My first Maaneet FF-An Unusual Grihapravesh - Page 16

Thank you for the double update today .. we are spoilt ..

Superb update!! Who was that woman?? Awww geet was feeling jealous...hope they will tell each other about their past...pls cont.soon!!

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OMG OMG OMG totally luving it.....ooooooooo i already hate the girl!!!!

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I read all the parts together😃 Please PM me also when you update the next time!!!!!
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Originally posted by: Tishuu

OMG OMG OMG totally luving it.....ooooooooo i already hate the girl!!!!

awwww they both luv each other....jus takes tym to realise i guess....haha its amazing wat knwing ur "married" to sum1 does to u - in terms of the rights u feel upon them..

love it

keep it up

btw...is there any reason y ermm i wasnt notified of the updates???

ermm or at least edit the title plz so i knw wat part/page i get up to

thankkk uuuu

Hi Tishhuu!! 🤗

Sorry, I'm a bit lazy, but you'll def get a PM .Anyway it's the weekend, so I'm giving a double treat to all. 😃

Thanks so much for the compliments, 😊 Meg

Chapter 21(Time passes so quickly guys 😭 😛 )

Maan took a deep sigh and breathed in the air of Hoshiarpur.

It had been exactly three months ago when he had met Geet, soon after the Lianna fiasco. He had not made the trip just to make a second escape from the now sweet-girl-gone-blackmailer Lianna. He had made the trip to investigate Geet's past.

He respected her privacy and knew there were some secrets she wanted to keep hidden. But he was her husband. He had the right to know. Or else he would have to spend the rest of his life with a girl who was bubbly and yet fragile. He wanted to make her strong. He had fallen in love for the first time, and he was determined that it would turn out perfect. So no hidden secrets, no tamaashas. No more screaming out to the whole world proof of her innocence. Just a simple notice to people to treat Maan Singh Khurana's wife with respect-or else.

The last time he had met Geet in Hoshiarpur was the jungle scene. After that he was sure she must have gone to the police-she had been abused badly, and he was sure no woman would put up with that much, for all his misconceptions about women.

It's okay Maan, you will learn.

He tried to be as emotionless as possible when enquiring about the incident. The police inspector laughed.

"Mr Khurana, honour killings are part and parcel of village life."

"But surely the culprits must be the same?" he asked hopefully.

The police inspector sighed. "Brijveer Handa. That was his name."

"Huh?"

"Brijveer Handa. Grandson of Daarji-no one ever says his first name aloud, even after the disgrace his family went through. He was convicted of having carried out three honour killings-the third one came to light when the girl's mother filed a complaint. The entire village thought she had lost it. Then Geet, his sister, made a shocking revelation in front of everyone. She told them how he had tried to kill her after coming to know she was pregnant."

"Pregnant? By whom?"

"Why are you so curious?" the inspector asked suspiciously, narrowing his eyes.

"Just collecting statistics. NGO work." he said carelessly.

"Sirji, don't play this NGO game with me. I know you are big businessman. You must be moving around with modern ladies. You will to surely appreciate the courage she had to make a tamaasha of herself and her family in the name of justice!" sarcasm in his voice. "I don't understand what's wrong with girls nowadays. Thinking they can go against their family and whole society will not notice."

"So you're trying to say she should have done what they asked her to?" Maan said angrily.

"What else? She sent her brother to jail, family's reputation was tarnished and whole town's image went for a toss. Only people like you come nowadays. No one wants to admire greenery which was once stained with blood."

Maan's blood boiled hearing the statements, but he controlled himself. He then went outside, but not before asking a last question-"Where do the Handas live?"

The inspector laughed. "Who does not know the Handas by now? Go straight and take a left till you enter the main market. You will find the house. The walls have all kinds of statements scrawled on them by the local kids. Seriously, these family dramas, corrupting the children-

Maan left before he could murder the inspector.

Chapter 22(Promised you double treat, so gotta work hard. 😉 )

Maan was shocked by the decrepit state of the Handa house.

The paint was peeling off the cracked walls. All kinds of abuses were permanently engraved onto the walls. Yes, it did give the impression that it had once been an imposing structure. But it looked like it had been abandoned.

He rang the bell. The door was opened by a nervous Mohinder.

"Hello?"

"Um..uh...Papaji?" asked Maan, feeling slightly awkward.

"Maan!" Mohinder said, his face brightening up. "Come inside!"

"Mohinder!" Daarji boomed. "Who's at the door?"

"Daarji, he's some big benefactor," Mohinder said brightly, without skipping a beat. "Come to fight our Brij's case."

Immediately Daarji came running into the verandah.

"You're Lawyersaab right?" he asked, jumping up and down with big childish eyes.

"Um, yes," said Maan, not knowing what else to say. He had to gain entry into the house somehow.

"Come come!" he said. "I will be back in a moment. Rano, lawyer saab has come! Make some nashta!"

Rano hurried into the hall with a tray of snacks. On seeing Maan, her eyes widened.

"Maan!!" she said, putting down the tray and hugging him. "Kaise ho puttar! Geet kaise hain?" she whispered, glancing behind nervously.

"Theek hain."

"Or baccha?"

"Absolutely fine. We went for a check up."

In his mind, Maan was hurling abuses at himself. What type of a husband are you? You know your wife is pregnant and you have not taken her for a -censored- checkup!

Brijveer Handa entered.

He was no longer the aggressive elder brother who had tried to murder his own sister. He was a defeated man. Maan noticed specks of coal on his face. His attitude, especially his bowed shoulders, indicated he had faced a lot of humiliation.

And yet, the voice was still there.

"So you are the lawyer," he grunted. "Saw what haalat this Geet has made of our family!! No one will touch our case due to all those female NGO's!

Maan groaned mentally. Not NGO's again!

"I have already studied the case history," Maan said casually. "I'm busy, I will drop by later."

Brij made a motion, as if to fall at Maan's feet, then stopped.

For one moment Maan felt sorry.

And then suddenly-

Please save me!

Yes, it is Dev's child.

What a tamaasha she has created of herself!

And when that did not work, they tried to kill her.

Did you see what a haalat she has done of our family!

In his turmoil of emotions the only thing that was clear was the face of a smiling Geet. His mission.

He felt anger at all those people who had betrayed her, especially his own brother.

He felt sad he had never tried to find out her situation and help her.

He felt annoyed that Geet had hidden so much from him. More of a kind of irritation that she did not consider him close enough to share everything.

He felt happiness that he had finally found out about her past.

And he felt pride. For the bravest, most beautiful, and the most loving mother a kid could have was his wife.

There was just a small problem.

Her name was Lianna.

And now he finally understood how Geet had felt. Because suddenly, the thought of telling her about another girl made him want to find the nearest black hole.

YAY!! Double treat lol..thanks for the double update!!!
Both the parts were amazing!! Loved it!!
Glad that maan knows everything about her past now!!
Can't wait for maaneet scenes. Pls cont.soon and thanks for the PM

oh wow double post!!!
awesome updates! :D