Maneet FF: You are always on my mind. AN on P 150 - Page 24

hey nice update... do continue soon

u have written it nicely, very practical approach, you have taken care of evry detail, past and present, used d incidents in ur story which actually happened.........

i tried to imagine geet in mid or late 30's bt i saw preeti zinta's face from Veer Zara.......doesnt matter bt still.....i culd c maan though........all his expressions, pinky, adi.........u missed sasha.........;)

bt i dont want dem to b separated for any reason............its just my POV.........i dont want a sad ending........

OMG...what an awesome FF...its 3 am...and i just read all 15 parts in one go......Excellent is all i will say for now....since i need to sleep and get up in 4 hrs to go to the office............. I will post more comments tomorrow...and i am really looking forward to the next part!!!👏👏👏👏

hey wow

Originally posted by: neha2005

wonder if geeta is going to find out about maan! great update!

Dear Neha,

Geeta will find out about Maan, we just don't know when. I guess you just have to continue reading the FF.

Glad you liked the most recent update. Keep reading and commenting.


Polki

Originally posted by: Nanthini9

this is getting exciting

Dean Nanthini,

Aage aage dekho hota hain kya. 😉

Keep on reading and commenting.

Polki

Originally posted by: ammu30

Hi!

Just discovered your FF and read it all in one go! This is one of the most unique FF in the forum since it deals with a mature tone to the love story. How difficult would life have been if Geet had gotten married to Maan and had to keep running into Dev, and to pretend that she had no problems with him for daadi's sake. Not to mention how would it have been for Maan to have the knowledge that it was his own brother who ruined the life of his beloved, unable to do anything and wondering about Geet's emotional well-being every time she ran into Dev.

Your description of the Thanksgiving dinner has me yearning for the holidays!!!! I love how you have portrayed the mature relationship of Maan and Geet, how they are both comfortable with each other and are able to have a conversation without missing a beat even after a long gap, The best part ist hat they don't need inane chatter to express their feelings and they are both so secure of their place in the other person's heart.

What can I say about detectives Geetha and Radha, please unite Geet and Maan real fast!

Love it please do continue soon.

Please add me to your pm list

Dear Ammu,

Welcome to my FF, wow you read it all in one go, must have taken you a while, considering my updates are usually really long.

I am glad that you liked my concept. I love the FFs who are dealing with them in the present, where they are married or are on the track to getting married, however I wanted to explore what their lives would be like if they weren't together. Of course this is a Maneet FF so I had to have them still love each other, or else I would have had no readers at all. I wanted to show the baby and what had become of it, I didn't want her to loose the baby, she went through so much because of it.

Also your comments on their expression of love, I had to make it realistic, they are mature grownups with a kid, they wouldn't be acting like teenagers in love. They wouldn't need to tell each other multiple "I love You"s. Their love is secure.

Finally Geeta is on a mission to find out what is going on with her mom. And the one putting ideas into her head is Radha. The instigator. 😃

Keep reading and commenting.

Polki

Originally posted by: sweet cherry

OMG i have jst read da whole of ur update

nd it was fantastic

can u plzzzzz added me to ur pm list

i cant wait to read da nxt update it was fantastic

plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue😊😊

Dear Sweet cherry,

Welcome to my FF. I am glad that you liked the FF so far, I hope you will keep on enjoying my work in the future too.

Glad you liked it. I update once a day, so you get a new update everyday, please read my notes at the bottom of each update because I write what is on my mind there, sometimes I threaten, sometimes I plead and sometimes I just make a fool of myself. But if I ever take I day off I let all the readers know there.

You have been added to the PM list.

Keep reading and commenting.

Polki

Originally posted by: kooliio

Superb update!! Seems Like Geeta and Radha are about to solve the mystery...can't wait for geeta to unite her parents soon. Pls cont.soon

Dear Kooliio,

Glad you likes the update. Remember everything is a mirage, it may seem that Geeta and Radha are on the verge of solving the mystery but not so fast baccha log. If we have them find out everything right away there will be no story left for me to write. And I know you don't want that happening, hein na?

Keep reading and commenting.

Polki