Short Story-Take my Breath Away 2 -Upd 12/10 pg87! - Page 5

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Posted: 14 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: -sann-

haila inni bari haddi..!!! kisi dusht danavi ka hi ho sakta hai...😆
vaise maan v to itna height ka hai na....😆😆 Maan se dur rahiyo kuriye...tera bhaawra tere ko dhund raha hai!

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: Hot_Indo_Chilly



LOL you're hilarious Nups! So kaisi tabeeyat hai aaj? Feeling better...how's fasting going for you?

thnk u jee 4 the compliment😛....i'm better...haath thoda sarr chuka hai...😆😆 today i was in indian attire...went to mosque...prayed & thnked God 4 saving my life...2day i did a crazy think....i was running in park like geet😆😆😆 mujhe bohot mazaa ayaa...everyone was ghooring at me...& i told thm kya hai..kisi ladki ko durte nehi dekha kya....😆😆😆 tht was so much fun....😆😆 aur hospital mein jakee sarr ghum gaya...neuro professior ne dimaag ka dhacchiya utha diya....tht was a 🤢 surgery of brain...🤢🤢
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Posted: 14 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: AKANargis



Innocence was ok for the intial lure...but shaadi ke bad INNOCENCE ka kya kerga....pani mein ghol ke peeyega?? Shadi ke baad...tau its time to put out...remember that!!!



Stop scaring me 😭 Initial lure lagta hai jaise kisi ka shikaar karne ki taiyaari ho rahi hai! 😭😕
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Posted: 14 years ago
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ha ha...people..have fun...update is almost done..had a social phone call..so just finished that...
few mins mein update...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: Hot_Indo_Chilly



Stop scaring me 😭 Initial lure lagta hai jaise kisi ka shikaar karne ki taiyaari ho rahi hai! 😭😕

darro maat MaAn hai na...😈
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Chapter 43
Vicky raised his head when he heard his sometimes shy sometimes bold sister like friend of childhood. He turned and looked at Faz, who had placed both her hands on her waist and had a foot pointed out tapping away with the knowledge that she had caught on to something juicy here.
Vicky winked and she winked back. She said, Bhai Jaan, aap kab sudhroge? Aapko Daadi dhoondh rahi hai. I thought it would embarrassing for Nargis if she came, so I told her I shall find you, Aapki harkatoon se mein wakif hoon na, I had seen you two slip away. Ab agar aapka milan khatam ho gaya hai, to wapis chalne ki zehmat pharmayenge, putting both hands out in an imaginary red carpet and bowed with sarcasm and merriment in her voice and eyes.
Nargis was embarrassed and she ducked behind Vicky when he had turned to face Faz. She also heaved a sigh of relief when she heard, Daadi was going to come but Faz stalled her. Faz came forward and pulled Nargis's hand, bringing her out from behind Vicky. Aapko humse sharmane ki koi zaroorat nahi, Bhabhi Jaan, Hum beshak aapke saath hai aur samjhte hain hamre nikhatoo Bhai Jaan ko, Wahi lekar aaye honge aapko, giving a light punch on Vicky's shoulder. Nargis smiled and instinctively hugged her for saving her from a certain embarrassment should Daadima had come looking for him. She liked Faz, initially she had seemed a bit uptight and proper but she should have known, she had spent her childhood with Vicky and Maan.
They then walked together back into the great room and found Daadi near the entrance, having lost patience waiting for Vicky to show up. She asked where he had been and he lied saying Nargis needed to adjust her dress and he showed her the way to the powder room. Daadi smiled knowingly but let it pass. She said, Chalo, ab mehmaanno ko bhi sambhalo, lunch ke liye sab ko porch mein direct kariye. Faz, Nargis and Vicky got into action and took help of Adi, Sasha, Tasha and Nupur along with Arjun to direct everyone towards the lunch area.
Everyone went over to the lunch area with the bride and groom to be leading the way. Daadi was with them and so was Abs's family. She had enjoyed herself dancing with Maan and felt exhilarated with all the festivities. The function was turning out to be a beautiful one. She was happy that Daadima and everyone else had kept their promise and no awkward moment had come up. The fare was a lavish one with a mix of Punjabi and Bihari dishes, just like the joining of two families.
Once the guests and most of the family had finished lunch and were relaxing in the great room with dessert of Gulab jamun and Vanilla Ice cream, Vicky, Nargis, Faz, Adi, Sasha, Tasha, Arjun and Nupur sat for lunch, forming a circle with their chairs and plates in their hands. Maan and Abs joined them once most of the people left following dessert. Daadima had also retired after Abs's family left, her brother had stayed behind and he had joined the group with Maan and Abs. Everyone now, was enjoying a leisurely lunch, just the youngsters, enjoying the after party. They were teasing each other. Adi was pulling Maan's leg about the dance and the ceremony and Faz and Vicky joining him echoing the moments that were hilarious and fun. They all clapped for Arjun for his impromptu dancing and dhol. He gave a glance to Nupur to see how she liked the dhol playing. Nupur seemed to be joining in as well in the praises and for some reason he felt good about that. She was seated opposite him in the circle, he smirked, far away from him so that she does not get drenched by his food or drink. He had to do something to redeem himself he thought, the more he tried to get to know this girl, the more she ran away from him.
Faz was sitting in middle of Maan and Vicky who had their fiances on the other side of them. Abs's brother was sitting next to her and Adi next to him as they knew each other and had lots to catch up as well. Adi was had been feeling good about the moment when Faz had held his hand but was not sure whether that meant something or was just something that happened in event like this. She seemed a bit relaxed and approachable now. he had kept on darting glances at her and had found her eyes on him everytime, but had shyly looked down the minute he had looked at her and he found that encouraging. He thought I will talk to her once I can find an excuse to be with her in a little more private setting. Happy with that thought he paid attention to what Abs's brother was saying.
Sasha and Tasha were enjoying this group party and were happy to see the bosses in different mood than the usual somber one at the office. They were surprised to see the easy camredarie between Farah and the brothers and then learnt that they were all childhood friends.
Faz then looked up and asked Abs what was she planning for bridal shower and if anyone was hosting it for her. Abs said, No she had not thought there would be one, so Faz said, theek hai bhabhi jaan, I shall host a bridal shower for you as a welcome to the family. After all, mere bhai jaan shaadi kar rahe hai and I would love to do this. Aap sab larkiyan mere ghar on Saturday night and all the boys you are not invited. This is girls only party. She turns to Vicky and says, Aap ya Arjun bhaisaab bachelor's party karkhne waale the na? Vicky looked at Arjun and said yeah we are. Maan bhaiya ke aakhri raat with women other than his future bride. Will be fun. Hum to typical American style mein manane waale hain Kyon Arjun. But I am not telling you girls exactly what.
Abs looks horrified and asks Vicky, Aap kya karne waale ho? then puts a hand to her mouth realizing she sounded like a jealous wife already. Everyone laughed and Arjun said, Bhabhi, abhi shaadi nahi hui hai, so Maan has to have the last of the fun before he is tied to you forever now doesn't he?
Nupur glares at Arjun, Nargis was smirking as Vicky winked at her Faz exchanged a look with Maan that was full of naughtiness. They seemed to have a plan that was working and the look said that much to each other. Adi intercepted this and realized that Faz had started this conversation that was loaded and knew there was something cooking between Maan and her.
He wondered what? He thought, Abs does not know what family she has gotten herself into and giving a small shake of his head. He had thought Faz was the quiet one, but looks like she had layers to her personality that changed every time he blinked. She was like a kaleidoscope. He wanted to know her even more now.
Edited by rushtrip - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Lovely update....very sweet!! Oh BTW...Thanks to FAZ for not sending daadi ma in her stead.. ..I owe you one FAZ!! So...Bridal shower...hmmm..usually the brides sister(s) get the lingerie for the bride...and I will be happy to provide the one for Suhaag raat...especially since Maan has already seen the one that Abs bought. bechaara...must be dreamining about Abs in it every night....it will fin to shick him with a different one on the Wedding night. Abs...you cannot say no...its treadiotion here that the bride wears what her sister get ger....I will get 2 for you..one pengior and one...lets just say....just leave it to your imagination. tHE NIGHT OF THE SHOWER...YOU HAVE TO TRY ONE ON FOR THE GIRLS....this will be loads of fun. I remember when my sister threw my shower....all they had to go thurto make it a surpirse for me. They could not pull the wool over my eyes...so they had to invilve my dad to get me out of the house...can you believe it. He took me out to do FURNITURE shopping...of all things...and we ended up buying new living room furniture for my Mom's house. Vrush....there are a lot of tradiotins to be followed for bridal showers...we wii have to honor them all for ABS's shower....wow...I am really looking forward to it now!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice one n thanks for the pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Great update....

Vicky aur karega bhi kya get some stupid showgirls and booze 😡

But yeh Faz aur Maan ki ishaarebaazi ka matlab kya hai ??? Adi tum mere spy banoge? Haila, kaisi family mein shaadi ho rahi hai meri...ab toh saans bhi darr darr kar hi le rahi hoon main!😕

Vrush Dadi knows everything about the powder room even if she's not the one who went there! Nargis you're lucky she doesn't let you know! 😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: -sann-

darro maat MaAn hai na...😈



Yeah, like that's any consolation now....😕

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