Life without youu!! (update on pg 139) - Page 9

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Posted: 15 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: Mjhtrox11


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Heyy!!!
Do you know

Urs is the hundredth comment!!!

Yeh!!! I just got my 100th!!



u were counting!!! 😲 😳
thts so sweet!!!!!!! 🤗
cont soon wid it!:D 😆
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Posted: 15 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: AttractiveAdya



u were counting!!! 😲 😳
thts so sweet!!!!!!! 🤗
cont soon wid it!:D 😆

Noo!! wasnt counting!!
when youu go to posts!! then it comes there
that how many comments u hv got!!
Lol!! thats how i know!!
:)
--manjarii
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Posted: 15 years ago
#83
omg
just started reading this ff
fallen in love with it at once
the concept sounds amazing
and all the characters are fantastic
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Posted: 15 years ago
#84
part 1-
gunur were rocking
sanu were cute
mayur were cute
sajan were amazing
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Posted: 15 years ago
#85
part 2-
rocking job
sammy, gunjan, armaan and ridz scene was too cool
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Posted: 15 years ago
#86
wow majari lovely update
Ye sam kitna sadu hai bechari gunjan.
but i,m looking forward towrds the precap so update soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
#87

Originally posted by: ash_sajan

wow majari lovely update
Ye sam kitna sadu hai bechari gunjan.
but i,m looking forward towrds the precap so update soon

thanx ash 4 ur super nice comment!!!
keep commenting!!!
I know!! just waiting 2 write more!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#88
great update
hope sajan fall in love soon
do continue asap😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
#89

G went to R's house after college for a sleepover... rather supposed to be a study over!!🥱

G: toh riddhima.. samrat kaha hain? R: bhaiya ki chinta mat kar.. woh office main hain.. unhe aaj late jo jayega! pehle hi bol diya thaa!! G: thank god! uss sadu ka chehra nahi dekhna padega!! R: tum dono ki bilkul nahi jamti na!! KITNA larte ho!! A: EXACTLYY!! R: armaan?? tum?? yaha?? G: umm.. ridz usse tumse baat karni thii.. R: par gunjan agar bhai aa gaye toh?? A: abhi toh tumne kaha ki usse late hoga? aise bhi usse kon darta hain?? except tum! R: very funny.. theek hain.. jaldi bolo.. G:*cough cough* main bahar wait karti hoon R: gun.. She left.
R: bolo? kya bolna tha?
A: kya tum mere saath bahar chalogi?
R: WHAT????
A: please.. 😊😃
R: armaan.. tum.. yeh sab..
A: haan? ya na?
R: haan bhi aur na bhi!!
A: what?
R: Bhaiya mujhe kabhi nahi jaane denge.. n woh bhi TUMHARE saath! forget it!!
A: aur tum aana chahti ho!!
R: umm.. woh.. maine aisa kab kaha?
A: toh tumne haan kyun kaha?
R: umm.. jo bhi. par main nahi aa sakti.. ab jao isse pehle ki bhai aa jaye!!
Before she could get him out the doorbell rang!!
G jumped up of the sofa!!
G: main jaakar kholti hoon aur usse aane se rokti hoon!! ok? tab tak tumlog jaldi khatam karo!!
A: fine!
G runs and opens the door
S is standing there confused.
S: riddhima kaha hain?
G: woh.. woh bathroom main thii.. isliye maine darwaza khola!
S: ohk..
he walked towards his room which was next to riddhimas..!! if he heard them?!?!?
G: samrat ruko!!
He stopped.. turned around.
S: kya hua tumhe?
G: woh main.. haan.. tumne kuchh kahay nahi na! riddhima ne khana banaya tha.. usne tumhe khane ke liye kaha hain!!
S: main uske saath kha loonga!!
G: ruko!! time dekh rahe ho?? 11 baj rahe hain! humne kha liya!!
S: oh.. main baad main kha loonga.. tum jao!
G: samrat!! she held his hand..
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Meanwhile..
Armaan walked towards ridz and she went back.. this continued until she was against the wall!!
A: kyun aana chahti thi mere saath!!
R: nahin.. main bas.. aise hi..
A: achha?
R: woh.. meri wajah se tumhe itni zor chot lagi na..
A: oh.. ehsaan kar rahi thii!! phir chhoro.. ehsaan mat karo!! he started going towards the window
R: armaan!! she caught his hand with both her hands!
Main aana chahti thii!! isliye!
A: toh bas.. baaki sab mujhpar chhod do! hmm?
R nodded..
R: par..
A: shhh!! puting his hands on her lips.. kuch mat bolo! just wait and watch!
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S: what now??
G: mujhe tumse kuchh baat bhi karni hain!! plz kha lo mere sang!
S: fine.. chalo..par wait a minute. tum phir se riddhima ke baare main toh?
G: nahi nahi! bilkul nahiin.. mujhe toh pata bhi nahi ki tumse kya baat karni hain!!
S; what??
G: i mean.. maine uss baat ke baare main socha hi nahi tha..
S: better!!
They sit on the dining table and gunjan serves..
S: mujhe laga nahi tha ki tumhe yeh sab bhi aata hoga!!
G: dekha tum mujhe har baar galat samjhte the!!
S: haan.. haan.. ok bolo ab?
G: woh. haan!! main hamare baare main baat karna chahti thii.. hum hamesha itna larte kyun rehte hain??
S: yeh zaroori baat karni thii tumhe?
G: batao na please!
R: arrey bhaiya aap aa gaye?
S: haan.. tum bathroom main thi na..
R: haan.. par aap mere bina khana kaise kha sakte ho?
S: par..
G: humne toh kha liya na riddhima!! (giving her a stern look)
R: haan.. par aap roz mere saath baitkar khate ho na!
G: par isse bhook lag rahi thii!!
S looks at gunjan!!
S: mujhe? tumhe mujhse baat karni thii!! gosh tum kitni confused ho!! shayad isliye hum itna larte hain!!
G: excuse me!! tum itne sadu ho hum isliye larte hain!! get it!!
S: achha... main sadu hoon!! tumme jo itna attitude hain!!
G: woh achha hain!! par tum bohot over confident ho!!
R: uff! (inhe akela chhod dena hi achha hoga! yaha rahi toh main paagal ho jaungi!!)
She leaves.
S: Ohh.. Toh main over confident hoon!! toh tum kya ho?? hah?
G: main bohot hi sweet si pyari si larki hoon!!
S: isliye main kehta hoon!! Larkiyon se baat hi nahi karni chahiye!! sab itne weird hote hain!!
G: Mr samrat shergill!! tum bhool rahe ho ki tumhari behen ek larki hain!!
S: Usse chhod kar sari larkiyan mere liye alien jaisi hain!!
G: 😲😡😡.. Tum khud hoge alien!
S went to his room and banged the door shut!
G went to riddhima ka room and started talking to herself!!
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Mayank dreamed abt Nupur for the first time!!
M: nupurr!! plz plz mujhe chhor do!!
N was very angry!! She was in a witches clothes and her hair wa sopen!!she was holding mayank by his collar
N: tum mujhe sudharoge?? hah? itni himmat hain tumme!! tum sirf kitabo ke saath achhe lagte ho!!
M: nupur.. tumhare dada ne mujhe duty di hain!! plz
N: shut upp!! warna main tumhe maar dalungi!!
She gets a rope and ties it around mayanks neck...
From the next day she takes mayank like that to college!!
Pulling the rope and mayank going along!
She is laughing loudly!!! and then finallyy!!! she hangs him from the library fan! Mayank screams!!
He gets up!!
M: oh godd!!! yeh main kya dekh raha tha!! nite mare!! phew!! itna paseena aa raha hain!!
Gosh!! nupur.. humph!! kitne weird sapne aate hain! gosh!!
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At around two sam's eyes opened.. He looked around.. he was feeling hot!! there was no electricity!! he got up and went out!!
As he went out he saw gunjan standing at the window! she was reading!!
He walked up to her and just to scare her he went and screamed!!
She screamed and hugged him!!
He started laughing!! she realised that it was a prank and broke the hug!
when she looked up sam was laughing!!
she shook her head and turned again!!
Sams Pov:
Omg! she was cryinG!! woh roh kyun rahi hain? poochhoo?? nahi.. ajeeb lagega! par maine usse kyun daraya! main toh aisa kabhi nahi karta!! pata nahi samrat tu kyun aise behave karta hain uske saath!!
" Gunjan.. tum.. roh kyun rahi ho?"
" oh! you saw that! kuchh nahi... aise hi.." she said
" please.. tum mujhe bata sakti ho!"
Why? why was i saying all this! it felt as if someone was forcing me to!! I din like her!! why did i ask her to tell me? main apne aap ko kyun nahi samajh pa raha!!
"seriosuly! nothing! bas aise hi kabhi kabhi bohot akela mehsoos karti hoon"
She? n alone? uske toh itne friends the? aur woh akela kaise mehsoos kar sakti hain? seriouslyy? balki main kitne baar akela mehsoos karta hoon.. kyunki mere paas koi nahi hain!!
" tum akeli nahi ho gunjan! tumhare kitne dost hain? aur by the way itne raat ko tum yaha kya kar rahi ho?"
WHY? why was i asking her all this! as if someones forcing me to say all this! something inside me!! Gosh! why m i doing this?
" kabhi kabhi dost hokar bhi akelapan mehsoos hota hain!! Aur main andhere main nahi so sakti.. mujhe.. mujhe.."
"dar lagta hain?" I blurted out.
she just nodded.
I felt like just going away from there.. why was i even talking to her!
"thanks.." she said
"ur welcome.. par why?"
"for asking.. shayad tum itne sadu nahi ho jitna mujhe lagta tha! tum achhe insaan ho." she smiled at me and then went..
I smiled at myself..
As i entered the room, I was going to bed when i saw a mirror.. I went and stood in front!
" tum itne sadu nahi ho jitna maine socha tha.. tum achhe ho!"
haha i laughed!
"wao mr,shergill... itne saalo main pehli baar kissi ne kaha ki aap achhe ho!! congrats"
Oh Godd!! again?? Main gunjan ke baare main itna kyun soch raha hoon!! uff!!
Kya ho raha mujhe??Gaawdd!!
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Precap: Mayanks attempts to become friends with nupur!!
and sam and nupur acting that they are together!
N gunjan and Armaan plan A and R's date!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#90
nice update dear...mayank's dream was so funny...
but y very little of mayur>>????pls update soon dear...........

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