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Manita

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Posted: 14 years ago

#201

a really cute scene amrita...............would wish RBO to continue on and on like these little episodes................

when r u writing the rest ??? can't wait................

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-Amrita2010

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Posted: 14 years ago

#202

Originally posted by: rbo_fan
a really cute scene amrita...............would wish RBO to continue on and on like these little episodes................

when r u writing the rest ??? can't wait................

Awww dear, thank you so much...

this is the 20th part I wrote, sorry it was named as a short story, but it's still increasing it's size and I'm wondering how to end this😆😆😆

This story, I update once a week sweetie, but as this time it was short, I will write the next part before the weekend......

I'm sure, RBO cannot show these hawt and sexy scenes I have written here....these are highly x-rated and very few of our beshrams can handle these stuffs😆😆😆

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Sophia Khan

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Posted: 14 years ago

#203

Damn yet another beautiful update

Ur updates leave me breathless lol LOVE IT!!! I just wish the CVs read this and take some ideas from you

Please continue soon!! =)

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manjiri

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Posted: 14 years ago

#204

hey amrita hav i said this before? .....u r a wonderful writer👏... specially with romantic shanak. scenes.....😍.....loved them.........do continue soon..😛

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Sonali

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Posted: 14 years ago

#205

that was sweet! keep up the great work Amrita!😃

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sexyheels

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Posted: 14 years ago

#206

that was a very cute scene i could see the room full of roses and the green sari ohh kia baat hogai if all this actually happens btw our shanak 😍

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-Amrita2010

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Posted: 14 years ago

#207

@Sunshine (sorry, don't know your name)...All I can say is thank you so much dear....Yeah, this story is really for the x-rated people and it will leave you breathless most of the times...😆😆😆Cv's can't show these stuffs on Indian TV😆😆😆

@Manju, thank you....but why are you saying that I write only romantic scenes....I wrote different family scenes and scenes between friends also here in this one😭😭😭will bring a new twist into this one in my next update too

@Adventure girl, Thank you so much dear....I will definetly😃

@Sexy heels, thank you so much dear...keep on dreaming with my scenes dear😆😆😆

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-Amrita2010

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Posted: 14 years ago

#208

@Neha and Shalini.....Thank you so much girls

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shanakforever

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Posted: 14 years ago

#209

amrita awesome part once again........shaan asking khanak 2 c her in a beach wear omg i couldnt stop blushing.....loved it very much superbly written wil eagerly wait fr the next part👏👍🏼❤️

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manjiri

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Posted: 14 years ago

#210

Originally posted by: amrita2010
@Manju, thank you....but why are you saying that I write only romantic scenes....I wrote different family scenes and scenes between friends also here in this one😭😭😭will bring a new twist into this one in my next update too

oh sweety i didnt mean that.....i wanted to say that u write awesome romantic scnes too...i just love them yar....and ya i knw u rite other scenes too ...hav read them and loved them equally dear....😛

pls dont misunderstand......dekho mujhe bhi rona aa raha hai😭

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