago
Keertee thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
Kya baat hai yaar...aate jao let me read now...
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Posted: 14 years ago
ohhhh god wh is she moving in his room.... im scared.... my heart beats faster.... next update sooon... love ur story.... thx
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Posted: 14 years ago
--------- what shuld i say?? :P .. u always make me speechless and dumb... words fail me.. lolss

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