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im sorry..as i mentioned b4..i realli did messed up wid the pm list..sorry..will take care of it next time..thanks alot..so glad u liked the update ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

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HeLLow....yes here I am..wid my update..i knw u all must be waiting for me wid shoes in ur hands for my welcome back!! ๐Ÿ˜•๐Ÿ˜†..but here ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ

im realli very very sorry..for being so late..but i have a gud news ๐Ÿฅณ..it was my engagement ๐Ÿ˜ณ..and that's y i got mad mad mad busy..and cudnt update..i hope its a valid reason..hehehehe..but guys sachi next time..i will try my best to update early..and i knw that i promised that i would update..but the day i was gonna update..was the day my inlaws came online..and then my cousin..so got bz..but yeah..i am back..hope all is well here..but i have a problem๐Ÿค“..can't add..anymore ppl..like the new readers ..in my pm list..waiting for the email for verification of the account..so sorry if u dont get the pm..its coz its not letting me add u rite now..and i cant verify it rite now..but soon i will..and then u will get pms..
thanks for leaving the comments..and appreciating..i knw,..u all must be excited for prom..so am i..but this update is not about prom..but we are gradually reaching there..hope u all will like the new turn..so Enjoy this update..and soon i will do the next update..Love ya ALLLLL...
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~Chap 24~



After eating their dinner Maan ordered ice-cream..

Geet: aaj tumhari jaib (pocket =P) halki kar wadi maine..nahi?

Maan looked at her.."hmm..yeah..but u don't worry..tumhara mangetar..itnay paisay to kama he leta hai..k tum par atleast twice in a weak apni "jaib halki kar sake"..he sed wid his charming smile

Geet: oho..im impressed..

Maan: kaafi time le liya tumne..

Geet chuckled and Maan too grinned..the waiter brought the ice cream..and served them..

Geet and Maan picked up their cups..and started having it..

Geet looking into her cup.."meri ice cream melt ho rahee hai!"..she complained like a kid..

Maan: woh to hogi hee..itnay halke kha rahee ho..jaldi khao..he sed

Geet: No!..this is all melted..she sed making a face..

Maan: ok madam..let me order another 1..

Geet: no..it's ok..

Maan: meri wali lelo..main tumhari leloonga..

Geet: nahi..chodo..tum hain mera jhoota khana paray ga

Maan: So!..i don't mind..unless u mind eating my jhooti ice cream

Geet: no..not at all..she suddenly clarified..here..she gave him her cup..

Geet was feeling strange..strange in a gud way..she was slowly realizing that she was slowly starting liking him..not just liking but slowly started loving him..his little jokes..his little teasing..and his loads of care for her..

She looked at him who actually drank the melted ice-cream..she chuckled..

Maan: kya huwa..hans kyon rahee ho?..aik to tumharee ice cream "pee" maine..aur tum..

Geet laughed even louder..Maan was getting irritated..

Geet: ahem..tumhare chehray par..woh..icecream lagi hai..let me..and she moved forward and softly wiped off the icecream from his upper lips wid her fingers..

Maan was surprised at this gesture..for some moments he just cudnt look away from her face..

"hogaya"..she sed moving back..

Maan looked down..for sum reason he felt shy.."thanks.." he sed modestly

Geet: it's ok Maan..

Maan: hmm..chalain kya?

Geet: haan..chalo..

Maan payed the bill and both left the restaurant..and Maan drove to home..on the way both were quiet..Geet who was bored tried to turn the cd player on but there was no CD in there..

Geet: kya Maan..tum koi Cd nahi rakhtay kya?

Maan while driving: CD?

Geet: haan..song waali CD..jisko hum iss player main laga kar gaane sunte hain..she sed pointing at the player..

Maan rolled over his eyes.." huh!..nahi..meray paas time nahi hai!"

Geet: oho Maan..tumhare paas to kabhi time nahi hota..

Maan just shrugged..while she turned the radio on..

"tera mujhse hai pehlay ka naata koi..yunhi nahi dil lubhata koi..jaane tu..ya jaane na" the song was playing on the radio

Geet: omg..one of my fav!..she sed getting excited

Maan: acha..

Geet: hmmm!..tumhara kon sa favorite hai!?

Maan: hmm..nothing particularly..koi bhi acha sa..

Geet: acha?..meray to mood par depend karta hai..pata hai..jab main yahan move nahi huwi thi na..tab main aur Rano every weekend koi na koi romantic movie dekhnay jaate thay..aur agar theaters main nahi..to DVD par..then Sidharth aagaya..but we didn't stop..Rano uske saath jaati thi..aur main unn k saath kabab main haddi ban kar jaati thi..she sed smiling remembering the old times..

Maan was quietly listening to her.."bechara Sidharth!"..he sed to tease her

Geet: wat bechara..u knw how romantic it is to watch romantic movies wid ur partner..she sed dreamingly..

Maan: HA!..wat is so romantic about it?

Geet: omg..plz Maan..tum kya jaano..tumko to action movies pasand hain!..kabhi romance try karke dekho..

Maan who was now parking his car in the garage.."ROmaNce TrY KarKe DekhooN?..he asked innocently looking at her..

Geet surprisingly looked at him..and then shyly looked away.."Mera matlab romantic movies!"

Maan: ohhhh..yeh bolo na..tum bhi na GEET!..he teased..lekin mujhe yeh sab bohot boring lagta hai!..i mean..maine tumko pehlay bhi bola na..

Geet: ya ya..lekin sirf aik baar..meray liye..

Maan: tumharay liye?

Geet: i mean..once u will see it..u will love it..it's always so sweet and beautiful..not boring..

Maan: it IS boring!

Geet: tum gay ho kya?

Maan: excuse me!..no!

Geet: to phir aise behave kyon kar rahe ho!

Maan: yeh baat nahi hai..

Geet: acha..then cum on..give it a try!

Maan: lekin Geet..movie bohot lambi hoti hai!

Geet: acha..chalo movie nahi to koi scene..wid a song..that wud be perfect..time bhi kam hoga..aur mera point bhi clear hojaiga..

Maan: But Geet..

Geet: No Maan..let's go..main tumko dikhati hoon..she sed getting out of the car..

Maan sighed sitting in the car.."yeh ladki bhi na.."..then he dully got out of the car..

As soon as he entered the house..he came to the lounge and fall on the giant sofa..as he was very tired..Geet was looking around something in a cd rack..

Maan: what are u looking for?

Geet: my shoes!

Maan looked at her unbelievably.."Duh Maan!..CD rack main..Cd he dhoondoon gee na.."

Maan just sighed.."Konsi CD?!"

Geet: humari shaadi ki!..she sed timidly wid a smile

Maan: kya?..

Geet: huh! abhi hum log kya baat kar rahe thay..romantic movies ki..usi ki cd dhoond rahee hoon

Maan: nahi milne waali..

Geet: kyon

Maan: humaray ghar main romantic movies kon dekhay ga Geet..!

Geet sighed..acha tumhara lap top kahan hai..

Maan: kyon..tumko lagta hai meray laptop main koi romantic song hoga?

Geet: ha..no no..not at all..lekin internet to hai na..

Maan: hmm..

Geet: to bas..youtube kis liye hai..

Maan sighed.."Batao na kahan hai?" she insisted..

Maan: study room main..

Geet: to chalo wahan chaltay hain..

Maan: nahi..mujhe nahi jaana..

Geet got up..and walked to Maan who was half lying down on the sofa..

"utho na Maan.."..she insisted looking at him..

"Main nahi uthnay waala geet!"..he declared..

"Acha?"..geet looked at him..and decided to make him get up..she held his hand which he had on his chest..

"Utho..aaj main tumko nahi jaane doon gee..main bhi Geet handa hoon!..main apna point prove karke he rahoongi"..she pulled his hand..wid full force..but Maan didn't move..she tried again..Maan moved a bit now..

"Konsi chakki ka aata khati ho?..bilkul bhi dum nahi hai..romantic movies ki heroines ki tarha..tum bhi kisi kaam ki nahi ho!" he teased..

Geet: "haw!!..uu"..she inhaled and took a deep breath in..and pulled him wid all her force..Maan who almost got up..pulled his hand back..and Geet who was holding on his hand tightly was pulled toward him..and losing her balance she fall on him..Maan who didn't do it purposely..suddenly protected her by his hands and didn't let her fall elsewhere but on him..

Geet: ooo..

Maan: ouch!..

Maan looked at Geet whose eyes were closed..geet slowly opened her eyes and saw Maan..there was very little distance between their faces..so little that Geet almost cud hear the pattern of his breathing..and cud feel the warmth of his breaths..for sum moments both kept looking each other..Geet being in the awkward position looked away and then quickly got up..

"Nahi dekhna to mat dekho..main he pagal hoon.." she sed upsettingly

Maan: "ok..chalo..main haara..tum jeetin..le chalo..aur dikhao jo dikhana chahtee ho!

Geet: nahi..mood nahi hai..aur koi zor zabardasti bhi nahi hai..

Maan: Geet tum kitni ziddi ho..yaar chalo na ab..dekh kar phir mujhe apna..woh giant mattress bhi yahan lana hai..he sed getting up

Geet: nahi its ok phir kabhi..

Maan: tum na..chalo..he held her hand..and took her to the study and made her sit on the chair..infront of the laptop..

"Dikhao!" he demanded..

Geet: sochlo..main tumko forcely yahan nahi laai..

Maan: haan haan haan..i agree..mujhe khud he bohot shoq hai dekhnay ka..

Geet now chuckled..

Maan: ab dikhati ho ya main jaaon..or jhoot nahi bol sakta main!

Geet: nahi nahi..it's ok..chalo dekhtay hain..

After searching and thinking for a decent and romantic song..she ended up playing "Main agar kahoon..frm OSO"

"yeh dekho..one of my fav..isme ladka apni heroine ki itnay achay se taareef karta hai..and usko date par lekar jaata hai..so Romanticc..nahi?"..she excitedly asked

Maan who was smiling to see her so excited..nodded..

She played the song..Geet was full into the song..while Maan was trying to pay attention..but kept gazing at her..

The song finally ended.."kaisa tha?" she asked

Maan: hmm..not bad..acha tha..

Geet: haina?..bohot acha tha..ahhh..i just love the lyrics..hayee..kaash meray liye bhi mera prince charming aisay he gaana gaai..main to khushi k maaray behosh hojaon gee..

This time Maan couldn't hold his laugh..and laughed loudly..

"I knw this all must be sounding very filmy or very crappy to u..but sach..suna hai..jab pyaar hota hai..to duniya khoobsoorat lagnay lagti hai..har choti see cheez pyaari..aur har badi problem choti lagnay lagti hai..bas all u need is the one u Love..just beside u" she sed getting lost talking about being in love..so lost that she cudnt notice for some moments that Maan was actually listening to her..she stopped and looked at Maan who was staring at her..he quickly looked away..

Maan: lagta hai tumko ho chuka hai yeh 'pyaar vyaar'..he asked looking away..a bit hesitantly

Geet: nahi..main to intezaar main thi..lekin lagta hai ho raha hai halke halke..aur woh bhi ussay..jissay kabhi socha bhi nahi tha..she sed in a low tone looking at Maan who was looking at his wrist watch..

Maan: kya?

Geet: hmm..nahi..she sed looking away..her heart beatings beating rapidly..woh to main apnay ideals ki baat kar rahee thi..wahi meray film k heroes!" she lied

Maan: ohh..acha..tum or tumhare ideals..chalo..ab sona hai ya nahi..It's almost 11.

Geet: haan haan..chalo..kal college bhi to jaana hai..

Maan: or mujhe office..

Geet: main change karke aati hoon..

Maan: aur main apnay sonay ki tayyari karta hoon..living room main..

Geet: im so sorry..main aaj room main so jaaon gee..tum apnay room main so jaao..

Maan: no its ok Geet..i will

Geet: no Maan..tum jaakar aaram se so jaao..i really will manage..

Maan: are u sure?

Geet nodded..

Maan: ok then..gud nite..have sweet dreams..he turned and was leaving the study.."about me!..haha.."..he sed leaving the study..looking behind

Geet shyly smiled..and shut down the lap top..and went to her room to change..and then sleep..

_________________*~*โค๏ธ*โค๏ธ*โค๏ธ*โค๏ธ*~*________________

It had been 2 hours and she was quietly staring at the wall..first hour..she cudnt sleep being alone in the room..she have always had her mom..sleeping wid her..and she was very embarrassed about the fact..but she cudnt help it..there was a feel of insecurity sleeping in a lonely room..she always felt like some 1 is hiding under the bed..and as soon as she will fell asleep..the person will come out and kill her..now when she was 20 years old..she still couldn't get over her childish fear. She tried to fite wid her fear and tried to think about the day..and then she started to think about her and Maan's first meeting after she came here..when he saved her from falling..and gave her jam and bread to eat..and made himself a cup of coffee..and then their fights..Geet teasing Maan..Maan getting annoyed..and then their big fight and then Maan took her to the dinner..and how she was and she is impressed by him..then she told him about the lie she told those boys..and he agreed to be his fake fianc..and then..so much fun they had together..all that flirting..Maan always helping her..and then 2day..fiting wid his college frend..who has a big crush on him..just for her..all the thoughts were making her smile..she slowly closed her eyes..

"the lights are soft and dim..everywhere..there are tiny little lights..bedecked around..the tiny ones make the surrounding quixotic..the melodious music is there..but where is HE?..she thinks..

She sees the couples dancing around..together..lost in each others' eyes..smiling..hands in hands..promising each other..they will be together forever..but the 1 she should be with..is lost somewhere..she turns around..and sees him smiling at her..standing a few steps away from her..she walked to him..looking into his eyes..he gently held her hand..and slowly drew closer..and started dancing..both were close..looking into each other's soul..she put her head down on his chest..and closes her eyes..she wants to be there forever..in his arms..but is it a dream?..she asks herself..opens her eyes and moves her head up..and looks at him.."nahi Geet yeh sapna nahi..sach hai!" she thinks to herself..and then Maan moves his face closer.and is about to place a kiss.

here is the Vm..i tried to make..the best..lol..but i realli like this theme..so just made it on the dream sequence ๐Ÿ˜‰

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rzSOviaxY9o

..but she slightly opened her eyes..and was still smiling..but after a moment..her smile faded away..she quickly opened her eyes and got up..and looked around the room..there was no one in the room..

for some second she sat in her blanket quietly.."Don't tell me..Geet..tu Maan k baare main..u were dreaming about Maan..omg!..i was dreaming of Maan..she thought..and then closed her eyes..and tried to remember how it was ..he was close to her....and he was smiling..he was about to kiss her..the thought of his kiss gave her shiver..

'yeh mujhe ho kya raha hai..aaj bhi main uske saamne itna differently behave kyon kar rahi thi..aur phir yeh dream..kahin mujhe..nahi..pyaar nahi..infatuation.."..she thought..and got quiet for some moments..

Lekin agar sirf infatuation hoti to main iss tarha jealous nahi hoti..iss tarha care nahi karti..aur waise bhi mujhe pyaar k baare main kya pata hai..konsa mujhe pehlay bhi huwa hai?..lekin filmon main to aisa he hota hai..O my gosh..mujhe Maan se..Baba Jee!?..lekin agar usay mujhse pyaar nahi huwa tou?..she questioned herself..and the thought really scared her..but then she remembered..how he stood for her against Samira today..and how he always take care of her..and how he always helps her..how he always flirts wid her..and how he always make her happy..and hez always there whenever she needed him..and how 2nite he wanted to go wid me on prom..aur phir aaj raat..he sed have sweet dreams about me!..kahin..woh bhi to!..

She was recalling each and every moment spent wid Maan.. "Baba Jeeee!!..yeh kya hogaya?..aisa bhi hosakta tha..maine kabhi nahi socha tha!"..she was getting excited..but more than excited..she was scared about wat if Maan wont love her..about wat if he doesn't feel the same way..it was funny and strange that suddenly..the thought of losing him scared her to death..but she have to find out..what about Prom?..shoot..prom?..woh meray saath prom par jaana chahta hai!!..kahin woh kuch..she thought for some seconds..

"no May be he was just being my fake fianc..or being my frend..damn..i need help.."

"Pinky!..no..she thinks me and him are really engaged!"

"Should I tell her the truth?.."..yeah..i will..i will tell her..and tell her not to tell any1 else..and she will definitely help me wid what should I do to find out how Maan feels for me!..she thought..lying down again..it was 2:10 am..and her eyes were now heavy..she slowly closed her eyes..praying to Baba jee in her heart that everything will go as she wants..but who knew what will happen to her and Maan!!

_________________*~*โค๏ธ*โค๏ธ*โค๏ธ*โค๏ธ*~*________________
Edited by NZ_rockx - 14 years ago
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res OK OK OK I'm the first once again....................I shall indeed come bak to unreserve this!!!!!
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Woweeeeeeeeeeee oh I is very happy for you indeed!!!!!
Awwww...........................happy days are here!!!! Wooo................๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Edited by Tishuu - 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: Tishuu

res OK OK OK I'm the first once again....................I shall indeed come bak to unreserve this!!!!!

By the Way
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๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘On your EnGaGeMeNt!!!!!!!๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘
Woweeeeeeeeeeee oh I is very happy for you indeed!!!!!
Awwww...........................happy days are here!!!! Wooo................๐Ÿ˜ƒ


awww..thank u soo much!!! ๐Ÿค— ๐Ÿค— ๐Ÿค—
and YAY!! here u are back..first 1 to comment.. ๐Ÿ˜‰

and by the way..i totally loved ur version of Mujhe haq hai ..LOL๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜‰
Edited by NZ_rockx - 14 years ago

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