ManeetFF..Mujhe Haq Hai:: Chp 28::PG. 144 - Page 40

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Great n nice update.
Loveeee maneet's hug scene nut when maan realise about geet his feeing?
Continue soon.
Thanxx for the pm. n hope u update soon pls update na


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Hey Peeps..OMG..saw ur comments..specially the last 1s..i knw u all must be pissed off..😒..but im sorry..guys im hating my new routine😡..but i was also bz wid ma driving classes..and the studies..and i passed the driving test 😃got the license..LOL..i knw..its random..but thought to share it wid ya all😳..and wats going on..hope Aal is well wid ya all..here is my update..made it as longer as i cud..and..i hope its worth waiting😛..im updating in weekendz..coz i knw..therez no GEET on weekends which totally is 👎🏼 and boring..how to tell how much i miss Mr. MSK..LOL..😆😳..and i knw..u all also miss him..😉..ok stop blushing..LOL☺️😆...i shud stop wid ma stupid chatar batar 🤪..u all Enjoy the update..and YES!..plzz do comment..i wud love to read the criticism also...as i sed b4..it is always welcomed 😃..soo plzz comment guys..wat u like..and wat u dont..okiee..wanna thank u frm the bottom of ma heart..for the appreciating..and for ur patience..and I LOVE ya all 🤗..and Mr. MSK..😳😆 ENJOY!!!
~Chap 16~

"Umm"..Geet slowly opened her eyes..wondering wat is she doing in the living room..she slowly got up..and saw a blanket on her..then she tried to remember wat happened last nite..and 1 by 1..she remembered everything..her mom and every1 leaving.. the police officer taking Maan away..she was finding him..and saw him wid that gurl..then Maan looking for her..her fight with Maan..and..and their hug..Geet's heart skipped a beat thinking about the hug..how close they were..she quickly tried to ignore the thought..then she remembered she was in the car last time..

Geet: Main yahan kaisay aai??..aur yeh blanket..yeh sab Maan nay kiya?? She thought confusingly..

She got up stretched her hands out and yawned..and saw Bholu cuming wid a cup of tea..

Bholu: gud morning madam jee

Geet: gud morning Bholu..tum mujhko didi bula sakte ho..ya phir sirf Geet..plzz madam je nahi bulao..mujhe lagta hai..main bohot badee hoon

Bholu: acha didi jee..

Geet chuckled..ok bholu..Maan kahan hai??

Bholu: Bhaiyya to so rahe hain!

Geet looked at the wall clock..it was 11:12 am.."abhi tak so raha hai"..

Bholu: jee..woh kal aap log dair se aai thay na..airport se..iss liye..main nashta bana doon..?..he asked

Geet:..hmm..aisa karo..pehlay Maan ko utha do..phir nashta banalo..

Bholu: didi Jee..bhaiyya ko ghussa aa gaya to?

Geet: usko Ghussa nahi aaiga Bholu..tum bolna Geet bula rahee hai..

Bholu: didi Jee lekin..

Geet cut wat he was saying while leaving the room: Bholuuu..main nahane jaa rahee hoon..jab tayyar ho kar aaon..i want to see Maan on dining table..Geet left the lounge and went upstairs..

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Geet took a quick bath and got ready in 30 min..and hurriedly came downstairs..checked the dining table..Maan wasn't there

"Bholuu"..Geet entered the kitchen calling him..

Bholu: boliye Didi jee..

Geet: Maan kahan hai??

Bholu: Woh didi jee..aapk kehnay par maine Maan bhaiyya ko uthaya tha..aur unho ne kaha k main unko pareshaan nahi karoon..woh ghusse main thay..phir maine aapka bhi bola..lekin woh nahi uth rahay

Geet: ughh..yeh Maan bhi na..main akelay breakfast nahi karoon gee..main nahi karsaktee..aur waise bhi its 11:48..din nikal aaya hai..yeh koi waqt hai sonay ka..main jaa rahee hoon..she sed annoyingly

Bholu: didi Jee ..kahan?

Geet: Maan ko uthane..

Bholu: didi Jee..unko ghussa aaiga..waise bhi unka darwaza andar se lock hai..

Geet: uska ghussa my foot..dekhtee hoon kaise kare ga ghussa..main bhi Geet handa hoon..acha bholu..tumhare paas uske room ki koi chabi waabi hai kya..she asked secretly..

Bholu: nahi didijee..hum to nokar hain..humaray paas chaabi kaise ho sakti hai..

Geet: acha..she sed disappointingly.."chalo koi baat nahi..main waise bhi usko utha kar rahoon gee"..she made the final decision and made her way to his room..

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"Maaannn..uthoo..aur kitna so gai???..cumon..uth jaao..nashta bhi ready hai!"..she was shouting and banging his door..
Maan had refused to open the door..and to cum out..he was tired and wanted to sleep..but Geet didn't listen to him.. and kept trying to wake him up..

Maan: Geeet ..kyoon tung kar rahee ho yaar..mujhko plz sonay do..tum karlo na breakfast..he pleaded in a sleeping tone..

"theek hai..u r tired na..to phir sotay raho..main bhi bhooki rahoon gee..main akelay breakfast nahi karsakti..nahi khaya jaata mujhse akelay main..waise bhi..im missing maa..and every1 soo much..par tum ko kya farq padta hai..haan! agar woh ladki bulatee jiss kay saath tum kal raat thay..tab tou tum..jaldi se maan jaate..lekin main bula rahee hoon..to tewar dikha rahe ho..main to kuch bhi nahi lagti na tumharee..kal raat he pata chal gaya tha mujhe..k main tumhare liye kya hoon..theek hai..so jaao tum ..jaa rahee hoon main".. Geet who was now very frustrated..replied angrily..and sadly..she kicked the door in anger which caused her toe nail to break..it started bleeding..

"ouch!"..she whispered and mutely sobbed in pain..and sat down on floor..holding her bleeding toe..she was crying now..not that it was hurting too much..but coz of the strange feeling that she was feeling since last nite..when she saw that girl wid Maan..since then..she started feeling as if Maan was going away from her..or as if he was ignoring her..the feeling was like a heavy stone placed on her heart..she quietly kept weeping..thinking it will calm her down..but the tears were just not stopping..she was crying when the door opened..She looked up wid the teary eyes..Maan who just came out coz he felt bad..and after listening to Geet..he wont be able to sleep..coz Geet was right that she was lonely and needed sum1 ..he was totally shocked seeing Geet's toe bleeding..he sat on the floor seeing the blood

Maan: O my God Geet!..kya huwa?..tumhara khoon beh raha hai..yeh kaise huwa?..he asked panicking ..and the other second realized he shud do something to stop the blood..instead of asking questions.."chalo meray saath"..he held her by her shoulder..trying to pick her up

Geet refused to get up..by taking her shoulder out of his grip..

Maan looked at her unbelievably.."Geet yeh zid ka waqt nahi hai..dekho tumhara khoon nikal raha hai..meray saath chalo..he forcibly picked her up by her hand..and took her into his room

Then he rushed to his side drawer and took out the first aid box..Geet was sitting on the bed..Maan sat on the floor..and started cleaning the wound

"Thora dukhay ga"..he warned..Geet who was just staring at him looked at her wound..Maan slightly put the ointment and then put a bandage

"dard to nahi ho raha?" he asked softly..Geet who was lost looking at him..looked away .."nahi.." she sed in a very low tone..wondering what is wrong wid her

Maan: im sorry Geet..i shud have listened to u before..main..

Geet interrupted: no its ok..u can sleep..i will go and eat!..there was coldness in her voice..which stroke Maan

Maan: no Geet..u give me 10 min. plzz tum jaakar dining table par intezaar karo..main jaldi se ready hokar aata hoon

Geet: Maan I will be ok..main nahi chahtee meri wajah se tumhari neend kharab ho..she sed in a serious tone

Now Maan sat next to her..looking at her..observing her..

"Kya huwa Geet..tum bohot different behave kar rahee ho..aunty ki yaad aa rahee hai kya??"..he asked softly..

Geet was still not looking at him..

Maan: Geeeet..look at me..he sed holding her chin..making her look at him

She slowly picked up her head..and looked at him..she cud look in his eyes that he was sorry for wat just happened to her..

"aunty ki yaad aa rahee hai na??" he asked gently.."its ok Geet..main hoon na..i mean..i wont let u feel lonely..hum log jaldi se breakfast k baad..kahin bahar chalain gai.." he sed to cheer her up..

Geet appreciated his effort..he atleast tried to make her happy.."nahi..meray paer main chot lagi hai..mujhe bahar nahi jaana"..she complained like a kid..

Maan: thank God tum boleen to sahi..koi baat nahi..hum aisa karte hain..ghar par beth kar aik achi se movie dekhtay hain!..

Geet nodded excitedly..

Maan: that's like a gud gurl..he sed wid a sweet smile..and slightly pulled her cheek.."mujhe bohot zor se bhook lagi hai..he sed getting up..going to his closet and taking out his towel..

Maan(continued): jaldi se Bholu se bolo breakfast ready karday..main 2 min main shower lay kar aata hoon..he sed going toward his bathroom..

Geet was about to tell him that the breakfast was ready..but before she cud tell..Maan went into the bathroom..and closed the door..Geet tried to stand up..but her the pain in her toe didn't let her..

"ahh" she cried in pain..regretting why the hell did she kick the door..

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It didn't take Maan too much time to take a quick shower..he swiftly wrapped the towel around his lower body and got out..as soon as he came out.. got a mega shock to see Geet in his room..Geet who was sitting on his bed..coz she really cudnt get up..hurriedly stood up in shock..they both turned around so cudnt face each other..

Maan: tum neechay nahi gayeen?.he asked embarrassingly

Geet: nahi..woh..mujhe dard ho raha tha..so maine socha..k tum wapas aaogai..to tumhara sahara le kar neechay jaaon gee..mujhe kya pata tha tum baghair kaprhon ke nikal aaogai..she complained nervously

Maan smiled at her nervousness: mujhe laga tum neechay chaleen gayeen..aur main hamesha ki tarha..aisay..

Geet chuckled: iss liye tum nahi chahtay thay..k main tumhare kamre main aaon..haina..tum hamesha apnay kamre main nangay ghumtay ho kya..now she was laughing at him..making him even more embarrassed..

Maan: okay..so u r making fun of me..? he sed in a complaining tone

Geet: hmm..jo tum samajhna chaho..

Maan was glad to see the old Geet back..he turned around and slowly started walking toward her..

"nahi..tum samjhao na".. he slowly whispered in her ear standing behind her..Geet who wasn't expecting him to be this close got anxious..She stepped back and bumped into him..Maan who was standing close moved his face much closer and took a deep breath..she smelled like Jasmine flowers which are picked just before dawn for the best..the fragrance allured him
but Geet hastily moved away..which brought him back into his senses..then he observed Geet's nervous expression on her face..he thought to tease her more..he started walking toward her naughtily..she nervously stepped back..he kept walking in her direction..and she kept stepping back till she hit the wall..Maan moved closer..and raised his hand as if he will touch her face..she nervously closed her eyes..Maan smiled..he raised his hand and took the shirt which was hanging on the wall peg..and wore it..

"ab Khol sakti ho apni aankhain" he sed mischievously..

Geet slowly opened her eyes and saw him wearing a T- Shirt.."huh"..she sighed in relief

"huh kya?..main itna bura hoon kya..k tum meray paas aane se dartee ho..he complained making a face..doing his buttons..

Geet: nahi..aisee koi baat nahi hai..actually tum ne kaprhay nahi pehnay thay..so it was..awkward..she hesitantly sed..

"Awkward?!..agar tumharee jagah aur koi ladkee hoti na..to uss k liye yeh awkward nahi hota..aur koi ladkee kyon..agar wahee ladkee hoti jisko tumne kal raat main meray saath dekha thaaaa..woh hoti toh..uss k liye definitely awkward nahi hota..he teased

Geet: haw..chii..Maan..tum kitnay woh ho..

Maan laughed: woh..woh kya??

Geet looked at him furiously.."Besharam!!"

Maan: HAHA!!..i m just kidding yaar..tum pehlee ladkee ho jiss ne mujhko aise sirf aik towel main dekha hai..he winked..

Geet: oh really..so im the lucky 1..she sed sarcastically..aise bol rahe ho..jaise main ne koi alien dekh liya ho.."

Maan: oh hello..so u r indirectly calling me ALIEN!

Geet: maine yeh kab kaha??..ab jo tum samajhna chaho..pehlay yeh samjha..k main tumhare paas aane se dartee hoon..kyunki tum buray dikhtay ho..aur ab apnay aapko alien bol rahay ho!..maine to kuch bhi nahi kaha..she clarified

Maan looked at her annoyingly..he was not so happy to see the irritating Geet back..but he cudnt do anything now..but 1 thing that he cud do..and that was fite back..

Maan: oh yeah..we will continue this on dining table..

Geet: yes.. I don't mind..lekin pehlay tum pooray kaprhay pehen kar aao..she reminded him

Maan realized he was still in a towel..he quickly made his way to the bathroom..and made Geet chuckle

When he came out Geet was still standing there..

Geet: chalain??

Maan nodded..and came to her..he leaned down to pick her up..Geet quickly moved away..

Geet: sss..ouch..the quick move..caused the pain..kya kar rahe ho Maan!?..she asked upsettingly

Maan: im sorry..but maine kya kiya..?? he questioned confusingly

Geet: tum mujhko uthane waale thay na..

Maan: haan..

Geet: kyon?

Maan: abhi tum nay he to kaha..k tum ko help chahiye..u cant walk

Geet: Maan..i didn't mean k tum mujhko uthalo..i meant..k tum mujko walk karne main help karo..

Maan: ohh..main to tumhari help kar raha tha..but I forgot k tum meray paas aane se darti ho..waise acha he hai..warna mujhko phirse tumko uthana pardta..u knw kal raat uthaya tha..abhi tak mujhe back pain ho raha hai..kitni bhari ho yaar tum..konsi chakki ka aata khati ho..he complained while taking Geet's hand and help her walking

Geet while walking slowly: oh hello..im not bhari..ok..kal raat kis ne kaha tumko..k mujhko apni bahon main uthao..she replied back..

Maan: uthana parha..warna tum car main he sotee rehtee..

Geet: saaf saaf bolo..k kisi ko mujhe uthane ka bohot shoq hai..she teased..

Maan: ohooo..saaf saaf bolon to lagta hai kisi ko meri bahon main aanay ka bahana chahiye..aur uss Kisi ko mera saath..mera sahara bhi acha lagta hai..he sed looking at Geet mischievously

Geet looked at him..for a moment they both kept looking in each other's eyes..Geet's heart again skipped a beat..she broke the continuation..and looked away..both were going down stairs..she stepped down on the stair..Maan who was looking at her..didnt pay attention..she lost the balance and was about to fell..when Maan quickly grabbed her by her hand and pulled her toward him..Geet who was scared and in pain..tightly held him by his shirt's collar..wid her eyes closed..Maan was still in his position..half leaned down on her..one hand holding her hand..and one around her waist..

Geet!..are u ok?.."he asked in a low tone

Geet opened her eyes and hastily moved away..what was happening to her since morning..every time every bad thing was happening to her and Maan was helping her out..

Maan: are u ok?? He sed bringing her back to present

Geet: noo..its hurting..she cried

Maan looked at her toe..and the bandage was red..it again started bleeding..coz of the pressure that was put on the wound..

Maan: oh god!..Geet u have to be careful..look.. it again started bleeding..

Geet panicked looking at her toe bleeding..she sat down..holding her foot..Maan rushed to his room..brought the first aid box..and again put a new bandage on her toe..

Maan: Geet bas bohot hogaya..u really cannot walk..ab jo main kar raha hoon..woh mujhe karne do ok!..

Geet was quiet..Maan came close

Maan: Put ur hands around my neck plz..

Geet looked at him..but then cudnt say anything and did wat he just sed

Maan slided his 1 hand around her waist and other hand around her knees and picked her up..

Geet: mujhe girana nahi..

Maan laughed: don't worry..u trust me?

Geet looked at him.."no!"

Maan: WAT?

Geet smiled: just kidding..of course I trust u..

Maan: hmm..thats better..lets go now..he sed and made his way downstairs..

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Maan made Geet sit on the sofa..and told Bholu to bring the food in lounge..Bholu did brought the breakfast in the lounge as he sed..Maaneet started having breakfast

Maan: waise main kabhi bhi..itna heavy breakfast nahi karta..u knw..Aloo k parathay and all..onlie in weekends..

Geet: hmm..waise bhi..ab yeh breakfast kahan raha..we are doing our lunch now..

Maan looked at the clock..it was 12:50 pm.."Agree" he sed

Maan: tumne kabhi aalo k parathe..ketchup se try kiye hain?

Geet looked at him in surprise: Maan..are u serious?? Aaloo k parathay achar..dahi ya chutni k saath khatay hain..not wid ketchup..

Maan: aray yaar..tum try to karo..He sed offering his piece of paratha wid ketchup on it..

"No thanks" Geet sed making a face

Maan: its only ketchup ok..he complained

Geet: ok..tumhare liye yeh bhi karlain gai..she sed in a filmi style which made maan laugh..she opened her mouth..and he fed her..

Geet: hmm..not bad..but I still prefer my aam ka achaar..

Maan: alrite..as u wish Mangetar..but look it didn't taste so bad..

Geet: oh yeah..woh to maine tumahra dil rakhne ko bol diya..

Maan: really?? Whatever Geet!..so yeah..hum upar room main kya baat kar rahay thay..he changed the topic

Geet: Kya..she tried to remember while eating the achaar

Maan: wahi..k tum meray paas aanay se darti ho!..

Geet: oh plz Maan!..u think like that!!??

Maan: hmm..yeah..jab tum achanak se mujhse door bhagne lagti ho..koi apnay mangetar se aise door bhagta hai kya..he teased smilingly

Geet: haha..oh yeah?!..lekin tum khud he socho..main tumhare paas aane se kyun daroon gee..

Maan: iss liye k kahin tumko mujhse "PYAAR" na hojaye..he exaggerated carelessly ..

Geet who was enjoying the paratha and achaar..stopped at the spot..she looked at Maan..Maan who was eating also stopped and looked at Geet..Geet carefully got up a little..and bend across the small table..where the food was..she moved closed to Maan..who was sitting on the carpet..she leaned down..but still wasn't close enough..she tried..

"Dekh kar Geet!" Maan sed while trying to help after seeing her struggling..

Geet sat down on the sofa..again coz of the pain..but told Maan to cum closer..by her hand gesture..

Maan hesitantly..bend across the table..and moved his face close..it wasn't close enough for Geet..so she moved closer..and raised her hand..and wiped off the ketchup..below his lips..wid her thumb..looking into his eyes..Maan liked her cute gesture..

Geet: main tumse Pyaar karne lagti Maan..agar tum..she whispered looking into his eyes..

Maan: agar kyaa? He sed playfully looking into her eyes

Geet: agar..she whispered and then paused..

Maan: Agar kya Geet!?

Geet: agar tum Aaloo ka parathay ketchup se nahi khatay to!..she whispered smiling naughtily..

Maan sighed..and rolled his eyes..and Geet cracked up..

Maan: Geet tum bhi na!...he sed annoyingly..and again started eating his lunch

Geet: hahaha..Maan..tum kab se itna flirt karne lage

Maan: FLIRT?? Aur main..huh!..mujhe sharam aatee hai..he sed batting his eyelashes..

Geet laughed even much harder this time..seeing him behaving like that.."Maan tum bhi na..too much ho" she sed cracking up..Maan too laughed..he was very happy to see her happy..

Geet: this was 1 of the bestest breakfast or Lunch whatever u say..I have ever had..seriously!" she sed calming herself down

Maan: really..well same here..meray saath raho gee to har cheez best hogee..

Geet again laughed: nice 1..Maan..tum jokes kaafi achay sunanay lage ho!..

This time Maan looked at her angrily but Geet ignored and kept laughing at him..yet wid him..

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Edited by NZ_rockx - 15 years ago
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Agn the update was after a long time but watevr u say update was fab
Loved it to the core
Maaneet's convo Maan's care their naughtiness flirty talks all were jus fab
Maan is changing Maan
Liked that evn he strted to laugh crack jokes n became filmy also😆😆
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Posted: 15 years ago
First of all congrats on passin yr drivin test..........sweet updte.....want to knw hw Maan feels too
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Posted: 15 years ago
Congrats on passing your driving test!

That was such a cute update! Lovely! Maan flirting with her......lolz......Geet has started to develop some feelings......nice! Love Maan's concern for her......it's really sweet! Thoroughly enjoyed reading this....do continue soon.
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Posted: 15 years ago
gr8 update nd plzzzzzzzzzzzzzz dont make us wait so long again plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz update soon next part
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Posted: 15 years ago
awww sooo cute😳..lovely update...cnt wait to read more..i understand ur busy.. and congratz on the drivin..yayyy..update jaldi jaldi😃

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