ManeetFF..Mujhe Haq Hai:: Chp 28::PG. 144 - Page 45

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: kashndsel4eva

awesome update

loved it
aww he missed her so cute of him
cant wait for the next part
con soon
thanks 4 da pm


thanks soo much hun..im soo glad u liked it..wont make u wait longer...will defo pm ya..and thanks once again 🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: vinithaa

hey,

i was waiting for the update.....anyways as usual awesome update.....loved the conversation they had....hope they fall in love very soon.........plzzzzzzz update soon

luv u,
vinitha


awww thank u so much Vinitha 🤗..can i call u Vini?? 😃
and yep..they will fall in love..and hopefully u will love the way they will realize their LOVE for each other..specially Maaan 😉

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: uzmam1

Great update!!

Friday night's here!!
slowly slowly catch a monkey ..
or in this case ..catch a Maan ..
before he knows it .. this guy is oing to fall for this girl!!


Thanx soo much Hun..for ur previous lovely comments and this 1..im so happy u realli liking the FF..and yes..watch out hez going to Fall for her..later or sooner..he will be deeply in love..just wait and watch..oops read..picture..oops kahani abhi baaqi hai meray dost 😉😆😛
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Posted: 14 years ago
awwwww such a cute part!!!! loved it!
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Posted: 14 years ago
i would love to see when there lovestory begin thanksssss see soonnnnnnnn
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Posted: 14 years ago

Good to see Ur Update.😊😊😊😊😊😊😊

Thanq so much for the PM🤗
Thats Awesome👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
Loved it sooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
So Maan missed his Best Friend Geet soooooooooooo much and that is why he became alone.😔😔😔😔😔😔😔
wow Geet called Maan SweetHeart...😃😃😃........
Eagerly waiting for the next part
Pls Update Soooooooooon
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Posted: 14 years ago
aww very cute nd Lovely Update👏👏👏👏. Maaneet were so cute Together. their Convo was fabulous. pls pls pls Continue Soon
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: NZ_rockx

heLLo..as i promised i will update on Friday..i am updating..im late for sum of ya..coz of the different timings..as soon as i came frm skool..i just completed the update and me updating it..okieee..so i hope u all will like it...and plzz comment karna ok..me love to read comments..and yess..will update in weekends..till then u all enjoy this short update 😉😃actually enjoyed reading the part

~Chap 17~

"Romantic"

"Nahi..action"

"Ughhh..Maine kaha na..Romantic..to bas Romantic.."

Dekho har jaga tumhare baat nahi maanee jaigee"

"Maaan..tum mere baat nahi maano gai?..waise bhi main beemaar hoon..mujhe aisee halat main tung karte huway sharam nahi aa rahee tum ko"..she complained

Maan: tum beemaar ho? Kab se?

Geet: ughh..meray pair main chot lagee hain na

Maan: oh..tum usko beemaari bol rahee ho..dekho..tumhare paer main chot lagi hai..isiliye..hum movie dekh rahe hain..lekin Movie meree marzee ki lagay gee..aur mujhe action movie dekhnee hai

Geet: nahi naa Maan..plzz..hum koi Lovestory dekhainge..hmm..how about Kuch Kuch hota hai!

Maan: nop..main yeh romantic movies nahi dekh sakta ok!..wahee same story different faces par..end main dono hero heroine ko pyaar hona hai..and then dono ki shaadi..kabhi tumne socha hai k kabhi movie main woh log happy ending k baad ka kyun nahi dikhate..

Geet: kyonki woh happy 'ENDING' hotee hai Maan!

Maan: no..wrong!..kyunki uss temporary happy ending k baad..permanant dukhi safar dikhane se unn ki films flop hojaingee..just can't stand these stupid love stories..

Geet: Shut up Maan!..first of all..Love stories are not Stupid..and second of all..shaadi k baad koi dukhi safar nahi hota..Shaadi to aik haseen safar ka naam hai..uskee shuruwaat hai..tum aise bol rahay ho..jaise tum kabhi shaadi he nahi karogai!

Maan: hmm.. Dadi and Mom ki wajah se karni paday gee shaadi!..he sed making a bad face

Geet: haw..matlab..agar aunty and dadi..shaadi ka nahi bolteen..to tum kabhi shaadi nahi kartay!?..she asked shockingly

Maan: umm..98% no..

Geet: haw!..and 2%..??

Maan: haan agar mujhe meri type ki ladki miltee to!..lekin I think it's pretty much not possible..aaj k zamanay main..meri type ki ladki milna is hard!

Geet: ohh acha..kya hai tumhari type!??..zara hum bhi to sunain..she asked friendly and curiously

Maan: "meri type ki ladki..serious honi chahiye..kaam se kaam rakhay..har baat par hansay nahi..meri baat sunay..mujhse LARHAY nahi.. Love stories main interest nahi hona chahiye..he sed while looking at Geet purposely..mera khayal rakhay..aur aik achi patni bunker rahay!🥱🥱🥱so boring...... waise seems like maan was saying all this to irritate geet and make her jealous😉😉

Geet: u sure tumko life partner chahiye?so curious 😛😛😛

Maan: kyon?

Geet: no I mean..yeh saare kaam to robot ya phir koi kaam waali baai bhi karsaktee hai..u knw serious ho..tumhara khayal rakhay and all..she sed chuckling

Maan: Wat?? Baai!! Shut up Geet..

Geet: ahem..sorry..but I sed wat I felt..acha batao kaisee dikhnee chahiye?

Maan: nahi main nahi bata raha..tum bila wajah hanso gee

Geet: nahi maan..im serious..i won't laugh..promise..Please bolo naa..

Maan: ok..she shud be pretty..he sed shyly

Geet: okaaayy!..aaj k zamane ki..i mean..modern types..ya purane khayalaat waali..

Maan: hmm..i wud prefer aisee ladkee..jo aaj k zamanay k saath chalna jaantee ho..lekin apni values k saath..

Geet: wow..rare combination..well iss maamlay main humari choice thodi miltee hai..i mean life partners k baare main..i want a fun loving guy..but yet knows his values..

Maan: acha..tumko kaisa ladka chahiye!?..he asked genuinely

Geet: hmm..maine kabhi socha nahi..koi to aisa hoga he..jisse mujhe pyaar hojaiga..aur usko mujhse..aur jab hoga tab dekha jaiga..waise bhi pyaar ho jata hai..kiya nahi jaata!

Maan laughed: Pyaar??..wahi filmi baatien

Geet: oh hello..pyaar hota hai ok!..acha agar tumharee Ms. Perfect tumhare saamne aajaye..to tumko usse pyaar he to hoga!

Maan: nop..aisa kuch nahi hone waala..aisee koi ladkee nahi hai..aur na he meri koi Ms. Perfect hai!..he sed frustratingly

Geet: lekin abhi to tumne kaha k tumko aik aisee ladkee chahiye jo..
Maan interrupted: i lied..i mean not really lied but agar mujhe woh ladki nahi bhi milay gee..so I really don't care..yaar mom meray liye jiss ladkee ko pasand karain gee na..bas uske saath he shaadi karni hai and pyaar vyaar bhii..he sed carelessly while going through the movie dvds

Geet: how boring!..sachi..

Maan: boring I don't think so!..aur waise bhi tumko kya?..u don't worry about shaadi..enjoy ur mangetar's company!..he winked

Geet looked at him confusingly and then got what he meant!.."oh..ok.." she sed smilingly..

Geet got quiet for a sum moments..thinking about something..and Maan took the advantage of the situation and put his favorite action movie..

He sat on the other sofa lying next to Geet's Sofa..

Maan: u knw this is my favorite movie!

Geet was brought back in the present by his comments about the movie..she sighed frustratingly

Geet: Maaaaann!..ughhh..tum na..

Maan looked at her amusingly: Main na kya Geet!

Geet didn't reply in anger..Maan..aik question hai..tumhare liye!..she sed seriously looking at him

Maan who was busy watching the movie looked at her.."and wat is it?" he asked generally

Geet: hmm..i don't knw how to say..but imagine..if we really get married! I mean..agar tum ko mujhse shaadi karne ka aik option milay sooo..??..her voice died in the end looking at Maan's serious face

After listening to her question..he looked up at the ceiling as if he was thinking hard for the answer to her question..

Geet looked at him upsettingly.."itna mushkil sawal bhi nahi hai!" she complained

Maan: oh..nahi..i mean..hmm..maine kabhi aisay imagine he nahi kiya..

Geet looked at him confusingly.."maan..tum khud he to flirt kartay ho..yeh bol kar k main tumharee mangetar hoon..socho agar hum sach main mangetar hote to?

Maan: ohh plzz Geet!!..woh sab to mazaq hai!..hum dono totally different hain!

Geet: hmm..i knw..specially that ketchup and aaloo ka paratha combo..in that case we are totally different!..she joked

Maan: hmm..i knw..and nature wise bhi..tum jolly aur main.. .. ..

Geet: tum akrhoo!..rite..she sed to annoy him and chuckled 👏👏👏😛😛😛 loved her for completing

Maan looked at her angrily..but then his expression changed as if he was thinking for an answer to describe his nature

Maan: haan geet..main thora Akrhoo hoon..lekin iss ka bhi aik reason hai..i think loneliness..main bachpan se he tumhare saath tha..i remember jab tumlog yahan se chalay gaye thay..main kaafi depressed tha..aur humaray parents ne koi contact bhi nahi rakha..hum log itnay chotay thay..k contact karne ka koi option he nahi tha..phir maine koi close frend banaya he nahi..and never showed that I was alone..u knw..phir jab college main gaya..to wahan mostly ladkay studies kum kartay thay..and ladkiyon k saath..ishq aur mohabbat zyada kartay thay..i seriously hated that stupid 2 din ki mohabbat!..its not that I don't have any frendz..i do..but very few frendz..doosre log meray iss attitude ko akrhoo bolne lagay..😲😲shocked that he missed his friends

Geet who was listening to him carefully: "Awww..thats y I sometimes used to wonder in the beginning that how cum Maan is soo nice and every1 call him akrhoo!..specially when me and u went for dinner..and when u agreed to do the fiance drama"..but Aunty aur Dadi tumko akrhoo kyun bolti hain?!" she asked innocently loved her innocence and understanding

Maan: ohh!!..Mom and Dadi to iss liye boltee hain..coz they knw I don't like gurls that much!..girls are stupid!

Geet angrily: excuse U!!!

Maan laughing: sorry..i mean..some girls!..excluding u!!..Khush??

Geet nodded

Maan: Actually Mom and Dadi meri shaadi karna chahtee hain..and unho ne kuch ladkiya bhi dekhi theen!

Geet: OMG!! Realli???

Maan: haan..lekin kaam nahi bana..kuch mera yeh "sado" behavior dekh kar bhaag gayeen..and kuch ko maine sorry bol kar mana kar diya.. Mom kehti hain jab meri Shaadi hogi tab meri 'bechaari' wife mera sado behavior kaise tolerate karay gee!..they think my attitude will create problem in future..

Geet: and wat u think??

Maan: I don't think so..tumko kya lagta hai..tum meree mangetar ho..he smiled mischievously.." kya tumko meray attitude se koi problem hai.."😆😆😆😉😉😉 maan kuch zaada he chalak hai.... trying to know what is in geet's mind.........and nicely flirting wid her😊

Geet: hmm..kabhi kabhi..

Maan: jo ladki mujhse shaadi karaygee..she will deal wid the attitude..after all I wud love her..and she wud love me..and I would have to deal wid some of her things that I won't like

Geet kinda felt strange imagining sum other girl as Maan's wife..maybe she was jealous!

Geet: so Maan u missed me??" ..she changed the topic

Maan: when??

Geet: When we were young..and I moved!

Maan: hmm yeah..u remember anything??

Geet: hardly..she sed hesitantly

Maan: yeah I don't expect u to remember..coz I was older than u..so I remember all that

Geet: Maan u knw wat!..u r such a sweet heart!..⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️👏👏👏

Maan kinda blushed on the comment.."acha!! ab iss sweet heart k saath movie dekhlo!" he changed the topic..to ignore the shyness

Geet: yeah..Lets watch it..she sed sighing

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loved the part yaar
superb loved every bit of it
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Posted: 14 years ago
Lovely update😊
Seems like geet is realizing her feelings about Maan gradually😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
loved ur update...
awesome...
pls update soon.......

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