love story (ff) update part 6, pg 18

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Mr vs. Mrs. Khurana Round One:

Maan decides to put plan number one in action the next day, the plan you ask, very simple. Corner Geet after class and simply tell her. If her reaction yesterday was indication they would be on their way to the engagement very soon. Of course this pace was a little fast but what else was expected from Maan, the ultimate believer in, "what needs to be done tomorrow was already done yesterday". Of course the time was not that considerably long considering our Mr. Khurana was finally clued into his feelings months ago and the future Mrs. Khurana knew she was in love since she was 16. But all that aside, the confession needed to happen before any further steps could be taken, so yes the sooner the better.
You see our hero is well aware of his effect on those of the female species and now that he was finally clued into the fact that his love was most definitely not immune to his charm (to his extreme relief), he intended to use that fact to his full advantage. So, to reconfirm the plan, he would corner his Geet and use all her awareness of him, to get a confession and to tell her of his feelings. After suffering from the delusion that this campaign to Plan and Conquer was going nowhere, he was ready to get some sweet revenge and an even sweeter confession.
So here he stands, again outside the classroom waiting for his love to pass by surrounded by her giggling friends. He knew he had to wait for the end of class to put into action his plan (he did not want anything interrupting them) but he could still stare intensely (I mean, loving gaze) at her, maybe fluster her a little. Now that he knew she looked for him, at him, and he was sure she would look after yesterday, he could not wait to see her reaction. Of course, just to help him out today (and to completely fluster her) he was wearing his favorite pair of jeans and black button down shirt. (to note: it was her favorite outfit too, since the jeans molded to him perfectly and the shirt with the first three shirts unbuttoned. Oh! My.. *blushes*).
So he waits, and there comes the giggling herd (I mean, giggling girls) and among them, surrounded would be his Geet. Ok, lets get ready. Pose a little straighter (best way to show off height). Loosen and pull back shoulders a little. Lean back against the wall. Hands in pocket. Assume air of casualness. Get ready to stare at prey. Ok, they are getting closer. The girls all present, giggling and blushing even harder today, some (well most) even more blatantly staring at him today. Hummm.. (straighten from lean), no sign of her. They pass him by and stand in front of their class. Minutes pass, still no sign of her. Surreptitiously glancing at the girls, should he go over there and ask them. *Shudders*. No way, with all his courage, he did not think he could handle them, without getting mauled. Waiting, waiting, waiting, class bell rings, still no sign of her. Could something have happened. She could not be getting back at him for yesterday, could she'..*smirk slowly appears mixed with mischief and worry in his eyes*. This should be fun. Waving his friends into the class, he casually walks down hallway looking for her. With more worry now at no sign of her, he calls Vicky. Hey bro......vicky...actually I was wondering if everything was ok......yeah, of course why bro........nahi, I was just in class, i was wondering.........actually bro can you do me a favor, I was going to come there but since your class is near geet's, can you please get notes from her friend pinky..........why is she skipping or something.........nahi bro she's working on her thesis at home............please please bro, can you help me.....no, vicky, (ok, thanks bro, bye) you can get them later..............vicky vicky............hello, I cant believe this....not only is she not here, I have to brave her friends.......vicky, you so owe me big time for this....
As you can imagine, maan ki halat was very bad at the end of class when he had to go and get the notes amongst all those girls. *shudders just thinking about it*. So to conclude, Plan 1 Status: Fail, Winner: Geet (Mrs. Khurana) by default. To conclude, he was right to make those back up plans, he was going to need them. On the up side, another opportunity was presented to him in the disguise of the notes. He will get to see her in excuse to drop them off at her house. Now he just needs to fully plan out his amended Plan 1. How to confess to Geet in her own house, amongst all her family and get her confession without getting seriously threatened and/or harmed by her father, brother, uncle, and dadaji.
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precap: part 5

mr. vs. mrs. khurana round 2

Maan at Geet's house. with amended plan 1. Corner Geet and get/give confession. amendment: make sure there is no way she runs away before said event occurs.

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Edited by blueangel13 - 14 years ago