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Pickachu

@pickachu

Stunner

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Posted: 15 years ago

#81

Loveee the part.
Maneet can't stop fighting with eachother.
Continue soon.
Thanxx for the pm.

Fatima

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swetha10

@swetha10

Sparkler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#82

Lovely update.. enjoyed their fight.. do continue soon

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sravani899

@sravani899

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Posted: 15 years ago

#83

hey dear

its nice update and wonderful

non stop chater box geet its really

the nok jhon was really wonderful

and loved it alot

waiting for the next update dear please continue dear

sravs

Edited by sravani899 - 15 years ago

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Sofna

@Sofna

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Posted: 15 years ago

#84

HI...Great updte as usual....

jst wanted to put one req...cud we hav more dialogues in english....i find it very diffclt to understand most of wats happening....

Thnk u...

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Downhill

@Downhill

Inactive

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Posted: 15 years ago

#85

amazing update

dono kitne cute lagte hain ladte hue..............

just love their bickeringgggggggg😆😆😆😆

waiting for more such lovely updates

reva.

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love_lavnya

@love_lavnya

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Posted: 15 years ago

#86

Nice update

Maan n Geet AWOSOME

Loved their Nok jhok n that Thank u part was fab

PLS UPDATE SOON YAAR CAN'T WAIT FOR NEST PART

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devisha

@swthrtdevisha

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Posted: 15 years ago

#87

Part 10

Geet reaches d cabin wid the file...maan sees her and tells her to sit with to start work...

Maan: achcha geet woh rough plan wali file mujhe dena jo tum layi ho...

Maan is busy lukin at d odr files wen...

Geet: yeh lijiye aapki rough plan ki file...

geet literally bangs d file on d table...

Maan: yeh kya battameezi he...

Geet: ab maine kya kiya?

Maan: jis adaa se tumne file ko table pe rakha woh...

Geet: woh meri aadat he...main files waise hi rakhti hoon...

Maan: lekin mere table par bilkul nahin

Geet: aapko toh meri har cheez se problem he...

Maan: tum khud hi ek bohot bari problem ho...tumhari koi bhi cheez se mujhe problem nahin hoti...mujhe tumse problem hoti hai...

Geet: haan haan aapko toh mujhse hi problem hogi na...aapko achche logo se hi problem hoti hai...

Maan: dekho tum...

Maan realises dat y all of a sudden they both r fighting...

Maan: geet...hum jhagda kyun karrahe he...!...tumhe hua kya he...??...aise chidchidi kyun ho...!

Geet: kyunki aapke waje se aaj main apna fav serial nahin dekhpaungi...serial kya main toh khana bhi nahin kha paungi...pata nahin kab ghar jaungi aur so paungi...jab se aap mere zindagi me aaye he meri zindagi ko permanent grahan laggaya hai...aapne sirf mujhe hi kyun kaha kaam karne ke liye...main toh sirf ek mamuli intern architect hoon...chief architect ka bhi toh kaam he na yahan par...

Maan: agar tumhara radio broadcast khatam hua ho toh main kuch bolun...

Geet: ji boliye...

Maan: avantika ne kaha tha ki tumhe oppurtunity ki zaroorat he isiliye tumhe experience dene ke liye mujhe kaha ki tumhe main iss project main poori tarike se involve karoon...samjhi tum...??

Geet: haan haan theek he theek he...lekin mera serial toh miss hojaega na...

Maan: kya? mera kaam tumhare serial ke waje se nahin rukega...aur tumhare serial important he yah yeh project...huh..??

Geet: sir ofcourse serial...kyunki kaam mein koi curiosity nahin hoti lekin serial me hoti he ...curiosity yeh janne ke liye ki aage kya hoga...pata hai sir last episode me hero heroine ko propose karne hi wala tha lekin main dekh hi nahin payi...

Maan: kyaaa??..hero-heroine...??..yeh kya nonsense hai geet...!...tum apne serial ki kahani sunane ke liye yahan aayo ho...?..aur please geet tumhari serial narration khatam hogayi ho toh hum kuch kaam karle...??

Geet: ji sir...maine kab roka hai...

Maan: toh theek he...chalo kaam karte he...

Maan gives geet instructions as to wat to include in the final plan...geet while takin notes very innocently writes d notes like a kid...her hair flyin behind...maan for the first tym notices her long straight hair and admires it...geet puts d pen in her mouth and maan just keeps staring at her innocent activities and feels delighted...he looks at her as if he has nevr seen such innocence b4...! (to remind...mahii defintely plays in d bg..)..! maan keeps on lukin at geet wen geet aftr takin notes luks at maan and shows her hand and moves it to bring maan out of thoughts...

Geet: sir...sir...sapno ki duniya se wapas aiiye...maine notes leliya...aur kuch...??...aap kahe toh main plan taiyyar karke aao...??

Maan: uppp...haan haan theek he ..taiyyar karke lunch break ke baad aana...theek he 5 baje..humein bohot kaam karna he...!

Geet leaves frm dere...

Aftr geet leaves maan sits on his chair nd rests bk...he thinks abt geet and the tyms he hs met her...he thinks abt her and d close moments they shared...he smiles bt suddenly he gets up...ns realises (mahii is playin in d bg)

Maan: yeh main kya karraha hoon? main uss ladki ke bare mein kyun sochraha hoon...iss ladki ke saath rehkar main bhi pagal hogaya hun...uff..yeh geet bhi na...

aftr a long tym at 5 geet cums bk ...maan is facing d window wen he hears d knock on d door...

Geet: kya main andar aasakti hoon...sir?

Maan: haan geet andar aao...

Geet: sir yeh raha plan ka sketch...

Maan: haan theek he...rakhdo aur plz araam se rakhna ...table tod mat dena

Geet: ji sir...

geet keeps d file wen maan while browsing thru d files says...

Maan: achcha geet pura staff chala gaya na...?

Geet: haan sir woh chale gaye he...par kyun ...

Maan: nahin kuch nahin...

Geet in her mind...: yeh achanak staff ke bare me kyun poochrahe he...inka iraada kya hai...?...inki shakal ki expression bata rahi he ki inki neeyat theek nahin he...aur mujhe inki neeyat par koi bharosa nahin he..pata nahin kab badal jaye kyunki yeh shakal se jitne shariff lagte he utne he nahin..haan...mujhe inpar kadi nazar rakhni paregi...

Maan: geet...geet...

Geet: ji sir...

Maan: chalo mere saath...

Geet: kahan sir...?

Maan: jahannum...

Geet: (in her mind)..: haan haan aap toh wahi par lekar jayenge na kyunki aapka ghar he na...

Geet gves a small laugh...

Maan: geet apne 32 daant dikhana band karo aur chalo layout room me...waha hum achche se kaam karsakte he...chalo...

Geet (again in her mind): huh! ab samajh me aaya yeh staff ki jaane ki baat kyun karrahe the...mujhe pata he...mere saath akele pata nahin kya karna chahte he...pata tha pata tha mujhe ki inki neeyat me khot zaroor hoga...kuch bhi hojaye geet tu nahin jayegi...inke saath kahin nahin jaegi akele... bhale hi teri naukri chale jaye...haaan!

maan seeing her standing still says...

Maan: kya hua geet? chalo...jaldi...kaam he...

Geet outbursts...

Geet: haan haan mujhe pata he ki kya kaam karna chahte he aap...main akeli ladki aapke saath akele ek kamre mein kaam...mujhe sab samjh me araha he...

Maan: par tum kya kehrahi ho mujhe samajh me nahin aaraha he...kya kehrahi ho tum...?...akeli ladki...ek kamra...???

Geet: haan itna toh dimag hoga na aap me ki aap samajh jao...main akeli ladki aur aap ek akele ladke...main dressing aur soch me modern hosakti hoon lekin phir bhi dil he hindustani...haan!

Maan: kya...? kya kehrahi ho geet...? (aftr a pause he realises)...ek minute ek minute...ab mujhe samajh me aaya...tuumhe lagta he tum aur me akele aur ek kamre me aisa waisa kuch...geet (he shouts)...tum aisa soch bhi kaisi sakti ho..apne yeh betuke baatein band karo...hum sirf kaam karenge...aur kuch nahin ok...

Geet: achcha..? toh apne pure staff ki jaane ki baat kyun ki...?

Maan: kyaaa..?...achcha woh..usko lekar tum yeh sab..uff geet tum bhi...geet maine isilye tumse woh pucha taki hum shanti se kaam kar sake...aur kuch nahin...aur agar tumhara gender analysis ki main ladka tum ladki khatam hogaya ho aur agar tumhara patriotism ka bhashan khatam hogaya ho toh kuch kaam kare?...please...

Geet: nahin...main nahin jaungi...

Maan (in his mind)..: uff yeh ladki...ab bohot hogaya...iska kuch karna parega...ab tum dekho ms.geet main tumhara kaise band bajata hoon..aisa mazaa chakhaunga ki zindagi bhar yaad rakhogi...

toh theek he ms.geet..tumhe akele kaam karna he yahan pe...toh theek he maiin layout room me jaraha hoon aur tum yahan baithkar kaam karo...theek he...ok..?

Geet: (in her mind)..: hey bhagwan kaise insaan he ..? yahan? akele kaam? nahin baba bahin main yahan akeli...nahin...

Maan: kya hua geet? dargayi ...? sach kaho na ki tum dargayi..?

Geet: kya? main aur dargayi...?geet bakshi kisi bhi cheez se nahin darti he samjhe aap... Punjab ki sherni hoon me...haan.!

Maan: achcha...?...toh theek he...tum yaha kaam karo phir...

Geet: kkkya? ...kaise insaan he aap...aapko sharam nahin aati he kya...? ek akeli ladki ko aap chodkar akele kaam karne chalejaenge...kya aapko ladki ki izzat ki koi parwa nahin kya...?,,,haan boliye...?

Maan: arey ajeeb ladki ho tum...akeli rehne deta hoon toh problem...nahin deta hoon toh problem...tumhari problem kya hai geet...?...sach me...tumhe samajhna mere bas ki baat nahin he...

Geet: aur samajh payenge bhi nahin...kyunki agar aap geet bakshi ko samjhne niklenge toh aapka dimag 360 degree me ghumjaega...samjhe aap...???

Maan: mujhe tumhe kareeb se samajhne ka koi shauq hai bhi nahin...mujhe duniya me aur bhi kayin kaam he...samjhi tum...??...ab tum yahan kaam karo shanti se aur mujhe shanti se kaam karne do layout room me plzzz...!

Maan leaves frm dere...he speaks in his mind...

Maan: mujhe achchi tarah se pata hai...ab tak toh iss ladki ko itna toh jaangaya hoon...yeh bahar se jitna bahadur hone ka dawa karti he utni bahadur yeh he nahin...ek number ki darpok he ..bilkul baki ladkiyon jaisi...dekhna khud bhagkar darkar aayegi layout room mein...tab aayega mazaa...ms.geet...aaj toh tumhara bohot zor se band bajega...!

smiling on dis maan leaves frm dere...

Geet: kaise khadus kisam ke insaan he...mujhe yahan akela chodkar khud chale gaye tehelne ke liye...ab main yahan...akele kaam...bhoot agaya toh...nahin nahin...bhoot-voot jaisa kuch nahin hota ...aur ho bhi toh mujhe...yani geet bakshi ko kisi bhi cheez se darr nahin lagta hai..haan...aur waise bhi mujhe kyun darr lagna chahiye...woh bhoot...haan duniya ka sabse bara bhoot...woh khadus khurana...bhooton ka sardar...yahan nahin he toh mujhe bhooton se kya darr..jab mein unka saamna karsakti hoon toh kisi bhi bhoot ka saamna karsakti hoon...hey Babaji meri raksha karna...mere saath rehna yahan pe kahin mat jaana...

they both sit to work in their respective rooms...!

Edited by swthrtdevisha - 13 years ago