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~Chap 25~


"Geet!..darwaza kholo.."..Maan was knocking on the door since a minute or so..but Geet was asleep and wasn't opening the door..

"Geeeet..darwaza kholo..hum dono late hojaingai.."..he was almost trying not to scream..

Geet opened her eyes and lazily looked at the wall clock..it was 6:02 am..

"yeh Maan ko kya hogaya hai..itni subah isko kahan jaana hai..aur mujhe kyon jaga raha hai..she thought getting mad..

" maa..aur uncle aunty or dadi wapas aagaye Kya?..She opened her eyes..thinking excitedly..she quickly ran towards the door..and opened it..and was looking around..

Maan was angrily looking at her but she wasn't paying attention to him..then she came out of the room..and looked downstairs but there was no one and the door was closed..she disappointingly turned around and saw Maan who was now MAD at her..

"Good Morning Ma'am!" he greeted in a sarcastic tone

"Go..Good Morning Maan!" she sed feeling awkward

"Tum ne time dekha hai..abhi tak so raheen theen?" Maan sed trying to make her realize that they both were getting late..

Geet: haan dekha hai..isi liye abhi tak so rahee thi..Maan..subah k 6 bajay tum kahan k liye late ho rahay ho!..she explained and then asked confusingly

Maan: 6?..Geet wake up..it's 10..not 6

Geet looked at him annoyingly..then walked to him..held his hand and dragged him to her room..and showed him that it was still 6: 02!

Maan looked at the clock then his wrist watch and then at Geet and sighed helplessly ..

"never mind..tumharay room ki gharhi kharab ho gayee hai..abhi 10:15 ho rahe hain..not 6:02" main bholu ko bol doon ga..woh theek karday ga..but u hurry up..and get ready for college..

Geet who was looking at wall clock..nodded and went to the bathroom taking her towel while Maan's phone rang and he walked out of the room

"HeLLo!..DAD!..kaise hain aap!"

"main theek hoon beta..tum kaise ho..aur geet!..woh kaisee hai?" Mr. Khurana on the other side replied..

Maan: main bhi theek hoon..aur Geet bhi theek hai!..akhir aap logon ko humari yaad aahe gai!..he sed in a complaining tone

Mr. Khurana laughed: aray..tum to aise shikayat kar rahe ho jaise main first time kisi business tour par gaya hoon..

Maan: nahi..lekin sab log to pehli baar he gaye hain na..dadi bhi nahi hain..aur mom bhi nahi!..he again complained

Mr. Khurana: aray lag raha hai abhi tum ro do gai..ab rona nahi..tum to meray shair ho..aisee baatien tumhari personality par suit nahi karti

Maan: hmm..lekin aap k shair ko aap logon ki bohot yaad aarahee hai..aur haan..aunty se boliye ga..unki bagarh billi(wild cat) bhi unko bohot miss karti hai..

Mr Khurana now laughed loudly: bagarh billi!?..kahin tumhara ishara Geet ki taraf to nahi!

Maan smiled talking of Geet: sahi samjha..aqal mand ko ishara he kaafi hai..and they both laughed

Mr. Khurana: lagta hai abhi woh tumharay aas paas nahi hai..

Maan: ahaan..warna sach main billi ki tarha mujh par attack kardeti

Mr. Khurana again laughed.."woh to pari hai!"

Maan got quiet and smiled: mom aunty aur dadi kahan hain..

Hmmm..woh..woh sab shopping par hain..main free tha..socha call karloon.. Mr. Khurana got queit for a second when Maan asked about the ladies

"waise tumhari bagarh billi kahan hai..usse baat karao meri!"..he asked about geet

Maan felt shy when Mr. Khurana called Geet his: woh to naha rahee hai!

Mr. Khurana: acha..wahan sab theek hai na!

Maan: haan dad..sab theek hai..

Mr. Khurana: chalo phir main baad main call karoonga..phir Geet se bhi baat hogi..

Maan: lekin aap log wapas kab aarahay hain

Mr. Khurana: woh bhi baad main he bataon ga

Maan looked at his wrist watch..he was really getting late.." Ok dad..then I will talk to u later..aaj wahi Mr Dobrial kay project ki presentation hai..

Mr. Khurana: oh haan haan..all the BEST!

Maan: thanks DAD!..take care..bye!

Mr. Khurana: bye!..and Maan hung up the call and rushed to his room to get ready..

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"O Crap!..aaj main bohot late hogai hoon Maan..mera aik lecture already miss hogaya hai!..main breakfast canteen main karloon gee..Maaan..plzz jaldi karo na.."..she sed looking at him who just came and was fixing his tie..

Maan: acha!..main bhi apna breakfast office main he karloon ga..he sed while picking up his car keys along with his briefcase and walking out of the house with Geet

Geet: ofcourse..tumhara office hai..tum chahay jo karo..she told

Geet continued: kitna acha mousam hai na..lagta hai aaj baarish hogi..

Maan:..hmmm

Geet: acha Maan..tumko yaad hai na..kal prom nite hai!

Maan: hmmm..!..he sed starting his car.

Geet: so plz..aaj office ka saara kaam khatam karlena..ab prom main to jaana he hai..aur main tumhare ilawa or kisi aur k saath nahi jaon gee..she sed while looking at him..who was looking in the front..

"Gosh he looks so amazingly professional with shades on..with that serious and busy look on his face"..she thought while looking at him..finally she got a chance to actually observe him this morning..and then she remembered her dream that she had last night

Maan: tum aise kya dekh rahee ho!

Geet: haan!?..kuch nahi!..she sed quickly looking outside the window..

Maan: aray yaar don't worry..tumhare saath prom par main he jaaonga..aur koi leja kar to dekhay!..bas aaj yeh presentation hojai..phir thora kaam ka load kam hojaiga

Geet: presentation?..again?

Maan: haan..yeh project bohot important hai..bohot time spend kiya hai..im actually nervous today!

Geet: awww..dont worry..sab acha hoga..and im 101 percent sure k yeh project tum ko he milay ga..i will pray for u..she sed looking at him

Maan: thank u!..that's really sweet!..he replied looking at her..wid a slight charming smile

She just smiled and prayed in her heart that Maan gets this project!.. subsequently they both got quiet.. she was thinking and requesting her baba jee for Maan's project

"tumhara college aagaya!" Geet was back in present..on Maan's voice..

Haan?!..agaya!..main chaltee hoon"..she sed taking her purse..and opening the car door..she hurriedly got out and made her way towards the building.

Maan saw her going and started his car when he saw Geets's books near his gear.

"Oh!..Geet apni books yaheen bhool gayee..yeh bhi na!"..he quickly took out the keys and got out of the car!..he could see Geet was walking towards the entrance of the building..

He rushed to the building..and saw a guy was talking to Geet at the way in

"hey Geet!.." it was Ankit..

"Hii"..she sed hesitantly.."umm..im sorry but mujhe bohot late ho raha hai..maine already aik lecture miss kardiya hai!..i need to go!"..she sed the truth

Ankit: lecture?..haha..Geet kal prom nite hai..tumko lagta hai k aaj koi lecture attend karay ga!..

Geet: kyon..prom to kal hai na!?..to phir aaj classes kyon nahi hain?

Ankit: woh iss liye..kyonki mostly student aik doosray k saath prom par jaate hain!..so sab couples milkar plan kar rahay hain..aur masti kar rahay hain..

Geet: ohh!..i think I shud atleast sign in..so attendance main meri absent na lagay!

Ankit: yeah sure! Chalo main bhi tumhare saath chalta hoon..he sed friendly..Geet cudnt say no!..

"GEET!"..Geet turned around on the familiar voice when her and Ankit, both were about to enter..

"tum..yahan?..kya huwa"..she asked Maan surprisingly

"haan..woh tum apni book car main bhool gayee theen..so socha dedoon..tumko zaroorat hogi!.."Maan who was looking at Ankit..replied

Geet: ohh..thank u! lekin aaj koi class attend nahi kar raha..sab prom ki preparation main bz hain..mujhe abhi ankit ne bataya!..she sed looking at him

Maan: oh..Hey Ankit! How are u?

Ankit: hiii..all gud dude! and they both shook hands

Maan: ok then main chalta hoon..

Geet: hmm..

"..Maan"..Geet called..Maan who was about to leave stopped..

Geet walked to him..and hesitantly hugged him..Maan looked at Ankit who was looking at them..and put his hands around her waist

"Thank U Maan!..All the very Best for the presentation..i knw u will get it.."..she almost whispered in his ear..hugging him tightly

Maan smiled.."thank u"..Geet shyly got away..

"ab jaao..warna late hojaogai..aur haan..eat something before presentation"..she told Maan who was looking at her

" oh yeah!..tum bhi kuch kha lena..byee"..

"Bye"..Maan left..she turned around and saw Ankit standing there waiting for her!

"ahem..chalain?" she asked hesitantly

Ankit nodded and they both made their way toward the main office..

"Aaj kuch khaas din hai kya?"..Ankit asked

Geet: sorry?

Ankit: nahi..i mean..jistarahaan tum dono nay bahar hug kiya..mujhe laga kuch special din hai aaj!..

Geet was quiet..

Ankit: im sorry..i knw mujhe aise personal stuff nahi poochna chahiye!

Geet: no its ok..actually aaj Maan ki bohot important presentation hai..usne bataya tha..k kaafi mehnat ki hai usnay..so it was just a 'best of luck' hug

Ankit: oh!..he smiled..Geet entered the main office and signed in

After signing in she was about to leave when Ankit stopped her..she was not really liking how he was trying to be all extra frendly..but she didn't want to be mean so she just looked at him wid questioning eyes..

Ankit: I m sorry..

Geet was still looking at him confusingly..

Ankit: umm..uss din bus stop par..maine..meray doston ne..aur Ajay nay..jo kuch bhi kiya..woh sab ghalat tha..tum plz humlogon ko maaf kardo!.

Geet was quiet..

Ankit continued: I knw k tum aur Maan engaged ho..but yeah I liked u when I saw u the first time..but I didn't knw about u being engaged..so I am sorry!

Geet appreciated his honesty and finally smiled.."its ok Ankit.."

Ankit grinned..so tum ne maaf kardiya?

Geet nodded and smiled.."ab main chalti hoon..hmm..cafeteria main Pinky and adi must be waiting for me"

Ankit: oh yeah..sure..have fun

Geet smiled and made her way to the cafeteria..but Ankit stood there..standing and smirking malevolently.."I really would be sorry for u Geet!..just wait and watch..wat wud I do wid u and Maan..if u can't be mine..then I won't let that jerk take u that easily"

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"Ailo!! Finally yeh madam aagayeen!" Pinky sed to Adi while pointing towards Geet..who just came in

"Sorry Sorry Sorry Sorry!..yaar aaj late hogai..kal raat der se soi..aur phir subah gharhi kharab hogai..Geet explained while putting her books on the table..

Pinky: kyon..kya saari raat apnay unn k sapnay dekh rahe theen?..she teased

Geet surprisingly smiled thinking how right her guess was: Maan k sapnay!..she murmured

Adi: ofcourse!..tumko nahi pata kya..girlfrends ko hamesha raat main apnay Boyefrend ki yaad aati hai..Pinky to hamesha mujhe sapnon main dekhti hai..he winked..and pinky slightly hit him with the elbow..

Geet: sapnay se mujhe yaad aaya..Pinky mujhe tumse aik zaroori baat karni hai..woh baat..secret hai!

Pinky curiously looked at Geet who looked nervous..

"Excuse me!..am I not a part of this conversation" Adi sed getting upset..

Geet: awwww..no..its nothing like that..ofcourse u r too a part of this convo..waise bhi main jo kuch bhi pinky ko bolon gee..wo tumko pata chalna he hai..i knw..she doesn't hide anything frm u!..she teased while going toward the breakfast line..and picking up a sandwich and an orange juice..and paying for it

Pinky and Adi who were following her just smiled..

Geet: acha..pehlay promise karo..k tum dono yeh baat kisi ko nahi bolo gai!

Pinky: yeh bhi koi kehnay ki baat hai..tumko lagta hai hum kuch aisa karaingai..u carry on!

The three settled themselves on the chairs around the round table of cafeteria.

Geet took a deep breath..and sighed heavily..

Adi: aisee kya baat hai Geet

Geet looked at both of them.."Main..Maan se related aik bohot important baat share karna chahti hoon..sirf tum dono he meray sabse close frends ho..and I knw I can trust u..rite?..she asked looking at them

Adi: ofcourse..!

Pinky: ab bolo bhi Geet..

Geet: woh..ahem..

Adi: take ur time..

Geet tried to smile.."actually..main Maan ki mangetar nahi hoon.."..she sed it as quickly as she cud..and looked at Pinky and Adi..who were looking at her confusingly..

Adi: kya?..lekin tumne to kaha tha k tumhari or uski engagement..Pinky looked at him and asked him to be quiet..

Pinky: baat kya hai Geet..tum bol sakti ho..u can trust us..

Geet smiled and appreciated her friendly gesture: actually maine jhoot bola tha!

Adi: acha!..iska matlab tum dono aik doosray se pyaar karte ho lekin engagement nahi huwi hai!..rite?!..just like me and pinky

Geet bit her lower lip in nervousness.."nahi" she sed in a lower voice

Pinky and Adi both looked at each other in surprise..Geet was looking down at the table

"actually me and Maan are just childhood frends..'best frends' u knw..she sed in a low tone looking at them

Pinky: WAT!..so u r not in a relationship with him?

Geet: no!

Adi: lekin woh uss raat restaurant se niklate huway..remember..woh sab kya tha?

Geet: woh aik coincidence tha..actually hum dono dinner par saath gaye thay..lekin we r just frends..

Pinky: or woh tumko rozana college chodnay aata hai..and u guys are just frends?

Geet: haan yaar!..main usi k ghar main rehtii hoon..meray parents uskay parents k frends hain..tabse..jab hum dono iss duniya main bhi nahi aai thay

Pinky: to phir tumne sab se jhoot kyon bola..aur uss raat bhi..u introduced him as ur fianc and he was OK with it?!

Geet: haan yaar!!..jhoot maine Ajay, Ankit aur uskay group ki wajah se bola..woh log mujhko harass kar rahay thay..aur unhon nay jab mujhe Maan k saath dekha to saaf saaf approach kiya k Ankit mujh main interested hai..aur maine unse peecha churhane k liye bol diya k woh mera mangetar hai..and can u believe..it really worked!! ..or us raat jab tum logon ne humlogon ko saath main dekha tha..usi raat maine Maan ko sab bataya tha..and convince bhi karliya tha..aur woh sirf humari dosti I wajah se mangaya

Pinky: oh!!..Geeet!!..wait a minute..so tum Prom par kal raat aarahee ho?..kyunki now..every1 is expecting u both to cum..u knw Maan is kinda famous..he is the only son of the well known businessman, Mr Khurana..and now every1 thinks u both are in a relationship..

Geet: haan woh to hum aarahay hain

Adi: lekin Geet akhir kab tak tum log iss tarhan se iss jhoot ko..he got quiet..looking for the rite words

Geet: problem woh nahi hai..

Pinky: phir kya problem hai?

Geet: mujhe..ahem..she cleared her throat

Adi: kya?

Geet: Mujhe.. Maan pasand hai..mujhe uskay sapne aanay lagay hain..aur woh jab bhi meray saath hota hai..main khush hoti hoon..aur jab woh kisi aur ladki k saath hota hai..mujhe lagta hai..kisi ne mujhse mera sakoon he cheen liya ho..i don't knw..i..like..no..i think..i LOVE him!

Adi and Pinky again looked at each other..Surprisingly

Adi: does he knw about this..?

Geet: about wat?

Adi: i mean..is he aware of how u feel about him?

Geet: NO!..yahee to problem hai

Pinky: to budhu usko bata day na..how about on Prom nite!

Geet: PinkY!..yaar main nahi bol sakti..main ladkee hoon..and I never even imagined that I wud propose a guy and that too sum1 like Maan!

Pinky laughed

Geet: hans kyun rahi ho..?..i knw thora ajeeb hai..lekin kya karoon yaar..first time hai..aur last time bhi..i really am attached to him emotionally..i knw it's love but..i can't express it to him just like that..she sed getting worried

Pinky: Aray..I knw aisa hota hai..

Adi: lekin Geet..umm..tumko to wo acha lagta hai..but how about him..i mean..first u shud have some idea..that how does he feel about u!

Pinky: hmm..yeh to hai Geet..lekin im sure k woh bhi tujhko pasand karta hai..u knw tumhara jhoota fianc ban gaya..tumhray saath rehta hai..tumhari parwah karta hai..mujhe to lagta hai k woh bhi same feelings mehsoos karta hai..lekin first u make sure by urself..usko notice karo jab woh tumhare saath hota hai

Geet: hmm..u r rite!..lekin kaise pata chalay ga yaar!

Adi: hmmm..

Pinky: aik idea hai..

Geet: kya?

Pinky: tum koshish karo k prom par tum usko jealous karo!

Geet: what..yeh kaisa idea hai?..iss tarhan to woh mujhse ghussa hojaiga..main pyaar ka soch rahee hoon..aur tum ghussay walay ideas bata rahaee ho

Adi: nahi Geet! Pinky is rite!..

Geet: achaww..woh kaise?

Pinky: woh aisay budhu..k jab koi ladka kisi ladki ko pyaar karne lagta hai..to woh usko kisi aur k saath nahi dekh sakta..

Adi: Exactly..main ladka hoon na..believe me..Pinky is rite..main bhi pasand nahi karoon ga agar pinky kisi aur ladkay ko mujhse bhi zyada..ya meray jitnee importance aur attention day gee

Geet was lost thinking: hmm..WOW!..u guys are rite..she looked at them happily..maine filmon main dekha hai..aisa he tou hota hai..yeh idea mujhe kyon nahi aaya

Pinky: tumhara first time hai na..

Adi: acha..tumko bohot experience hai!? He asked pinky

Pinky: ofcourse..tumharay saath he to huwa..

Geet: oye hoye..meray love Gurus..love u guys..and thank u sooo much..u guys are the best!!

Adi: we knw it..he sed winking..and the three laughed..

Pinky: acha Geet..wat about your prom dress?..did you buy it yet..?

Geet: no!..i didn't..how about u?

Pinky: main tou kal he Adi k saath gayee..aur select kii..

Geet: koi theme ya koi dress code!?

Adi: hmmm..sab mixed hai this time..last year seniors k liye disco theme tha..and this time its Disco, Desi and other styles.. all mixed u knw

Geet: really..thats something interesting..

Pinky: ahaan!..

Geet: main tou aik zabardast dress loon gee ..waise bhi jab se yahan aai hoon..aik baar bhi shopping par nahi gayee!

Pinky: what? Are u serious..to chalo..aaj college k baad meray saath chalo!..

Geet: hmmm..nahi yaar woh..

Adi: pinky! Samjha karo na..woh Maan k saath jaye gee..jaise tum meray saath jaati ho..he sed looking at Pinky

Pinky: ohhh..she teased

Geet smiled..coz Adi had guessed it rite..she did want to go with Maan..but today the time was just not passing..the more she wanted it to go by quickly..the more it was taking time..

"Huh!"..she sighed looking at her wrist watch and then started eating her breakfast ..but she was hardly ate thinking if Maan has eaten something for breakfast

"kya huwa Geet..tum pareshaan kyun dikh rahee ho..kis soch main gum ho?..Pinky asked

Geet sighed: yaar aaj hum late huway..so dono ne breakfast nahi kiya..aur Maan ki aaj aik bohot important presentation hai..so im kinda worrying about him..bas Baba jee usski help karain..aur usko yeh project mil jaaye!..

Pinky: awww..don't worry..tum uss k liye pray kar rahee ho..he will get it!..

Geet smiled.."I really hope yaar..pata nahi janaab ne kuch khaya bhi presentation se pehlay ya nahi!"

Adi: aray don't worry..phone karke poochlo..

Geet: that's a gud idea..but I don't have phone wid me right now

Pinky: tumhara cell kahan hai!

Geet: nahi hai!

Adi: really!

Geet: I never needed 1..

Adi: don't worry ..use mine!..he offered his phone

Geet: thanks!..she sed gratefully

Adi: no probs!..

Geet dialed Maan's number..the bell was ringing on the other side..but he didn't pick up the phone..

Geet tried again..this time Maan picked up

"Hello!.."

Geet: Hello Maan!

Maan: Geet?..he asked confusingly reconizing the voice

"Hmm..main Geet bol rahee hoon..she sed hesitantly

Maan:.."bolo?..is everything alrite?..yeh tum kiske phone se baat kar rahee ho"..he asked getting worried

Geet: ahem..haan woh main adi k phone se call kar rahee hoon..maine poochne k liye phone kiya tha..k tumne breakfast karliya!?..she asked hesitantly again..she didn't knw y all of a sudden she was feeling so shy and was being hesitant talking to Maan..

Maan smiled: bas!..yeh poochne k liye?..

Geet panicked at his reply.."nahi woh..actually..Best of luck bolne k liye bhi bola tha..presentation k liye

Maan: lekin woh tou tumne college k bahar bol diya tha na!..he teased

Geet: woh!..she hated herself for making such a lame excuse..she began to think wat to say

Maan laughed on the other side: aray yaar mazaaq kar raha hoon..naashta nahi kiya..bas order karne wala hoon..thanks for reminding..tum nahi hoteen tou mera kya hota!..he again teased..

Geet smiled: woh tou hai!..

Maan laughed: tumne karliya?

Geet: kya?

Maan: dinner..!..Geet..ofcourse Breakfast!

Geet: oh..hmm..haan kar rahee thi..tou tumhara khayal aagya!

Maan: acha!..

Geet: hmm..chalo ab tum nashta order karo..aur presentation k liye ready hojao!..aur haan..please aaj jaldi nikalna hai office se..so mujhe pick up karnay kab aaogai?

Maan: hmm..kab aaon?

Geet: presentation kitni lambi hai!?

Maan: hmm..depend karta hai..k clients ko explain or convince karne main kitna time lagay ga!

Geet: haan..phir bhi koi Idea tou hoga!

Maan: hmm..around an hour or 2

Geet: oh!..aik minute hold karna

Maan: ok!

Geet to pinky: aaj hum ghar kab jaa sakaingai!?

Pinky: umm..we are leaving in 2 hours!

Geet: perfect!..Hellow Maan..hmm haan..2 ghanton main we can leave

Maan: Lekin Geet..abhi to clients aaye bhi nahi hain..zyada time bhi lag sakta hai..

Geet: oh!..phir..main..khud he!..lekin mujhe tumhare saath shopping par jaana tha..kuch zaroori cheezain leni hain..

Maan: hmm..main aisa karta hoon..driver ko bhej deta hoon..woh tumko office lay aaiga..phir hum dono yahan se chalain gai..

Geet: awesome!..lekin 2 ghantay..yaad rakhna..ok

Maan: ok Ok!

Geet: chalo..ab kuch khalo..baad main baat karaingai

Maan: ok..take care!

Geet: u too..and all the best..and she disconnected the phone

Pinky: kya huwa?

Geet: woh office se driver aajaiga..mujhe lenay..2 ghanton main..phir main office main maan ka wait karne k baad..usi k saath shopping par jaon gee..

Adi: that's great!

Geet smiled and nodded

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Edited by NZ_rockx - 14 years ago
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~Chap 26~

Rite after 2 hours Geet was getting out of the building wid Pinky..when sum1 called her..she turned..it was Ankit!

"Hey Geet!..u r leaving..?"..he asked standing a few steps away from her..

"ughhh..yeh phir aagaya!" she sed to pinky

Pinky laughed.."kyon..kya huwa?..sab theek tou hai na?..

Geet: hmm..but ab kuch zyada he friendly ho raha hai..that's nice of him but I feel strange..

Pinky: aray don't worry Geet..tumhara Mangetar wala excuse lagta hai such main kaam kargaya

Geet smiled..and saw Ankit who was now cuming towards her..

Pinky: chal yaar main chalti hoon..Adi must be waiting in the car..

Geet smiled and nodded..

Pinky looked at Ankit.."Bye"

Ankit just smiled..and pinky left..now Geet looked at Ankit..

Geet: umm..ofcourse yes im leaving!..she answered..trying to be nice..she was in a hurry to meet Maan

Ankit: I knw that was a dumb question..he sed laughing

She barely smiled looking for the car and driver..

Ankit: kisay dhoond rahee ho..tumhara Boyfrend lenay aaiga

Geet looked at him..there was something in his tone that bothered Geet for a second..

"hmm..haan".. that's all she sed

Ankit: oh..lagta hai abhi tak aaya nahi..

Geet stayed quiet ..and kept looking around

"ankit..dude..u cuming?" the voice grabbed her attention..she was pleased that he wud leave now..she looked at Ankit

Geet: tumhare frends bula rahay hain tumko..

Ankit: hmmm..he turned around..looked at them and walked to them..

Geet sighed thankfully..but the other second she was worried that the driver wasn't there to take her to the office..she decided to keep waiting because she had no other choice..

the weather was chilling..the gray clouds came over the bright sky..and it was getting darker..which was actually frieghtning for Geet..it looked like it was about to rain.

half an hour passed..neither the driver came..nor Maan himself..Geet was mad..Really Mad!..the whole campus was empty only few students were cuming out and going inside..coz of prom's preparations

After waiting 15 more minutes Geet decided she will go home by herself..though she never went alone..and it was getting drizzly and misty..and she had no other choice.. She was walking to the road so she can take rickshaw to home..when she saw a figure cuming towards her.. she started walking ignoring the person..she kept walking..she was walking on the street..it was strange that there were no cars passing by the street..she turned back..and saw the same person walking behind her..she started panicking..now she was sure that he was stalking her..she started walking much faster..after sum time she saw the person was very close..she was scared to death..she wished that Maan was there to help..but it didn't happen..she almost started to jog..it started raining heavily..Geet was in trouble now..the person started running as well to get her..she sped up..she didn't knw where she was running to..but she kept running madly..the rain and tears in her eyes were making it hard to see anything..she turned and saw the same person running behind her..while she was looking behind..she didn't realize that a car was cuming from frontage..she was about to bump into the car..when the driver pushed the breaks..suddenly she turned around and the sound of car break echoed in the air..

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i think that's a pretty long update..Nahi? 😉

ok...so i want my comments on both chapters..after all mujhe haq hai 😉 😆..and will try to update soon..and do tell me ur views..if its getting boring or its something else..Criticism is ALWAYS welcomed! 😃

thanks for ur patience and appreciation..Love Ya All ❤️

Edited by NZ_rockx - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Loveeee the part.
I don't know why i'm feeling like something big will happen on prom night!
Continue soonnn.
Thanxx for the pm.



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Posted: 14 years ago
Great update! Love Adi and Pinky......such wonderful friends! This Ankit guy.....what is he planning... The trio's plan of making Maan jealous.....hope it works and Geet gets an idea of his feelings. Can't wait for the prom night.

Edited to comment on the next part....

That was suspenseful. Geet seems to be in trouble. Do continue real soon.
Edited by Starry_night - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
😃😃😃😃Loved it!!
BTw....mujhe yeah parents par shaq ho raha hai...lahin innhone jaan bhuj kar plan to ahin kiya 😉😉😉😉😉😉
Update soon and thanks for the pm😃😃😃😃
And why is chap 26 so short??😡
i mean agar tumhe comments par haq hai to hume lambhe updates ka haq hai...aur wo bhi itne dino baad😛😛😛😛
Edited by cue1 - 14 years ago

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